The velvet weaves a beautiful fan, and the light ink dyes poetry and Zen.
Fold the fish-seeking geese and flatten the moon-watching boat.
The heat is unbearable, and the autumn clothes are happy.
(Chinese new rhyme)
Teacher's comment on meditation: There is no problem with the rhyme of this poem, and the other problems are: 1. This poem rhymes badly and doesn't read smoothly. 2. The contents of couplets and necklaces (changed) should be interchanged. 3. The antithesis is irregular. 4. The structure of the poem is scattered and there is no layout.