Teaching objectives
Knowledge target
Understand the characteristics of rain in Kunming and feel the feelings expressed by the author.
capability goal
1, sort out the writing ideas and understand the author's leisurely and free-spirited style.
2. Taste the plain and natural language features of this article.
Emotional goals:
Cultivate students' habit of paying attention to the details of daily life and guide them to find interest in plain life.
Teaching focus
Clear your mind and feel the feelings expressed by the author.
Teaching difficulties
By tasting the plain and natural language full of charm, we can read the inner charm of the text and feel the author's unique interest.
Arrange a class.
Preparation before class
1. Preview the words in this article and clear the reading obstacles.
2. Understand Wang Zengqi's writing style.
teaching process
First, talk about poetry and introduce new lessons
Read a poem by Wang Zengqi;
There are few laymen in the lotus pond, and the moss mark in the wild shop is one inch deep; A cup of turbid wine after noon, fragrant flowers and wet rain.
Let students read freely and taste poetry.
Teacher: This old-fashioned poem has only 28 words, which describes the tranquility and serenity of the rainy season in Kunming in the 1940s, and the anguish and helplessness of the students studying in the National The National SouthWest Associated University at that time. There is a touch of sadness in the profound artistic conception. The lotus pond was originally located in the northwest of Kunming. A pool of clear water, dressed in a statue of Chen Yuanyuan, is a bit bleak and sad. Now the lotus pond is downtown. High-rise buildings, traffic, during the day, people like crucian carp crossing the river; At night, the lights are like stars all over the sky, and there are no more "few laymen in the lotus pond" or "wild shops" with moss marks on wooden roots. Some are restaurants, restaurants and food stalls. At night, the roadside barbecue stalls are crowded with migrant workers, female migrant workers and male and female college students from nearby universities. Laughing, eating and chatting. The street is full of fumes, tail gas and the strange smell of barbecue, and the fragrance of Muxianghua has long since disappeared. However, there will be Muxianghua. There will also be pig's head meat. It is too difficult to taste the taste and atmosphere of "Muxianghua Wet Rain" in a turbid glass of wine! We can only imagine and taste from Mr. Wang's beautiful words …
Second, reading the text, the overall perception
On the basis of preview, students read the text silently, think about the following questions, and then discuss and communicate with teachers and students:
1, titled Rain in Kunming, why do you want to paint this picture for Ning Kun at the beginning of the article?
Clear: The paintings are cactus, fungus and flowers unique to Kunming in rainy season, which can not only highlight the rainy characteristics of Kunming. It can also lead to the following specific description of "Rain in Kunming".
2. What is the difference between the rain in Kunming and the rain in other places, which makes the author so obsessed? Please circle the sentence that best summarizes its characteristics.
Sunny: The rainy season in Kunming is bright, full and emotional.
3. From what aspects did the author write about the brightness and fullness of the rainy season in Kunming, which made people feel emotional?
Clear:
The rainy season in Kunming is "bright" because "it stops and goes, not continuously, and will never stop";
The rainy season in Kunming is "full" because "the water in the branches and leaves of plants is saturated, showing excessive and almost exaggerated exuberance". Because "cactus is not only abundant, but also extremely fat, it can be planted around the vegetable garden instead of on the fence, and it can be opened upside down."
Because "Auricularia auricula is the most common in rainy season in Kunming, and Auricularia auricula is the most distinctive scenery in humid air in rainy season";
"When you visit the vegetable market in the rainy season, you can see all kinds of bacteria at any time, such as boletus, Pleurotus ostreatus, chicken fir, dried fungus and chicken oil fungus.
Yangmei in Kunming is not only as big as table tennis, but also black, red, black and red. It has a nice name called "Huotan Mei".
The flowers in rainy season are osmanthus fragrans and Muxiang flowers. Osmanthus fragrans "has dense leaves, which make the surrounding rooms green", and Muxianghua "has dense and finely divided green leaves, countless half-opened white flowers and full flower bones, which are all soaked by rain".
Teacher's summary: In this article, Wang Lao not only paid attention to the rain in Kunming, but also described many natural scenery. The beauty of life lies in this grass and tree, which shows Wang Lao's unique poetry and elegant life interest. He also captures them with a pair of eyes that are good at discovering beauty, and then brings them into words, which is a kind of beauty enjoyment for us.
