First, the value orientation determines the genre.
Teacher: Students, through the exploration and study of three short messages, we have mastered the basic knowledge and reading methods of short messages. Please review: how to read news through news?
Health: You should read the telegram header first and know the source.
Teacher: You read from the source.
Health: You can find out the structure of news, such as title, introduction, theme, background and conclusion.
Health: We can grasp the content by analyzing the six essentials of news.
Teacher: It seems that everyone has a solid grasp of news knowledge! So, among the six elements of news, which one do you think is the most important?
Health: I think "who" is the most important, because no one can't do anything.
Teacher: People are the basic elements of news.
Health: I think "when and where" is very important, because news happens at a specific time and place.
Teacher: Indeed, the objective conditions for the existence of news are when and where, which is essential!
Health: I think "what is the most important". News usually tells us something new and valuable.
Health: I think "why" is very important, because sometimes we want to know not only this matter, but also how it happened.
Teacher: You can trace back to the source and analyze it from the reader's point of view. Guess someone still wants to know the reason.
Health: I think "how" is very important. Some people still want to know the specific development, context and so on.
Health: Sometimes we only choose some events to pay attention to. For example, in the Tokyo Olympics, we may only pay attention to the participation of China Olympic athletes.
Teacher: That's good. You can talk about things around us.
Teacher: In order to meet the different requirements of readers for news reports, news has produced different value-oriented genres. Some news is just a general introduction to events, called news; Some news introduces the detailed process of events, which is called news dissemination; Some news only selects a certain part of the event and a certain moment, which is called a close-up story; Some people express their opinions on news, which is called news comment. Now, please read the third lesson quickly and see what the focus of this lesson is.
Student: The text focuses on the movements of Lu Wei's diving competition.
Student: The text only wrote Lv Wei's diving action.
Teacher: In other words, the article only pays attention to the moment when Lu Wei dives, and does not write anything else before and after Lu Wei dives. What do we call this type of news?
Health: Special Report.
Teacher: Please read the knowledge supplement on page 9 for free to learn more about the close-up story.
Read together:
Feature story refers to a kind of news genre, which uses similar close-up techniques and visual description as the main means of expression to intercept the most valuable, vivid and touching fragments and parts of news events and enlarge them, thus vividly reproducing typical characters, events and scenes, with news value and literariness. Close-up stories are divided into person close-up, event close-up, scene close-up, scenery close-up and work close-up.
Teacher: Lu Wei won the women's 10 meter platform diving championship in the 9th Asian Games and became a "stunning jump" to conquer the world. Guangming Daily reporter Fan captured this wonderful moment, concentrated on pen and ink, and wrote this article "Flying in the Sky".
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There are ways to close up stories.
Capture the moment and use local materials.
Put the pen on the paper and concentrate on it.
Teacher: Let's follow the author's perspective and appreciate how Lv Wei conquered the world.
Second, she conquered the world.
Teacher: How long did it take Lv Wei to conquer the world?
Health: 1.7 seconds.
Teacher: Please read paragraph 1-4 quickly and think: How did Lv Wei conquer the world and win the championship?
Health: I think she dives fast! Diseases are like meteors!
Health: I think she is very skilled! Very coherent!
Health: I think her movements are particularly beautiful!
Health: the splash is also very small, almost no, which shows that her diving skills are superb.
Teacher: The students' analysis made the teacher feel that Lu Wei was skilled in diving, as graceful and light as a meteor, no wonder he won the championship.
Teacher: 1.7 seconds is like a meteor, as fast as lightning and fleeting, but we see it clearly and clearly in the article. How did the author do it?
Health: The author divides Lu Wei's diving movements into three steps and writes them in detail.
Teacher: What are the three steps?
Health: Take off, fly and enter the water.
Teacher: Write a series of actions in several parts, or write an action in detail, just like slow motion in a movie, and vividly describe the specific image of Lv Wei's wonderful moments, which will leave a deeper impression on readers than watching TV. This is the most common way to write feature films.
Teacher: Since the action description is so effective, can we write it like this?
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She stood in front of the 10-meter-high platform, relaxed her arms, lifted her up, and with a gentle pedal, she flew into the air. Then, she rolled forward for a week and a half, accompanied by three whirlwinds in the air. Before the audience could react from the dazzling, she had spread herself out and jumped into the blue waves with a bang.
