Summarize the current situation of students: I took over two graduating classes halfway, which is the third big composition in this issue. The last time I wrote the "National Day Story", the sentence didn't say anything, but I was still talking nonsense and repeating the words. That's ironic Children in rural areas, 80% are left-behind students, and there are few microcomputers at home. There is no guidance and supervision. The amount of extracurricular reading is pitifully small. Compared with the city, the new information is relatively closed, the knowledge is narrow, the update is slow, and the homework of finding information is almost empty talk. Excessive entertainment directly leads to children's laziness. The overall quality of Chinese is generally poor, especially composition, which has become a "stubborn disease" for students. The sentence is rigid, the observation and narration are superficial, the content is vague and nonsense. I don't understand "the connection between things and me", "the combination of reality and reality", the association of this and that, and the richness of Chinese-in other words, it will be brilliant and romantic. No matter how beautiful the experience is, no matter how good the theme is, no matter how beautiful the scenery is, in a pen without literary accomplishment, it can only be a lame paragraph that does not convey the meaning of words, which makes people feel the same. It's like forgetting the spell of opening the door in the face of a glittering jewel hole, like passing the ball in place on the court but lacking the experience of closing the door, like a sick seedling who can't stand straight in front of luxury, and there is no happiness to entertain. Why? Well trained. Therefore, it has become a top priority to cultivate one's self-cultivation, practice calligraphy and learn from others. This time, junior high school students are required to express their unique autumn scenery and things with the topic of "autumn" and write their unique understanding and feelings about autumn, and avoid empty talk. 2. In the interaction between teachers and students, learn to judge the merits of the composition, people-oriented, learn from each other's strengths, and effectively improve their appreciation ability. 3. Learn to reflect on the advantages and disadvantages of your composition, with a view to improving and effectively improving your writing level, and cultivating the quality of discovering, loving and enjoying the beauty of nature and life. Teaching time: 2010/01016 noon 1-3 o'clock. Mode: group class (two classes), open teaching. Teaching Resources Teacher: Courseware (including the beautiful sentences of this student's composition). Students: composition book, two-color pen, accumulation book, exercise book. Default: Time: 2-3 hours. The teacher summed up the advantages and disadvantages of this composition, which is specific to people, with a view to distinguishing between praise and criticism, rewarding diligence and punishing laziness, explaining observation (objective observation combined with subjective and unique experiences and feelings), selecting materials and expressing (writing about the scenery that has a unique connection with oneself, expressing one's feelings and feelings-writing about one's own scenery and achieving one's own significance) Pre-writing tidbits: A. Teacher: Today is Friday, children. Go back and observe carefully, write and revise carefully, hand in "My Autumn" on Monday, and drag it out. ) health (a naughty boy): oh, no, it's "my" autumn (and I was deliberately suppressed and dragged on for longer. ) knowing, relieved. Yes, yours, the unique autumn in everyone's heart and pen. Two girls in Class B joked after class: "Haha, the teacher taught us to write about the charm of autumn. It's simple. Just add up our names "-these two girls are called" Liang Shuang "and" Liu Xingfu ". The teacher accosted: "Hey, you girls are really talented. In this case, the name "Liang Shiqiu" is even better-spring flowers and autumn fruits, haha. " C, the author has eyes and lives on the second floor. Facing the window, a hundred colorful hibiscus flowers are warmly blooming, red and white. In this cold late autumn, it is really touching. The author enjoys himself every day, calling himself the "Lotus Landlord" and taking a photo with the theme of "Looking at the Lotus Blooming Outside the Window" (because he invited his colleague Ai Jian to take a friendly photo for 200 years). Remind students to observe and appreciate more. Students appreciate flowers and say, "Teacher, standing on the boulevard looking at hibiscus, I only see the back of some flowers, but I still have to look up." The neck is sour, and I don't think it looks good. " Teacher: Come up to my second floor and have a look. When I went upstairs, I exclaimed, "Wow, it's beautiful. This is the best scenic spot. Red as a rose, white as a snowflake, a tree with two colors. You said that when the temperature of the air changes, it becomes "colored", which is amazing. Teacher, you really have an eye. " Yes, the same scene, the same thing, different