1, improper multi-layer attributive word order 2, improper multi-layer adverbial word order 3, improper attributive and central word order 4, improper position of attributive and adverbial 5, improper word order of related coordinate words or phrases 6, improper subject and related words [example1]1,outstanding professor of Chinese Department in Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience. Excellent professor of Chinese Department in Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience. In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days. In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days. He jumped out of the pond and came to the edge of the pool, where he swam soon. The order of clauses is reversed. We studied it carefully and listened to your opinions. Words can reflect the meanings of inheritance and priority. Word order must meet this objective requirement. In this case, "learning and listening" reverses the order of commitment. Students, leaders and teachers all attended the opening ceremony. (It should be changed to "leaders, teachers and students") 6. Look at vilen blooming everywhere. (It should be changed from "blooming mountain flowers" to "blooming mountain flowers" to match the later "blooming") 7. The Palace Museum recently exhibited cultural relics newly unearthed more than 2,000 years ago. When was this "cultural relic" unearthed? According to the original sentence, it was "more than two thousand years ago", but it was not. This is because the word order is not current, which leads to ideographic errors. We should move the "newly unearthed" to the "exhibition" ) 8. This village has well implemented the Party's policy of enriching the people. Now, we have not only sold 60,000 Jin of agricultural grain to the country, but also stopped eating state relief. (If the progressive relationship is improper, it should be changed to "not only don't eat state relief grain, but also sell 60 thousand Jin of public grain to the state") 9. In your own way. They are exploring, they are judging, they are looking for, they are thinking, (it should be changed to "for their own way, they are thinking, they are judging, they are exploring, they are looking for") [classic college entrance examination questions analysis 1] (improper word order) 1, literature on some problems in the economic field, theoretically and politically. Through inspection, we discussed, found and solved some problems in extracurricular activities. (Shanghai, 1995) [classroom consolidation training] What happened to the following sick sentences? 1. The FBI arrested the professional spy Em, exposing the scandal that in-service intelligence personnel provided top secret information to foreign countries in the history of American intelligence. 2. Many masterpieces of China's calligraphy and painting art are not only the treasures of human art, but also the artistic treasures of the Chinese nation. (Shanghai, 1997). He not only loves playing Weiqi, but also is good at studying the development history of Weiqi. As textile workers strive to improve the quality of production, China's cotton exports are well received by customers all over the world. As for Mr. Kan Kan, although his voice and smile have not changed, the wrinkles around his eyes seem to imply the hardships and unpleasantness of these years. (93) 6. Microsoft pinyin, double spelling, full spelling, intelligent ABC, Ma Zheng and other input methods are very popular among computer users.

Second, improper collocation.

