Composition questions:

Life is beautiful. Observe life carefully and experience life seriously. Good things are everywhere. Touching, inspiring and unforgettable.

Please write an article of about 600 words on the topic of "Wonderful".

Requirements: Please finish the topic (such as "wonderful scene", "wonderful moment" and "wonderful life") first, and then write a composition.

Wonderful Chinese

Wuxi examinee

I have been thinking about you, the wonderful language in my heart;

I have been pursuing you, the wonderful language in my heart.

You gave me a cool breeze and a bright moon, you gave me mountains and waters, you gave me blue seas and clear skies, and you opened the boundary between me and nature.

With you, Tao Yuanming's chrysanthemums are dotted with hazy Nanshan, Gong Zizhen's patches are turned into soft spring mud, Yan Ai wanders alone to find a winding path leading to a secluded place, and the pulse and oblique light of the text cover the long clear water.

With you, a poetic life has been cultivated into the most beautiful countryside. Travelers who put the white deer between the cliffs drink wine into their chests, and seven points turn into moonlight, and the remaining three points, once embroidered, are half of the prosperous Tang Dynasty; Western jackdaw in the Western Heaven, after picking up all the cold branches, could not live. On the night of "Hanging Xiao Tong on the Thin Moon", he sighed at the river of no return, holding a green awn staff. He is not moved by "petty profit, false reputation", but only wants to help for the rest of his life; At sunset on the roof, the prodigal son broke the sound of the rainbow. On the one hand, there is the west wind of the old rattan road, and on the other hand, there is a "BMW carving a fragrant road", but he just wants to be an Iraqi in a "dimly lit place".

Once for a failure, sit still and think, toss and turn; Once for a gain and loss, I was worried and frowned a thousand times; I once tried my best to grieve for an encounter. As a result, reading Liu Yong, tasting Lin Qingxuan, a few meaningful and elegant essays, full of words, and the fragrance of Zen make me persistent with a peaceful mind and examine my short life.

You told me to take the mentality of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and drinking Nanshan" to "sit and watch Yun Qi, where the water is poor", to appreciate "the flowers and trees in the meditation room are winding and secluded", to taste "the sunset is in the lotus, leaving the green hills in the distance" and to recall "the yellow plum season, the chess pieces are snuff".

You turned me into a butterfly in Zhuang Zhou's dream and danced lightly and calmly; You turned me into a wild crane in the shepherd boy piccolo, unconstrained style, unconstrained style. You made my life simple, my thoughts filtered impurities, and my mind returned to peace. I retired to the white country where pigeons sang on the house in spring and apricot blossoms were on the edge of the village, but I felt as pale as flowers and forgot all this.

Wonderful you, like a phoenix tree after a drizzle, washed away the glitz and revealed the green. In the leisurely afternoon, in the sunset dusk, I read you with my eyes, read you with my heart, and read endless wonderful Chinese!

Comments:

After reading this article, I was deeply shocked: the original language has such great charm and the language is so wonderful.

Through this wonderful article, we feel the wonderful language. I think the highlight of this article lies in the choice of theme and the expression of language.

First, rich reading accumulation and wonderful theme selection

From the article, we can see that the young author must have read many books, which have been read at all times and at all times. Therefore, it can show readers a wonderful picture and make people immersive. We can follow the author to see Tao Yuanming's chrysanthemum, see Gong Zizhen's falling red, follow Yan Shu in winding places and enjoy the clear water under the oblique pulse.

Because of its familiarity, we can easily choose and control these topics, so that readers will not feel that they are piling up when reading. After reading this article, people feel that they have returned to that place at that time and traveled through time and space without feeling abrupt.

Second, solid language literacy and sophisticated language expression.

In just over a thousand words, the young writer has worked for five thousand years, and he can't do it without a solid Chinese foundation. At the same time, the success of this article lies in the subtle language expression. Throughout this article, the use of various rhetorical devices is ingenious, the metaphor is exquisite, the personification is cordial, and the best thing is the use of parallelism.

