Her deep dimples make people feel that she is sunny at first sight, and her white face is inlaid with watery eyes. She was a little timid when she first transferred here. When I sat next to her and asked her name, she smiled and told me that we were no longer strangers.
She is still a capable girl. I cleaned the toilet with her for the first time. When the water was full, she picked it up at the first time and washed away the dirty things with strong momentum. The second bucket was full. I was about to mention it when she took it away again. I told her to have a rest, but she kept smiling, so beautiful and sunny. When cleaning the office, she quickly folded the books. After cleaning. We just skipped home on the sunny path.
She is also a helpful person. Every time anyone doesn't bring a composition paper, she will give someone a piece of her composition paper. As long as she does bring water, anyone who is thirsty without water (of course, a girl) will treat others to drink enough.
2. How to write (I) on the composition topic, just mind map 1. This is me.
Hello, everyone. My name is Xiang XXX. I am a freshman who has just entered middle school. Like many freshmen, I came to the sacred palace with a curious heart and a strong thirst for knowledge. Presumably everyone is not very familiar with me! Let me introduce myself to you.
I am plain: my round face is embedded with a pair of small but intense eyes; Below the eyes is a collapsed nose that is almost close to the face, which can even remind people of the "open plain"; Under my nose is my glib mouth, which often helps me bring joy to everyone! Although I am plain, my personality is quite different from that of many girls of my age:
I have short black and refreshing hair, and then I look like a boy with my name. My hobbies and personality are the same as many boys. I like sports, badminton and table tennis room. My personality is similar to that of boys. I like neatness, seriousness, finish what I started, and I don't like procrastination and muddling along. This may be my advantage! Because, since I was a child, I like to do something seriously and persistently, and I will stick to it even if I encounter great difficulties. I'm not bragging:
I remember when I first transferred from my hometown to Beijing, I really knew six things about English-nothing. I was in the fourth grade at that time. I'm already strong. I am really unhappy to watch my classmates always get ideal results in exams, but I can't. It was at this time that I secretly made up my mind: I must catch up with my classmates and try to surpass them! From then on, I began to work hard to fulfill my promise: I have three hours of extracurricular classes every Sunday; I practice every night ... in this way, with my persistence in English, my English scores have improved slowly. Unconsciously, my English scores have been among the best, which makes me unable to describe how happy I am! Similarly, this also confirms an old saying of China: Nothing is difficult if you put your mind to it! You say, is it?
No one is perfect, of course, I also have many shortcomings. But the most "fatal" thing is that I am careless. This shortcoming has been with me for six years and I really want to get rid of it. However, no matter how hard I try, there will always be some small mistakes at important moments. I really hope I can get rid of this shortcoming, or the old saying goes: nothing is difficult in the world, nothing is impossible to a willing mind! I believe that one day I will have my advantages to overcome my fatal shortcomings.
Do you know me? This is me, a plain me, a boy-like me, a persistent me, a careless me.
Second,
this is me
Look!
Who is the young man with glasses in the mirror?
That's me; Who's that silly boy running around on the playground after class?
That's me; Who is the shy little boy who listens carefully in class?
That is me.
3. How to write a composition with mind map 1? How to write with mind map
Second, low-level map composition examples
Third, draw a reading guide map and imitate writing.
First, how to write with mind map
As a flexible way of thinking based on radioactive thinking, mind mapping is an efficient learning strategy and thinking tool. It can drive divergent thinking and convergent thinking, as well as continuous (including linear and circular) and other innovative and systematic thinking, and it can maximize students' personal intellectual potential. Applying mind map to solve writing problems can effectively help each child to mobilize existing words and materials and initially use relevant writing methods.
Laozi said: "Hold the wood, born at the end; Nine-story platform, starting with tired soil; A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. " He exemplified the law of natural development, which led to a truth: whatever you do, you should be down-to-earth, step by step, start from small things, and at the same time, you should persevere. In fact, it is also a process from reading accumulation to writing excellent works. Only with the help of mind mapping can the process of writing an introduction become simpler.
Writing mind maps can help us to connect a large number of writing intentions in series, form a sequence, catalyze the generation of new ideas, and let our thoughts and feelings before writing be clearly and orderly recorded in the map. Using writing mind map to open the floodgate of ideological trend, students can directly screen and sort out writing materials in visual mind map, enrich writing content, arrange the application of writing skills, and assist intuitive self-guidance and self-evaluation in the writing process.
Steps of drawing and writing:
The first step is to investigate the requirements of writing topics and draw up writing themes. Make a reasonable choice of all the ideas or things around the writing theme, and write them down or draw them one by one. Follow your heart, right or wrong, whether you should draw a sketch for writing guidance.
Step 2, screen, delete and supplement the drawn contents, and organize or merge the selected materials appropriately to determine the detailed writing, abbreviated writing contents and writing order;
The third step is to let the brain relax, recall, associate or think for a moment, then record those flashing personalized ideas in the picture, and then modify and improve the writing mind map.
Step four, write a composition according to the pictures, and finally revise the composition.
