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I have been away from Yancheng for more than ten days, and I always think about those cranes. What scene do you most expect to see in the author's mind?
100 Narrative Characteristics of Senior High School Entrance Examination Writing

Miss didn't finish the exam (full score composition in 2009)

I feel more precious and nostalgic, because I once lived in this alley.

Before that, I lived in an alley. There were many people in the alley, and I even hated the crowded and noisy life, but now I often miss the sourest one.

In the morning, I was dating Duke Zhou's daughter. I wake up early every time, "yes, big brother, I'm out so early!" " "Well, ah, you get up early. What is this?" This is no small matter. I went out and waited for dozens of times in the morning.

Take a nap at noon to make up for the loss in the morning, and you can lie down. The people behind you will have a tea party and talk all day. Tom, dick and Harry, when it comes to the president, what else can't you talk about?

At night, although they are sleeping, they may suddenly wake up with a loud cry. Maybe it's just because I don't know that others forgot to take their clothes. Good people are never tired enough to like it.

Half a year ago, we moved to a completely strange environment, no one knew us, and there was no annoying noise, so naturally we didn't have to say hello, so for the next week or two, it felt very good.

However, my heart suddenly felt empty, just like suddenly remembering something, lacking some sounds, but precious.

For example, someone knocked on the window more than once to remind you to buy electricity quickly, and the sound suddenly disappeared, so it was too late to save the documents. How precious it is to me.

Sometimes, the delicious food cooked by family members smells all over the yard. Of course, it is inevitable that the eastern chopsticks and the western chopsticks are sandwiched together. What's more, his family will take pains to talk about rich cooking methods until you have confidence in this unique cooking technology and teach you how precious it is to a greedy person.

One day I was walking on the road when I suddenly met an old neighbor and exchanged a few pleasantries. I miss that place very much and the life there very much.

In fact, missing is also a yearning. Seriously, no matter where we are, we should create a harmonious and friendly life!

2. Being with you (2009 Shanghai Full Score Composition)

I miss you.

I am naive, that is, close to you, you can feel your infinite warmth polluting your little light-you are a bright sunshine, I am just a small water drop! However, when I really walked into you, I found that this was not enough! The strong light is too bright, the burning flame is too grand, and your passion has gained a lot of motivation, so I can't get close to you.

However, you attracted me to escape like a magnet, but I couldn't resist, so I left my loving and tolerant home-the ocean, and flew to your side without hesitation. Although there is always danger of tumbling in the depths, there is always concern about existing works, there is always disaster that the wind blows away, there is always homesickness, and there are always concerned relatives ... but I just heard you on the phone, watching your smiling face and smelling your body, and I tried my best to be with you.

My family called my name and looked forward to the wider ocean with tears, but I smiled and shook my head. My body is floating in the air, and the wind prevents me from flying to you. The wind made me stagger, and I smiled and shook my head, still rising and rising. The cloud told me that the future near you would be beyond redemption, but I shook my head and walked forward with firm steps.

Finally, I came to your side, dizzy, and I haven't had time to say a word with you. You haven't had time to see the smile on your face. You have bouts of sharp pain and mild pain. My body scattered like a shadow at that moment and will never leave you!

Looking back on the Buddha's past life 500 times, I changed the time of my life and practiced for thousands of years, in exchange for being in the same boat with your destiny. I am very willing to change the second second of your life 100 million times!

However, I can't even do the fate of being with you for the second time. What am I pursuing? My fiery heart gradually cooled down. Although my body has been torn and turned into a cloud and a mass of dust, they are hard to find. Leaving the sun, they gradually descend, repair broken hearts and heal broken bodies. I began to return to my original appearance, and I found my way home!

The sound of the waves, ah, is a call to mother. In front of the blue sea, I plunged into the arms of my family!

3, with my mother (2009 Shanghai senior high school entrance examination composition)

Your world has become colorful.

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Childhood nanny

"Wow, it smells good!" When I got home, I entered the house from school and smelled the smell of fried chicken. I'm sure there is a bowl of Huang Chengcheng and crispy fried chicken wings on the table! I can't help but run to spread out Wuzhishan, elevator and chicken wings to chew. My mother came out of the kitchen and saw me greedy. It's really angry and interesting. She quickly told me to wash my hands. When she saw that my nails were old and old, she couldn't help cursing, "I'm washed old. Get a nail clipper!" " After dinner, I stretched myself, sat on the sofa and held out my hand and asked, "Mom, give me your nails." My mother kept talking, so I barely sat down and began to nail my "little master" "Mom, my nails are going to grind you again." I have solved the project in my hand, and my foot is on her leg. Don't solve these smelly feet, this boy! I have a sharp mouth hidden in my heart, and my soft-hearted mother must be whispering in my heart. My God, my mother, my dear nanny, you are so comfortable!

