[structural analysis]
There are four natural paragraphs in this paper, which can be divided into two parts.
The first part (section 1~2) describes that Xiangshan is different from other mountains because of the blooming of "red flowers".
On the first floor (1 paragraph), it is very sad to write ordinary leaves in autumn.
On the second floor (the second natural section), the autumn in Xiangshan is different because of the red leaves.
The second part (paragraphs 3-4) specifically describes the beauty brought by the red leaves in Xiangshan.
The first layer (the third natural section) describes the surprise and pleasure brought by the red leaves in Xiangshan.
The second floor (the fourth natural section) says that the red leaves of Xiangshan create a unique landscape of "spring in autumn", which is rare in the world.
[Semantic understanding]
"But this is not the case in Xiangshan in the western suburbs of Beijing. Except for pine trees, almost all the mountains and plains are yellow ash trees. " Cotinus coggygria, deciduous shrub, alternate leaves, oval or inverted, red in autumn, unisexual flowers, hermaphroditic, and kidney-shaped fruits. Wood is yellow and can be used as a dye. These cotinus coggygria trees in Xiangshan were planted during the Qianlong period of the Qing Dynasty. In the past 200 years, a cotinus coggygria forest area with 94,000 plants has gradually formed. From the middle of 65438+1 October to the early of165438+1October every year is the best season for viewing red leaves, and the duration of red leaves is usually around1month.
"They will find that when they come here on the first Sunday, the mountains are still deeply covered by trees; ..... and it happens to be a sunny day here-a sunny day with a strong tone. "
"The forest is deep and the shade is deep", which means that cotinus coggygria leaves are green everywhere when they are not red. The original meaning of "smile" is to be in a happy mood and smile all over your face; The anthropomorphic technique is used here, and it is vividly written that the leaves of Cotinus coggygria suddenly become lively and beautiful after they turn red. "bleak bleak", lonely and cold. "Sunny day", bright spring. This sentence contains two contrasts, one is when the leaves are not red, and the other is whether there are red leaves. These two contrasts are also highlighted in the beautiful enjoyment brought by the red leaves of Cotinus coggygria. It is further pointed out that "this is indeed an unusual change, which brings a surprise and pleasure to people's senses, which is not available elsewhere."
"No one can estimate how much area it occupies, because it is endless. Redder than cherry blossoms and denser than peach blossoms. From a certain distance, it is full of red flowers, and there is no spring like it. "
This paper describes in detail the appearance of cotinus coggygria leaves, which are boundless, red, dense, bright red and lively. The beauty of red leaves, written in a few strokes, gives people a lot of imagination. "Boundless", as far as your imagination can go; Cherry blossoms and peach blossoms are sensible, "redder than cherry blossoms and denser than peach blossoms", which can give full play to imagination; "Not as lively as it is", a "lively" will make the red leaves alive, and you can feel it jumping and running, attracting your attention and looking around. The author painted a beautiful and vivid picture for us in simple and concise language.
[Writing characteristics]
1. The language is concise and profound.
2. Use contrast techniques throughout to highlight the unique beauty of red leaves.
Textbook description
[solve the problem]
This article is an essay by Ye Junjian. The article depicts the loveliness and beauty of red leaves in Xiangshan with fresh brushstrokes. By repeatedly describing the unique beauty of red leaves in Xiangshan, the author expressed his love for red leaves and life.
[structural analysis]
There are four natural paragraphs in this paper, which can be divided into two parts.
The first part (section 1~2) describes that Xiangshan is different from other mountains because of the blooming of "red flowers".
On the first floor (1 paragraph), it is very sad to write ordinary leaves in autumn.
On the second floor (the second natural section), the autumn in Xiangshan is different because of the red leaves.
The second part (paragraphs 3-4) specifically describes the beauty brought by the red leaves in Xiangshan.
The first layer (the third natural section) describes the surprise and pleasure brought by the red leaves in Xiangshan.
The second floor (the fourth natural section) says that the red leaves of Xiangshan create a unique landscape of "spring in autumn", which is rare in the world.
[Semantic understanding]
"But this is not the case in Xiangshan in the western suburbs of Beijing. Except for pine trees, almost all the mountains and plains are yellow ash trees. " Cotinus coggygria, deciduous shrub, alternate leaves, oval or inverted, red in autumn, unisexual flowers, hermaphroditic, and kidney-shaped fruits. Wood is yellow and can be used as a dye. These cotinus coggygria trees in Xiangshan were planted during the Qianlong period of the Qing Dynasty. In the past 200 years, a cotinus coggygria forest area with 94,000 plants has gradually formed. From the middle of 65438+1 October to the early of165438+1October every year is the best season for viewing red leaves, and the duration of red leaves is usually around1month.
"They will find that when they come here on the first Sunday, the mountains are still deeply covered by trees; ..... and it happens to be a sunny day here-a sunny day with a strong tone. "
"The forest is deep and the shade is deep", which means that cotinus coggygria leaves are green everywhere when they are not red. The original meaning of "smile" is to be in a happy mood and smile all over your face; The anthropomorphic technique is used here, and it is vividly written that the leaves of Cotinus coggygria suddenly become lively and beautiful after they turn red. "bleak bleak", lonely and cold. "Sunny day", bright spring. This sentence contains two contrasts, one is when the leaves are not red, and the other is whether there are red leaves. These two contrasts are also highlighted in the beautiful enjoyment brought by the red leaves of Cotinus coggygria. It is further pointed out that "this is indeed an unusual change, which brings a surprise and pleasure to people's senses, which is not available elsewhere."
"No one can estimate how much area it occupies, because it is endless. Redder than cherry blossoms and denser than peach blossoms. From a certain distance, it is full of red flowers, and there is no spring like it. "
This paper describes in detail the appearance of cotinus coggygria leaves, which are boundless, red, dense, bright red and lively. The beauty of red leaves, written in a few strokes, gives people a lot of imagination. "Boundless", as far as your imagination can go; Cherry blossoms and peach blossoms are sensible, "redder than cherry blossoms and denser than peach blossoms", which can give full play to imagination; "Not as lively as it is", a "lively" will make the red leaves alive, and you can feel it jumping and running, attracting your attention and looking around. The author painted a beautiful and vivid picture for us in simple and concise language.
[Writing characteristics]
1. The language is concise and profound.
2. Use contrast techniques throughout to highlight the unique beauty of red leaves.
Teaching suggestion
[Teaching objectives]
1. Read the text correctly, fluently and emotionally.
2. By reading the text, we can understand the unique beauty of Xiangshan red leaves in the author's eyes, realize the author's admiration for Xiangshan red leaves and his incomparable love for nature, and cultivate students' aesthetic feelings.
3. Guide students to taste the detailed description of the beauty of red leaves in Xiangshan, and experience the author's description method in repeated reading.
4. Know the word "Xiao" and write the new word 10 correctly. Recite the last paragraph of the text.
[Teaching Emphasis and Difficulties]
1. Taste the delicate language of the article, imagine the beautiful scene described in the article, and understand the author's thoughts and feelings.
2. Learn from the author's careful observation and vivid description of the scenery.
[Teaching preparation]
1. Xiangshan hongye picture.
2. Get to know Xiangshan and Cotinus coggygria before class.
[Teaching time]
2 class hours.