4. My ideal composition mind map Everyone has a dream, a lofty ideal. Including me. My struggle is only to realize my ideal and fulfill my dream.
I have always wanted to be a designer since I was a child. A comfortable and carefree senior white-collar worker.
As a white-collar worker, I have a good time every day. Let parents live in a good environment, which is also a reward for parents. They raised me, educated me and guided me. They are my street lamps, illuminating me and letting me face the other side of success. Since childhood, my parents have been working harder and harder to make money since my sister and I were born, creating a good environment for me and making me a happy child. If I succeed, the future will be bright, and I think they also think that so many years of teaching are over.
I want to be a designer, not just to repay my parents. It is to make the motherland more prosperous and add colorful wings to the motherland.
Maybe, after more than ten years, I sit in my office every day. Pen in hand, next to sheet piling, I am scratching my head, thinking about my plan and creating inspiration. Over time, a piece of draft paper was scattered all over the floor, and there was no inspiration in my mind. I think that under those sheets of paper, that excellent work was bought by my painstaking efforts. Many years later, people began to wear clothes and jewels designed by me. Let the society enter a new era, serve the society and create a more comfortable environment for our children and grandchildren. However, those flowers and plants of the motherland have become useful talents of the motherland and pillars of the country.
In the future, in order to fulfill my dream and realize my ideal. I plan to study painting and math in my spare time when I am good at studying ... I will study hard and strive for good grades in all subjects. I have to do this in order to make my future more brilliant.
I will fight and fight for him.
5. The benefits of writing a mind map 600-word mind map innovation is the easiest way to write a composition, because writing a composition is actually an innovative process, whether it is the selection of content or the arrangement of article structure. It is "new" and different. This is innovation. When you don't use a map, usually the procedure of writing a composition is to think about this topic first, and what can be quoted in real life. Then I start writing as soon as I have an idea, but often when I first start writing, my ideas are very limited, my ideas are very narrow, my structure is very old-fashioned, and my composition is nothing new. But it's different when I use mind maps, because the first step in writing a composition with maps is to start a topic, take out a piece of white paper, write the topic in the center of the paper, and I begin to use the way of "grasping" to expand association. At this stage, I don't care if the related things have anything to do with the topic. Regardless of whether Lenovo is exaggerated or not, just spread Lenovo, the sooner the better, the more the better, the wider the better, until the page is full, and then stop. Then take out a piece of paper, rewrite the topic on a new piece of paper, then think about what has just been spread out, sort out an idea, and finally delete, supplement, sort out and so on according to the idea. You can write against this picture, which is very simple at this time, because you have ideas and content, and a composition will be written soon. In this process, you use the function of map to assist innovation, because with the tool of map, your thoughts may be greatly opened and your composition materials may be greatly enriched. Your composition structure may be more organized, rigorous and logical. Next, the topic of solving the problem is a bit abstract, but it is actually very simple. The most obvious feature of the guide map is divergence. Using the guidance chart to think divergently, or forming the habit of finding more answers, can let us solve problems creatively and efficiently. For example, a boss got off the plane and was going to do something in the city. For ordinary employees, the most common way is to take the bus, but for the boss, time is more precious and money is a trivial matter, so it is more cost-effective. Is that all? No, there are many more. For example, call a friend in the city and see if he can come and pick it up. Even see if he can get things done without going to the city. Or find someone to help him do it, and the boss will do something else, and so on. Only by thinking about this multi-solution method can we solve the problem more effectively. In this process, the role of mind mapping is to help us develop this habit of divergent thinking. And help us visualize the content of divergent thinking. Speaking of innovation, I'm afraid it's more difficult to create creativity. For example, an advertising designer may rack his brains to think about what elements and structures to use to express the theme of an advertisement, which is very brain-consuming. Mind mapping plays at least three roles in this process, 1. Cultivate us. 2. Force us to divergent thinking and express the content of divergent thinking vividly; 3. Arranging a bunch of elements on a picture in the form of keywords makes it easier for us to find possible connections and find creativity.
6. I am a ray of sunshine, the mind map of composition, that ray of sunshine.
In the morning, the crow broke the silence, and the sun rose in the east. The morning sunshine shone a ray of simple and warm sunshine into my heart, which made me feel unprecedented warmth. However, no matter how big and wide the sky is, there will be wind, frost, rain and snow, and no one can guarantee sunshine every day. But there are very few people who can give me full sunshine and infinite warmth. They are my family.