1, improper collocation of related words 2, improper collocation of attributive and head word (subject and object) 3, improper collocation of verb and object 4, improper collocation of subject and object 5, improper collocation of verb and complement 7, improper collocation of adverbial and head word (predicate) 8, improper collocation of one side and two sides [Example 2]1,people If the subject-predicate collocation is improper, the word "improvement" should be changed to "improvement". His revolutionary spirit always comes to my eyes. ("Spirit" and "Emergence" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship. You can change "spirit" into "image". What a beautiful picture the rustling waves and the silver sea make up. Both "wave" and "sea surface" are subjects, in which "wave" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship with the predicate "component", so "rustling wave" should be removed or another subject-predicate relationship should be formed. Due to reasonable close planting and strengthening management, the rice production in this county is generally growing well. ("production" and "good-looking" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship, so "production" should be deleted and "rice" should be the subject) 5. Whenever I recall a period of life with him, his amiable voice and smile reappear in front of my eyes, following the teachings of good embroidery. "Teaching" and "appearance" constitute an improper subject-predicate relationship, so "persuasion teaching" can be removed. "It is best to add' ringing in my ear again' to form a subject-predicate relationship. 6. The novel Song of Youth created the heroic deeds of Lu Jiachuan, Jiang Hua and Lin Hong in party member. ("Shaping" and "deeds" can't constitute an object-object relationship, but "deeds" can be changed to "images") 7. The soldiers braved heavy rain and muddy roads to make rapid progress. ("Crossing the Kanto" and "Small Road" can't form a predicate-object relationship, so "Zheng" and "Shang" can be added before and after "Muddy Road" respectively. The students watched and listened to the report of Laoshan hero with admiration. (The "gaze" in the joint predicate cannot be collocated with the object "report" and can be deleted. ) 9. The private plots cultivated by farmers that meet the policy requirements are a kind of legitimate labor. (Improper collocation of subject and object) 10, two parallel lines with short frames are always two unreachable endpoints. The meaning of subject and object in the judgment sentence does not belong to the same category, which leads to improper collocation of subject and object. In this case, "two parallel lines are endpoints" is obviously not properly matched, so "endpoints" can be changed to "straight lines" and so on. ) 1 1, we firmly believe that one day, China's industry and agriculture will become a developed country. The object of this sentence is acted by a subject-predicate phrase, but the main part of this short-lived subject-predicate is "industry and agriculture become a country", and the meaning of the subject and object is obviously inappropriate. You can change "country" to "industry" and so on. Autumn in Beijing is a beautiful season. (This is due to improper word order, which leads to the wrong meaning of the subject and object, so "Autumn in Beijing" should be changed to "Autumn in Beijing") 13. Whether you have lofty aspirations and tenacious will is the key to a person's success. (One side and two sides are not properly matched) 14. Whether the electronic industry can develop rapidly and penetrate into all walks of life depends on accelerating the training of a group of specialized talents. (The use of "whether" in front is two aspects. There is only a positive side behind, which is inconsistent. You can change "to" to ") 15. Young men and women no longer choose their partners on the basis of property and family status, but on the basis of working ability and scientific and cultural knowledge. (In the front, "quantity" and "height" are related to both sides, and in the back, they are only related to one side, which is inconsistent. You can change "can" to "can" and "have" to "have") 16, and academic performance is an important condition for a good student. The front is "good or bad", and the back is only positive and inconsistent. You can add "can you become" before "three good students") 17. The car is driving on a wide road. After introducing the heroic deeds, the students applauded warmly. At five or six o'clock in the morning, tens of thousands of people stood on both sides of the street leading to the airport. ("Crowd" is a whole noun, which can be changed to "people" instead of the previous "tens of thousands") 19. We have carefully studied the workers' suggestions and humbly sought the opinions of experts. As an adverbial, "seriousness" cannot modify or restrict "research", but it can be changed to "seriousness" and "caution". The students cleaned the classroom neatly. ("Clean" can supplement the degree of sweeping the floor. However, "neatness" cannot be compared with "cleanliness". You can add "put the table and stool away" in front of it or delete it. [classic college entrance examination questions analysis 2-a] (improper collocation) 1. All cadres and the masses, without exception, must abide by the socialist legal system. No matter how unfavorable the climatic conditions and geographical environment were, the climbers still overcame many difficulties and succeeded in reaching the top. With this compass, you won't get lost no matter when the clouds are overcast and the sun can't be seen in the morning and evening. (Shanghai, 1992) 4. When they encounter difficulties, they are not depressed, but gain strength from everyone's trust and concern and establish confidence in overcoming difficulties. (97) [Analysis of Classical Examination Questions of College Entrance Examination 2-B] 4. No.1 factory is constantly committed to the research and development of new products, new technologies, new processes and new materials, driven by technological progress. Do you know how much work bees do in a catty of honey? According to the statistics of scientists, there are about 500 thousand pollen collected by bees per catty of honey. (1993) 【 Analysis of Classical Exams in College Entrance Examination 2-c】7. He immediately called the Standing Committee to study and arranged the content, time and participants of the on-site meeting in a unified way, as well as the problems that should be paid attention to in the meeting. (95) 8. This cultural station has become a place to educate and help backward youth, save and train young people who have lost their feet, and has been commended by superior leaders for many times. (93) 9. In recent years, China has accelerated the development of higher education, and colleges and universities will further expand enrollment and focus on building a number of high-level universities and disciplines. (200 1 year) 10. For a few incidents that did not respect the work of sanitation workers, made troubles without reason, and even beat and insulted sanitation workers, the relevant departments promptly criticized, educated and dealt with them. (96) [Analysis of Classical Exams in College Entrance Examination 2-D]11. During the Spring Festival this year, 2 10 fire engines and more than 3,000 officers and men in this city gave up their vacations and stuck to their posts. (99) 12. Although the scale of this factory is small, it won the provincial science conference award twice and was awarded the title of provincial quality product twice, and its products are exported to all parts of the country and Southeast Asia. (2000) 13. It's a pity that this masterpiece, which has been brewing in his mind for a long time and is about to mature, left us prematurely before it was finished. (200 1 spring trick) [classroom consolidation training] What's wrong with the following sick sentences? 1, around Tomb-Sweeping Day, XX troops sent 800 people to plant trees in the suburbs. (88) 2. The most gratifying thing is that with the unity and cooperation of the workers in the whole factory and the efforts around the clock, the annual production index has finally been exceeded. (Spring 2000) 3. The park displays ice sculptures such as "loong" symbolizing the soaring of the Chinese nation, as well as fairy tales adapted from The Journey to the West and Daughter of the Sea (200 1) 4. Knowledge-based economy first appeared in 1990s, and 2 1 century was the era when knowledge-based economy developed rapidly and gradually occupied the leading position in the world economy. 5, long-term lack of sleep, will make the body's biological clock function disorder, the normal pace of life disorder, thus promoting premature aging, causing some unnecessary diseases. 6. The provincial party committee and government have conscientiously summed up the experience and lessons that caused this backward situation, and established the working idea of rejuvenating the city through science and education. 7. Since the reform and opening up, we have carried out a series of fruitful reforms in the economic system and made great achievements. 8. Cangshan is like a screen, and Erhai is like a mirror. This is really great. 9. Guilin is really beautiful, and the folk customs of Zhuang people in the picture make me relaxed and happy. 10, we should adopt various methods to cultivate and improve our learning quality. 1 1. After a period of investigation, analysis and discussion, some long-standing controversial issues have made progress to varying degrees. 12, only by studying the characteristics of economic criminals can we identify and crack down on them steadily, accurately and ruthlessly. 13, although your gift is meager, it is like a weight in his heart. 14. Cultivating a new generation in the new century is not only a matter for schools, but also a matter for the whole society. 15, the automatic instrument factory corrected its mistakes and voluntarily returned more than 200,000 bonuses distributed at the end of last year. 16. since the reform and opening up, especially in recent years, we have carried out a series of fruitful reforms in the economic and political systems and made great achievements.