Big sister friends in the world

"Yes, don't move! Money or life? " I carried towels, bath towels and submachine guns on my shoulders and kidnapped my mother with an AK-47 rifle. Knowing that my mother wants money and my gun, I don't want a penny! I'm the one who filmed me, and I'm going to be defeated, depressed! One day, I will stay for a few days and send some hair gel, hair gel and an explosive head. In the front room, the mother, who was full of abuse and narrowed her eyes, said, "Chrysanthemum dregs hurt the ground-"Self-awareness "Jay Chou" Right! My mother sat down to watch it for a long time, gave me a punch and threw out a sentence: "Little brother, you went to the wrong door here, not the government for a few weeks, I am not Jay Chou's mother!" I can't help laughing! Alas, alas, alas, my mother, my lovely friend, you are so happy!

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"Come on, Happy Dictionary!" I want to know if the Rubik's Cube is playing in my mother's room and call me in the living room. She has a scholar who tests me. On TV, Wang's topic is really strange, such as "Where does the Yangtze River originate-Kunlun Mountain or Mountain?" I beat you to it, Tanggula Mountain! Mom is expressionless. "What kind of energy is non-renewable-water, wind and oil?" I said airily, "Oil!" My mother smiled in her eyes, and I was even more proud, but this question: "Who said that the failure of saint countries and families was mainly frugality and luxury before browsing the calendar?" -Zhang Qian, Zhang Qian, Sima Qian, Sima Guang: "I won't, I will look at the corner of my mother's eye, and she will throw a confident answer:" Sima Guang. The old man chose my mother, Sima Qian, in a hurry on TV. Fortunately, Wang Laohan let my mother go before he breathed a sigh of relief. Oh, my mother, my beloved teacher, you can really learn something!

Mom, I really like you. You are with me in this life, and I am with you.

Dedicated to a lovely and respectable mother. ?

4, is serious (2009 Shaanxi Province exam article)

Every time, I go to his habitat with a sincere heart. For the landscape greening of the fuel layer, open flowers, students singing and dancing lightly step by step lotus.

Be a conscientious person and plunge into the world of poetry. I have a sensitive soul. Unintentional, understandable thoughts? What about the flash and warmth of people? Determination, knowing that violet was lying in the sky and laughing out of the door, our generation made Vasily's "determination to understand graffiti". The cat's determination fixed the "gloomy road of grief and indignation" in the meat smell of a hot iron roof, knowing that it was shot all over the railing of the casino, and no one would. It means "ambition is hard to pay" ......

I was so close to them that I closed my eyes and remained fascinated. I learned a lot, including greatness, their original ideas, worrying about the country and the people, including pioneering spirit. I count how many nutrients my knowledge has, but I know they will be thousands of years ago, because of the human heart and silent smile.

It is a sincere invitation to the ocean of music. I sailed and rowed, enjoying the fragrance. I think they must have the same heart as the sun and the moon. A "landscape talk" and a lingering sound do not penetrate the Millennium Development Goals. Every time I hear this song, the bell of Gelingge grinds my sadness repeatedly, and I can't help but remember my name.

I always marvel at Lin Chong's nocturnes, such rambling songs and chord bells, but there is a deep sadness. On such a snowy night, Lin's heart is probably stagnant. I will never be like him. I will try my best to compare with others. When I was young, I wanted to hide it.

A wisp of silent $ is cut off. I thank my sensitive heart, my ears and my eyes, which are my views and the rhythm of the ocean.

After that, hide your light, poems and music full of flowers. Rich heart makes this flashy life calm and finds all kinds of lost beauty.

He is a man with a conscience. He is the territory I visited. Poetry and music, the climax will eventually retreat to the knowing smile on our faces.

5. The protagonist of the story is me (a model essay from Henan in 2008)

In the long river of spring, the summer passed through the cold winter, disappeared in the distance, and never seemed to come back.

