1. There are many inconsistencies in the meter of this poem. In particular, the first to sixth words in the fourth sentence of the supplementary poem are all dull sounds, completely losing the aesthetic feeling of rhythm ups and downs.

Seven unique flat tile rules are as follows, please compare:

Starting form (standard form):

Ordinary (rhyme),

Ordinary and ordinary (rhyme).

Ordinary and insipid,

Tong Pingping (rhyme).

The first sentence can also be "smooth".

Horizontal type (constant grid):

Ordinary and ordinary (rhyme),

Tong Pingping (rhyme).

Smooth and flat,

Ordinary and ordinary (rhyme).

The first sentence can also be regarded as "ordinary and plain."

2. Metric poems can only express their feelings through "connecting the past with the future", and the flowery rhetoric and empty words have lost the meaning of the poem itself.

3, there are many words in the poem, so you need to pay more attention to avoid "heavy".

Generally speaking, learning metrical poems begins with metrical poems. You can search Baidu Library for a brief introduction of metrical poems.