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Another example of the necessity of literary criticism writing

Writing of Literary Criticism: Mo Bosang's Jewelry

This is a composition training-literary criticism writing. The object of criticism is Mo Bosang's short story Jewelry.

I feel a lot every time I write a composition, and this time is no exception.

First, students' reading comprehension ability needs to be improved, especially their appreciation of novels and other literary works.

Second, Chinese teaching and examination should pay enough attention to the reading and appreciation of real literary works.

Feeling three, students' reading habits, methods and quality are very problematic, and the overall trend is a sharp decline.

The above problems are interrelated. I think these problems touch the essence of education and teaching in China. This is a big topic that needs to be discussed carefully, so I won't go into details here.

The following is an explanation of the problems in this composition.

Let's briefly introduce Mo Bosang's short story Jewelry—

At the beginning of the novel, a lot of pen and ink are spent on the happy life of a loving couple. Mrs. Langdan is "decent, steady and kind", she is "extremely concerned, considerate and gentle to her husband" and she is "thrifty and thrifty". Although her income is meager, "their life seems to be very rich." But Mrs. Langdan has two small shortcomings: she loves going to the theatre and fake jewelry. This hobby of going to the theatre soon aroused her demand for dressing up. Nevertheless, "her clothes are as simple, elegant and simple as before. Her gentle beauty, her charming, humble and smiling beauty seems to have gained new charm from her simple dress." No wonder they have been together for six years, and Mr. Langdan even "loves her more than those first days". However, people are doomed, and Mrs. Langdan died unfortunately, and Langdan was heartbroken. When dealing with his wife's relics, Mr. Langdan was surprised to find that the fake jewels he had laughed at in good faith were all valuable real jewels! The little civil servant was suddenly stunned. After some inner torture of doubt, shame, indignation and pain, he finally sold these jewels. With this windfall, Mr. Langdan lived a happy life.

This novel should not be difficult to read. Through ingenious plot arrangement and multiple comparative satires, the novel reveals how money corrupts morality, destroys faith and erodes soul. I am afraid it is human nature to covet comfort, vanity and pleasure, but where did all this come from? What kind of price are you willing to pay for this? Loyalty to love, responsibility to family, maintenance of personality and dignity, adherence to conscience, reverence for the splendid starry sky overhead, and inner moral laws and regulations … can these be ignored? This is the inspiration and thinking of this novel.

Students have some problems when reading this novel. I think these problems are caused by not reading the text carefully and lack of reading comprehension ability.

1. Some students don't understand. Did Mrs. Landan betray love and marriage? Will you cheat your husband and get expensive jewelry by selling your sex?

In my opinion, there is no doubt about it. Read through the full text, it is clear where those expensive real jewels came from and how they came from. In fact, there are many foreshadowing and hints in the article.

2. Does Mrs. Langdan have true love for her husband? What does it mean to write in front of her that she is gentle, considerate and decent?

The answer is no true love. Seeing the back, I understand that the previous description is bitter irony, and behind the dignified and virtuous is the fallen soul.

Why is Mrs. Langdan so kind to her poor husband after getting a lot of money? Why not abandon him and find another woman?

Being nice to her husband is just a disguise, and not abandoning her husband is just a stopgap measure.

In fact, none of the above problems should appear. This is a basic reading ability problem.

The following excerpts are some sentences in students' compositions, which are transcribed as follows, with some comments.

◆ "If she doesn't love Rhondan, why stay with him? Therefore, I understand that she' uses' others in order to make Long Dan live a better life. " She did take advantage of others, but she took advantage of Long Dan even more. Of course, there is another person who is more * * * than her, and that is Lang Dan after knowing the truth. )

◆ "Can we blame Mrs. Langdan for her infidelity? She is only for her own material needs. At least she gave up the opportunity to leave Langdan and supported his life. " ("For one's own material needs" openly becomes the reason for "disloyalty")

◆ "The source of the jewelry is not clearly stated in the article. It may not be what everyone thinks. Maybe she was forced, threatened, or had difficulties. She didn't want to make her husband feel sad and painful, but she let herself suffer all this alone. " Mrs Long Dan has become a good person with a spirit of sacrifice. Some students do think that this novel "praises his wife's true feelings for Long Dan", which is really incredible. In fact, she is not suffering alone, but enjoying the devil's life alone. )