Health: These movements can only show the consistency of Lu Wei's diving movements, but I can't feel the beauty and see her superb diving skills.
Health: These movements can show Lu Wei's diving skills and speed, but there is no way to show the amazing jump to conquer the world.
Health: Although these sentences are written with actions, they are not vivid and have a weak sense of picture.
Teacher: It seems that in order to impress people, besides action description, the author also used other methods to enhance the sense of the picture. Let's have a look around. What method did you find?
Health: Description of demeanor, such as "calm and calm", describes the calm and elegance of Lv Wei before diving.
Teacher: The expression description can really make us imagine her composure when diving.
Health: The author also uses the dynamics of white clouds and birds to set off her silence.
Teacher: White clouds and birds can really give people a sense of picture.
Health: The audience holding their breath can also bring out Lv Wei's composure.
Teacher: "foil" Lu Wei's silence and the audience's expression
Health: The 8,000 spectators in Dhaka Dora Swimming Pool waited eagerly and held their breath. As a player from China, Lv Wei should be very nervous, but she is calm and shows good psychological quality.
Teacher: Indeed, these energetic descriptions of the environment set off Lv Wei's calm state, and also showed her excellent psychological quality and the good mental outlook of China athletes.
Health: The author also uses the rhetorical device of metaphor to compare Lv Wei, who is slender and beautiful when flying, to the "flying" in Dunhuang murals, which shows her graceful movements and gives people a kind of beautiful enjoyment.
Teacher: The analysis is very detailed. Your speech made me feel the elegance and lightness of Lv Wei's movements.
Health: "Moving like a meteor" is also a metaphor. This sentence compares diving to a meteor, which shows her skillful movements, fast speed and graceful posture.
Health: In the fourth paragraph, the author compares her unfolded body to a light and straight arrow, which vividly shows her unfolded state and graceful movements.
Teacher: These metaphors are vivid, vivid and meticulous, which bring us to the scene of Lu Wei's diving and show Lu Wei's indomitable spirit and superb diving skills.
Health: I think onomatopoeia also shows Lu Wei's superb diving skills. The word "explosion" vividly shows Lu Wei's rapid entry into the water, low voice and superb skills.
Teacher: Not only what you see in front of you, but also the voice in your ear. The author really brought us to the scene.
Health: The author is also good at using some expressive words to express Lv Wei's superb diving skills, such as: graceful, falling like a meteor, natural and unrestrained, calm, falling from the sky, quietly not surprised.
Teacher: This is really a unique discovery. Words themselves have strong vitality, which can accurately describe things, convey feelings and express the author's praise for Lv Wei.
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? Calm, elegant, look forward, hold your breath, like a meteor,
? Natural and unrestrained, leisurely, dancing in the air, falling from the sky, quietly not surprised,
? Wake up like a dream, deafening, stunned, dazzling, exquisite and wonderful.
Students read aloud.
Teacher: Please sum up, what methods did the author use to make the world feel Lu Wei's "amazing jump"?
Health: The author used action description and expression description to show Lv Wei her diving talent and talent.
Health: The author uses the technique of setting off to let the white clouds, birds and the audience set off her calmness and elegance.
Health: The author uses metaphor to write her slender and wonderful figure, which gives people beautiful enjoyment.
Health: The author used onomatopoeia to describe her speed of entering the water, low voice and superb diving skills.
Teacher: With the help of vivid description, character description, rhetoric, dynamic and static combination, foil and other techniques commonly used in close-up stories, the author vividly shows the wonderful moment of Lu Wei's diving and embodies the literariness of close-up stories.
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The close-up is very literary.
Action language and mode
Accurately convey feelings in words
Rhetorical means to help solve problems
The Combination of Static and Dynamic Virtual Reality
The five senses feel more real.
Third, the world was conquered by her.
Teacher: Lv Wei conquered the world with a "surprise". What world can be seen from the text that she conquered?
Health: Foreign journalists have been conquered by her.
Health: The Indian audience was conquered by her.
Health: The referee was also conquered by her.