There are five people in our family, grandparents, parents and me. For them, I am their most precious thing, they have placed infinite hopes on me, and they are busy paying for me every day. In the morning, my grandparents got up before dawn. Don't they like to stay in warm beds? No, I know. They get up early to make breakfast for me and store nutrition for my day's study. They do this every day. In the cold winter, I am not afraid of the cold, because they warm me. So is my father. In order to match my time, he knew that I was cold by bike, so he got up early and sent me to school. After school, his familiar figure appeared at the school gate again. Sometimes, the school time is delayed for a while and it doesn't come out until after five o'clock. He waited in the cold wind at the door 15 minutes. In normal times, he would never have such good patience. Only I deeply understand what this means. My mother works in a clothing factory from morning till night. Sometimes, overtime will be added to 9 o'clock. She tried to give up this tiring job many times, but she stayed there for the sake of salary. Their efforts, like a ray of sunshine, will always warm me, and will not disappear, but will only heat up. (Civil and Military Literature)
I remember once, I failed in the exam and was scolded by the class teacher at school. I feel very guilty. When I got home, I was ashamed of their expectant faces. But this is not the case. When I timidly handed them the report book with a bright red cover, my heart was like fifteen buckets of water-it was like a voice saying to me, "You, are you worthy of what they have done for you?" Tears welled up in my eyes, suddenly like a surging river. After reading it, they didn't say anything, but said to me earnestly, "I failed the exam once, but it doesn't matter." Remember, if you make a mistake once, you can't make a mistake twice, and you will get good grades next time. "My tears suddenly stopped. I thought they would give me a good lesson, but ... this may be their tolerance and the driving force for my efforts. This makes me feel that a ray of sunshine in my life has broken through the thorns and made me feel the warmth given by my family.
If the tree doesn't get sunlight, it may not thrive; If the flower is not moistened by rain and dew, it may not show its beauty among the flowers; Without the warmth given by his family, maybe he will never know what "the warmth of the sun shining into his heart" is. My family will always shine on me selflessly with their warm love like sunshine, and I will return my brilliant achievements like sunshine to them.
7. On the way, I wrote my mind map. I really understood what life is today. It is fragile, so fragile, as if it can't stand a little blow.
I saw it when I walked happily to my door. And it, trying to escape and not letting it leave easily, is the person who accompanied me since childhood-my baby, a cat.
I looked at it, and it kept twitching there. It turned out that it ate something it shouldn't have eaten, and it was a damn mouse that had been taking rat poison. Because of it, did my cat just get in? It didn't yield. From morning till now, it has been persevering strongly, fighting death with its last strength, because it is unwilling and doesn't want to let life slip away so easily.
I just went out to have a look, but I didn't have much convulsions. However, it did not give up, but wanted to tell others with its hiss that it would not give up easily. I squatted next to it and stroked its favorite part, but I couldn't see its usual enjoyment, only its green eyes waiting straight for a while. I don't know if it is fear, helplessness or firmness. I kept touching, but there was something in my eye. I couldn't help myself at that time. I just said to it: "You must hold on, you must be strong. You're not even afraid of our dog. What are you afraid of? If you can survive tonight, I will definitely take you to the hospital tomorrow! " It seemed to understand something, and gradually stopped screaming, but twitched quietly there. I think it is quietly expecting something.
Life, we all know what it is, but do you really know it? With it, we can all survive, but if one day it leaves, you can't stay, and you regret it, regretting that you didn't care about it. But it's too late.
8. Write the composition My Beautiful Sky and help me draw a mind map. By the way, how to write the beautiful sky that can best bear my dream is that white drawing paper. It is a magic pen that depicts dreams.
Pencils disappear one by one, which is the passage of time; White paper piles up like a mountain; That's proof of memory. I like painting since I was a child, and I like to leave my own handwriting. I also dream of becoming a painter in the future. But there is such a big gap between reality and dreams, so I haven't learned painting, and the seeds are like this, and they don't sprout any more ... But at least, I can regard it as a hobby, just because I love painting, and there is nothing wrong with painting, although I am growing up and the ocean of dreams is ebbing.
But the sky is still clear. Here, I have become a bird. I have been waiting for it and will never forget it. Winter goes and summer comes, and flowers bloom and fall. I am glad that I have a brush to accompany me through these years. I no longer expect to have a magic pen that can draw everything, because in my eyes, any pen that is being drawn is magical, because different things will be born: unyielding soul, beautiful scenery, playful elves, and even funny footprints ... these are my magic; This is my world!
Some people say that the world is black and white, and I say that the world is magnificent; Some people say that black and white will mix into gray. I said gray can be beautiful. In the world of painting, everything is beautiful and bizarre. No matter Van Gogh, Picasso or Leonardo da Vinci, I prefer to read my own works. After all, it was a quiet, comfortable, leisurely and quiet time, and there were no surprises in the courtyard. This is my ideal world. When you are happy, you will associate beautiful scenery with sunshine; When you are lost, you also add hope with rain; When thinking, daub your wings with knowledge; When you are sad, draw a hut to recuperate ... you can draw without thinking about anything; When painting, my heart is always rekindled with hope. Why enjoy it, why full of fantasy, because it is my hobby? No, because this is my dream! ! !
I have never forgotten my dream. Only seeds have the hope of germination. This is my dream sky, and I can soar to my heart's content. Pick up the brush and you will have strength. When you spread out the drawing paper, you will have hope. You don't care how much you pay, you only care about your own growth. Everything, just because of dreams. ...
There, there is my world, my story and my dream; There, express everything silently on paper with a pen; There, where I fly, my beautiful sky!