I'm Wang Shan, a 16-year-old girl, and now I'm studying in Beijing Yangguang Middle School. I like music, especially classical music. I am also interested in photography, because it allows me to record the wonderful moments in my life. I have made many friends through my hobbies. In fact, I like meeting new friends and chatting with them. I believe that we all need each other's help. I thank my friends for their help, and I am willing to help anyone in need.
I love life, nature and peace. I hate any form of violence.
I want to join the Association for Peace and Development. Friendship summer camp, because it will be a good opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and understand their culture.
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The chart 1 shows the average time that students in this school spend on different extracurricular activities every day. Students spend the most time on homework, 93 minutes, followed by watching TV, accounting for 46 minutes. They spend about 34 minutes listening to music and 30 minutes using computers. When 25 minutes are spent on sports, only 12 minutes are spent on housework.
As shown in Table 2, only 10% of the time is spent on sports activities. I think schools should encourage students to do more exercise after class. In this way, they may be healthier and more energetic.
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Dear editor:
Recently, our class had a heated discussion on whether Beijing Zoo should move out of the city.
Some of my classmates are in favor of this move. They say that the influx of tourists into the zoo will lead to traffic jams. In addition, they think that once they move, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.
However, other students opposed the idea. They said that the Beijing Zoo built in 1906 has a history of 100 years and is very famous at home and abroad. So it should stay where it is. What's more, moving may lead to the death of some animals. To move or not to move is a major decision that Beijingers must make.
You are sincere,
Li Hua
June 3(rd), 2005
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Dear Jeff:
I'm Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I'm glad to learn that you will stay with my family during your stay in Beijing.
When you are here, we will provide you with a room of your own, with a bed, a table, two chairs and a TV. You will also have your own bathroom. Our school is close to our home, so we can go to school by bike together. We will eat in the school cafeteria at noon. I'm sure you'll like the delicious Chinese food there and enjoy chatting with friends at lunch. Physical education class in our school usually ends at 4 pm. Then you can play ball games or swim with other students. It'll be fun.
Please let me know if you have any questions or requirements. We will try our best to make your stay in Beijing pleasant.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Subject 1
Read the following materials and write as required.
Mencius said: "a gentleman has three pleasures ... both parents exist, one brother has no reason (disaster) and the other is happy;" Yang is worthy of heaven, not ashamed of people, but also happy; If you are educated by talents in the world, you will have three pleasures. " ("Mencius wholeheartedly")
Mencius believes that a gentleman has three pleasures, which should actually be the joy of life that we advocate today. Please choose one of the three pieces of music.
Requirements: 1, writing argumentative papers or narratives; 2, the topic is self-made; 3, not less than 700 words; 4. Please don't copy or copy.
[Brief analysis of the topic]
The topic requires choosing one of the "three pleasures" put forward by Mencius and determining three alternative topics for the composition. The title of "One Music" is family, the title of "Two Music" is career ambition, and the title of "Three Music" is education. For candidates, the three aspects are no strangers. Students grow up healthily physically and mentally, and feel and enjoy this "three great pleasures of life" all the time, right? Choosing one of the "three kinds of music" can also be transformed into many related topics, talking about the cause, effect, matter, emotion, existence, absence, creation and change of "music" None of the "three kinds of music" will be empty, and they all enjoy their own "music" because of the richness of specific content. The title of this composition is related to whether memory can be transplanted, honesty, choice of mind, love and familiarity with things, forgetting and memory, celebrity endorsement, the return of the head of the animal, I said the post-90 s, and things I often talk about. This provides ample free space for candidates to write about familiar life and express their true feelings.
Or ask: What if I don't understand "Sanle"? To say the least, for example, my parents died when I was a child. In the environment of exam-oriented education, I have no ambition to take the world as my responsibility, and I don't feel the heroic and gratifying of teachers' "cultivating talents in the world". What should I do? The title is well said: "This (three pleasures) should also be the joy of life that we advocate today." It should be, but it's gone. Shouldn't we express our true feelings, heavy reflection and strong desire for ourselves, our classmates and society? In this way, we can "live up to the sky, live up to others" and live up to the feelings of our family and teachers.