◆ "Even if she sells herself outside and cuckolds her husband, these are not necessarily her original intentions. She was born in poverty, and money is not attractive in her eyes, so it is understandable for her to make money with her body. Imagine that if she doesn't die, her husband will always be happy and her marriage will always be happy. When she decides to wash her hands of it, it will be a wonderful life with her husband forever. In short, in any case, she has paid true love to her husband and has never changed under the temptation of money. This is worthy of recognition and praise. " Because you are poor, you can make money with your body. What logic is this? If the truth is concealed, is it really a "happy", "perfect" or even a "wonderful life"? It's really a surprise. Perhaps, today, some people are willing to be so "blessed" and "satisfied", and some people are willing to seek moral support from "poverty" at all costs. In fact, this kind of "poverty" is likely to be more spiritual poverty. )

◆ "However, his wife is dead, and selling her jewelry from an improper source may be the only way for him to get rid of his anger ... I think this is understandable. It is true that selling jewelry is to push the fact that he is cuckolded to others, but not selling jewelry is a cowardly escape. Don't people who don't sell jewelry laugh at him? Will it make him feel better to look at these relics at home? Besides, he couldn't even eat at that time. In the face of a fortune equivalent to his salary for decades, I am afraid that no one can hold on to his position. " As I said before, the behavior of the protagonist in the novel after knowing the truth is ridiculous, sad and hateful. In a sense, he is more rogue than his wife. Nevertheless, there are still many students defending Mr. Langdan, and this kind of defense is certainly untenable. I wonder why so many people expressed their understanding and even support for the actions of Mrs. Langdan and Mr. Langdan. )

Why? To be honest, this is beyond my expectation. However, looking back now, it is not surprising that we are in a society where right and wrong are confused, beauty and ugliness are indistinguishable, good and evil are reversed, true and false are indistinguishable, the rule of law is weak, and morality collapses. We can't read Mo Bosang's angry accusations and bitter sarcasm in his calm narrative, because compared with today's social atmosphere, the behavior of the Langdan couple is not only understandable, but even commendable. In fact, such an incredible problem in reading comprehension of novels is no longer a problem in reading literary works. We can see how the morality and mental outlook of a society affect people's understanding of a novel. It is for this reason that we should read excellent literary works to improve our literary and cultural quality, enhance our ability to distinguish beauty, ugliness, good and evil, purify our souls and cultivate our sentiments. Therefore, I strongly advocate that the main task of Chinese teaching in middle schools is to read excellent classical literary works, and composition teaching should analyze, appreciate and comment on these works, that is, write literary comments.

It is solemnly suggested that the college entrance examination composition should be written with literary criticism.

It is strongly recommended that the college entrance examination composition should be written with literary criticism.

Who stole the jewelry? Grandpa Dalmatian opened a jewelry store, and the colorful jewelry was beautiful.

However, one day, when grandpa Dalmatian got up, he found that the shop was dirty and all the jewels were gone.

If the jewelry is still there, it's broken.

Grandpa Dalmatian is in a hurry. As soon as he called, the pig police and the wolf police arrived at once.

Q: "Manager, what does the robber look like?" The police found out all the people who might be robbers, including Brother Monkey, Brother Fox, Mr Black Bear, Mr Tiger and Brother Leopard.

Grandpa Dalmatian thought, "The jewel robber is wearing a gray hat.

"So they let the little monkey brother go.

"Wearing a blue striped T-shirt", so they released Brother Leopard again.

"Wearing black shorts.

"The fox to rule out again.

Now, there are two left: Mr. Black Bear and Mr. Tiger.

The fat pig police found that Mr. Black Bear didn't wear a gray hat, and Mr. Tiger wore a gray hat.

It turned out that Mr. Tiger stole it! So, Mr. Tiger was put in prison to reflect.

The beautiful gems that make up "How Gems are Made" are nothing but metal oxides in chemical essence.

In my opinion, it takes three conditions to change from metal oxide to beautiful gem: the influence of environment, the accumulation of time and the right time.

These are the keys to success.

A poor man is a scholar.

Environment has an important influence on a person, just as pressure and temperature have an influence on gems.

After having no choice, Yang Liulang worked as a marshal. Under his strict education and discipline, his son Yang Zongbao grew up rapidly and was worthy of the important task of marshal. He is not only skilled in martial arts, but also loyal to his liver and righteousness. This is not cronyism, but meritocracy.

A good mother can teach a good son.

When Edison was five years old, he listened to his mother's story about hens hatching chicks. He made a nest, put some eggs in it, and squatted on the eggs to hatch chickens.

The mother didn't blame her son, but discovered his imagination, reasoning ability and curious nature.

Later generations praised: "If Edison didn't have such a good mother, this brilliant inventor would have been killed in the bud.

Facts have proved that the environment plays a vital role in human growth.

If you have good knowledge, you can get it in a proper way, but if you accumulate it in a proper way, you can get it in a proper way.

It takes time to form gems, and knowledge is also needed to become talents.

