I am the helmsman of an unknown boat, fighting bravely in colorful waves, not afraid of hardships. Every time it's calm, my heart will flash with jumping waves, and the most unforgettable thing is that-my childhood dream.
I remember grandma Bing Xin had such a little poem: "Childhood! It is the truth in the dream, the truth in the truth, but the memory is a tearful smile. " Yes, childhood is the age when we dream, when we love to cry, laugh and joke, and when we are the most authentic and transparent.
Oh, the dream of childhood, how real, how pure, how ridiculous, how naive ... When the tears on my face were dried by the kindergarten teacher's "A, O, E", when the red scarf around my neck was taken off by the middle school admission notice with the red seal, I cried with joy, although I could not bear to say goodbye to my dream life.
Song of Youth
I bid farewell to my mother's comfortable arms, my childhood hide-and-seek partners and my childish childhood. I entered middle school with excitement and confusion. "Oh, I've grown up!" As soon as the cheers came out of my mouth, I heard my mother say, "Yes, you have grown up!" " "My mother looked at me admiringly. From her gentle eyes, I saw my mother's ardent expectations and best wishes for me. I wrote down my life pursuit in my diary-I will try to read that "A, B, C" and calculate that "X, Y, Z".
In middle school, there are too many subjects that are too tight and too heavy and complicated. There are joys of success, sorrows of failure, and fiercer competition and challenges. Ah! This colorful life!
In order to make the sun redder and the earth greener tomorrow, I will write a song of youth with my youth and sweat-
My future. Oh, it's not a dream.
Yes, my future is not a dream. As long as I cherish every minute and work hard, I will definitely sail the boat of life to the other side of the ideal!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
Very good! This is a narrative. The author compares life to a "long river" and "I" is a boat in the long river. The best places to write are "Childhood Dreams" and "Song of Teenagers". The language is very beautiful, very natural and unique. The concept is interlocking and the structure is rigorous.
Chernyshevski, my ideal wedding planner, said: "Without ideal incentives, people's activities will become empty and insignificant." I also have a dream. He is like a mentor, teaching me on the right track and encouraging me to work hard-my dream, wedding planning.
For my ideal, I will go to any relative's wedding without fear, no matter the storm or the rising sun. I read books about this eagerly. I read all the books about wedding planning.
I once thought about the wedding I designed for such a couple: the venue was crowded with people, and everyone was sitting in their seats, expecting the appearance of the bride and groom. When "The Wedding of Dreams" was played, there was thunderous applause at the scene. He told us that the couple had already entered the venue!
What you see is the bright smile of the bride and groom, just like the blooming flowers in a hundred gardens, fragrant and charming; Like a spoonful of honey in my heart, beautiful.
The bride's wedding dress is very long and more powerful to wear. The groom is very gentle and full of smiles. It says the bride's hand walks to their stage.
All the guests attending the wedding expressed their sincere wishes. A flock of lovely sparrows skimmed the horizon. They chattered and wished the couple a hundred years of harmony.
"I do!" A commitment full of affection, at this moment, seems to resound throughout the country. Then, exchange rings! A pair of bright stars docked in the hands of bridesmaids. She handed it to the groom.
The groom looked at the bride affectionately, carefully raised the bride's hand, put it in his own and put on a diamond ring like a treasure. The bride also puts it on for the groom.
"I pronounce the bride and groom husband and wife." At this moment, time seems to stay at this moment forever. It seems that the ice and snow have melted at this moment.
The guests couldn't help clapping their hands. It resounds through the land of China and everyone's heart.
Laughter and laughter broke out one after another, and the couple played with the guests. What a "lively"
Wedding planning-this light illuminates my future. That's not a dream, it's a fact, let my ideal flower bloom!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This is an article about my dream. The author dreams of becoming a "wedding planner" one day and works hard for it. Focusing on a wedding planned by myself, the article describes it delicately and meticulously, which shows the author's yearning for the career of "wedding planner".
