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There is such a story in the 300-word essay 1. Winter is coming, and snowflakes like goose feathers are flying all over the sky.

In the early morning, I walked in the street and had nothing to do. The air is fresh, but I feel very cold.

A few days ago, the city ordered that small advertisements posted anywhere should be cleaned up. To this end, the city's cleaners have been dispatched to start a comprehensive cleaning of this beautiful city.

I watched the heavy snow flying all over the sky and many cleaners were busy.

Inadvertently, I found some leaflets and other papers posted on the opposite wall. An old lady cleaner tore up those small advertisements, which seemed difficult to tear up. The female cleaner brushes back and forth with a brush dipped in water, and then tears it down hard to get rid of the remaining substances bit by bit.

She braved the cold, her hands were red and swollen with cold, and she seriously insisted on tearing down several small advertisements in succession. I think her hands must be cold, but her heart is hot.

She went to another advertisement and raised her hand, but stopped in the air. Her hand seems to have stopped. I saw her lean closer to the wall and then shook her head slightly.

What happened? What happened? I'm surprised.

I saw her staring at it and left without knowing it.

Why not clear it? I looked at it carefully. It turned out that Zhang wanted to see you: XXX, female, 16 years old. ...

I understand everything. The snow is still falling, but I'm not cold. ...

300-word composition review 2 Today, in the second class, we had a composition review class. This course has benefited me a lot.

"Rinrin Bell ..." The class began and the teacher came in. We took the composition handed out at the end of class and put it on the table. "Look, class," Mr. Tang said as he turned on the projector. "This is the composition of the students who got full marks. Raise your hand after reading this part ... "Two minutes later, the composition was finished. Teacher Tang asked, "What sentences do you think are well written in Yu Honghui's composition? ..... Please ask Deng Xiaolong to answer. " Deng Xiaolong stood up shyly, thought it over carefully, and replied hesitantly: I think this sentence is good:' After Jun Chen was hit by a chalk head, he immediately ... wrote a composition in shame. "Teacher Tang listened and asked," What's the good news? That word? " "Fortunately, the words' shame' and' put away'." The students answered in unison. Teacher Tang listened and said, "That's right. These two words are descriptions of' expression' and' action'. Remember, when we write a composition and article about something, we should pay attention to the details, not the narrative. A good article needs not only the number of words, but also the immanence. Such an article is a good article ... "After listening to it, I secretly said: There are so many conditions for writing a good article! No wonder my composition only got 10. Now I know, that's because I have neither internal knowledge nor enough words. How can I get high marks?

I must read more composition books in the future and practice my writing level to be superior!

My family lives in the beautiful village of Qin Feng, where there are mountains, water, flowers and grass, but what I like best is the large orange forest in front of our village.

There is an orange forest in front of my house, with dense orange leaves, one covered with the other, and sunlight can only shine through the cracks in the branches and leaves. In spring, there are snow-white flowers on the orange tree. They are small and exquisite, crystal white, and dazzling against the green leaves. A gust of wind blew and all the flowers on the tree were dancing. Look at this beautiful flower, and look at that one. You see, how many little flowers, under the greeting of Sister Feng, can't wait to break free from the embrace of Mother Tree and travel outside!

In summer, small oranges the size of table tennis begin to grow on orange trees. They are dark green and look very cute. Oranges hide in the green leaves and refuse to come out, like shy little girls. They grow up gradually under the sunshine, emitting attractive fragrance, and people passing by here can't help but pick one to taste.

In autumn, oranges are ripe, and the oranges in Huang Chengcheng are covered with branches, like small lanterns hanging on the branches. They look great! Orange people are singing and dancing in the orange grove, cheering that the oranges are ripe! They are busy picking and transporting oranges with various tools, which is a bumper harvest scene!

The orange forest in my hometown is so beautiful. How can I not love?

Composition comment 300 words 4 Mom is our support. We need her when we are studying and when we are sick. Mom is a part of our life, and we don't need her all the time.

Once I was eating, I suddenly felt a headache, but my mother was not at home. So grandpa drove me to the hospital for examination. I have a fever of 39 degrees. Grandpa called my mother. My mother was attending a classmate party at that time. After receiving the phone call, she forgot the party and hurried to the hospital to see me. You care about me at night and stay with me.

Another time when I was doing my homework, I couldn't figure out a problem after thinking for a long time. My mother saw it and asked me which question I wouldn't. "This question" I said. After reading it, she said it was really difficult, so my mother thought about it all night. The next morning, I forgot the book and went to school. My mother saw that I didn't bring my notebook to school, so she quickly handed me the exercise book and told me how to do it. Don't leave until you finish writing.

Mom is our support. We need her when we are studying and when we are sick. Although our mother is not necessarily beautiful, she has a beautiful and kind heart.

300 words and 5 days a year, it is windy almost every day. People often call the winds of the four seasons by different names, including gentle wind, smoked wind, golden wind and north wind. Although they are all of the same kind, they will all die there, each with its own personality.

In spring, the spring breeze comes, people sow, the spring breeze blows and everything wakes up. Many seeds are slowly showing their heads, the grass is green and the fields are full of vitality.

