Zhou Yuhan, Class 4 (3), Longkouxi Primary School, Tianhe District, Guangzhou

Instructor: Jiang Mei

This summer vacation, my parents took me to Wuxi, where I took a carriage.

A horse pulling a carriage. Stand straight in front of us. I stroked its back and found that the hair on its back was drooping and shining. This pony, which is less than 3 years old, bears the heavy body of the carriage and the rope like a tie, and the whip of the rider left a deep mark on its neck.

Countless grievances and flogging, and this horse pulling a carriage is still standing. Grievances and beatings may have been deeply buried in their hearts.

We got into the carriage and pulled it. The horse moved slowly. Pull hard, and I don't know how much crystal sweat has shed from my brown body. The rider is an old man, and the vague local accent is somewhat incomprehensible.

"Grandpa, where does the horse sleep?"

"Sleep in the stable."

"Aren't you afraid of them running away?"

"I am tied with hemp rope and can't walk."

Ah, I was taken aback: Should ponies aspire to run on the grassland?

The road was bumpy and the carriage shook. The pony subconsciously quickened its pace and led us away.

Its black eyes giggled and its tail flicked. It walked all day, but it didn't look tired at all.

Mom and dad smiled and pointed. I looked out of the car and saw six or seven horses walking slowly.

The conversation continues.

"Grandpa, how are they?"

"Good, good, they are very obedient."

"What if they are naughty?"

"Whip it with a whip."

"Oh, don't they hurt?"

"It hurts, but what can I do?"

I touched the pony's tail with my hand, and that one was wet.

I suddenly reflected, didn't hear clearly, and asked myself: Why did I come to take a carriage? Isn't riding a horse a burden to this pony who is less than three years old?

It finally looked up with joy in its eyes: our destination has arrived. Perhaps, it is thinking about how to send the next batch of guests to their destination safely.

The pony's steps gradually eased and finally stopped. I got out of the car slowly and looked at the new marks on the neck of the horse pulling the carriage, which made me feel very uncomfortable.

The wind is blowing, and some golden leaves are sprinkled on the wheels of the carriage. "Knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock knock But it seems that it is different from just now, with a little guest attachment.

Oh, horses are always loyal.

Comment on this article's vivid language, poetic words and poetic sentences. After reading Zhou Yuhan's homework, we sincerely fell in love with her horse, and suddenly realized that animals can be written in the same way! Yes, in all the essays about animals in our class, this is the most creative work: breaking through convention and not sticking to one pattern; The style of writing is old, scattered in form but not scattered in spirit; Strong feelings, wrote the spiritual quality of loving animals. If you are not familiar with this narrative prose style, it doesn't matter. First of all, consider how to point out the characteristics of animals in the description of their shapes and living habits. Just like practicing martial arts, after you are familiar with the basic routines, you may wish to consider how to break the routine, seek differences and innovations, and be unique.