I want to be a kindergarten teacher. I have a little dream in my heart-to be a kindergarten teacher when I grow up. You may laugh at me for "there are three dishes in my family, so I shouldn't be king of the children", not to mention a kindergarten teacher who spends all day with those children who have a runny nose, are noisy and don't worry.
Because my mother is a kindergarten teacher, I often have the opportunity to be with children. The school sports meeting was postponed. I was idle at home, so I followed my mother to kindergarten. "Hello, teacher!" As soon as I entered kindergarten, I heard a child say hello to my mother, and then a group of children surrounded me. My mother and I were surrounded by stars holding the moon. Looking at the innocent smiling faces of the children and listening to their warm greetings, I clearly felt the great honor as a teacher. "I want to be a kindergarten teacher when I grow up." An idea lingered in my mind.
After the break, the children sat in the classroom to rest, and I acted as a "teacher" temporarily. In a short time, I became one with them. Their mouths seem to be coated with honey. They affectionately call me sister. Some people sit around me and pester me to tell them stories. One child even naively called me teacher, which made his mother and aunts laugh, but he looked at us innocently. That funny expression is really funny. Inadvertently, I really passed the "teacher addiction" and felt really cool!
The teacher is really bad, isn't it? At lunch, the teacher who called me insisted on pestering me to feed it. I had no choice but to feed it. The little guy is so obedient that he ate all the dishes in the bowl. Looking at his contented appearance, he felt a sense of accomplishment. According to my mother, he is difficult to wait on in the whole garden. He is picky about food and can't eat well. Every day, teachers must work hard. It seems that I am really a teacher.
Unconsciously, the day passed, and when school was almost over, many children took my hand and reluctantly left. "Teacher, are you still coming?" "Come on!" I readily promised, and I silently made up my mind. I want to be a kindergarten teacher when I grow up!
(Instructor: Wang Zhixiang)
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
The layout of the article is reasonable, and the meaning of the title is clear at the beginning. My dream is to be a kindergarten teacher when I grow up, and then tell the story of going to my mother's kindergarten to play with children. The narrative is clear, the language is fluent and natural, and I expressed my true feelings. That's good.
My ideal mountain stream is the sea, the birds in prison are the blue sky and the trees are the earth. Things are still like this, let alone people? Throughout ancient and modern times, at home and abroad, who has become a big enterprise and which has no ideal? But my dream is great, that is, to be a detective like Sherlock Holmes.
After watching the movie Sherlock Holmes, I was moved by Holmes' wisdom and fearless and leisurely character when facing things. I am determined to learn from him. From then on, I had a great ideal in my heart-I want to be a detective like Sherlock Holmes when I grow up! There are also many strange and unsolved cases to be solved. But when I saw some detectives being framed or hunted by criminals, I chickened out. You may call me timid, but if you look at it from my point of view, you won't think so? After all, there is only one life, and if you lose it, you will never have it again, because doing this business is very risky. If you are not careful, you may be doomed. However, I still want to stick to my ideal, because I am full of strong interest in the profession of detective, just like the track of a train. Can I change it if I say it?
I used to think that I would be a detective as long as I could solve a case. But with the growth of age, I understand that a detective must have a flexible mind and good psychological quality, and be brave and resourceful, not afraid of setbacks. If I really become a detective in the future, I must do this: first, serve the people; Second, punish the bad guys and let those lawless people fall into the law. "Skynet is long, sparse and not leaking." I will use my wisdom to make every bad person get the punishment he deserves.
Although this ideal seems difficult to realize now, if I seize the good opportunity from now on and study hard in the last year of primary school, I will learn every scientific and cultural knowledge well and get rid of the shortcomings such as being flustered when something happens. I firmly believe that through my efforts, I will definitely correct my shortcomings and keep moving forward towards my ideals.
