Evaluation of the composition written by the Chinese teacher.
1, "You compare the' long rope' in tug-of-war to' children who can't make up their minds', which is so apt! Although the competition failed, your composition was a success! It would be better if the end of the composition turned my disappointment into several short revelations!
What a lovely child you are! How good you are at understanding the feelings in life. Although you are a little timid about writing, you have grasped the true meaning of writing-I am writing about my feelings. As long as you write your true feelings, the teacher must like you very much.
You are a smart and sensitive child. You once had a happy family and you loved your family. But don't you love when something unpleasant happens in your family? Call your family harmony and happiness with your intelligence and your love.
4. What a beautiful autumn you wrote! From your composition, the teacher saw the high blue sky, golden rice fields, flying geese in the south and falling yellow leaves, all of which made me feel the beauty and magic of autumn. How I want to say to autumn: autumn! Turning decay into magical autumn, how beautiful your students' compositions are!
5. When the teacher opens your composition book, you can always hear a burst of crying. It turned out to be punctuation marks, because you paid too little attention to them. Think about it, the teacher despises your composition just as you despise punctuation. Don't you cry?
Your composition can describe the autumn fields in detail, which shows that you are an observant child. But what a beautiful season autumn is. Autumn is a harvest season, and autumn is a colorful season. The teacher really hopes to feel the beautiful and poetic autumn in your article.
7. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
This article may not be particularly attractive in the story, but it is still a successful work. On the one hand, it depicts the characters well, and on the other hand, the language is vivid and rich, which plays a good role in expressing ideas.
9. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.
10, the full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
1 1. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off. The article is reasonable in imagination, natural and vivid in narration, compact in structure, coherent in connection with nature and prominent in center.
12, concise language, clear center, reasonable concept and clear writing level.
13, it is really commendable to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly and leave a deep impression on people.
14, the center of the article is clear and the structure is complete.
15, the article is well-founded, convincing, highlighting the personality of the characters, the context is natural, the organization is clear, coordinated from beginning to end, ending with points and highlighting the central idea.
16. The author observes … meticulously, describes it delicately, and has vivid language and novel expression.
17, the full-text language is concise and the structure is natural ... The article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.
18, the language is humorous, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the beginning and end echo is clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear and the language is easy to understand.
19. A series of verbs that express the actions of characters are used accurately and well.
20. This paper uses the first person writing, which gives … great advantages and plays a good role in characterization and performance center. It is friendly and natural to read, with clear thinking and lively rhythm.
2 1, the process of this article is concrete, clear and coherent. At the same time, the author added appropriate psychological description to fully express the author's feelings.
22. The article is narrated in children's language, which is natural and simple, just like the ending of a clear spring, and plays the role of making the finishing point.
23. The article is vivid and sincere, especially the article about the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.
24. Make things clear, use verbs correctly, use metaphors appropriately, and make vivid suggestions. After reading, you can get education from them.
25. Simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.
With concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style, this paper expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind.
There are three main advantages of this paper: this paper can closely follow the requirements of the topic, completely write the process of …, with rigorous structure, prominent focus, concise, concise and fluent language, and natural and accurate beginning and end.
28. The beginning is simple and natural, the structure is clear, and the psychological description is true, which reflects the author's good language control ability.
The characteristics of this article can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.
30. That ... is fresh, lively, cheerful and lively, and the childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have vitality.
3 1. The article presents …
32. The article is concise and clear, and the language is plain and simple.
33. The little author's careful investigation, vivid and meticulous appearance and vivid metaphor personification make people feel immersive when reading, and also make the author's mind and feelings more natural and full.
34. The author can introduce his lovely _ _ to readers in the order of orientation. From the school gate to the teaching area (the giant flower bed in the teaching building) to the sports area (the big playground), the layers are clear, and the scenery is painted selectively and emphatically, which naturally reflects the vibrant atmosphere of the school.
35. The author combines the description of scenery with the expression of feelings, and the scenery blends into one, showing his incomparable love for _ _ between the lines. The author focuses on describing the incomparable beautiful fountain, grassy playground and spacious and bright classroom, which has made a beautiful _ _ show in front of people today.
36. The little author used the essentials of moving point inspection to make _ _ morning color vivid, and his lines were full of the little author's love for _ _ and nature.
37. With the help of rich imagination, the article uses rhetorical devices such as personification metaphor to portray, making the language fluent and beautiful and the article vivid.
Through careful observation, I vividly described it in appropriate language. Although the article is short but not monotonous, the language is popular but interesting.
39. The subtle description of the characters' language, demeanor and movements is a major feature of this article. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.
40. The article is written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.
4 1, the music is beautiful, and the language of this article is equally beautiful. Poetic language, fantastic imagination, so beautiful.
42. The "reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related. Examples of actions are touching at the beginning and have real feelings.
43. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, and it is exciting to read.
44. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true feelings. Read it with relish, and make a lot of use of spoken English in life to make the article more natural and more close to the people. The ending is clear, implicit and meaningful.
45. This composition is novel in materials, fantastic in conception, lively in language, and reveals a fresh flavor of life and children's interest between the lines.
46. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
47. The article is full of respect and gratitude to … from beginning to end, and … is deeply touching, which is the shocking power of this article.
48. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.
49. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points, ups and downs in writing, lively and thought-provoking, and the story is ordinary but sincere and rich in feelings. The touching ending of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
50. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is true and interesting, and the writing is reasonable.
Comment at the end of composition
1, the ending is just right, the center is clear, the language is concise and profound, and it is thought-provoking.
2, use the feeling switch, ending with feeling. This can make the composition consistent from beginning to end, and at the same time, it can repeat the theme of the composition, which is very infectious.
3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
The implicit ending of this article is both topical and intriguing.
5. Focus on the end to express emotions, give consideration to the beginning, and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
6. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a useful way, which is the success of this paper.
7. The composition ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.
8. At the end of the composition, the central sentence is fully exposed, which is really clear, and the concluding language is short and powerful.
9. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are poor.
10, the poetic language at the beginning and end of the composition is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.
1 1. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and the indispensable pen at the end highlights the theme of the composition.
12. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.
13, the end of the composition is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
14, ending in …, clear and meaningful.
Junior high school composition evaluation
First, as a casual feeling, your article is quick-thinking and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
Second, you are a very independent and knowledgeable student. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
Thirdly, this paper chooses a brand-new angle to let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
Fourth, such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, which teachers should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in Chinese learning in the future, shall we?
5. Writing is like a person. Your article is as simple and open-minded as you are. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
6. Words can speak. I think the article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is really tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
Seven, literature can be freehand brushwork. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
Nine, it is really "writing like a god." It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
Ten, read your article, as if a stream flowing in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
1 1. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.
Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "Climbing a mountain is full of emotion and watching the sea is full of meaning". You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.
Thirteen, exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Steady and down-to-earth, is the direction of your writing efforts in the future.
14. Careful thinking and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
Although writing is not very attractive to you, every step you take is like a snail, and you keep writing and writing forever. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
16. Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to collective life with a brand-new attitude to adapt to the development of society.
17. The main features of this composition are concrete narration, true details, vivid description and true feelings, and the rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification are used to make it very vivid and express the love of _ _ _ _.
Eighteen, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
Nineteen, the article has clear clues and prominent themes, and the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article closely surrounds …, which is imaginative and rhythmic, making people want to read, love to read and put it down.
Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and an indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.
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