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Material Composition "Fear of Inflatable Balloons" Concept Exercise
Material Composition "Fear of Inflatable Balloons" Concept Exercise

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Read the following materials and write an argumentative essay of not less than 800 words as required.

Several balloons, but the last one didn't sell.

"Why are employers interested in them, not me?" The rest of the balloons asked suspiciously.

"When I inflated you, who told you not to charge more? Among several balloons, you are the smallest. How can your employer take a fancy to you? " The master said.

"How dangerous inflation is. If it is not good, the ball will break and die. " The balloon said timidly.

"It's safer not to inflate, but as a balloon, how can you win the favor of customers if you don't dare to take any risks?"

Requirements: select the right angle, determine the concept and draw up a good topic; Don't deviate from the meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.

Writing instruction

Examine the questions. Analysis phenomenon: the last balloon became a remnant ball for fear of inflation, which is a worthless waste ball. Why are you afraid of inflation? Because you are afraid of danger. Explore the essence: the metaphor of being afraid of inflation refers to people who are afraid of risks. This kind of person is timid and hesitant, suffering from loss, avoiding risks and losing the opportunity to realize the value of life. "Expansion" means "opening up new fields of life", "enhancing new values of life" or "gaining new opportunities in life", but it cannot be ignored that "expansion" also means "adventure", so "expansion" has a double meaning.

Ideas. Positive intention: "Dare to face risks, pursue life value or seek life opportunities" is the best intention, and "adventure" is of course related, but it is not the fearless risk of reckless people, nor the self-interest risk of vicious people. What is advocated here is the courage to show the "pursuit of value", even the courage to sacrifice one's life for righteousness and death. Negative intention: criticize the cowardly "self-protector", dare not act for personal ideals and social morality, and be afraid of accidents.

Overall conception: Life Storm and Life Risk Many students concretize "adventure" into "life storm" and "difficulties and setbacks" and write "face the storm" and "be brave in fighting". At first glance, it seems reasonable. After careful analysis, does "inflation" only mean the "hardship" of balloons? No, "inflation" also contains the connotations of "value" and "opportunity". At the same time, balloons are not afraid of "difficulties", "hardships" and "the possibility of extinction". They are afraid of risks and unexpected disasters. "Difficulties and hardships" may bring "disaster" and become a kind of danger, but certainly not all "difficulties and hardships" are equal to "danger", so it is obviously inappropriate for some students to write that Sima Qian and Shi Tiesheng face the storms of life in this way.

Discuss the guidance of thinking. At the beginning, we should show our views on the basis of concise quotation materials-dare to take risks; The main part should focus on "why", that is, the significance of taking risks to society and life, or discuss "the reasons and harm of not taking risks", such as the cowardice of human nature and the closure of national character; We can also explain "what is it" by combining the image of social reality, that is, the connotation of taking risks-various social practical significance, instead of talking about risks in an empty way out of life. The article "how to do it" should not be the focus, and a small part can be written, such as "moderate adventure"

An excellent example

Dance on the tip of a knife

Zhang Jian, a sophomore in Jiangsu Gaoyou Middle School.

If the five people in Suzhou city didn't have "righteous indignation" that day, they were still pawns of "old household"; If Hou Ying and Zhu Hai don't fight with Wei Gongzi, they will still drive to sell pulp and kill dogs and pigs. ...

Yes, as a mediocre balloon, it is indeed safer not to inflate, but it can only become an unnoticed waste ball, and life will shrink and wither before it blooms. No one is born mediocre, and mediocrity often lacks the courage to take risks!

It is said that an eagle growing on the edge of a cliff will undergo a long metamorphosis of 150 days at the age of 40: first it hits the rock with its beak until it falls off completely, and then it quietly waits for the growth of a new beak. The eagle pulled the aging toenails out of its claws with its newly grown beak. When the new toenails grow, the eagle pulls out the feathers one by one with the new toenails. Five months later, new feathers came out, and the eagle began to fly again. It was another 30 years! Risking his life, enduring the pain of "mid-year" and finally "reinventing himself".

Adventure, although sometimes unsatisfactory, eventually exercised courage and strengthened the body-timid escapers or self-indulgent indulgers, and finally only regretted it. In the Arabian Nights, the porter envied the wealth of Sinbad, the navigator, but he didn't know that it was obtained in the danger of a narrow escape. Jack London said, I'd rather be ashes after burning than dust on the ground! I would rather let a little spark burn out than let it rot. I'd rather be a flashing meteor, so that every fragment can shine than a death star. Man's duty is to live, not to survive. Santiago, a tough guy in The Old Man and the Sea, said that a man can be destroyed, but he can't be defeated. Adventure breeds tenacious will; Adventure, making life wonderful, really brave, and the wind and waves can't scare him.

Taking risks for yourself often brings opportunities for success; Taking risks for social morality is necessary to inherit the national spirit.

If we all refuse to take the risk of looking at visitors in Lu Xun's works, how can we have the spirit of going forward bravely, and how can we find back the precious Xibaipo spirit, Daqing spirit and flood fighting spirit left by our predecessors? Fortunately, there are many such warriors around us. Ge Xiongjian of Fudan University, in the face of power, dares to question, dares to pursue and fight hard, and even risks being threatened by a "reward" and never gives up; For more than 30 years, Zhang Zhengxiang, the guardian of Dianchi Lake, insisted on protecting Dianchi Lake. He sued many polluting enterprises and drove away more than 60 large quarries and many real estate developers who planned to develop near Dianchi Lake. In order to protect Dianchi Lake, he set up countless "enemies" for himself. ...