Ideal is a lamp, look! The road ahead of us is so bright, although there will be bumps, setbacks and tears on that road. But I firmly believe that I will not shrink back because of this, and I will make unremitting efforts to stick to the finish line!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
Learning from the ideal of natural things leads to one's own ideal, attracts readers, and stimulates one's persistent pursuit of faith with the navigation function endowed by the ideal, which not only echoes the beginning, but also deepens the theme. When introducing one's ideals, the exercises put one's ideas into the reader's mind layer by layer.
My Ideal Everyone has his own ideal. Seneca once said: Some people live without any goals. They walk in the world like grass in the river, drifting with the tide. Some people's ideal is to become a writer with flying literary talent; Some people's ideal is to become a lawyer and clear the grievances of the victims; Some people's ideal is to be a teacher with peaches and plums all over the world. And my ideal is to be an excellent program host.
Becoming a host is my long-cherished dream. Every time I see the host of a TV program reporting all kinds of news for us, a sense of worship arises spontaneously. I admire their quick response and clear language. As a young man, I deeply yearn for this career. I yearn for their dignified and atmospheric hosting style; Yearning for their humorous language; Yearning for their leisure; Looking forward to their infinite scenery on the stage.
I deeply know that it is not easy to accomplish an ideal; It is very difficult to realize your dreams. You must work hard to realize your ideal. As a host, you must be quick-witted, so that you can improvise and deal with all kinds of unexpected situations. To be an excellent host, you must have excellent eloquence, so I want to read more books about eloquence. To be a host, it is far from enough to have the above conditions. The most important thing is to read widely, be knowledgeable and keep pace with the times, so I will study hard, read more books and read more newspapers. I also want to start from the little things around me and raise my hand to speak more in class; Watch more news; Constantly sum up some methods and experiences. These things seem trivial, but they are all laying a good foundation for my ideal! While laying a good foundation for your ideal, you should also overcome your own shortcomings-shyness, improve your courage, and participate in more activities, such as hosting theme class meetings and participating in some interview activities of the community. Realize my ideal with practical actions.
Dreiser once said: Ideal is the sun of life. My sun is an excellent master. I will try my best to chase the bright sun.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
Starting with the topic, this paper tells me that my ideal is to be an excellent program host. The article is rich in content and sincere in feelings. Through the detailed analysis of the profession of host, the author's determination to become an excellent program host is highlighted.
Ideals light up life, children. Do you know what an ideal is? Ideal is a beautiful and reasonable hope for people's life, which makes people make reasonable arrangements for one thing or one thing. As people often say, ideal is a harbor of happiness, taking people everywhere; Ideal is an airplane, flying to the vast sky with people's vision and hope.
Everyone has a great ideal. For example, when Zhou Enlai was 12 years old, he set the lofty ideal of "studying for the rise of China". Therefore, he studied hard and eventually became a great man loved by the people of the whole country. He made outstanding achievements for China and worked wholeheartedly for the people. Another example is Zhang Haidi, who does things satisfactorily for people and writes praises of life with ideals. With Sun Yat-sen, he changed the face of the China revolution. And he Lin, the most impressive one, I remember studying in Dongshan Senior Primary School in Xiangxiang County, not far from home. . Before he left, he wrote a poem in his diary that we will never forget. The child is determined to go to the countryside, or he will not return if he succeeds. Mulberry fields don't need to bury bones, and life is everywhere. Lin, a poor child, is still "the mother of thousands of babies" in China. When she was very young, her mother suffered from cervical cancer and left her forever when she was 5 years old. Lin was born stubborn and asked himself to do everything better than others. Lin always wanted to be a hands-on doctor, so she worked hard and persisted for many years. Finally, she went to a general doctor in a city, specializing in treating women and children. She has never been married and had children in her life, but she has delivered more than 50,000 babies alone, and is known as the "mother of thousands of babies".
In fact, there are many celebrities who do whatever it takes for their ideals. Children, let's do whatever it takes for our ideals! Let's move forward for the ideal!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
Taking Zhang Haidi, Sun Yat-sen, the great leader and Lin, the mother of thousands of babies in Qian Qian, who studied for the rise of China and wrote praises of life with ideals as examples, this paper vividly demonstrates the viewpoint that "ideals illuminate life".
