The same is true of "from generalization to concreteness", but the order of explanation is logical! Generally describe an article or an event.
Whole, local. The whole refers to everything, and the part refers to a part of things.
Generalization means conciseness and generalizing the characteristics of things. Specifically, you can understand it as: detailed meaning.
From generalization to concreteness: China Stone Arch Bridge-China Stone Arch Bridge-Zhao Zhouqiao and Lugou Bridge.
From the whole to the part: the structure of Suzhou gardens
2. A 450-word gift that describes the composition from the whole to the part
"ah! Telescope! " I couldn't help crying when I opened the package and looked at the gift my grandfather gave me.
Telescope-a children's toy, what is the use for me, a primary school student who is about to graduate? Why did grandpa give me something like this? I'm really confused. Suddenly, I remembered something in my summer vacation.
During the summer vacation, I went back to my hometown in Gansu to see my grandfather. I happened to meet young people in the village. They are organizing cultural studies and preparing to hold evening classes. Because of the shortage of teachers, the secretary of the brigade invited my grandfather. I didn't expect my grandfather to say that he is 70 years old and will not enjoy retirement in a few years. I was very unhappy after listening to his words.
After returning to Jingyuan, I thought for a long time and finally came up with a good idea. The next day, I bought a doll's trumpet for grandpa. This idea is really ingenious! Soon, I received a letter from my grandfather, saying that he understood my heart and sent a trumpet, so that he could always hear the horn of marching and never stop in the journey of the four modernizations. The letter also said that he went to night school to teach yesterday. ...
This matter has just passed. Because I am about to graduate from junior high school this year, I am nervous about my study, so I didn't write to my grandfather again. Until recently, I felt that my brain was too stupid and I had a hard time studying. In addition, my mother said that their company can arrange employment for employees' children, and those who don't plan to continue their studies can do sales. I think it should be interesting to be a salesman, with a few hundred dollars a month. My idea was opposed by my father. Therefore, I wrote to ask my grandfather. Today, he gave me a "tooth for tooth" and a telescope.
Looking at the telescope in my hand, I suddenly felt a fever in my cheeks and couldn't help holding it tightly in my arms. I fully understand grandpa's meaning: the construction of the four modernizations needs knowledge, and we can't just look under our noses!
It's best not to copy everything, you can change some sentences!
3. Composition from the whole to the part 120 In the early morning, the sun was shining. The grass sticks its head out from under the dead leaves and rustles in the breeze; Birds came down from the sky briskly, leaving behind a silvery song, as if playing the prelude of spring together to welcome the arrival of Spring Girl. Bathed in the warm spring breeze, my mother and I can't wait to rush to Yuyuantan to explore the traces of spring.
As soon as we entered the park gate, we felt a strong breath of spring. In the past, a gray-yellow land has disappeared without a trace, and the hills next to it quietly took off their winter clothes and put on light green clothes. The trees are covered with tender buds, and some have just opened, revealing bright yellow leaves; Some are like shy little girls, poking around the branches. Winter jasmine swayed with the wind under the sunlight, just like a group of dancing yellow elves.
I was walking when I heard the sound of running water. In a blink of an eye, there is a stream flowing happily beside it, splashing a string of water on the rock. All the ice on the lake has melted, leaving a thin waterline on the water in the breeze. The willow hangs its green branches to the water, as if cleaning her long braids. Several wild ducks are swimming around on the water, playing. What a "duck prophet on the riverside"!
4. A 400-word composition describing an object-a cat, from part to whole.
Cats are small animals that people like. They are docile, lively and lovely. They can catch mice and win the favor of their owners.
The newborn kitten, with closed eyes, thin voice and naked body, looks like a crawling meatball.