Third, taste the language and experience deep affection.
1, such a bright and full rainy season is naturally emotional. How do you feel about the author?
Teachers and students communicate with each other and make it clear: homesickness, love and homesickness.
2. From which words in the text did you realize the author's feelings?
Students read the text silently, teachers and students exchange ideas and taste the beauty of language.
For example:
(1) this kind of thing can also eat? ! ..... This thing is so delicious? !
In a short sentence, a little change, but doubts, surprises and sighs are all in it!
(2) The girl selling Yangmei is a Miao girl, wearing a flowered hat and shoes embroidered with flowers, sitting in a corner of someone else's step stone, shouting "selling Yangmei-"from time to time, with a Jiao Jiao voice. Their voices softened the air in Kunming during the rainy season. (Why write flower girl? )
Describe (describe in detail) with the appearance and language of the characters. Flower girl's charming modality sets off the femininity of Kunming in rainy season, and expresses the author's nostalgia and love for Kunming.
I miss the rain in Kunming. (twice, what's the difference? )
……
The author misses not only the rain, but also those things, scenery, people and events. What he misses is the folk customs of Kunming and the quiet and natural life there in those years. What kind of attitude can you feel towards the author's life?
Clear: Life is not always full of storms, and doing nothing is not always safe. Only by fully feeling all kinds of happiness, bitterness, dullness and poetry in life can we truly appreciate the taste of life.
Fourth, appreciate the classics and expand reading.
1, after reading this article, what unique gains do you think this article can give you in language?
Ask students to read interesting sentences and summarize them:
There may be a, short sentence b, classical Chinese and idioms. Spoken English (see article example)
Teacher's summary: Here, elegant classical Chinese characters and simple spoken language set each other off, which makes people admire the author's artistic skill of combining extremely elegant and extremely vulgar language harmoniously.
2. Finding interest and poetry in plain life is the charm of Wang Lao's prose.
Further reading: The duck egg fragment in Dragon Boat Festival once again reveals the beauty of Wang Lao's plain and charming words.
Duck eggs in Dragon Boat Festival (fragment)
My hometown is a water town. Get out of the way Gaoyou duck is a duck species. There are many ducks and eggs. Gaoyou people are also good at pickling duck eggs. Gaoyou salted duck eggs are famous. When I was in southern Jiangsu and Zhejiang, whenever someone asked me where I came from, I would be awed by such an answer: "Oh! You have salted duck eggs there! " Salted duck eggs are also sold in salty shops in Shanghai, and they must be marked "Gaoyou Salted Eggs". Gaoyou also laid double yellow duck eggs. Duck eggs in other places are occasionally double yellow, but not as much as those in Gaoyou, so they can be exported in batches. The taste of double yellow duck eggs is actually nothing special. It's just that a duck egg is just cut and there are two round yellows inside, which is amazing. I am not happy to praise Gaoyou duck eggs to strangers, as if they were laid in our poor place! But Gaoyou's salted duck eggs are really good. I have been to many places and eaten a lot of duck eggs, but they are not as good as those in my hometown! It used to be difficult for the sea to touch water, and salted duck eggs in other places really looked down on me. Yuan Mei's "Suiyuan Food List? There is a "salted egg" in the small menu. I don't like Yuan Zicai. I am familiar with his cooking methods in the food list. He can't cook by himself. However, after reading the article "Preserved Eggs", I feel very cordial and "glorious". The article is not long, and the record is as follows:
Gaoyou's preserved eggs are the best, fine in color and oily, and Gao Wenduan likes them best. During the dinner, first take it to honor the guests and put it on a plate. Cutting the shell, yellow and white, is always desirable; Don't leave it yellow and turn white, so the taste is not complete and the oil is scattered.
② Gaoyou salted eggs are characterized by excellent quality and rich oil. Protein is very tender, unlike other places where the hair is dry and pink, and the mouth is like chewing lime. There is more oil here than anywhere else. The way to eat duck eggs, as Yuan Zicai said, is to cut them with shells and treat them to dinner. Usually, when eating, we usually break the "short" and dig with chopsticks to eat. When the chopstick head is dropped, the cheap red oil comes out. The yellow of Gaoyou salted egg is red. There is a famous dish in northern Jiangsu called "cinnabar tofu", which is tofu fried with Gaoyou duck yellow. I have eaten salted duck eggs in Beijing, and the yolk is pale yellow. What kind of salted duck egg is this?