Ideal lights up life. What is an ideal? Ideal is a stone, knocking out a single spark; Ideal is fire, lighting the extinguished lamp; Ideal is a lamp that illuminates the road at night; Ideal is the road that leads you to the dawn.
Is the ideal, calling you, let you keep forging ahead, keep struggling, keep moving forward; It is an ideal that guides you and makes you successful and brilliant. With an ideal, you have a direction to go; With an ideal, you have the motivation to move forward. Modestini stuttered badly when he was a child, but he had a great ideal, that is, to become an orator. So he often runs and climbs mountains, facing the sea and practicing reading aloud with pebbles in his mouth ... After Modestini's self-discipline, he finally became an orator. People who give up halfway, even if they have ideals, their ideals are not fixed; People who are not determined only think about their own ideals, while those who are determined not only think about it, but also try to realize their own ideals. Ideal lights up life. People with ideals should never give up easily. Don't always feel that the ideal is too far away from us. There is a famous saying: "Nothing is impossible unless you think of it." The ideal can only be realized after struggling with difficulties. Work hard, my friends, and work hard to realize your dreams! Light a lamp for yourself, when you can't find the direction on the road of life; Light a lamp for yourself, when you are suffering from a temporary failure, think about your dreams, and you will have the courage to face failure; Light a lamp for yourself. When you are complacent about your temporary achievements, think about your dreams and you will know that the road ahead is still very long. Light a lamp for yourself. When you are afraid of the darkness ahead, think of the light in your heart that always illuminates you. ...
The road of life, because of this lamp, is no longer dark; Life, because of this lamp, no longer wandering; No matter how dark it is, no matter how far it is, no matter how difficult the road is, we will not be timid! Our youth will be more exciting because of our dreams, so light the ideal lamp for ourselves.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
At the beginning of this argumentative paper, I quote a famous sentence from the famous poet Liu Shahe's "Ideal" to clarify the significance of ideal to life. Then it mainly discusses the importance of setting up ideals with examples and metaphors. The discussion was profound and thought-provoking Unfortunately, there are few factual arguments.
The ideal of flying Everyone has colorful ideals, and there are many. Being a teacher, a doctor, a soldier ... These ideals are a beacon that will guide you to the other side of success.
My ideal is to be a dancer. I have this ideal because I like dancing since I was a child. I will fight for this ideal, and there will be setbacks in my struggle. No matter how many setbacks there are, I will fight for this ideal. I can't let this ideal go up in smoke.
This dancer's dream began when I was 6 years old. Whenever I hear music, I can't help dancing. Slowly, I like dancing. I like graceful posture, difficult movements and elegant figure.
In the process of learning dance, I practice very hard, sometimes it is heartbreaking. Sweat dripped from my forehead, just in time for the shower! But if I don't do this action well, I will be criticized by the teacher and laughed at by my classmates. At this time, I always ask myself with tears, why can't I do it well? So I will study harder. Practice, because I don't want classmates' ridicule and teachers' criticism to become my motivation to practice dancing.
Sometimes I want to give up, but as long as I think of "as long as I have perseverance, the iron pestle is ground into a needle", I will try my best to do my best. "The sword front comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold." "A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step." I will become a dancer as long as I have perseverance.
If I become a dancer, I will encourage my students to strive for the goal of becoming a dancer and encounter setbacks. This is self-training. Don't be discouraged. In times of difficulty, we should see hard work and struggle, so that we will not fail.
This is my ideal and a beacon for life navigation. Each of us should have our own ideals. For the sake of ideal, everyone will make unremitting efforts to realize the ideal and turn the grand ideal into reality.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
In this article, the author describes his ideal to be an excellent dancer, describes his efforts in the process of learning dance, and expresses his determination to make unremitting efforts to turn his grand ideal into reality. This paper adopts the total score structure, which is clear and rigorous. The article is complete in narration, substantial in content and fluent and concise in language.