Teacher: It is said that after this manuscript was sent to the editorial department, the director of the editorial department thought it was too wordy to praise Lv Wei with three people at the end of the article. He wants to delete two and keep only one of them. Which one do you think should be kept?
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"wonderful! Wonderful! " A foreign reporter standing next to us jumped up. At this time, the whole swimming pool was boiling. The sober audience expressed their sincere appreciation for their favorite athletes with deafening applause and cheers.
Her action "5 136" made several judges score 9.5 points.
When an Indian audience learned that this girl was the youngest rookie in China diving training team, they were amazed. He said: "Great, you have too many talents in China!"
Health: The referee should stay! The referee evaluated Lu Wei's diving from a professional point of view. He scored a high score of 9.5, which shows that Lu Wei's diving action is close to perfection, which better shows Lu Wei's superb diving skills.
Teacher: From the perspective of professional evaluation, praise is reasonable.
Health: I think we should leave the Indian audience behind, because his words praised both Lv Wei and China. This sentence deepens the theme and enhances the appeal of the article.
Teacher: From the theme analysis, it is well founded.
Teacher: Do you remember the "blind" referee at the Tokyo Olympics? Why are they selectively blind?
Health: As the hosts of the Tokyo Olympic Games, they want to win gold medals for their motherland too much.
Teacher: Does the author mean anything by saying "Indian audience" here?
Health: The words of this Indian audience reflect his inner justice and represent the eyes of the masses.
Health: The Indian Audience also shows Lu Wei's jump, conquering the Indian audience, conquering everyone present and conquering the world.
Teacher: Yes, the Indian audience took good care of the Asian Games held in New Delhi. His words proved that Lu Wei's diving skills were superb. Students, sports have no national boundaries, and art has no national boundaries. Teachers believe that when we host the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, we will all be enthusiastic spectators, without national boundaries and prejudice, so that the fair and just Olympic spirit can be promoted in China and even the whole world.
Health: I don't think foreign journalists can leave. Foreign journalists are from the perspective of the media and belong to different categories from the other two.
Health: I also think this reporter can't quit, because this reporter said that Lu Wei danced "brilliantly" and jumped with excitement. This "wonderful" and "jumping" made us feel that Lu Wei's diving really shocked the audience.
Teacher: Since it can't be removed, can this "wonderful" be changed to "great"?
Student: No, "wonderful" gives people a wonderful feeling, indicating that Lu Wei's diving skills are superb, both aesthetic and wonderful, indicating that reporters have a high evaluation of Lu Wei, but "great" has no such effect!
Health: You can't miss the reporter's paragraph. This paragraph not only talked about foreign journalists, but also talked about the boiling of the whole swimming pool. Their cheers and applause made us feel the warm atmosphere at that time, the shock brought by everyone, and the glory brought by China divers to the motherland. Even I am deeply proud.
Teacher: You have a good eye. The author writes a reporter first, and then the whole swimming pool. If the reporter is a point, the swimming pool is-
Health: Noodles.
Teacher: Yes, the author adopts the method of point-to-point and point-to-face combination here, which shows that Lu Wei's diving has brought amazement to the audience, enhanced the sense of scene, and made us feel as if we saw the man, heard his voice and were there.
Health: I don't think it can be deleted. The author praised Lu Wei with the help of media reporters, professional referees and Indian audiences, which made us feel that the whole world was praising Lu Wei. At the same time, the author vividly demonstrated Lu Wei's superb diving skills from point to surface by means of "the whole swimming pool is boiling".
Teacher: You are really the author's bosom friend! Let's think about it. How do China people feel when they stand beside these people?
Health: full of excitement and pride.
Health: I am proud of Lv Wei and my motherland.
Teacher: A seventh-grade student saw this close-up and thought that journalists, referees, Indian audience and Lu Wei had nothing to do with diving. He thinks it is improper selection of materials. Do you agree with him?
Health: I don't agree. These people showed Lv Wei's wonderful diving action from the side.
Health: I don't agree. The language, actions and manners of these people made us feel the excitement of people at that time.
Health: The words of these people also let us feel the spirit of China athletes working hard and winning glory for their country.