Example ①
Courtesy, righteousness, honesty and shame are the four dimensions of a country.
A doctor of chemistry wrote a paper on how to quickly detect the content of melamine in milk, which was submitted to foreign magazines. Editor's reply: What's the use?
Yes, in the opinion of critics, milk has nothing to do with melamine.
This is exactly the old saying: "Good people don't know how bad bad people are." Who would have thought that profiteers were so heartless?
When the melamine incident was first exposed, I remember a profiteer defending: "There is no law to prohibit it. Which country's law prohibits adding melamine to milk? "
Therefore, many people bombarded National Medical Products Administration and did not foresee: "Why not explicitly prohibit it?"
The US Food and Drug Administration complained about this: "Didn't we explicitly prohibit adding feces to milk? Do you want to add? There are thousands of harmful substances, can we ban them all? "
Once upon a time, "no matter whether it's a white cat or a black cat, catching a mouse is a good cat" was still the surging power to promote economic prosperity. The white cat and black cat at the bridgehead of Bayi Bridge even once became the symbol of emancipating the mind in Jiangxi and the pride of Nanchang. Who would have thought that the slogan has now become an excuse for many profiteers to make and sell fake and shoddy goods by hook or by crook for black-hearted profits, for many officials to make money and seize power by crook, and for many scholars to copy and cheat by crook for professional titles and fame.
The Hong Kong media "Oriental Daily" even issued a cry that "the Chinese nation has reached the most immoral time", which caused a strong condemnation on the Internet. This paper holds that the secularization trend of measuring the choice of one thing and one thing by the standard of fame and fortune has penetrated the bottom line of social ethics and gradually pushed this society astray.
As a result, many common sense known to women and children have repeatedly entered various red-headed documents: prohibiting officials from embezzling public funds; Prohibit enterprises from resisting taxes by violence; It is forbidden to treat petitioners as mental illness; Prohibition of drunk driving; It is forbidden for urban management to beat people; Obstetricians and gynecologists are prohibited from molesting women; Teachers are forbidden to rape students.
Living in such an era, everyone is really in danger, and everyone is anxious: where to find really safe food? Where can I find a trustworthy friend? Where to find a fair and just court? Where can I find officials I can rely on? Even the county party secretary is shouting: "We are the most vulnerable group!" Where can ordinary people get inner happiness? In my opinion, the rise of a great power needs not only economic prosperity, but also ethics.
Courtesy, righteousness, honesty and shame are the four dimensions of a country.
Please ask every Chinese descendant who wants to be happy, hope for social harmony and hope for the rejuvenation of China, keep in mind the principles of courtesy, honesty and shame, and follow the Confucius and Mencius: be worthy of the sky, not condescending, and be upright. If so, people's happiness can be expected and the soul can be expected.
Example ②
Lost happiness in the iPad2 era
What is iPad2? This is the latest Apple mobile phone. However, the iPad2 is more than just a mobile phone.
In the eyes of a senior one boy in Zhengzhou, it also symbolizes the greatest happiness. In order to enjoy the happiness brought by iPad2, he sold his kidney for 20,000 yuan.
This boy is not the only one who is crazy about the iPad2. A few days ago, in Tianya community, a girl of 16 years old claimed to be willing to sell her first night, and the price she asked for turned out to be an iPad2.
I have to admire the ability of Apple CEO Steve Jobs. He not only brought Apple out of the quagmire, but also promoted its products to the height of popular culture, which made countless fashionable men and women crazy and eager for it. It seems that whoever owns the iPad2 will catch up with the pursuit of quality of life, fashion trends, advanced technology and even culture, and will really enjoy the happiness of life.
The question is: What should fashionable men and women sell in exchange for iPad3, iPad4 or even iPadN? The trendy electronic products are constantly updated. Will it come to an end?
It is really heartbreaking that fashion men and women are so lost under the influence of the trend.
Mencius' definition of happiness in the Warring States Period is: "Parents are both perfect, but brothers are out of luck." "Zeng Xianwen" also said: "Gold is not expensive, but peace is much more expensive." It can be seen that for thousands of years, people have always believed that a harmonious and healthy family and a safe life are the well-being of a family. As for things other than money, material, rank and status, it really has nothing to do with happiness.