After the full moon, all the villi grow together. Some collars are white, the limbs are covered with white hair, the back is black and gray, and the tail is gray and black; Some people wear a dark coat from beginning to end, but the soles of their feet are white. People say it is an excellent variety, called "black clouds cover snow"; Some are yellow and tiger-patterned, and people have given it a good name "gold does not change"; There is also a kind of white hair and black hair tail, which is called "dragging a gun in the snow" A full-moon cat can't walk without milk.
Cats eat omnivores and like fish and lean meat best. If you throw it a fruit or vegetable, it will just smell it and walk away.
Cats have thick and soft pads on the soles of their feet, so they walk quietly and silently, and will not scare away mice. There are sharp claws at the end of the toes, which can be extended and retracted at will. This makes it not only run like a fly on the flat ground, but also build houses, climb trees and climb over walls. Rats are forced to lose their souls and rarely escape bad luck.
Cats have teeth as sharp as cones, a rough tongue and many barbs. Once the mouse is caught, the cat's claws scratch and the cat's teeth bite. In an instant, the evil mouse was heartbroken and bloody.
These structural features of the cat give it various advantages in catching mice. As the saying goes, no matter whether it's a white cat or a black cat, catching a mouse is a good cat. Cats that can catch mice don't shout. When it found the trace of the mouse, it immediately fell down and waited patiently for the opportunity to attack. When the mouse approached, it jumped on it with lightning speed and bit the mouse at once.
Cats also have a detector-a beard. Don't underestimate the beautiful beard of a cat. It is very sensitive and generally equals to the maximum length of its bust. So whether the cat can go deep into the cave can be known by measuring the hole with its beard.
Cats have another trick: their bones are soft and they can turn over in mid-air. Therefore, even if it stumbles in a tall building, it will not die. It always lands on all fours first, shakes its head, shrugs its shoulders, licks its palms, stretches and walks around.
Cats are natural enemies of mice, so they have a high ability to catch mice. First of all, because of a pair of special eyes, the pupil can contract or enlarge with the intensity of light. The pupil shrinks into a thin seam under strong light; In the dark, eyes are wide and round, even in the dark, you can see things clearly, and even cunning mice can't escape.
Its ears are very flexible and can turn to the place where the sound comes at will, and even the slightest sound can be recognized in time.
The most pleasing thing is the "child cat" after weaning. They are extremely uneasy and curious. Look, a fluffy ball is rolling towards the kitten. It probably thinks it is a "monster". It suddenly jumped up and hid far away, and the fluffy ball stopped.
The kitten squatted down and stared at it. For a long time, when she saw the thread was silent, she quietly stepped forward and let out a cry of "Meow meow-". The coil is still motionless. At this time, the kitten couldn't bear it any longer, got up the courage to get close to the thread ball, turned several times, and then reached out and touched it carefully. When it understood that there was no danger in the thread ball, it played unscrupulously, sniffing with its nose for a while, and running around the yard with a "victory product" in its mouth. Just as a hen giggles when she lays an egg, a cat will make a whoop when it catches a mouse, indicating happiness and victory. Cats should be protected and loved by people.
5. Write a composition about your spirit from the whole to the part. In front of my friend's house is the lawn-the school lawn.
My friend is already a teacher, and this school used to be our alma mater. I often walk in this campus in the moonlight.
In the moonlight, the campus is quiet and cordial. Maybe rows of pine trees; Maybe it's a cement road; Maybe there is no light in the teaching room! With my happiness, my growth.
Today's life is so hasty, but the bits and pieces of life will still inadvertently think of those lost times. What a kind name the teacher is. Every time I read it, I always feel a little touched and miss it. Not all the teachers left a good impression on me.
I still remember how eager I was to go to school when I was in primary school, because I was happy and carefree most of the time in primary school, and I was very popular with teachers, who often entrusted me with "heavy responsibilities" This situation did not change until the fifth grade of primary school. When I was in fifth grade, my class teacher's surname was Ding, who was very tall and thin.