Third, it is illogical.

1, unclear concept scope 2, contradiction 3, confusion caused by repeated negation 4, inversion of subject and object 5, incorrect use of related words [example 3]1,at night, from a distance, the whole building is dark, and only one room is still brightly lit. Now that he's here, he's still worried. Mathematics doesn't interest me. The subject of this sentence is "I" and the object is "mathematics", which should be changed to "I am interested in mathematics". Ostrovsky's How Steel was Tempered is no stranger to young people in China. (It can be changed to "China youth are no strangers to ostrovsky's How Steel was Tempered") More than 5,800 people, with a few shriveled arms, struggled with storms and floods for a day and a night. (How can "more than 800 people" have thousands of arms? "Thousands" should be changed to "more than one thousand") 6. He worked hard and completed all the courses in the university in three years. ("All the courses in the university" are vast, and it is not objective to finish them in only three years, so "all" can be removed. ) 7. When you stand on the shore and look at the boundless sea, a magnificent picture of our ancestors at sunrise and returning at sunset will emerge in front of your eyes. (since it is "looking at the sea", the picture presented later should be the scene at sea. This expression sees the scene on land, which is inconsistent. You can turn the "sea" into "vast land" and so on. ) 8. This year, 90% of the students in our school joined the "Volunteer Commando". No one will deny that the Yangtze River does not flow eastward. ("No denial" means "recognition", and "recognition" means "the Yangtze River does not flow eastward", which obviously does not conform to the objective facts. You can change "denial" to "recognition" or remove the second "no") 10. Can you deny that you shouldn't study hard? The answer to the rhetorical question is on the opposite side of the sentence. If you don't use rhetorical questions, negation is appropriate, but if you use rhetorical questions, the meaning is just the opposite. The word "no" can be removed) 1 1. Over the past few years, he has been collecting and sorting out folk songs and accumulated a lot of information. ("Always" means "Always", but the sentence expression is just the opposite, and "forgetting" can be changed to "being present") 12. Young workers, old workers and women attended the railway workers' congress. (improper classification and enumeration. "Young workers" and "old workers" are divided by the same standard, while "women" are different standards and cannot form a parallel relationship with the former two, so "women" can be removed. All league members, especially middle school students, should study hard scientific and cultural knowledge. (The object to be emphasized by the word "special" should be the part of the above-mentioned concept that forms a range relationship with the front, while "middle school students" and "league members" can only be cross-related, so "middle school students" should be changed to "middle school students' league members". ) 14, went shopping and bought toothpaste, toothbrush and daily necessities. ("Toothpaste", "toothbrush" and "daily necessities" are not juxtaposed, but subordinate, so "harmony" should be changed to "equality") [Analysis of classic college entrance examination questions 3] (illogical) 1. Three taboos for sleeping: first, don't get angry before going to bed, second, don't eat enough before going to bed, and third, don't lie in the wind. Of course, the spirit of Lei Feng should be endowed with new connotations, but who can deny that there is no need to learn from Lei Feng now? (98) 3. In ancient times, this kind of music works only had written records, and there was no score, so it was impossible to play or sing. (95) 4. Cai Wenji, a large-scale historical drama adapted by Beijing People's Art Theatre, is scheduled to be staged in capital theatre on May 1, and is being rehearsed intensively recently. (200 1) 5. Our newspapers, magazines, televisions and all publications have a greater responsibility to set an example, put an end to the phenomenon of nonstandard words, and increase the awareness of standardization in the use of language and characters. (2000) 17 In June and March, six members were expelled from the International Olympic Committee for bribery scandal. The next day, the world's major newspapers reported this event that shocked the international sports world in detail. (99) [Classroom consolidation training] What's wrong with the following ill sentences? In order to prevent such traffic accidents from happening again, we have strengthened traffic safety education and management. In recent years, Comrade Wang Fang has been collecting and arranging folk songs almost all the time. What we young people lack is low theoretical level and insufficient time experience. After hard work, in the final exam, his average score of six subjects was above 90. After the evening self-study, there is no one in the classroom, only Xiao Wang is still secretly searching for something with a flashlight in the classroom. 6. In this remote town, a large supermarket that provides customers with all kinds of supplies, clothing, stationery and home appliances is about to open. 7. According to preliminary statistics, about 20% people now regard savings as their future endowment insurance. 10 During August and June, the number of books published more than doubled each year, while the total number of books printed was basically the same, indicating that the average number of books more than doubled.