Please think about it: what's the point of taking advantage of money? There are thousands of acres of fertile land at home, and only eat three meals a day; Even if there are thousands of tall buildings, it only takes three feet to sleep. What's the point of relying on fame and status? A Dream of Red Mansions has long said: "Where are the ancient and modern? A pile of grass is gone in the wasteland. " It's even more boring to indulge in debauchery and degenerate yourself into an animal!
But the trouble now is that many people always want more things because of greed, and as a result they lose all their happiness. After Zhengzhou boys sell their kidneys, can their bodies be guaranteed? If Tianya girls really sell themselves, will they fall into the abyss?
A person's life can be short, to paraphrase Xiao Shenyang: "As soon as your eyes are closed and opened, a day will pass;" As long as you close your eyes and don't open them, this life is over. "
Where can I buy regret medicine? A slip of the foot makes a lasting regret, looking back for a hundred years.
I hope everyone will stay away from the distractions, stop the temptation, and manage family happiness well.
Topic 2
Read the following materials and write as required.
The ancients said: "With copper as a mirror, you can dress your clothes;" Taking history as a mirror, we can know the rise and fall; Taking people as a mirror, you can understand the gains and losses. " "Mirror" is another pair of eyes to know yourself and the world. Today, more kinds of mirrors enrich the levels and colors of our perception: telescopes lead our eyes to the distance, microscopes uncover the mystery of the microscopic world, mirrors allow us to look forward and backward, mirrors become various selves, and prisms set up a beautiful rainbow in front of us. These mirrors open a multi-dimensional space for us, making our vision wider, our thoughts deeper and our hearts clearer.
Please choose at least two kinds of mirrors from telescope, microscope, mirror, mirror and prism, and write an article according to your own feelings.
Requirements: ① Choose your own angle and do your own topic. (2) Except for poetry, the style is not limited. ③ No less than 800 words. (4) No interplanting or plagiarism.
[Brief analysis of the topic]
The title requires "choose at least two kinds of mirrors from telescope, microscope, mirror, mirror and prism, and write an article according to your own feelings", which determines the scope of the composition. Candidates can write two, three, four or five kinds of mirrors independently, and can also make cross-comparison between two or five kinds of mirrors, so the selection range is flexible and free.
The material says, "These mirrors have opened a multidimensional space for us, broadened our horizons, deepened our thoughts and made our minds more Ming Che", which has brought a lot of inspiration to the examinee's talk about "sentiment".
Talk head-on. It's good. Because the title clearly explains the functions of the five mirrors, it is easier to type according to the title. On the other hand, you can. "Telescopes lead our eyes into the distance", but leave blind spots nearby; "Microscope holds up the mystery of the micro-world", so there is no hazy poetry; "The mirror allows us to look forward, but we can still look back", but our eyes may be scattered; "The ever-changing self of the mirror" is also distorted in humor; "Prisms set up a beautiful rainbow in front of us", but it was just an illusory rainbow. These can also be regarded as "broadening our horizons, deepening our thoughts and making our hearts clearer". The opposite question is relatively difficult.
Five kinds of mirrors are actually five kinds of people, five ways to treat people and five world views. The key to being positive and outstanding is to write well; If you want to do something different, the key is to write clearly. I wonder if there are any candidates who write an explanatory science composition, which will also be full of fun. The key is to be familiar with it: rich in details and sufficient in opinions.
Example ①
Don't just have a pair of reading glasses.
Please pick up the mirror and look at the past-we want to know who we are.
Please pick up the telescope and look at the future-we need to know what we are going to do.
In our construction, how many historical relics have been overturned by the giant hand of bulldozers and swallowed up by a big circle of "demolition" How many nondescript "modern buildings" have been exploited in their ruins? Some of our builders only wear a pair of reading glasses, and what they can see clearly is just a little bit in front of them.
If one day, our mirror is broken, we will not know who we are, who we are and where we come from. Sad husband! The largest nation in the world has become the most lonely and disoriented nation.