"Tao Yuanming's blossoming chrysanthemums are dotted with the hazy Nanshan, Gong Zizhen's patches are turned into soft spring mud, Yan Shu's loneliness is winding, and Wen's pulse is oblique, covered with long clear water." "For a loser, sit and think, toss and turn; Once for a gain and loss, I was worried and frowned a thousand times; I worked hard for an encounter, and I am sad. " These two sentences alone are the use of parallelism, which is both magnificent and full of charm.

It can be seen from the above two points that it is inevitable that this article can get high marks. (Yue Xiangming)

Excellent composition of Wuxi senior high school entrance examination in 2005: wonderful music

Gently, open a window; Quietly, have a sip of tea. Turn the button and I will enjoy the wonderful music with the breeze and tea fragrance outside the window!

Listening to the towering mountains and flowing water, the rhythm of the seven-stringed guqin makes Boya and Hippo chefs become bosom friends of life, looking for melancholy strings, setting aside wonderful songs and telling stories of old love.

Butterfly lovers's touching life also painted charm and brilliance on this music. Listening, people can't help but trace back to that beautiful love, yearn for that graceful butterfly dance, and linger on the balcony where they have devoted too much thoughts ... In addition, butterfly lovers has become a voice that is unyielding to feudal ethics.

A Bing's life is no longer lonely because of Er Quan, and Er Quan's heritage is no longer ordinary because of A Bing's insistence. Under the sky, on the edge of Taihu Lake, a blind man is playing the piano, worrying alone, accusing the darkness of society with the beautiful sound of the piano and angrily denouncing people's indifference. "Er Quan" made A Bing feel sad and showed perseverance and strength!

Standing in the national music hall, my heavy heart seems to release the elegance of Chun Xue and the magnificence of the Yellow Road ... Music has changed from one song to another, and the exciting moment continues-

Feel Chopin's patriotic tenderness with his unique heart; Feel Beethoven's magical hands, compose pastoral songs, and hit the door of fate; Feel Tchaikovsky driving a Russian carriage and stopping at a quiet lake to watch swans dance; Feel Schubert on the wandering road, leaving a lonely figure under the bodhi tree. ...

Bach's fugue is romantic and elegant, reflecting the distant Baroque era and the generation of ancient civilization. Berlioz's Fantasia is free and unrestrained, introducing fashion into classicism, unruly into order and individuality into tradition. Schumann's serenade is quiet and carefree, soothing your restless soul, kissing your sad cheek, making your soul integrate with nature and enjoying a complete life in an undisturbed night!

Listen, Pavarotti's loudness, Sarah Brightman's softness-Oh, that's nature!

Wandering in the holy land of foreign music, I feel a kind of culture and spirit and show my love for music!

Wonderful music makes the soul clear and life enlightened!

The breeze outside the window is still swimming, and the fragrance in the tea is still overflowing ... Friends, feel this wonderful music, let it color your gloomy mind and add color to your ordinary life!

Comments: Whether something is wonderful depends on whether you feel it with your heart, especially music. After reading the whole article, the author's talent aura jumps from the paper, and this talent aura is the result of the author's intention: the author's talent is not only manifested in the rich and varied vocabulary in the article, but also in the clear structure, harmony and unity. The author's aura is inseparable from his familiarity and obsession with music in daily life. This paper embodies the author's rich musical accomplishment and shows the same lofty banner as music. People who can experience wonderful things from music believe that their life will be more wonderful! (Cheng Ming)

Wonderful country night.

In the countryside, the most beautiful thing is not the dawn, nor the shade in midsummer, but the beautiful night.

The sunset finally couldn't hold the heavy night, and was finally pushed off the horizon at the urging of insects and various animals. But the sun god would never give in, so he dropped a colorful burning cloud and disappeared angrily.

