To write a good landscape, we should pay attention to the following aspects:
First, grasp the characteristics of the scene.
Observing the scenery carefully and grasping the characteristics is the premise of writing this kind of article. Whether you can grasp the characteristics of the scenery depends on the author's careful observation and keep it in mind. As the saying goes, "Sit tight and learn by heart." Therefore, in observation, it is required to be good at grasping the unique changes of color, shape, sound and smell of scenery in different seasons, different times and different regions, and observe and experience through the senses such as eyes, ears, nose, tongue and body. Only in this way can we grasp the characteristics of the scenery and describe it. Therefore, we should pay attention to the characteristics of different seasons. There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn and winter. The change of seasons will cause the change of scenery. The scenery of each season has its own characteristics; Second, we should pay attention to the characteristics of time change. Some scenes often have their own characteristics at different times. Day, night, morning and dusk all depict the scenery in different colors; Third, we should pay attention to the different characteristics of climate. The same scene presents different landscapes in rain, wind, fog and snow. Fourth, we should pay attention to different geographical features. South, north, city, country, plateau and flat land, different areas have different landscape characteristics.
Second, we should choose a suitable observation angle.
To choose a good observation angle, we must first establish a good observation point. According to the needs of performance, observe the scenery from far, near, above or below by using the methods of fixed foothold and changing foothold. At the same time, we should pay attention to the order of observation, from near to far, or from far to near? Top-down or bottom-up This refers to the transformation of space. You can also change the time or order of the tour. The scenery described in this way will not be chaotic. In short, we should describe it from many angles and sides.
Third, arrange the order of description. The order of scenery description is generally divided into spatial order and chronological order.
Spatial order —— Generally, take a fixed observation point, and write the scenes of each position in turn according to the order of line of sight movement. There is also a kind of spatial order, which does not take a fixed observation point, but describes the scenery with the movement of the observer's position. This order is called the tour order.
Time sequence-the scenery in the same place changes at different times. Written in a certain time sequence can show the richness of the scenery and make people feel beautiful. There are long and short, such as spring, summer, autumn and winter, and short, such as morning, afternoon and evening. Which time series to choose depends on the characteristics of the object to be described.
Fourth, we should integrate our feelings into the scenery and express our subjective feelings.
Wang Guowei, a master of Chinese studies, once asserted that "all scenery words are sentimental words". The scenery is objective, but the people who write it are affectionate. The author always has his own feelings about any scenery. The scenery without emotional color is just a pale and beautiful "body", which is difficult to achieve the touching purpose; At the same time, the process of observing and describing the scenery itself is also a process of writing subjective feelings. Therefore, feelings should be naturally permeated between the lines of writing scenery, and the feelings in the scenery should be cherished. Achieve a blend of scenes, things and me. Writing about scenery is precious and affectionate. While describing the objective scenery, we should integrate our emotions and feelings into the works, so that readers can produce * * * sounds, bring pleasure and intoxication to readers, bring readers into specific situations, be influenced by beauty and enjoy beauty.
Fifth, the application of dynamic and static methods.
Writing only static scenes tends to make the article dull, while writing only dynamic scenes may lose stability. Only by combining the static description and dynamic description of the morphological characteristics of the scenery can the painted scenery be concrete and vivid, leaving a deep impression on readers.
It is necessary to draw shapes, colors and sounds to describe the scenery, which seems to make people see, touch and hear, so try to choose those vivid languages. Therefore, we should be good at finding verbs and some appropriate adjectives that can best express the characteristics of scenery, especially using rhetorical methods such as metaphor and personification, but we should be careful not to pile up words.
Fan Wen enjoys performances in spring, summer, autumn and winter.
Spring, summer, autumn and winter are like four magical actors, performing their unique skills on the big stage of nature.
spring
Look, the green curtains have been opened. Dressed in colorful clothes, Miss Chun walked lightly onto the stage. With a wave of her long sleeves, everything on the ground was dyed green. Miss Chun took out a beautiful flower basket from behind, took out bundles of colorful flowers from it with delicate hands and scattered them to the audience. Flowers fly to the green earth and green trees. Immediately, the green leaves were full of flowers. Flowers bloom in evergreen bushes, just like in green brocade, and the blooming flowers are embroidered with five-color silk threads. An intoxicating spring smile appeared on Miss Chun's red cheeks. She walked lightly off the stage with a smile.
The green curtains are closed.
summer
The green curtain on the stage slowly turns dark green, and then slowly opens. Ah, summer is out. Xia seems to be a lively teenager, striding onto the stage. Xia's eyes are burning with light, and she looks around the earth under the stage. Suddenly, the blazing sun appeared on the earth. The tree opened countless arms, covered the hot eyes in summer and cast a shade. The eyes of summer arrived there, where it was hot and sunny.
Xia used his stunt, closed his eyes with satisfaction and walked down. The dark green curtains are also closed.
autumn
Dark green curtains will soon turn into gold, which indicates that beautiful autumn will appear. The curtain slowly opened. Beautiful autumn, wearing golden clothes, appeared in the center of the stage. Autumn pointed with a thin hand, and the earth turned golden at once. Qiu took out a small pocket from her side, magically took out a rich fruit and threw it at the audience. There seems to be inexhaustible fruit in that bag. Heavy fruits fall to the earth and are covered with golden branches. What a fruitful autumn scenery!
Autumn is like a shy girl, smiling shyly and walking off the stage leisurely.
winter
Winter is coming! Winter is like a clean little girl, all white, and even the curtains have changed from gold to white. Wearing a white velvet hat, white velvet trousers and a pair of white leather boots in winter is like a lovely white velvet ball. With chubby little hands, she directed snowflakes to fly to the earth to clean up the dirt there. Snowflakes obediently obey the command of winter, dancing their beautiful hexagonal bodies and falling on the earth. In a short time, the earth was white and turned into a snowy world.
Looking at the changes on earth in winter, I smiled happily. Two dimples appeared on his chubby little face. She clapped her hands like a happy little pompon and then rolled off the stage.
White clean curtains also close with the departure of winter.
Just when the four magical actors showed their magical powers in spring, summer, autumn and winter, the footsteps of Time Old Man also moved quickly. The winter performance ended, a year passed and a new year ushered in. The scenery on the earth is constantly changing with the changes of spring, summer, autumn and winter.
Day after day, year after year, four magical magicians are performing their own programs on the big stage of nature. ...
May their programs become better and better, and make people love colorful nature more!
The author describes the scenery and charm of spring, summer, autumn and winter as a four-act drama. Thus, a new picture is drawn: nature is a magnificent stage, the earth is a magical curtain, and the season is a clever magician. Every season shows its own unique skills. The lightness of girls scattering flowers in spring, the fiery attention of teenagers in summer, the shyness of girls throwing fruit in autumn and the command of children's fat hands in winter make readers feel a kind of spirit and beauty. This article is novel in conception and poetic in writing.
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I found it in my composition book.