Teacher: Through profile description, the author vividly shows Lv Wei's superb diving skills, enhances the sense of the scene of the article, and expresses the author's praise and pride for China athletes' lofty spirit of hard work and winning glory for their country.
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Introduction and description are powerful.
Environmental atmosphere sets off psychology.
There are others who can help.
Language actions and expressions
Applause, laughter and cheers
Point-to-surface combined field strength
Be sincere and take a clear-cut stand.
Teacher: Students, if Lv Wei conquered the world by diving, then the author of this article conquered the world by visual description, and this close-up won the first prize of national good news that year. Please sum up, what should we pay most attention to in special reports?
Health: A close-up captures a moment or a part that best highlights the characteristics of events and people.
Health: Close-ups should be vividly described, so that the language is vivid and gives people an immersive feeling.
Health: Close-up can adopt the method of combining front description with side description.
Health: Close-ups should be emotional and purposeful.
Teacher: If we want to show the close-up method concisely, these are three points.
Concentrate.
Image description
True love and true care
Fourth, they conquered the world.
Teacher: Actually, there are many people who conquered the world like Lv Wei, such as Quan Hongchan, Yang Qian and Sun Yingsha of Tokyo Olympic Games ... such as the guitar in Wrestling Dad. Please watch the video of the guitar winning the championship, and write the 22 seconds of the guitar winning the championship with a close-up method, no less than 200 words.
Student works:
There is only one second left, and she wants to win.
He Weidong
There are only 22 seconds left before the end of the game, and the score gap is still 4 points. India's guitar looks at her opponent, and the score is very different. It's hard to win the game, but for guitar, she has worked hard for so long, how can she be willing to give up? Even if there is only one second left, she will win!
She was full of energy and kept attacking, but her opponent never gave her a chance. She kept avoiding Gita's attacks and wanted to buy time. 13 sec ... 12 sec ...1sec ... the time is only1sec. Guitar remembered her father's teaching and attacked again. She feinted to the opponent's left first, responded when the opponent dodged, and then went around behind the opponent. The referee blew his whistle and raised his five-point gesture, and the audience immediately cheered and boiled, as if all the people in India were boiling for it.
In 22 seconds, she conquered the world.
Die goldene Stadt
? There are only 22 seconds left in the wrestling match. Can Gita recover its 4 points behind in these 22 seconds? At this point, the audience in the venue held their breath for fear of missing every detail.
At the beginning of the game, Gita bent down to look for opportunities, just like a cheetah looking for the weakness of its prey.
? The guitar is moving. Is she going to fall from her opponent's lower body? Isn't she afraid of being discovered by her opponent? The opponent is obviously prepared. Is this game over? Don't! This is a fake action. She quickly dodged the opponent's defense, went around behind her, and tried her best to make an over-the-shoulder fall. Before the opponent could react, the guitar had thrown his opponent to the ground and won the game.
Applause, screams, cheers ... the audience is boiling!
go to all lengths
Zhang Ao
The game started, and both the guitar and her opponent were very cautious. Facing the gap of 4 points, the guitar had to take the initiative to attack. In an instant, the guitar tried to reach out and hug the opponent's waist, but it was resisted by the opponent. After that, the guitar took the initiative to attack, but was blocked by the opponent.
Suddenly, the guitar pounced on her opponent, who was preparing to fight back. Who knows that the guitar suddenly turned around and went behind her opponent. God, the guitar deliberately exposed the flaw to the opponent and successfully completed the fake action, but there was only 1 1 second left. Can she successfully fight back? The hearts of the audience were lifted by their voices! I saw Gita clinging to each other's lower back and trying her best. This is a difficult rate of decline. At the last second, she landed on her head first. What a beautiful blow! Time is up! Gita won! When the referee raised the right hand of the guitar, the cheers of the audience resounded through the sky and the applause was deafening. The world is cheering for the guitar! This is India's first women's wrestling gold medal!
? Conclusion: Students, one minute on stage is ten years off stage. Lv Wei, Guitar and Quanhongchan ... They are "great" in the world because they have devoted themselves to one thing and made several times more efforts than ordinary people. Sports, scientific research, everything. The teacher wants everyone to focus on what they like and invest time and energy. I believe that one day, you will become a conqueror of the world! Class is over!