Pu Songling, a famous writer, often went to a big tree in the market to spread out a piece of cloth, put a cigarette rod and a cup of tea on it in order to collect literary materials when he was young.

Whenever someone passes by, he always asks them to have a rest, have a sip of tea and smoke a pack of cigarettes, and then asks them to tell some fairy tales and make some records.

In this way, day after day, year after year, until he was in his forties, he accumulated enough writing materials and finally completed the wonderful book Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio.

He told future generations with practical actions: success is waiting for opportunities in accumulation.

Jie Jun knows the times, but ignorance is unwise.

The right time is also the key to turning metal oxides into gems, and people's success is often inseparable from the secret of time.

Hammer, an American business leader, once said: When others are doing something, you see whether you do it or not. When others do nothing, you can see if you can do it.

When Americans were afraid to do business in the former Soviet Union, Hammer went to the former Soviet Union alone. After investigation, he found that the former Soviet Union was extremely short of food.

Hammer overcame many obstacles and finally exchanged food for a truckload of gold, silver and jewelry.

Hammer made a lot of money.

This story tells us that the difference between a hero and a loser lies in who can understand current events.

How are gems made? Environment, opportunity and gestation have completed the process of turning stones into gems.

My friend, I hope that you and I will start in prosperity, melt in adversity, precipitate in waiting, and break the cocoon into a butterfly in time.

Twenty years later, I won't copy my composition (written by a jewelry designer), just make the following reference! ... here are some materials for your reference, which have a certain gap with your requirements, please forgive me! ! Jewelry designers are the creators of art, giving people beautiful enjoyment.

Let the wearer show his personal charm.

How can we make things attractive? Designers need to do more than just basic knowledge.

First, "I want a designer who is knowledgeable and can inspire!" Jewelry comes from nature, and jewelry promotion comes from inspiration and foundation.

However, the inspiration with vitality is based on a solid foundation.

"Jewelry designers need skills!" A jeweler said, "Do you know what skill is? It is talent+experience+hard work! This is not a matter of learning theory for a few years and moving hands for a few years! " Jewelry is a special commodity. In order to tap the greatest value potential, it depends on the strength of designers: first, it depends on the experience of accurate identification and identification of jewelry; Second, relying on artistic appreciation and creative re-creation; The third is to grasp the fashion without being bound by the natural foundation.

Without adequate preparation for hardship, these three skills cannot be cultivated.

Second, "tempering-it is a shortcut for jewelry designers to become talents!" What is a good design? It is also very simple to say, one is that it is very comfortable to wear; Secondly, it can reflect the natural color of gemstones; The third is to let the market agree.

But just like the formation of jewelry, designer's brand casting needs constant tempering.

A jewelry expert said: "to be a jewelry designer, you really need to use the word temper, innate talent and acquired persistence!" " The main work of jewelry designers includes: 1, to understand market information.

2. Conceive the design scheme.

3. Make design drawings.

In this process, designers should not only master the operation of computer graphic design software such as JCAD and PHOTOSHOP, but also correctly understand and master the basic skills such as hammer, filing, sawing, welding and inlay in the process of jewelry manual production.

It is not difficult to see from the main work of designers that only by constantly honing their skills and creativity can their ideas be fully reflected in the finished products.

Third, "it takes a long time to prepare and a suitable environment to train your own designers.

For those who are interested in the jewelry design industry, on the one hand, they should learn to temper in the dark like gems, accumulate their own foundation, and strive to become a treasure and a unique symbol like gems one day.

One can't live without ideals, nor can one live without dreams. He should take practical action. Since you have chosen her, you should cherish her! I'm talking about my career. Don't misunderstand me. There must be hardships behind success. I believe I can overcome all difficulties and achieve my ideal goal! This is conquest.

Comparison between Mo Bosang's Necklace and Jewelry (400 words) In Jewelry, Mo Bosang did not stop there after exposing the hypocrisy and depravity of Mrs. Long Dan, but skillfully used "echo" to expose the despicable psychology and ugly face of Long Dan, a new bourgeois of Paris Vanity Fair. He is shameless and pretends to sell jewelry seriously, which is his heart.

First of all, the space is limited, the characters are few, and the background and events are relatively simple. The Jewelry of Mo Bosang is quite outstanding in this respect.

This novel describes a mediocre couple. More than one of them loves money, but the best of the six is Mo Bosang's boule de suif, which makes Mo Bosang famous.

Mo Bosang's representative novels are Life (the first ... the second, describing bourgeois customs, such as jewelry, my uncle Yule.

The third category describes the suffering of the poor. ...

The essay "How Gems are Tempered" unfolds all beautiful gems, and their chemical essence is nothing more than metal oxides.