At this time, under the call of mother earth, the children gradually returned to that warm little home. As a result, every matchbox-sized house began to smoke to celebrate the arrival of the night and the harvest of the day. In a short time, every household moved out tables, chairs and meals, and men chatted while drinking with bare arms. After eating quickly, the children snuggled up in their mother's arms and played, enjoying the unpredictable fire clouds and smelling the charming rice flowers.

Gradually, the night is getting deeper and deeper. At this time, the insects and the moon began a sonata at night, and bats and various insects danced waltzes, concerts and dances in the dim moonlight. How lively the fields are! At this time, the children are no longer in their mother's arms, playing hide-and-seek in the faint moonlight.

If you happen to pass by, you will be scared out of your wits, because there are shaking shadows in all directions, and there are one or two strange calls from time to time. Maybe you want to run away, but as soon as your leg was lifted, you fell to the ground, followed by a burst of laughter. When you look up, there is nothing in the Guanghan Palace except Chang 'e's charming smile. You have to admit.

As the night got deeper, the children went home and fell asleep in bed, giving out sweet laughter from time to time, as if cheering for the prank just now.

The moon is brighter, but the fields are silent.

The night is also more beautiful.

I like this wonderful country night!

Comments: This paper depicts a dreamy and charming rural night scene with poetic brushwork. The main part of the article, in chronological order, shows in detail the changing activities of scenery, things and people in small villages from evening to late at night. The washed picture of life is intertwined with strange and magnificent imagination, and static and dynamic complement each other. Moonlit night not only has a peaceful and quiet atmosphere, but also a lively and moving scene. Young writers should not only have eyes to discover beauty, but also have a more specific mind to understand beauty, so as to outline the artistic conception of beauty and shed beautiful emotions.

(Chengyang)

Wonderful moment

Life is an ocean of love, and everyone is breathing and feeling love. Life is like the night sky, in the wonderful moment of the meteor, people feel magnificent beauty; Life is like a trickle, in the wonderful moment of wearing a stone, people feel the beauty of persistence ... but the most beautiful thing in the world is love.

one

In the park in spring, the grass is sprouting and the birds are singing. A little boy who just learned to walk skipped around and was immersed in incomparable happiness. A stone tripped him, and he lay prone in the grass, his eyes flashing with desire for love. Mother came and gently picked up the little boy, encouraged him with loving eyes and healed the pain with love. ...

This moment is short, but maternal love is eternal.

two

One dark night, there was neither light nor wind in the sky. In the dim candlelight, two figures, an old man and a young man, were shaking slightly. Under the shiny hair, there is a face that has experienced vicissitudes of life, wrinkled like old bark. This is an old mother who is ill in bed. She slowly opened her mouth with tears in her eyes. On the side, her son held a bowl of smelly Chinese medicine in his left hand and a spoonful of soup in his right hand, gently blew it with his mouth, and then slowly walked to his mother. When touching his mother's chapped lips, hot tears dripped on his son's hands and penetrated into his heart. ...

This moment is short, but my son's love has been sublimated.

three

In the noisy street, trees on both sides flew by. A bus carries passengers smoothly. As usual, everything is so calm and natural. Suddenly, the driver's heart rate suddenly accelerated. He knew it was a precursor to heart failure. At this point, he took his time, slowly turned the steering wheel, drove the car steadily to the right of the road, put his foot on the brake and pulled the handbrake with his last strength. When the car stopped, he left, and his face was obviously a relief.

This moment is short, but the driver's love is engraved in everyone's heart.

Love blooms in life, simple and profound, short and wonderful.

May this love blossom and bear fruit and remain fragrant in your heart forever.

Comments: "Wonderful" is a broad concept, and the author skillfully grafted the writing scope of "love" through the skill of pointing questions. Three moments and three periods of love constitute the main body of the article. Although deja vu, through the clever integration of the author, a common theme is displayed: life is wonderful everywhere and eternity exists in an instant. This conception method and writing skills can be used for reference for beginners to write.

(Cheng Ming)

A wonderful autumn day

Blue sky and yellow leaves. I don't know when, Qiu's hand rested on the shoulder of the earth. In this autumn, the leaves are fluttering and the wind is slow, and I have unveiled your mysterious veil.