However, when the scenery far away from spring always appears in my heart inadvertently, in the past, I gently opened my heart door and attracted my heart to gurgle. ...

Beautiful Liu pointed out that at this time, on my aerobics day, Liu found me and called me to the office. She told me that there is a famous entomologist named Fabris Insect, and he likes this kind of insect very much. He observed the habits of insects every day and recorded their lives, and later wrote a great science. Listen to the teacher, feel very excited, shout to the teacher? Said: "teacher, I am familiar with bugs, and I know many things happen!" " "Liu Chuanzhi said," Yes, I see, you are the home of a small insect! There must be many stories about insects in your stomach! " I am Liu, and once I said proudly, "Of course!" Liu said, "If so, maybe these stories are for students? "The joy and pride after listening to the teacher's lecture made my heart suddenly disappear without a trace and I became hesitant." This ... "Liu said," You don't know, many students told me that they want to hear your story about insects. Why didn't you tell them? "Listening to the teacher, my heart is full of enthusiasm. Teacher, are all my classmates willing to listen to me? " Of course, the students are looking forward to it. "Liu said. What I didn't know was that I finally hesitated and promised Liu.

Under Liu's arrangement, our class organized a class. Let me tell you some stories about insects. Honestly, whether the class will achieve my performance, maybe I'm too nervous, maybe I seldom communicate, maybe ... In short, I think I said no at all exciting moments, but Liu He's encouraging applause still opened the door. Gradually, I am no longer lonely. My insect story is very good, and I finally integrated into this big family.

Many years have passed, and my heart is still warm.

6, my friend is proud, Zhejiang Jiaxing perfect composition (2007)

Accustomed to the comfort when I am sad, accustomed to losing your encouragement, you are my idol worship habit. I have you by my side, laughing with me, crying with me, and being crazy with me. Zi Yu (pen name), you know, I have always been proud of you.

Remember the scene when we first met? Smile at me, my beautiful big eyes are shining with charming light, and I smile at you. From then on, we became good friends. Then, you care about me like a sister, encourage me, tolerate me and teach me a lot.

I have more time and work. I haven't finished it. I hope to take this one. If you want to fire me, don't say angrily, "How could you do that?" ? Deceive the teacher and yourself, you know what the consequences are! I'm so disappointed in you. "At that meeting, I was criticized by the teacher because I didn't finish my homework. I was angry and ignored you for a long time. Later, you apologized to me. However, Ziyu, I really apologize!

Remember that time? I quarreled with my parents, and I ran out of the house crying. It was raining hard, so I ran as fast as I could. Rain man slapped me in the face. Listen, take me home and I'll dress you.

"Cry out, don't hold back." Looking at trying to hold back her tears, she told me that you wiped your tears when I was here. I hugged you, a cry baby.

"Why don't you ask me what happened?" I sobbed.

"Say it if you want."

"I had a quarrel with her mother ..." I choked. Don't talk, I'll pour a cup of hot tea to warm up, and don't catch a cold. "

"Thank you, thank you very much, my mother is not very well."

"Really? A bowl of hot tea is in front of you. You know, your mother has paid so much for you. Do you feel it? "

"Remember what the Chinese teacher said, feature film?" You smiled at me.

"You mean the girl ran away from home and met an old man who was very grateful to help her. She was moved! "

"Well, come to think of it, I remember you were still talking about feelings, and we were very touched. Now that things are on our own heads, how can we be so unreasonable? "

After a period of silence, I hurried home to see my parents, tears streaming down my face.

Thank you, Yu Zi! You help me, you comfort me, you encourage me. I hate leaving you after graduation. Perhaps, time will dilute many things, but whether the friendship between us dilutes my memory, you can't rain, and I will always be your pride.

My father is very proud.

My father, an ordinary teacher, has nothing important to do with this and doesn't have too many glorious titles. He is not tall, handsome and has no beautiful voice, but he makes me proud of him.

I am proud, because of his dedication and selfless dedication, I am proud, because of his hard work, I am proud, because of his courage to explore and forge ahead, and what makes me proud is his sense of responsibility.

One night, my father came home from school. I sat in the back seat and had an interesting chat with my father like a sparrow school. Ears whizzed by, looking back at the time when my father was full of coquetry. At this time, I think he is the happiest child in the world.