Fourth, the structure is chaotic.

1, two different sentence patterns are mixed, 2. Oppose customer first, 3. Change the course halfway [Example 4]1. What can't be said is that the school gave this task to our class, and everyone felt glorious. (Miscellaneous) 2. Since China people accepted Marxism–Leninism, great changes have taken place in China's revolution under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong. As far as students' schoolwork burden is concerned, it is too hard for teachers to be buried in the homework pile all the year round. (anti-customer first. Before the first sentence was finished, it was interrupted by the second sentence and changed to another topic. As a leading cadre of party member and the Party, we should take the fundamental interests of the Party and the people as the starting point when doing things and thinking about problems. (The second half is a mixture of "starting from ..." and "starting from ...", and the word "from" can be removed. Throughout the ages, no one denies that talented people with outstanding achievements have the spirit of struggle. (The predicate part is a mixture of a judgment sentence and a statement sentence. You can add "de" at the end of the sentence to form an emphasis structure of "yes ……", or you can remove "yes". ) 6. Survival published by Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House was written by a Chinese Canadian writer who has lived overseas for more than 20 years. (it is a mixture of subject-predicate sentences and verb-predicate sentences, and the "author" at the end of the sentence can be removed. You can imagine how you can get good grades if you don't study hard. (It's a mixture of rhetorical questions and declarative sentences, so it's necessary to remove "it's conceivable" and add "what" after "achievement") [Analysis of Classical College Entrance Examination Questions 4] (structural confusion) 1. Whether the electronic industry can develop rapidly and penetrate into all walks of life widely depends on accelerating the training and bringing up a group of specialized technical talents. (93) 2. Whether we can cultivate new people with "four haves" is a major event related to the future and destiny of our party and country, and it is also the fundamental task of the education front. 3. How can we make everyone rich? The key issue is that knowledge plays a decisive role. The poverty of knowledge will inevitably lead to the poverty of wealth, and the abundance of wealth is often based on the richness of knowledge. (Spring of 200 1) 4. It is not difficult to see that this obvious misjudged case has been delayed in getting a fair judgment, and the fundamental reason is the absence of party style. (200 1) 5. The Law on the Protection of Consumers' Rights and Interests is very popular with consumers, because it strengthens people's awareness of self-expression and protects consumers' rights and interests to the maximum extent. (99) [Classroom consolidation training] What's wrong with the following ill sentences? 1. Being good at discovering and using talents often plays an important role in the development of enterprises. 2. At the end of the 20th century, whether mankind can peacefully enter the new century depends on the sober judgment of western capitalism on the world trend and its ability to rationally use free power. 3. Carrying out the Party's educational policy in an all-round way is a major issue related to whether students can really be trained into "four haves". He made such great achievements because he worked hard and struggled tenaciously. When the superior announced that the task was given to us, we all felt both glorious and happy. This feeling is indescribable. 6. At present, with the rapid growth of international trade and investment, transnational operation is very eye-catching, and it has become a new economic force, showing a great role in the international arena. 7. The migration of birds is often caused by changes in various external environments.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) is ambiguous.