Recently, the Nanjing subway was rerouted to protect the phoenix tree; The former residence of Liang Sicheng in Beijing survived the demolition because of the indignation of the citizens. This is very gratifying-we are increasingly aware of the importance of "mirrors". In the era of globalization, we must know who we are in order to face the world with face and courage! Guan Zhong is regarded as a disloyal minister in Confucian moral concept, but Confucius still praised him greatly. Why? He preserved Chinese civilization and saved us from being assimilated by barbarians. Now is not the time to defend China from foreigners, but the mirror of national culture is needed at any time. The premise for a big tree to flourish is that it has roots!
Use the mirror to know where you come from, and then, hold up the telescope and take a look at the future road.
London gives the world a solemn and simple impression of London, Paris gives the world a bright and beautiful impression of Paris, and new york gives the world a brand-new and modern impression of new york. Which city became a world famous city by imitating others? We should use binoculars to see the future, see the distance, and then go our own way!
In the early days of reform and opening up, some towns along the southeast coast demolished old houses and built Hong Kong-style villas. Later, it was demolished, changed to British, and then demolished to build a Spanish-style town. Is there a nation in the world so willing to destroy its own things and then take pains to imitate others?
Hold the telescope and look at the future. Only being yourself is the only way to the future. Imitation is only a primary learning stage, and innovation based on inheritance is what we should do.
After ten years of catastrophe, our cultural relics have become empty shelves, and the whole nation is very confused about culture. Then globalization caught us off guard. In this way, our mirrors and telescopes are too fragile and too heavy. But in any case, we should make good use of these two mirrors. The reason is simple-we should be ourselves and cut the waves in the inevitable wave of globalization. Take off your reading glasses, look back at history, and then look far ahead!
Example ②
Five mirrors strive for success
In order to select the best mirror country, one of the links is the debriefing of candidate mirrors.
Telescope waist is very long, with a dignified nod and salute, and clearly said, "This mirror has always been loyal to its duties, and I have never slacked off. If it weren't for today's occasion, I would never talk about my contribution. Because of my responsibility, our mirror country began to look at the world with wide eyes and realize that the outside world is wonderful and that the vast space is so vast. Although it is hard, I have no complaints. On Excellence, who am I? "
"Hum! Saying is better than singing. " Prism a face of disdain, "why don't you talk about prying into privacy and spreading rumors? Two days ago, you ... "
"Hello everyone!" There is a smooth belly in the mirror, and I say hello while walking. "I don't have any achievements, because I have a shortcoming and can only look back, so some mirrors say that I don't have lofty ideals, and some mirrors say that I have mild mental illness. However, if all of you, like me, often look back and reflect on yourself, you can avoid making mistakes in the future and maybe become a sacred mirror! Thank you, please support me! "
"Support you, well thought!" The microscope rounded the small eyes. "On that occasion, you deliberately got a small mud spot in your body, which made Mr. Telescope think he was pockmarked and almost went for plastic surgery. Telescope brother, have you forgotten? "
"I still remembered one day." Telescope to microscope side gather together gather together, "it's your turn. I support you. "
The chassis of the microscope was a little low, and finally it moved to the microphone: "Many mirrors don't like me, saying that I like to enlarge small problems into big problems. I'm sorry, some things will be very dangerous if I don't find them in time, such as that Bacillus. In addition, if you put the advantages under my nose, it will have unexpected effects. Just say everyone here, the telescope has a high field of vision, the mirror alarms, and the prism is the dresser of a better life ... "
"Thank you! Thank you! " Prism ran up and grabbed the microphone. "Being a beautician in life and making everyone happy is my greatest happiness. Red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple, think about it. Who has the ability to let the rainbow in the sky enter every corner of our lives? Count to five, five-four-three ... "
"Ha ha ha ... interesting, really interesting!" Haha Jing dragged her body from the inside out and staggered step by step. "If you want to pretend to be a beautiful life, I have made great contributions. Whether you are happy or not depends entirely on your mood. No matter what troubles you have, stand in front of me, your face is long, like a donkey; Short legs, like a toad; Bend like a snake. Is it funny? Ha ha, ha ha, ha ha, you Lian Xiao three times, everything is a cloud. When you are in a good mood, you will be full of energy when you are alive. It is pleasing to the eye. "
"Bah! Go and play! " Four spittle flew to the surface of the mirror at the same time.