Last Spring Festival, I returned to my hometown of Guizhou. In Guizhou, I "developed" a fireworks salute, and I felt extremely happy and happy in the flames of the earthquake. When I arrived in Guizhou, I began to get busy and went shopping to buy electrical appliances: lighters and fuses. Hmm! And the "explosive fireworks" in the fireworks! Other grandmothers have them. When I got home, I found grandma's sewing box and picked up the coke bottle I had just finished drinking. Ah! All the materials are ready, but we just need to get to work. You see, I am the little guy who studies hard at his desk. I will cut the coke bottle in half, put a hole in the bottom of the bottle with a needle, put a fuse on it, put it aside, and then put "explosive fireworks" on the other bottle and fix it. After completing this step, I just need to buckle the half with the hat upside down on the other half, and then connect the fuse with the "explosive fireworks" and you're done. Remember, be sure to leave a "small tail" on the bottle cap! I rubbed my hands nervously, jumping up and down with excitement, and my heart was beating fast because of nervousness. I wolfed down my dinner and begged my father, but my father couldn't stand my pestering and beating, so he had to say, "All right!
Today is the Spring Festival. Cut you some slack! ""oh! All right! "I picked up my new work and flew out of the house. As I ran, I said to myself, "Little firecrackers, give me a break!" " "Well, finally found a clearing! Just put it here! I put the fireworks on the ground and lit them carefully. After two loud noises, my fireworks crackled, emitting golden sparks like a long dragon. Sparks are jumping around me, and my heart is enjoying the joy of success.
At this time, I feel a feeling called happiness spreading in my body! I watched the fireworks, and my heart was full of happiness and relief. This time, I feel successful and happy, which is the happiest thing in my whole holiday. Teacher's comment: Very fulfilling! The narrative is complete, organized and clear. I wrote "happy" in the content, but I didn't explain enough about the future atmosphere and described my mood more specifically.