& gt Suddenly, I braked suddenly and put it on his father's back. The heavy father turned his head, a generous hand touched my head, and a apologetic smile was raised at the corner of his mouth. "Are you okay? Red light! " Father pointed to the red warning light in front. I looked around, and there was hardly a figure in the endless field not far from the roadside, and I could almost hear the croak of frogs.

I shook my childlike father and said, "Dad, let's go!" " ! In any case, no one has ever seen such a remote place, so there should be no danger. "Dad didn't speak, just shook his head, for a long time, until the indicator light changed from red to green, he looked at both sides, and then pushed forward safely.

The road is still clear and delicate, but more and more dignified, but the father's breath, looking at the back of his head, feels as long as a century. Finally, his father said, "It is our duty and responsibility whether we obey the traffic laws or not. Respect your own life and respect the lives of others! Learn to be patient, not because there is no fire! "

I was shocked, feeling my cheeks burning, a sense of shame, respect for the performance, and a heartfelt regret. Father added: "Sometimes, at the crossroads of life, we must learn to wait. ......"

Finally home! This is the first time I feel so long on my way home. I jumped out of the car and my father's car went to the garage. First time? I think my father is so tall. I think this is a great strength of personality. Often appear in the ordinary, ordinary may be great, unknown is the real greatness. Don't covet the passing of worldly fame, but there is nothing to be ashamed of.

Since then, whenever I come to a crossroads, in real life or on the road of life, when the red light flashes mercilessly, I will always think of my father and I will think of his words. I began to learn patience. The indicator light keeps changing from red to green. With the calmness and tranquility of walking on the road, I am full of confidence and pride. ...

At this time, I will say: I am proud because I have an ordinary but great father.

8, this is happiness (Jinhua City, Zhejiang Province, 2007 high school entrance examination perfect composition)

Speaking of winter vacation, we had the best time.

Look, this is light light blue! Lesson 1 Look at those big glasses, and you will know that this person just, strangely, spent five years in a holiday trying to improve his character by adding "submission" and "top gun" to his mother. At that moment, she suddenly ended a tomboy. We asked her how to give up, and she said, "Little girl is flexible! Nothing. " And then throw it neat short hair, hey, we almost fainted!

"Well, we played today." Ding Meng, who has always loved witty reading, came today. "Hey, the sun rises in the west. Well, let's play shuttlecock today, but it's the most popular now. " Let's go! "In the words of light light blue, running all the way.

This is a good place, so we started.

First of all, it is played by light light blue. She is really good at talking. When Scud appeared, she kicked to 10 years old. In our eyes, the martial arts action of Super UPS was completed in 2 1 century. This kind of instrument will upset us happy people.

However, I always thought I knew nothing about my technology. When her arms crossed and her mouth twisted, she only heard "look at me". Hehe, let's keep our eyes open ...1001before ... 120, we are all shocked and exaggerated.

The witty Ying Ying spoke. She said, "We still hold our master, so we take turns kicking?" "Well, yes, but I agree with both hands and feet. The expertise of this name! " Come on, come on, let's get started! Sister light light blue, your skill in kicking shuttlecock for the first time is not ordinary. "In fact, I had a heart attack and smiled.

"You, me, my first time, look at me." Seeing the arrival of an unexpected guest, for me, I saw two other "wow" sounds compared with the previous reaction. When I looked back, badminton was behind me.

"It's all right now, it's my turn to play, no matter how you laugh at me, ready!" Hey, why didn't you listen to me today? ? ""Hey hey, you kick the shuttlecock? "Lucky in the face of grimaces." Bang-"I play well. I saw Yingying miss it. It's my turn to laugh this time.

"Ha ha, you're a disgrace. Look at me!" Before she kicked, she chased them with her long fist. "Don't move ..." "Help ..."

Happiness is rippling in our hearts.

Such happiness, who can say that this is not happiness?

9. That smile changed me (Yancheng, 2007)

It's really weird. I don't know when I like a person: few people will help others and don't want to give them immune help. Although some people will like to use others to pay their debts. Great, I'm not from the world, and I don't want to let negative trends. However, the idea that has dominated me for many years is that the smile under the light suddenly becomes like a dust and is discharged into the atmosphere without a trace. ......

This is a concrete bridge after two days of heavy rain. They have to go to school, and they are on the river every day. The river is swift. Only tall wooden bridges are installed on both sides of the river. This is a wooden bridge with only two round edges, which is usually empty. His hand passed by, but it also alarmed the bridge.