Five, product life, extracurricular extension:
1. I recommend reading Wang Zengqi's essays such as Grape Moon Order.
2. Carefully observe and taste every grass, tree, branch and leaf in life, grasp its characteristics, and write something that can express your unique feelings.
6. blackboard design
Rain in Kunming
Wang Zengqi
Cheerful, plump and emotional.
Lesson 2 Rain in Kunming
Teaching target knowledge and skills:
1. Understand the characteristics of rain in Kunming.
2. Experience the author's plain and natural language style.
3. Learn from the author's writing technique of expressing feelings with trivial matters in life.
Process and method: Taste the connotation of the work and the author's emotion through various reading methods.
Emotion, attitude and values: Feel the author's nostalgia for the past. first kind
learning target
1. Grasp the characteristics of rain in Kunming
2. Feel the characteristics of the author between the lines.
Teaching process:
First, the introduction of new courses.
Show the famous ancient poems describing rain, and talk about the characteristics of rain in the poem. What are the characteristics of rain in Kunming? Let's learn the text Rain in Kunming together.
Second, teach new lessons.
Goals guide learning and overall perception, and grasp the characteristics of Kunming rain.
Question 1:. The title of this article is Rain in Kunming. Is this article only about rain?
Clear: I also wrote about cactus, various mushrooms, Myrica rubra, osmanthus fragrans in Myanmar and other scenery. I wrote about painting for Ning Kun and going to a bar for a drink with Sid.
Question 2: Are these related to the rain? Choose one of them and talk about your opinion.
Clear: It's all about rain. Example: Myrica rubra is a rainy season fruit. Under the nourishment of rain, Myrica rubra is so black and red. In the rainy season, Miao girls sell bayberry.
The sound is so soft.
Question 3: Please describe your feelings about the rain in Kunming in a few words.
Example: fullness, saturation, exuberance and softness.
Goal-oriented reading understands the author's feelings in more than two forms.
Question 4: After experiencing the characteristics of rain in Kunming, who wants to read this article affectionately in their own language?
Read aloud.
Question 5. Let the students express their opinions and say how they read.
Students express their opinions.
Question 6: Read this article deeply and freely according to your own understanding and the profiles of other students.
Students read the text
Question 7: In reading aloud, did you feel the author's feelings about the rain in Kunming?
Clear: love, nostalgia, nostalgia, etc.
Please read your favorite jokes with deep feelings of love, nostalgia and nostalgia, and then read them to your deskmate and friends. Even read it to more people. Second lesson
First, review and introduce new lessons.
Read your favorite passage aloud and tell me why you chose it.
Second, teach new lessons.
Goal-oriented learning III
The big screen shows fragments of lonely journey.
It was dark, the river was black, and reeds became a black sea. Du Xiaokang even felt that the wind was dark. Near noon, thunder rolled from the horizon like ten thousand chariots. Soon, the storm began to get hysterical. Suddenly, it was dark, as if the end of the century had arrived. alternately
In the forest, there is a whirring wind and the click of thousands of reeds broken by the wind.
The duck pen was suddenly blown open by the wind. When the father and son rushed together to try to repair it, a whirlwind almost rolled the duck pen into the sky. Du Yonghe shouted "My Duck" and almost fainted on the ground. Because he saw the duck split into countless strands and disappeared before his eyes.
Du Xiaokang forgot his father and ran after a duck. There are about sixty or seventy ducks in this group. They hurried away in the rumble of thunder. He followed them closely. He kept fiddling with the reed in front of him. Even so, the face was cut again and again by reed leaves. He felt a sharp pain in his foot. He doesn't want to take a look. He knew that this was the first time that an old reed stubble pricked his foot. He called his duck while chasing. However, these usually docile little things are crazy today. They just wander around mindlessly.
Question 1. What's the difference between what is on the big screen and what is in the text?
Sunny: Different atmosphere, different scenery in the rain.
Question 2: If we use "bold" and "graceful" to describe rain, what kind of rain should Kunming belong to, and how did the author show such an effect?
Clarity: Graceful writers pick up trivial things in life, such as household words and explanations, which have a plain and natural beauty.