My ideal, what a beautiful word, each of us is unique. Some people compare their wishes to colorful garlands. If I really become a scientist, first of all, like the inventor Edison, I will use my intelligence to serve my great motherland and invent many useful things for my motherland.
What I want to invent most is a multifunctional watch, which can watch TV, report the time and weather, preserve health and cure diseases. I also want to clone an earth for some people to live in, because our earth is too crowded now. I'd like to ... well, there are many more anyway.
If I really become a scientist, first of all, like the inventor Edison, I will use my intelligence to serve my great motherland and invent many useful things for my motherland. What I want to invent most is a multifunctional watch, which can watch TV, report the time and weather, preserve health and cure diseases. I would like to be a bird with wings, flying freely and freely; But I think the real wish is the eternal torch that guides us forward. What is my wish? I will tell you without hesitation that I want to be an excellent scientist. Why do I want to be a scientist? Isn't it boring and hard for scientists to be in the laboratory all day? But have you ever thought that if there were no scientists who are keen on truth, human history would stagnate and we wouldn't be so comfortable and happy today? There are air conditioners to ask questions about the cold, telephones to transmit sounds thousands of miles away, computers to understand the world, and airplanes to fly thousands of miles a day ... The mission of scientists is great, and this greatness stems from their persistence and dedication. So I want to be a scientist.
It's easier said than done by scientists. Because scientists need to know a lot of knowledge and be innovative. So from now on, I will study hard, listen carefully in class, read more useful books after class, not afraid of difficulties and setbacks, exercise myself in hardship, make my will stronger, my personality more noble and my knowledge more outstanding.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
With rich imagination and innovative ideas, the little author. The future multifunctional watch is introduced to us. It can not only watch TV and report time, but also keep healthy and treat diseases. I hope the little author will study hard and realize this dream as soon as possible.
Composition about ideal: the ideal is no longer dim. In an instant, tears pass through her gloomy cheeks, with a little attachment and talk, so close and so real.
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In our short and wonderful life, who can successfully reach the other side of the ideal? There will always be ups and downs in life, and there will always be stormy waves. Everyone is an undeveloped diamond at first. How can they shine without being tempered by wind and rain? Without a dream in my heart, how can I fly to the palace of success? At that moment, she experienced the baptism of wind and rain; At that moment, she left the last tear of the original stone; At that moment, it gave off a dazzling light.
Who is Gaga? In that silent morning, I uttered that moan; who is it? Pursuing the trace of freedom in that cold winter; who is it? After being spurned by everyone, he still yearns for luxury and nobility; Who is it again? Leave a warm mark on the snow-covered land?
It is it, it must be it, a duckling who has gone through years of hardships but still persevered in pursuing her dreams, a duckling abandoned by her mother and laughed at by the world since childhood. A duckling who obviously can live a comfortable life but would rather give up the pursuit of freedom. In the process of being baptized by years, it stuck to its ideal and eventually became a white swan. How can you cry if you don't give up the duckling in such a difficult environment?
It shed tears, and the crystal tears turned into bright light, which lit up my heart. As long as we are willing to face it with a normal heart, there will be no obstacles. Looking back after the difficulties and hardships, as Pushkin said, "everything is instantaneous, everything will pass, and the past will eventually become a kind memory." The tears shed are a kind of attachment to the life that has passed away, and a beautiful vision and yearning for the future.
At that moment, it left the last tear; At that moment, the diamond shone with dazzling light; At that moment, the ideal is no longer slim.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This paper takes "ideal" as the topic, and uses two interrogative sentences at the beginning of the article to lead to the theme. Then, the author chooses typical cases to demonstrate his point of view, with clear thinking, well-founded reasons and powerful and vivid language. The quotation of famous sayings in this article also adds a lot of color to this article.