You are not as charming as the West Lake, no literati wrote many beautiful poems on you, and no magical and beautiful legends happened to you. But it is precisely because you lack these gorgeous decorations that your simplicity is really revealed.

Oh! East Lake, that autumn, I first met you. You are rippling, you are generous, you are steady, you are extraordinary, and you make this autumn wonderful!

I was moved by the long lake, so I bent down and touched your face and cheek. When my hand touched you, a cool feeling penetrated into my heart, and then I knew your heart, your innocent heart. The moment of contact is as smooth as touching the strings, as gentle as holding my mother's hand. I am intoxicated in this soft lake!

When my cruise ship moved slowly, I heard your innocent voice, gentle and powerful, revealing the unique personality of Jiangnan water town. Presumably, it is incomparable to the sound of pearls pouring into a plate of jade, and it is also incomparable to pop music. It is this universal clarity and this universal nature that makes autumn more and more splendid.

Soon, the time to play on the boat was over. Suddenly, I found that every tourist had a bag in his hand. When they reached the shore and passed a trash can, they all had the same move, that is, they laughed and threw the bag into the box. At this time, my heart was surging, and a strange feeling came to my mind. That detail is deeply engraved in my heart. I know this beautiful autumn is not only because of the beauty of the lake, but also because there are tourists who love nature and have environmental awareness.

Looking around, the lake is so lovely, and the distant green hills stand tall, quite like a "green snail in a white jade plate." This autumn is really beautiful.

Autumn wind sweeps the leaves. In my mind, it is still the bright eyes of autumn water, the details of smiling, and those tourists who love nature, who make this autumn beautiful!

Comments: Based on the wonderful autumn, the author first shows the beauty of autumn water from the perspective of touch and hearing, and then shows the human beauty with environmental awareness with the details of throwing garbage bags. The full text is in-depth and clear.

If the details of throwing garbage bags in the article can be described in great colors, the article may be more fascinating.

This article tells us that excellent works come from real life, but you should learn to record diligently with a pen.

(Cheng Ming)

Wonderful self

Life is a game of chess without regrets, a noisy play and a stormy sea. Although I am just an ordinary passer-by in life, I have a wonderful thing of my own.

I am wonderful because of books. When reading books, ancient people often said, "Don't listen to things outside the window, just read sage books". But for me, who is full of sunshine and faces the new century, besides textbook knowledge, Chinese and foreign classics are of course indispensable. Books, let me hone my life with Robinson on a desert island and make me invincible; Books, let me into Hugo's Notre Dame de Paris, and fall in love with Sanmao in the Sahara desert; Book, let me go out to sea with the old man Santiago and fight with sharks. Is a book, let me into a world I can't walk into, let me know what is strong and brave, what is the value of setbacks, and what is evil and good and evil. In a word, it is books that make me experience one wonderful life after another.

I became wonderful because of my interest. The poet's interest is exquisite poetry, and the writer's interest is touching articles. What about me? I am nothing, so I am not interested. Of course, that's calligraphy and painting. I like it because it is like my personality. I usually like to splash ink and express my feelings. When I am frustrated, I will write down "When braving the wind and waves, I will set up my shady sail at the meeting and set up a deep sea" to motivate myself. When I break up with my friends, I will prove our friendship with "However, when China keeps our friendship and the sky is still our neighbor". When wasting time, I will warn myself by writing "Young people don't work hard, but the boss is sad". Calligraphy makes me calm, makes me "not happy with things, not sad with myself", and makes my life shine forever. Sometimes when I see wonderful paintings with beautiful artistic conception, I always like to draw with my pen in my hand. Although the paintings are not exactly the same, they have already integrated my truest feelings. Because calligraphy and painting works are well received by classmates, teachers and family members. Students asked me to give them to commemorate our wonderful time together, and relatives asked me to write Spring Festival couplets for them and pray for good luck. Therefore, I am more proud of my interest. An inexplicable sense of pride will always come to my mind, making me feel that I am living so wonderfully.