Tip: There is no writing material in plain life, but there is a lack of eyes to find writing material. Vigorous things are not necessarily valuable, and sometimes plain things are true and can touch others' hearts more.
Practice writing: imitate this writing method and write a rainy season that leaves good memories for yourself.
Lesson 3 Rain in Kunming
◆ teaching material analysis
Rain in Kunming is Lesson 15, Unit 4, Volume 1, Grade 8. The article in this unit is about people or scenery, but the lines are full of the author's affection. In this essay, the author, Wang Zengqi, wrote the footprints of youth with his unique picturesque and tasteful language of Jiangnan water town, and devoted his love and nostalgia for Kunming rain.
◆ Teaching objectives
Knowledge and ability goal 1, understand the characteristics of rain in Kunming;
2. Experience the author's plain and natural language style;
3. Learn from the author's writing technique of expressing feelings with trivial matters in life. Process and method objectives
Taste the connotation of the work and the author's emotion through various reading methods. Emotions, attitudes, values and goals
Cultivate students' habit of paying attention to the details of daily life and guide them to find interest in plain life.
◆ Teaching focuses on difficulties.
Teaching focus
Understand the content of the text, taste the sentences in the text, and realize the author's longing for the rain in Kunming. Teaching difficulties
By tasting the plain and natural language full of charm, we can read the inner charm of the text and feel the author's unique interest.
◆ Preparation before class
1, let the students preview the words in this article and clear the reading obstacles; 2. Understand Wang Zengqi's writing style; 3. Teachers prepare for multimedia teaching.
◆ Teaching process
First, create a scene, passion import: 1, import:
Teacher: Students, what impression did the spring rain leave on you? (Students express their opinions)
Kunming is a city with four seasons like spring. What will the rain be like in Kunming Today, we will enjoy Rain in Kunming with the writer Wang Zengqi. (blackboard writing) 2. About the author:
Wang Zengqi, a native of Gaoyou, Jiangsu Province, was born on March 5, 1920. He is a representative of China contemporary writers, essayists, dramatists and Beijing writers. Known as "lyrical humanist, the last pure scholar in China and the last scholar-bureaucrat in China." Wang Zengqi has made great achievements in the creation of short stories, and has also made in-depth research on drama and folk literature and art. His works include Taking the Ring, Fanhua, Lost Water, Late Cui Wen Tan and so on.
1In the autumn of 935, Wang Zengqi graduated from junior high school and was admitted to Nanjing Middle School in Jiangyin County to attend high school. /kloc-in the summer of 0/939, I went from Shanghai to Kunming via Hongkong and Vietnam, and my first choice was to be admitted to China Literature Department of National Southwest Associated University. From 65438 to 0950, I was appointed as the author of Beijing Literature and Art sponsored by Beijing Federation of Literary and Art Circles. In the winter of 196 1, I wrote a night in the sheephouse with a brush. 1963 Night in the Sheep House was officially published. 198 1 year 1 month, different kinds of ice are released in yuhua district. 1996 12, was elected as a consultant at the Fifth National Congress of the Chinese Writers Association.
He passed away at the age of 77. Second, read the text for the first time and clear the obstacles: 1, read the text.
(1) Please read the text freely, draw new words and words you don't know while reading, and answer with the help of a dictionary, so as to read the text correctly and fluently.
(2) Please read the text silently and draw your favorite sentences. (3) Read the text by name, and the teacher will correct it with a camera. (4) Students can practice reading freely.
2. Students think about the following questions, and teachers and students discuss and communicate with each other.
(1) The title is Rain in Kunming. Why did the article first paint this picture for Ning Kun?
Clear: The paintings are cactus, fungus and flowers unique to Kunming in rainy season, which can not only highlight the rainy characteristics of Kunming. It can also lead to the following specific description of "Rain in Kunming".
(2) What's the difference between the rain in Kunming and the rain in other places? Please circle the one that best summarizes its characteristics.
In a word.
Sunny: The rainy season in Kunming is bright, full and emotional.
(3) From what aspects did the author write about the brightness and fullness of the rainy season in Kunming, which made people feel emotional?