1, inexplicable 2, ambiguous 3, unclear reference [example 5]1,I have made great progress in my three years of high school life. Because teachers are strict with themselves. It is not clear whether "ego" refers to the teacher or "me", and "ego" can be changed to "me" according to the context. ) 2. On the day of the old school reunion, when Zhang Qing and Wang Jie met, he said, "Do you still know him?" ("He" means Zhang Qing or Jesson Wang? It can be changed to "Zhang Qing") 【 Analysis of Classical Exams in College Entrance Examination 5 】 (unclear meaning) 1. The notice from the county said that the head of the township, Zhao, reported for duty before 15 this month. (94) 2. Someone received a letter from the secretary group of the academic conference, which said: As long as your unit agrees, we can reimburse the travel expenses, arrange accommodation and get a conference attendance card. (9 1) 3. Everyone is generally very angry that the ranger exposed the problem that the Forestry Bureau took the lead in smuggling timber. As soon as people enter the teaching building, they will see all the pictures and posters about the history of Macao hanging on the walls on both sides of the corridor. (Spring 2000) 5. At the beginning of this year, the United States and Britain assembled a frightening military force, which made the Gulf region once overcast. 6. It is necessary for students who love liberal arts to strengthen liberal arts counseling, but can we ignore the study of science? Do you want them to learn math and physics well? In order to make students have a reasonable knowledge structure, our answer is yes. 7. How did he do in class? According to his teacher, this is not the case. [Classroom consolidation training] What happened to the following ill sentences? 1. Billboards are not allowed outside stations, docks, airports, parks and commercial areas. 2. How to improve students' language expression ability quickly is a special concern of Chinese teachers in middle schools. The head of the department is fully prepared for his criticism. I saw Bird helping an old man get off the bus with a black leather bag in his hand. The reporter denied that there is a basis for aliens to visit N city in W country. 6. With the development of economy, do we still need traditional morality? How to choose between righteousness and benefit? Our answer is yes. 7. Was Li Xiucheng brave when he was caught by the Qing soldiers and beheaded? According to some historical records, this is not the case. 8. When an industry's knowledge innovation and technological progress have just begun to develop, the industry will be in a stage of rapid rise and become a sunrise industry; Instead, it became a sunset industry. 9. The collection of historical materials is easier than identification and application, which is the main strength of most writers in China in the past.

Sixth, the composition is redundant.