It's like seeing a dancer walking, jumping and even running lightly on the tip of a knife. Even if the pace is cautious, the heart is bold. The tip of the knife is a dangerous ravine. A really brave man won't stop him from dancing.

If you are a balloon, you should inflate it, even if it bursts. Because only by inflating, the balloon can realize its own value and not waste this life.

short review

Based on what I have learned in the text and the analysis of materials, this paper skillfully puts forward the argument that "what mediocre people often lack is the courage to take risks". This theory is divided into two levels: ① Taking risks for one's own future will often bring opportunities for success; It is necessary to take risks for social morality and inherit the national spirit. Conclusion The essence of sublimation, the most amazing beauty, should be a hero and a dance on the tip of a knife. This paper adopts a variety of visual demonstration methods, with clear structure, informative arguments, rich emotions and concise and vivid language.

Summer hydrology

Dare to take risks, I am not a hero.

An article pointed out that education in China should not make boys sissy! Japan, Germany, Britain, the United States and other countries have incorporated the boy's "adventure" spirit into their educational goals, aiming at cultivating citizens who are brave in taking responsibility, pioneering and innovating. In China, only children are required to study, and "adventure" is not conducive to management, which is suspected of being "barbaric" and completely contradicts the calm, restrained and gentle national character. How to advocate?

I'm afraid that in the long run, the national character will be more restrained, helping the elderly is risky, exposing injustice is risky, and being brave is even more risky. Not only boys will become sissies, but the whole society will become sissies. In fact, managers don't have to talk about "risk" discoloration. How do the flowers in the greenhouse know the risk of scattered rain and thunder? How do the birds in the chrysanthemum bushes know that the eagle is fighting the cliff? Adventure will make life ups and downs, colorful, adventure will make life calm and brave. Dare to take risks is a high-spirited state of life, a brave and tenacious spirit, heading for an unknown ideal, and we should turn our backs!

Adventure made a heroic legend. It is a sharp weapon in the hands of heroes and becomes an immortal monument. Taking risks may not be successful, but chances of not taking risks are rare. Throughout the ages, which hero is not a dancer at the tip of a knife, an elf in distress. As navigators, you gave your dreams to the turbulent sea. You only know that Columbus discovered the new continent, and you know that Magellan was killed in the Philippines. The long yellow sand road, the barren and treacherous desert, Zhang Qian ringing the camel bell of the Millennium Silk Road, and generations of scientific explorers turned into mummies in Lop Nur; One hundred and eight heroes in the water margin, with their heads in their hands, rose up and drove them to Liangshan; In the Three Kingdoms, the brave Rowen's five tiger generals will be desperate in the sword and shadow, and the brave is better than the danger. ...

The reason why a hero is a hero is because he has extraordinary courage, superhuman courage and strong physique, and mortals can only look up and marvel. Just as Xiang Yu is to the giant deer, cross the rubicon; Or, like Han Xin to Jingxing, die and be born later. Without the determination to risk his life, how dare a vassal look up?

Heroic dream, mortal eternal heartache! I am too timid, I am afraid of risks, I am incompetent, and I can only be content with the status quo! Put aside these excuses of complaining about women and men, stick to your dreams and draw on the strength of heroes, and you will be able to take risks and be your own hero! Colonel Sam, Uncle of KFC, was 66 years old after World War II. He is penniless. He took a pressure cooker and a bucket of ingredients and risked being rejected. He was lobbied by a restaurant and was rejected 1009 times. Only when 10 10 did the restaurant agree to cooperate with him and buy his recipe. The Wright brothers risked being smashed to pieces and clung to their dream of flying in the blue sky. ...

Even if you are ordinary, if you love what you do, you can be bold in innovation and exploration, and be a leader in the industry-this is also an adventure; If you don't love your career, please change careers as soon as possible. Even if the future is uncertain, you should listen to your inner voice and change your life-this is an adventure! Bill Gates dared to give up his studies and choose to start a business. Ma Yun gave up teaching and chose the Internet. Many foreigners, I can't name them, give up their superior life and choose to do good deeds in the backward areas of China ... The change of life is doomed to take risks, and the adventure of life is doomed to listen to the inner voice.

Believe in your choice, love yourself and take risks all your life. What more can you ask for? Don't be an indifferent bystander, don't be a sissy, and take risks for social morality. What more can a husband ask for?

Dare to take risks, I am also a hero!

self-assessment

The article leads to the argument from "women's national character" combined with material analysis: daring to take risks is actually a high-spirited state of life, a brave and tenacious spirit, and an unknowable ideal without hesitation! This theory is divided into two levels-① Adventure makes a heroic legend; As long as ordinary people stick to their dreams, they will be able to take risks and be their own heroes! Finally, anyone who dares to love himself and take risks for social morality can also become a hero. The article is clear in structure, informative in arguments, full of emotion and expressive.

The lesson of four-eyed fish

Buckle Hua Lian

There is a four-eyed fish in the Amazon River. This fish has big eyes, separated by a film, which looks like four eyes.

All four eyes can see. The upper part of the eye is good at seeing things in the air, and the lower part is suitable for seeing things in the water. With this special pearl skill, it is reasonable to say that the four-eyed fish should live more freely than other fish, but the result is that the number of four-eyed fish is decreasing bit by bit and is on the verge of extinction.

The reason why the four-eyed fish is reduced is precisely related to its eyes.

Because it has four eyes, the four-eyed fish catches food with the lower pair of eyes, while the upper pair only looks at the sky and scenery, ignoring the surrounding dangers. Those fierce fish will come in and swallow it.

In life, we will also encounter this phenomenon. Obviously, we have an advantage, but in the end it becomes a disadvantage, and the result is often counterproductive. Only by making rational use of advantages and clarifying shortcomings can we survive and develop better.