196 1 Feb.

A beautiful five-foot gun,

The first rays of the morning sun shone on the parade ground.

Chinese children have many strange wishes,

Powder and no powder.

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This poem is not only a poem with pictures, but also an impromptu poem. With elegant and lively language, the author depicts the unprecedented satire and heroism of women in China by sketching the military training of women militia, praises their heroism of "keeping a woman alive", praises the brand-new mental outlook of new China women and their extraordinary ambition to defend the motherland at any time, and expresses the idea that "soldiers and people are the foundation of victory" through artistic image shaping.

This poem captures the image and vividly depicts it; If you hear his voice, you will see his people; Understand as words, with profound connotation; Natural and smooth, full of charm.

A sentence or two in the poem depicts a picture of vigorous training. In the red light of Wan Li at the beginning of the red sun, beautiful female militiamen dressed in simple combat uniforms and armed with steel guns bravely aimed at and stabbed at the training ground ... Brave and Fearless shows the main image of the female militia, Five-foot Gun shows the image characteristics of the female militia, Dawn renders the environment and does "performance", and three or four sentences in the poem are about the training plan. The theme of Duo Qizhi is easy to point out. The contrast between "red dress" and "armed" further explains the theme, and at the same time strengthens the characteristics of the times of the main image of "female militia", making it more vivid and vivid. Although the four sentences are very short, the packaging capacity is very large. The author captures fragments of life, grasps instant feelings, reflects rich reality and shows profound significance. He used the method of combining description and discussion to express his feelings on the basis of describing the vivid image of female militia, so that the image was sublimated, from the beauty of image to the beauty of spirit, from the beauty of the old era to the beauty of the new era, the feelings were stronger and the realm was expanded.

The whole poem is like bright and beautiful, which means philosophy. It is a rare masterpiece for the author to describe what he sees and thinks from the perspective of meditation, human feelings and lovers.

This poem is deeply loved by the broad masses of people.