1, the subject and some predicates are duplicated; 2. Predicate and object are duplicated; 3. Repeat with modifiers before and after the predicate; 4. The attribute and the head language are repeated; 5. The adverbial and the head language are repeated [Example 6-1]1.The official salary of applying for foreign experts should generally be higher or maintained, but not lower than the probation salary. (It has been defined as "above or maintained", and the case of "below" is explicitly excluded, and then "below probation salary" is used, which is duplicate and should be deleted. ) 2. Five-star winery decided to keep Chen Xinyao and others in the factory for two years, with monthly living expenses and no bonus. (In front of the second sentence, it has been explained that "only living expenses are paid" and bonuses have been ruled out. Let's talk about "free bonuses" again. Duplicates should be deleted. ) 3. Xuelian brand shirts, regardless of style or quality. Still packaging, it can be called first-class in the country. ("Kan" originally means "can", so we should use "can" in front of it and remove "can". Judging from his weak breathing, he is not dead, and he still has a breath. The reason why I didn't do well in this exam is because I didn't carefully examine the questions according to the teacher's requirements. (The subject is redundant "cause", and the following "cause" is repeated because "cause" or "cause" is removed) 6. Lao She's writing style has always shared weal and woe with the people. (the style should be removed) 7. The lecture notes borrowed from your college last time are being printed and can be distributed to students before class. The predicate "continue" is redundant and should be deleted. 8. Ten players on the basketball court are having a fierce game. ("hit" is redundant and should be deleted) 9. Balzac, a famous French novelist, devoted his life to the compilation of the novel collection Human Tragedy. Today, I came to Yangzhou Slender West Lake and visited the White Pagoda, Diaoyutai and Wu Ting Bridge. 1 1. There are fertile land, rich mineral deposits and mountain villages full of countless treasures. (The redundant component "various" is redundant and should be deleted) 12. We had a military training before school started. The coach in charge of military training is a company with a big beard and small eyes. ("Responsible for military training" is redundant and should be deleted) 13. Judgment is a form of thinking that affirms or denies whether something has a certain nature. ("Whether" is redundant should be deleted) 14. The mountains are full of fruits: pears, apples, persimmons ... ("everywhere" and "everywhere" are repeated, so it is better to delete "everywhere" because "everywhere" has more emphasis) 15. In order to simplify the number of words, ("some" is repeated with the previous "slightly added", but it can be deleted. ) [classic college entrance examination questions analysis 6-a] (redundant components) 1. He is always taciturn at ordinary times, but once he talks about his favorite major at academic conferences, he becomes more active and talkative. (1997) 2. We must rely on the masses for everything, otherwise we can't do anything ourselves. Yesterday was the last day of the transfer deadline, and the China Football Association received another 25 players' transfer applications. (98) 4. Due to its unique characteristics, "A glimpse of China's ancient literature" has been widely circulated and enduring for nearly 300 years since its publication, and it is still a valuable anthology. (Spring 2000) 5. In addition to the staff of Peking University, the students of this short online training course also participated in the study, including teachers, students and scientific and technological workers from Tsinghua and other 15 universities. [Classroom consolidation training] What happened to the following ill sentences? 1. It is an urgent task for all kinds of sports workers in China to establish good moral habits in study. After listening to the introduction of the villagers and watching the earth-shaking changes in my hometown, I feel sincerely admired and gratified. 3. Those party and government cadres who know the law and break the law should be given severe legal sanctions. 4. How many rich silent subtext are contained behind this sentence. The central government attaches great importance to cotton production and points out that "cotton production should be greatly developed and accelerated". 6. During the meeting, we also visited the experience of several township enterprises in Hongqi Town, which were developed by the method of "introducing from the inside out". 7. The third reason for the accelerated development of natural science is that the field of science has concentrated the best, most creative and adventurous talents in society. 8. Habitual forces make them turn a blind eye to the unreasonable arrest and detention of the Public Security Bureau.

Seven, the composition is incomplete

1, subject incomplete 2, predicate incomplete 3, object incomplete 4, modifier incomplete 5, head incomplete [Example 7]1,with the help of teachers and classmates, I made rapid progress. Due to the frequent use of prepositions or object-object structures, the original subject becomes adverbial, and the lack of subject in the whole sentence is the main manifestation of incomplete subject. In this sentence, the words "in" and "under" should be deleted or the word "make" should be deleted. ) 2. In "The Tiger King Snatches Parents", zhou wenbin, a talented scholar in the south of the Yangtze River, disguised as a man, was snatched home by the Tiger King and sent to his sister Wang Xiuying's room. (Because the sentence is long, changing the subject secretly is also an important aspect of subject missing. The subject of the first half of this sentence is "zhou wenbin", the second half is converted into "Wang Tiger", and the last sentence should be added with the subject "Wang Tiger". ) 3. The school has made remarkable achievements in education and teaching, which has been reflected by provincial and municipal education committees for many times. The radical part of the radical phrase is misunderstood as the head, and the lack of subject in the latter sentence is also worthy of great attention. The subject of the first clause of this sentence is "achievement", and the subject of the second clause is misunderstood as "school", so it is omitted by mistake, and the subject "school" should be added before the second clause. After the bitter winter, a four-meter-high, 700-meter-volt river dam stands proudly at the edge of Tianmuying. Because the sentence is long, I forget the previous structure after writing, so the incomplete predicate is the main reason. In this case, the subject is "Nanpu people" and there is no corresponding predicate, so "yes" should be added before "one". The business department actively responded to the call of the government, publicized and educated the masses with great fanfare, and publicized the importance of selling products. We should add "make it clear" before "sell". After a semester of study, great changes have taken place in the students of our school. (The word "make" should be added before the second word "school") 7. In the old society, working people could not eat.