Sunny: The rainy season in Kunming is "bright" because it is "stop-and-go, discontinuous and never stops";
The rainy season in Kunming is "full" because "the water in the branches and leaves of plants is saturated, showing excessive and almost exaggerated exuberance". Because "cactus is not only abundant, but also extremely fat, so it can be planted around the vegetable garden instead of on the fence, and it can be opened upside down." ;
Because "Auricularia auricula is the most common in rainy season in Kunming, and Auricularia auricula is the most distinctive scenery in humid air in rainy season"; "When you visit the vegetable market in the rainy season, you can see all kinds of bacteria at any time, such as boletus, Penicillium, Termitomyces, Ganba and chanterelle." ;
Yangmei in Kunming is not only as big as table tennis, but also black, red, black and red. It has a nice name called "Huotan Mei".
The flowers in rainy season are osmanthus fragrans and Muxiang flowers. Osmanthus fragrans "has dense leaves, which make the surrounding rooms green", and Muxianghua "has dense and finely divided green leaves, countless half-opened white flowers and full flower bones, which are all soaked by rain". Third, read the text carefully, the overall impression: 1, read the text and discuss the problem.
(1) This bright and full rainy season is naturally emotional. How do you feel about the author? Teachers and students communicate with each other and make it clear: homesickness, love and homesickness.
(2) What words did you learn from the text about the author's feelings?
(3) The author misses not only the "rain", but also those things, sights, people and events. What he misses is the folk customs of Kunming and the quiet and natural life there in those years. What attitude towards life can you appreciate from the author?
Clear: Life is not always full of storms, and doing nothing is not always safe. Only by fully feeling all kinds of happiness, bitterness, dullness and poetry in life can we truly appreciate the taste of life. 2. Students read the text silently, and teachers and students communicate to taste the beauty of language.
For example:
(1) Is this edible? ! Is this thing so delicious? !
In a short sentence, a little change, but doubts, surprises and sighs are all in it!
(2) Myrica rubra sellers are all Miao girls, wearing flowered hats and shoes embroidered with flowers, sitting in a corner of someone else's step stone, shouting "selling Myrica rubra-"from time to time, with a Jiao Jiao accent. Their voices softened the air in Kunming during the rainy season. (Why write flower girl? )
Describe (describe in detail) with the appearance and language of the characters. Flower girl's charming modality sets off the femininity of Kunming in rainy season, and expresses the author's nostalgia and love for Kunming. Four, intensive reading (selected reading) text, in-depth understanding:
1, after reading this article, what unique gains do you think this article can give you in language?
Ask the students to read interesting sentences and sum up: there may be a, short sentence b, classical Chinese and idioms. Spoken English (see article example)
Teacher's summary: Here, elegant classical Chinese characters and simple spoken language set each other off, which makes people admire the author's artistic skill of combining extremely elegant and extremely vulgar language harmoniously. Finding interest and poetry in plain life is the charm of Wang Lao's prose. 2. Analysis of the characteristics of Wang Zengqi's prose creation:
Wang Zengqi's prose does not care about the structure, nor does it pursue the profound theme, plain and simple, as homely as words.
He aestheticized "daily life" and revised the collective "grand narrative" with personal trivial themes; With plain, euphemistic and flexible language, the all-encompassing rigidity of "Mao discourse" has been reversed; With a plain, implicit and restrained narrative, it exposes the messy and exaggerated affectation of the style of writing, and makes people relive the charm of the once-lost celebrity-style classical prose, thus reflecting the emptiness, exaggeration, falsehood and morbidness of China's contemporary prose, making the truth, goodness and beauty, daily life, tranquility and gracefulness return to prose, and making the prose go out of the "one thousand people, one thousand parts and one cavity", which is a great contribution. V. Class summary:
In this article, Wang Lao not only pays attention to the rain in Kunming, but also describes many natural scenery. The beauty of life lies in this grass and tree, which shows Wang Lao's unique poetry and elegant life interest. He also captures them with a pair of eyes that are good at discovering beauty, and then brings them into words, which is a kind of beauty enjoyment for us. Six, homework:
1, recommend reading Wang Zengqi's "Grape Moon Order" and other essays;
2. Carefully observe and taste every grass, tree, branch and leaf in life, grasp its characteristics, and write something that can express your unique feelings.
Seven, blackboard design:
Zeng Qi, the Rain King of Kunming
Cheerful, plump and emotional.
◆ Teaching reflection
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