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National Volume II: Path

Zhejiang: Between Role Changes

Shandong: Changes in Light and Shadow of Life

Ningxia: Integrity and kindness

Tianjin: The world I live in

Beijing: Looking up at the stars and being down-to-earth

Jiangxi: Recovering childhood

Liaoning: " Happiness is ____"

Sichuan: The geometry of life

Hunan: "Early"

Shaanxi: People who transform the environment

Guangdong: Being Your Neighbor

Shanghai: Danes Fishing

Chongqing: Problems

Jiangsu: Advocating Green Life

Hubei: Fantasy

Anhui: Reflections on Wuxing’s Miscellaneous Poems

Fujian: Grimm’s Fairy Tales

Hainan: Participation

■Inventory of college entrance examination compositions in our province over the years

1996: "Plastic Surgery on Six Fingers" and "Wrong Amputation"

1997: Carrying classmates to school

1998: Mom only washed one shoe

1999: If memory can be transplanted

2000: Through different understandings of four graphic symbols, talk about your perspective, understanding of problems and problems in life The answer?

2001: Integrity

2002: Choice of the soul

2003: Emotional intimacy and recognition of things

2004 Year: Believe in yourself and listen to others’ opinions

2005: Unexpected and reasonable

2006: The Eagle and the Crow

2007: Falling Wrestle

2008: Earthquake relief

2009: Rabbit learns to swim

■In an immediate survey, more than half of people found the composition difficult, and 54% were unprepared

It all depends on on-site performance

The annual college entrance examination essay is the most talked about topic among people, and it will definitely cause controversy after the exam. Yesterday, the reporter randomly interviewed more than a dozen candidates. Only half said that the questions seemed relatively simple, had few restrictions, were not easy to go off topic, and were relatively clear about their intentions. Nearly half of the candidates thought it was not simple and did not know what the comics were about.

As of 18:30 yesterday, ***12,881 people had participated in a website survey. The results showed that only 17.72% of people thought that the exam composition was not difficult, and 52% thought it was relatively difficult and very difficult. ; When asked whether they think the essay question is easy to go off-topic, nearly 35% of people think it is relatively easy to go off-topic, and 54%

of them think it is not sure at all

Preparation depends entirely on performance.

Even if there are fish to eat, don’t forget to catch mice

The essay review is more difficult than last year. These are the best intentions: stick to your duties and stay away from selfish desires; don’t give up your job for selfish desires

Zhang Dingyong, a senior teacher at Henan Experimental Middle School and a key teacher in Henan Province, believes that this year’s college entrance examination essay examination is more difficult than last year. Students often have different opinions when it comes to understanding the content of the materials. It seems that “the answers are rich and colorful.” However, there is always an understanding that is closest to the meaning of the question. It is like a target. Even though there are eight or nine rings, there is still ten rings after all. This requires comparing and selecting the best, deciphering the meaning of the question, and ensuring that the composition meets the meaning of the question, in order to obtain high scores.

●Stability and novelty in comic compositions

Comics use exaggeration, metaphor, symbolism, allegory and other techniques to express humorous, witty and pungent pictures to satirize, criticize or praise certain things. person or thing.

In recent years, the National Paper has been testing new materials for composition. In 2006, it was about crows learning to be eagles. In 2008, it was about earthquake relief and united efforts. In 2009, it was about small animals learning to swim. The 2007 "Fall" is still fresh in the memory of many candidates. This year, the comic composition test "Why don't you catch mice when there are fish to eat" is tested again. It is really unexpected to take the comic composition test so frequently.

When using comics as a topic for writing training, you should pay attention to the following four steps: (1) Understand the meaning of the painting. After getting the question, you must first read the picture carefully. (2) Grasp the image characteristics. By grasping the essence, you can find writing materials and plan the layout of the article. (3) Connect with the reality of life, try to figure out the words in the painting, the meaning behind the words, association and imagination, not only can you obtain a lot of writing materials, but also can deepen your understanding of the purpose of the painting. (4) Finally, according to the requirements of the topic, discuss the picture and write the idea into a paper.

●Three ideas and four angles are the best

The best ideas for this year’s composition: stick to responsibilities, stay away from selfish desires, and stay away from temptations; responsibilities are greater than temptations and selfish desires; do not be tempted by selfish desires. Give up your own duties.

You can criticize the three cats who eat fish: the cat’s duty is to catch mice, but because a plate of fish is placed in front of them, they turn a blind eye to the mice they caught and only focus on the fish. One of the cats was enjoying it comfortably, eating to its fullest size, with a happy expression. The other two cats showed disdain for the mouse-catching cat. They were discussing and sarcastic about the mouse-catching cat - "What age is this? There are fish to eat." And catch mice."

You can praise the cat who is not greedy for fish but has the courage to catch mice. There is no doubt that the cat's duty is to catch mice, so he must stick to his duty. As a cat, its main duty is to do its best to fight against all kinds of "rats". This is the most fundamental quality that a good cat must possess. Fish can be a metaphor for a comfortable environment, generous benefits, charming temptation, etc.

●Candidates can write from the following four perspectives

1. Fulfill your responsibilities well. No matter how many temptations there are, you must not lose yourself and insist on doing your job well.

2. Those who seek enjoyment and indulge in temptation will be cast aside by others and abandoned by society. In real life, there are also some lazy cats. Their owners feed them well, but they sit back and do nothing, do not stick to their responsibilities, and forget their mission when they live a prosperous life - the rich second generation, gnawing on the elderly. Aren't they also the incarnations of those three cats who do not want to make progress and just sit back and enjoy the success?