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My life is wonderful, because I am different, I have a wonderful self, and I believe my life path will become colorful.

Wonderful scene

Life is like a poem, full of poetry; Life is like tea, and the tea is full of affection; Life is like a song, which is hard to stay in the depths; Life is like wine. When you are drunk, you will laugh. ...

Putting down the sentimental romance novel in my hand and wiping away the tears in the corner of my eyes, I pushed Molly's mother who was pruning aside. "Mom, do you love Dad?" My mother was first asked by me, and then she laughed and pointed at my head. "You, you read too many romance novels." "Mom, tell me!" Mother was forced to say with a smile, "just like this jasmine." After listening to my mother's answer, I was at a loss I was just about to ask, my mother can flash faster than the Monkey King.

The Spring Festival is coming. It should be a reunion day, but my mother has been admitted to the hospital. Coincidentally, my father just came back from a business trip. Before leaving, my mother repeatedly told me, "Be sure to let your father have a good rest and tell him about my hospitalization after dinner." But my father didn't listen to my carefully fabricated lies after all, and rushed to the hospital as soon as he came back. My father didn't come home that night.

The next morning, I took a bunch of carefully trimmed jasmine flowers to see my mother. As soon as I arrived at the door of the ward, I was shocked by what I saw: my father was sitting by the bed, gently feeding my mother breakfast. Perhaps because he was afraid of scalding his mother, he blew it carefully with his mouth, and it was safely delivered to her mouth. Finally, he carefully helped her lie down and gently covered her with a quilt. I didn't expect a careless father to have such a careful side. My eyes lit up. Maybe my cough bothers my father. He came out and whispered, "Go in and see your mother. I have work to do at work. "

I pushed the door and went in, inserted the bunch of jasmine flowers, gently opened the curtains, and a beam of sunshine sneaked in from the window. The whole room is romantic and warm. Look at the sleeping mother, with a smile on her lips. I suddenly understood that sentence: just like this jasmine flower.

My romance novels disappeared from my bookcase because I found a volume of affectionate novels around me. Although it is not as earth-shattering as Qiong Yao's and romantic and warm as Xi Juan's, it does exist.

Excellent composition of Wuxi senior high school entrance examination in 2005: wonderful reading line

I swam in the sea of books, sat in a canoe and rushed forward in the Three Gorges. I felt the joy and pride of Li Taibai's "the apes on both sides of the strait can't stop crying, and the canoe has passed Chung Shan Man", and sometimes I realized the sadness of Li Daoyuan's "the Three Gorges in Badong, and the apes cried three times", and I couldn't help but burst into tears. Two completely different feelings washed away my soul, and I couldn't help shouting "wonderful"!

I wandered in the desert outside the Great Wall, watching the solitary smoke lit by Wang Wei go straight into the sky and enjoying the moving picture of "the long river sets the yen", which made people linger. The geese in the sky go to Hengyang, and the edge of the desert is Fan Zhongyan's homesickness. In the military camp, the Qiang people are carefree and talk about their homesickness. How can this scene not make people deeply moved? So I shouted "wonderful"!

I stood on the railing of Yueyang Tower and watched the Yangtze River water rolling eastward, sailing alone and the rising sun rising. I saw the magnificence of Gong Fan's pen. "The mountains and waters are far away, the Yangtze River is vast, the horizon is boundless, the Asahi is cloudy and the weather is myriad." Yueyang Tower, one of the four famous buildings in China, is well-deserved, carved with beams and painted with buildings, giving people a sense of momentum and beauty. Standing here, you will feel the great ambition of "worrying about the world first, and enjoying the world later". I can't help shouting "wonderful"!

I shed tears in Hugo's Notre Dame de Paris, because I witnessed hunchbacked quasimodo climb the tall bell tower and ring the loud bell in the morning light; I witnessed the beautiful Esmeralda being abducted by a gang of bad guys and suffered a lot, and finally recognized my mother. The deaths of quasimodo and Esmeralda made me even sadder. Because of this deep touch, I shed tears, but I still want to shout "wonderful"!