angles, different seasons and different occasions will produce completely different aesthetic tastes. Teaching process: first, comment on the success or failure of this composition. After more than two months of unremitting efforts, my writing ability has been greatly improved. This composition on the topic of autumn can be handed in by both classes, basically reaching more than 600 words. Weather, fallen leaves and autumn rain write the most. The core of lyricism is the burden of parting, missing and homework. There are also twenty or thirty people who do whatever they want and don't know what to say. The biggest mistake: generally speaking, do whatever you want, write whatever you see, have no center, have no unique feeling, and leave no impression after reading it. Some people even make shoddy work to cope with their work. The biggest highlight: 1, many students have novel composition topics. Such as fallen autumn, dripping sadness, deep autumn, autumn dream, rebirth, autumn things, autumn clouds, autumn bath, sister's shadow clear autumn, autumn spread, extraordinary autumn, heartbroken autumn, autumn measuring instrument, everything is just right, and so on. 2. In the first round of self-evaluation, Class Six is more serious than Class Four, 60% of the students are exhausted, and the accuracy of comments is no less than that of teachers, such as Li, Guo, Liu Xingfu, Tang, Xia, Xia Xiangzhong, Tang, Zhou Shuangtao, Qu Yao, Tu Huan, Liao Jing, Round Zhao Yuan and Xia Yi. 3. There are six excellent articles in this composition: Xia Tian-the measuring tool of autumn, Xu Dingrong-everything is just right, Wang Miao-autumn on campus, Xia Yi-Qiu Meng, Xia Shuolin-heartbreaking and sad autumn, and Round Zhao Yuan-autumn. I thank you and extract 20 more beautiful sentences. (Multimedia display) Autumn 1 and the leaves written by countless students are not sad for falling, but a grand farewell for solemn life. Spinning, flying, can't hide the gentleman's chic. At that moment, they only danced for themselves. Autumn in Liao Jing, the woman I love. 2. Sunset on the undulating Yuan Ye. I thought over and over why she was so beautiful. Finally, it is clear: just because she is the sunset at home ... the old cow eats her own grass in the sun and is lazy. -Pan Qiuye 3. As the sun sets, the students go home from school. Stroll through the osmanthus campus, or lie on the sparse yellow lawn with your eyes closed, enjoy the afterheat and birdsong in autumn, let your thoughts and actions fly, let your mind fly, enjoy the blue sky and white clouds. Mp4' s beautiful music is mixed with little worries, hazy with growing desire and confusion. -Qu Yao's Autumn Story 4. Autumn, sunset, playground. I am playing football, my feet are yellow, and it is still evergreen flying around. I have started my own youth dance. -Zhou Shuangtao's "Bathing Autumn" 5. The autumn wind is back, the branches are full of branches, and the sun is mottled to weave a golden vault. Fallen leaves are everywhere, making people feel like carpets. Looking up, the leaves are supercilious, half yellow and half oily green. -Tu Huan's Autumn Clouds 6. Get rid of the fatigue of a week, travel lightly, go to Yuan Ye to find long-lost leisure, enjoy the warmth of autumn sunshine and enjoy the joy of running. Let go of junior high school students' blue thoughts one by one. -Tang "Autumn Tour" 7. Leaves fell at my feet, and I sadly completed my wandering journey with an unfinished yellow face and a crouching posture. Colorful flowers have dissipated the beauty of midsummer and fallen into the vortex of the plot in the rustling autumn wind ... The bleak leaves are trembling with yellow and bitterness, struggling and desolate-Xia Shuolin's Broken Heart and Sad Autumn 8. The rain stopped, the sky was incredibly high, and it was a blue sky. The vegetable fields in my hometown are full of green vitality. The cool breeze swept away the summer glory, and the continuous light rain slowly extinguished the transpiration of the flame. Frost and fog go hand in hand, dominating the earth-autumn in Liu Dan. 9. "Hey, throw the ball." The moment I picked up the ball, I suddenly looked up and found that the autumn on campus was so beautiful. On campus, you may find a few leaves and a few stalks of hay, but you will never find the autumn when the grass is withered. That's my campus, evergreen all the year round, spring all the year round. Beauty is so simple, so real and so indifferent-he is right in front of my eyes-Jiang Jiahong's autumn, and the spring in my heart is 10. The more late autumn, the stronger the taste of missing. No matter how kind other relatives are to me, they can't replace the thoughts of their parents ...-Summer's Autumn Breath 1 1, plain autumn releases amazing beauty. The cool breeze brushed my cheek, and the not-so-warm autumn wind hit me thin, cold and got goose bumps. —— Autumn Meaning by Li Yuan 12. I like to play in the rain in autumn. Just like Indians go to the Mother River to be baptized every year, I hope the autumn rain can clean up the dust on me and make me "reborn". -Zhang Lei whispers in autumn.