There are many temptations in life. Generous profits, gorgeous clothes, delicious food, tempting "fish"...all these have the potential to "become more attractive to the eyes". If you indulge in them, you will lose yourself and lose your principles.

3. Times are changing and living standards are improving, but the fine traditions cannot be lost and the true nature cannot be forgotten - cats are born to catch mice, and the foundation of a cat's life is also to catch mice, not Eat fish!

4. Don’t blindly follow the crowd, you must have your own correct discernment. Everyone is eating fish, while another cat is catching mice. As for catching mice while having fish to eat, don't be afraid of other people's gossip, don't blindly follow the crowd, and be careful to screen.

●Highlighting the color of rational thinking is a trend

Judging from the track of college entrance examination essay propositions in recent years, more and more attention is paid to logical thinking, and we must use a dialectical point of view to look at problems and avoid one-sided Look at the problem; look at the problem in connection, avoid looking at the problem in isolation; look at the problem in a developmental way, avoid looking at the problem statically. The central topic of the material is the question of "should we catch mice when there are fish to eat?" If we only focus on one aspect and do not look at the problem comprehensively and dialectically, it will be difficult to meet the best intentions.

To get high scores, you need to dig more at the development level. ① Profoundness, that is, going deep into the essence through phenomena and revealing the inner cause and effect of things. The views are inspiring. ② Rich materials, substantial arguments, full images, and profound artistic conception. ③ Have literary talent, use appropriate words, flexible sentence patterns, be good at using rhetorical techniques, and expressive sentences.

④ Be innovative, have novel insights, fresh materials, new ideas, unique reasoning and imagination, and personality.

Under the premise of ensuring that the review questions are accurate, if the composition wants to get high scores, it must have at least one advantage in the development level.

■Wang Liqun comments on college entrance examination essays

You can use cats to write about cats or you can use cats to write about people.

There are four criteria for good compositions: accurate conception , fluent language, vivid expressions, and profound meaning

"This cartoon is quite interesting, and it shouldn't be too difficult for candidates to write it." Yesterday afternoon, a professor and Ph.D. from Henan University who was recording "Hundred Schools Forum" on CCTV Student tutor Wang Liqun said that the questions were very good, but it was not easy for the candidates to get high scores. Wang Liqun has been grading college entrance examination essays for more than 20 years. He believes that a good essay should meet four standards: accurate idea, fluent language, vivid expression, and profound meaning.

●Most candidates should not "go off topic"

"This cartoon is not difficult, and the picture is relatively intuitive. Generally, there will be something to write, and there will be nothing to say. "Wang Liqun said that compared with propositional essays, comic essays and material essays are more objective and fair, and there is no problem that some candidates are familiar with them and some are not. Moreover, the ideas of the composition are relatively diverse, and candidates can elaborate on them from different angles. "Although candidates generally don't go off topic too much, it's not easy to come up with new ideas." Wang Liqun said that for this kind of comic composition, candidates don't need to start writing immediately. They can analyze the comics first. There are only a few cats that catch mice, and they do their job conscientiously. Although it can eat fish, it still insists on its duty to catch mice, and it also suffers ridicule from its peers. The majority of cats eat fish. It’s okay for them to eat fish, but it’s not okay to laugh at cats that catch mice.

●You can use cats to write about cats, or you can use cats to write about people.

Wang Liqun said that when faced with this cartoon, candidates can either "use cats to write about cats", or they can "Writing people as cats".

Candidates can "write cats with cats", and can write from the natural world and the animal kingdom. For example, in nature, each animal has its own number. If cats don't catch mice and all eat fish, mice will become a problem. Cats cannot live by eating fish alone.

In addition, cats can also be regarded as symbols of people, and cat behavior can be regarded as phenomena of human society, using anthropomorphic techniques to "write people with cats."

In this case, cats that eat fish are the "sit back and enjoy" faction in human society. They only care about enjoyment and do not fulfill their responsibilities. If they rely on artificial breeding for a long time, they will starve to death once there are no fish. The cat who catches mice is a "self-reliant" person. Only if he has real skills will he not be afraid of changes.

●The idea of ????the composition cannot be "the blind man touches the elephant"

"The candidate must grasp the meaning and idea of ??the entire painting, and cannot be the 'blind man touching the elephant'. Touch the tail of the elephant to write the tail, and grasp the trunk. Write the nose." Wang Liqun said that the concept of the comic composition must be accurate and cannot be comprehensive. The candidates should grasp the overall concept of the comic, not just a part of it.

Wang Liqun said that some candidates may use "reverse thinking" and say, "It doesn't matter if the cat eats the fish?" Although this idea is original, it may deviate from the theme of the comic. Candidates still have to start from the main idea of ??the comic, and it is not enough to completely abandon the theme and idea.

●There are four necessary conditions for high-scoring compositions

Since 1977, Wang Liqun has served as a college entrance examination grading work for more than 20 years. In his eyes, there are four necessary conditions for a composition to get high scores: first, the idea is accurate, second, the language is fluent, third, the expression is vivid, and fourth, the meaning is profound. The marking teacher also mainly evaluates the candidate's composition based on these four parts.

Wang Liqun said that the first condition for a successful composition is accurate and lofty intention. Only essays with high intentions have the possibility of getting high marks. If it is just a pile of materials without elaborating a topic in depth or explaining a topic thoroughly, it cannot be considered a good composition. Wang Liqun said that if the candidate can extract a higher idea from the story provided, and can explain the idea in depth and in a hierarchical manner from all aspects, with a complete structure and vivid and distinctive language, it is a good composition.