6. Composition from the whole to the part 120 In the early morning, the sun was shining. The grass sticks its head out from under the dead leaves and rustles in the breeze; Birds came down from the sky briskly, leaving behind a silvery song, as if playing the prelude of spring together to welcome the arrival of Spring Girl. Bathed in the warm spring breeze, my mother and I can't wait to rush to Yuyuantan to explore the traces of spring.
As soon as we entered the park gate, we felt a strong breath of spring. In the past, a gray-yellow land has disappeared without a trace, and the hills next to it quietly took off their winter clothes and put on light green clothes. The trees are covered with tender buds, and some have just opened, revealing bright yellow leaves; Some are like shy little girls, poking around the branches. Winter jasmine swayed with the wind under the sunlight, just like a group of dancing yellow elves.
I was walking when I heard the sound of running water. In a blink of an eye, there is a stream flowing happily beside it, splashing a string of water on the rock. All the ice on the lake has melted, leaving a thin waterline on the water in the breeze. The willow hangs its green branches to the water, as if cleaning her long braids. Several wild ducks are swimming around on the water, playing. What a "duck prophet on the riverside"!
7. Try to write a short essay from the whole to the part, from a campus to the small garden where I love campus, but I love the lush palm trees in the small garden more.
We walked into the small garden with birds and flowers at a brisk pace, and the fragrance of osmanthus rose to the nose. The branches of osmanthus trees are covered with osmanthus in Huang Cancan, like bright stars all over the sky; The fence is covered with scattered pine trees, which seems to welcome us! In the lush and dense bamboo forest, birds sing from time to time; In the Woods, slugs are crying happily. There are several wonderful "cranes" standing in the crystal clear river, one seems to be playing in the water and the other seems to be singing.
What kept me from looking away for a long time was palm trees. It has a blue sky above its head and feet on the earth, like a tall and majestic giant, which is even more majestic under the sunshine. I looked up silently, its branches and leaves seemed to stretch out into the blue sky, and its body was like a huge Optimus Prime. In my eyes, it has become the embodiment of strength and a rock-solid model. I am as small as a poor ant in front of it.
Palm trees are not as gorgeous as flowers, but they are tall and magnificent; Not as fruitful as a fruit tree, but it is strong and brave. Whether it is cold winter or hot summer, its trunk is always so tall and straight, and its leaves are always so lush. It adds vitality to the campus; It constantly gives us courage and strength to move forward.
I like palm trees, and I praise palm trees. I will try to be a palm tree in my life from now on, and I will try to be a palm tree in my career when I grow up.
8. A 450-word gift to describe the composition from the whole to the part "Ah! Telescope! " When I opened the package and looked at the gift my grandfather gave me, I couldn't help crying. What is the use of binoculars, a children's toy, for me, a primary school student who is about to graduate? Why did grandpa give me something like this? I'm really confused. Suddenly, I remembered an incident in my summer vacation. During the summer vacation, I went back to my hometown in Gansu to see my grandfather. I happened to meet young people in the village to learn culture and run night schools. Because of the shortage of teachers, the secretary of the brigade invited my grandfather. I didn't expect my grandfather to say that he is seventy years old and can't enjoy leisure for a few years. I was very unhappy after listening to his words. Soon, I received a letter from my grandfather, saying that he understood my heart and sent a trumpet so that he could always hear the horn of marching. He will never stop on the journey of the four modernizations. The letter also said that he went to night school to teach yesterday ... this matter has passed. Because I am about to graduate from junior high school this year, I am nervous about my study, so I didn't write to my grandfather again. Until recently, I felt that my brain was too stupid and I had a hard time studying. In addition, my mother said that their company can arrange employment for employees' children, and those who are not going to continue their studies can do sales. I think it should be interesting to be a salesman, with a few hundred dollars a month. My idea was opposed by my father. Therefore, I wrote to ask my grandfather. Today, he gave me a "tooth for tooth" and a telescope. Looking at the telescope in my hand, I feel my cheeks burning and I can't help it. It's best not to copy all of them. You can change some sentences.