Facing the bridge, I hesitated, but I still have 10 minutes to go to class. Ignorant, I picked up my bike and made a decision I couldn't believe: I took it to a wooden bridge. At the beginning of more than ten meters, I felt nothing in the atmosphere of gas lions and high spirits. Gradually, the wood under my feet shook desperately. The wood under the rushing water made me dizzy, and my legs became softer and softer. It seemed that it was difficult to support the weight of my body. I don't know how he went to the Woods. In the middle of the bridge. I'm only halfway there, but I can't stay still. Norway has been thinking about coming back a little. I even put all the difficulties, ears and the sound of running water aside in despair and tried to ride my bike into the river several times.

I move forward. When I come back. Suddenly, the shoulder of the car suddenly lit up and then gradually left my shoulder. A big hand took the bike away from me. At that moment, I really couldn't say a grateful heart. I turned around slowly: this is a strange face with a smile. Time didn't let me look carefully, but at that moment, I thought her smile was so sincere and lovely!

Car, I finally arrived at the other side safely, my heart was full of gratitude, thanking me for looking at that smiling face carefully: dark skin, narrowed eyes hiding sincerity. Tiny wrinkles filled his eyes and his chapped lips opened slightly. Ah, a 40-year-old ordinary farmer.

What an ordinary smile this is! Ordinary can no longer be ordinary, I still can't forget it, which makes me realize the best things between people for the first time, even if it's just a faint smile. For many years, that smile has been buried deep in my heart. I must learn to smile the same way to support children in autumn and help students who push hard trucks or umbrellas. Whenever you help others without asking for anything in return and smile sincerely, you will truly realize the true meaning and value of a smile buried in your heart. This is something that can't be called noble, but it makes you proud. Smile, placed in a beautiful emotion, I really can't find the right words to describe it. Perhaps, this poem expresses this meaning:

"Roses, stay fragrant!"

The so-called clearance?

10, time has changed my Yancheng chapter), (2007

When I was a child, I often hugged me around my father. I like being a father. The feeling of wide back is often the breath from my father. I am also proud to dance on his back.

Children, often go to my uncle and ex-wife, every time, my uncle always pokes my face with his long, pointed beard, which makes me itch to laugh. Sometimes, he will suddenly throw all my things into the air, so that I can't catch up with anything.

In my childhood, I often played hide-and-seek games with my classmates, lost my handkerchief and danced with laughter. .....

Childhood memories are too beautiful, so people miss them, too pure.

Now, I always like to sit on the school lawn with a thick book. I am often addicted to the wonderful plot and beautiful language in the book.

Now, I always like to take a walk in the fresh air after rain and think about life while walking. Everything just now was so vague.

I always like to stand alone on the balcony and watch a free cloud floating in the sky and an eagle flying freely in the air, longing for freedom and a better life.

For more than ten years, I blinked, a lively girl, and became a quiet, mature and slim girl. now

I cried when I was naive and mature in my childhood, and I was strong. I was naive and I wanted to live. Oh, I see, everything has changed my time, my time.

For Jiang Chunshui, time is still flowing eastward. I have grown up, and I have gradually matured through you at this time. When I was a child, I was often clamored by my father to take me. I like to stay with my father. The feeling of wide back often makes my father panting. I am proud to dance on his back.

A child often goes to his uncle and ex-wife. Every time, my uncle always pokes me in the face with his long, pointed beard, which makes me want to laugh. At this time, he will suddenly throw all my things into the air, what makes me catch up.

When I was a child, I often played hide-and-seek with my classmates, lost my handkerchief and laughed and danced. ......

Childhood memories are so beautiful, so unforgettable and so pure.

Now, I always like to sit on the green lawn of the school with a thick book in my hand, and often indulge in wonderful plots and beautiful language.

Now, I always like to walk in the fresh air after rain, thinking about life while walking. Everything just now is so vague and faintly visible.

Now, I always like to stand alone on the balcony, watching a free cloud floating in the sky and an eagle flying freely in the sky, eager to have a free and beautiful life.

For more than ten years, in a blink of an eye, I, a lively girl, became a quiet, mature and slim girl.

Childhood, now! Naive maturity, I cried and became strong. I was naive about the life I wanted. Oh, I see, everything has changed my time, my time.

For Jiang Chunshui, time is still flowing eastward. When I grow up, I will slowly let this time take you through and make you mature.

10 adapt first.