Robinson and I ventured on a desert island. I traveled all over the island with that spear. Loneliness and loneliness make me admire Robinson's strong will even more, and I have learned a lot from it ... When Robinson embarked on the road of returning home for 28 years, I was happy for him from the bottom of my heart. So, I still want to shout "wonderful"!

Reading is like a trip, taking me all over the country, ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign; Reading is like following a knowledgeable and wise teacher, teaching me to feel the rise and fall of history all the way, making me happy or sad with the plot in the book. ...

Wonderful reading, wonderful my life!

Comments: For people who love books, a long trip to the sea of books is a spiritual agreement, happy and comfortable. The article thinks about Wan Li for thousands of years, and leads readers to a wonderful literary journey with romantic imagination. Stop and linger again and again, short films one by one, connecting ancient and modern masterpieces at home and abroad in series, and integrating their unique feelings. As a result, a wonderful literary world jumped onto the paper. This kind of creativity is refreshing, and I can't help shouting "wonderful"! (Chengyang)

Excellent composition of Wuxi senior high school entrance examination in 2005: wonderful San Xiao

San Xiao and Tang Bohu ordered Chou-heung, because Chou-heung's smile charmed the country and left him an unforgettable impression. The charm of laughter is unparalleled. Do you have to have a beautiful face to bring this charm to the extreme?

Yang Guifei in the book is gorgeous, and I think her smile will be breathtaking. However, who can explain the irony and indignation of "no one knows it is litchi" in "The Red Dust Riding a Princess and Laughing"? Who wants to laugh like that? The stone of beauty, Wu of *; Smiles of praise are everywhere. It turns out that the smile of a beautiful woman has such terrible charm.

So I turned around and looked for a wonderful smile in my life. I believe I can find it.

The moonlight in early spring crept into my window and penetrated into my dreams. The cool wind poured into my sleeve, and I trembled in my dream, but I could do nothing. There is a warmth in the darkness. I opened my eyes slightly, and my mother was tucking in the corner. So soft, so detailed. The moonlight shone on half of her face and her pupils sparkled. When I woke up, she smiled and told me carefully, "Go to sleep." I went to sleep sweetly, and my mouth corners, bright pupils and gentle words lingered in my dream. What a beautiful face, what a beautiful smile.

I know another person who has that smile. She will smile like that when watching me gobble, watching the stars with me and telling me about the past years. Bronzed face, locked wrinkles, bright eyes and slightly concave lips constitute a beautiful smile. Without a smile, it still touches my heart. That's the smile of my beautiful young grandmother, and that's the smile of the person who loves me the most.

My relatives always love me, and my teacher always cares about me. I grew up in happiness, but I inevitably encountered setbacks. The low point in my study also discourages me, but how can that encouraging smile make me lose my motivation? My most respected and unforgettable math teacher, the short and thin math teacher with big eyes, gave me an expectation and an encouraging smile. How could I forget? The brilliance of those bright eyes has been deeply imprinted in my mind for three years and has never faded.

Mother's smile is full of love; Grandma's smile is full of affection; The teacher's smile reveals confidence and expectation.

I haven't seen San Xiao by Chou-heung, Yu Ji's Smile by Yang Yuhuan, and Compliment Smile by Shi. However, I understand the true meaning of laughter; I feel the charm of laughter. The sincere smile exposed in the plain is the wonderful acme, which is the goal I am looking for.

Comments: Since the legendary beauty's smile has such a terrible "charm", why not look to real life? In life, the smiles of relatives and teachers are not as influential as those of beautiful women, but this sincere smile from the heart is more attractive and wonderful. The article captures three scenes in life, and gives them wonderful connotations and sincere feelings, telling people that the smiles in life are more real and wonderful than those of beautiful women over the years. The unique selection of materials, exquisite description and exquisite expression constitute the "wonderful" place of this article. (Wang Jinhai)