In summer, Xia Feng appeared. It's sultry in summer, and you need wind friends to reduce your fever at this time. But Xia Feng put on airs at this time, like a little lazy pig, only knowing that it is normal to hide and sleep. Even if it comes out, it's empty talk and can't help us. Let's calm down.

Autumn, the autumn wind comes on stage. People in this season, the harvest is much more than before, golden trees are floating down, and people are harvesting their own crops. This is all because of the autumn wind.

In winter, the winter wind appears. The cold wind made people very afraid of him, and it was unbearable to roar. In the morning, people will stay indoors because they are afraid of the cold wind, and there are few people everywhere. There are more pedestrians at noon, because the winter wind is the mildest at that time. At night, the winter wind begins to rest again, urging people to go home.

This is the wind all year round, some people are happy, some people are worried, and this is the personality of each wind. However, as long as they exist, it is a unique beauty!

Teacher Zhang commented that you can grasp the characteristics of the four seasons monsoon, highlight the infinite charm of nature, have rich vocabulary, and have natural and fluent sentences, which is better!

Comment composition 300 words 6 comment composition at a young age, lack of experience! But don't underestimate me, be sure to be "silent, it will be a blockbuster". When you comment on the composition, you will be persuaded.

That day, my good friend Li Yi wrote a composition and she couldn't wait to share it with me. Of course, she also wants me, a famous little composition reviewer, to give her comments. As soon as I saw the title-"My little cousin drools", I was happy at once. This must be an interesting composition. As I expected, when I read one sentence: Just when I was at a loss, I saw my little cousin spit in her little hand and put it on the injured child, saying, "Our teacher said that saliva has anti-inflammatory effect!" So I confidently wrote at the back of the composition: this shows the psychological quality of this drooling cousin who is very calm in the face of things. It also depicts a girl who is flustered and doesn't know how to be a good careless girl. Li Yi picked up the composition and gave me a thumbs-up sign.

My deskmate also used the composition "The Story of a Moth" to let me play my specialty. Four subheadings and four different emotional changes make the silkworm break its cocoon and become a moth one day. The first stop was a trip to find mulberry leaves, and hard work and fatigue gathered together. Turning around at the second stop, a word awakened my passionate fighting spirit. The third stop ... the fourth stop, the silkworm will break out of its cocoon at this time, faithful wife. Described my love for silkworms, my urgent hope for silkworms, accurate words, accurate descriptions of attracting silkworms, finding leaves, toasting and moths.

With the help of the little witch with blue nose, the puppet has all the expressions of human beings. He is so happy!

On this day, he walked alone in the street, only to see little red fox coming head-on with his red backpack. The puppet thought, I want to see what little red fox plays. So the puppet hid in the crowd first, and after the little red fox left, he followed. After a while, Little Red Fox walked into a house in the forest. The puppet heard Little Red Fox say to his father outside the house, "Little Red Fox's father said," Son, we can't have something that isn't yours. Please return it to others quickly. "Little red fox whispered," Dad, I know I was wrong. I'll give it back to someone else now. "

Little red fox ran out of the door and saw the puppet. Little red fox ran to the puppet and said to him, "Puppet, I'm sorry, I shouldn't have lied to you with your backpack." I will give it back to you now! " "Puppet smiled and said," It doesn't matter, you can correct your mistake! " "

Since then, Little Red Fox has never stolen or cheated anything. He and the puppet became a pair of very good friends.

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What will happen to the next story? Teachers and classmates are looking forward to it.

If you want to ask who can get the reading chapter in our class? Then I will definitely recommend my good friend-Huang without thinking.

Huang deservedly won the reading chapter. No matter at school or at home, whenever he has time, he will find time to read. As soon as he picks up the book, he will concentrate on the artistic conception of the book, forget the time and forget the voices and laughter of the students around him. The title of "little book fan" is really the most appropriate for Huang.

One afternoon during the winter vacation, I passed by his house and saw Huang with a book in his hand, watching with rapt attention. I stopped and shouted, "Chen Yi Huang!" He didn't even respond. I shouted a few more times before he looked up at me and said shyly, "Sue, I'm sorry! I was so absorbed in reading that I really didn't hear it. Come in and sit down for a while. " I smiled and said, "Never mind, who made you addicted to books?" I have work to do, so I won't bother you. Goodbye! "

No pains, no gains. Because of his love of reading, Huang's knowledge is getting wider and wider, and his writing level is also improving day by day. Last semester, it was also rated as "Suzhou Reading Star".

This is the little book fan in our class-Huang.

Comments: The author shows the characteristics of Huang Ai's reading through a small example, and the description of characters' language is close to children's life.

Once upon a time, there was an emperor in the Tang Dynasty who attached great importance to his clothes. The whole palace is full of his wardrobe, and he has to change ten sets of clothes every day.

One day, two swindlers came to the palace and said to the emperor, "Your Highness, we can make you the most beautiful clothes in the world." The emperor was very happy, but he wanted to give us a lot of gold, silver and jewels. As soon as the liar's voice fell, the emperor immediately agreed. Tell them to do it quickly.

The liar went into the room where he was knitting clothes and pretended to be serious. The minister and the emperor saw it and were very satisfied. In this way, the emperor sent soldiers to check it every day, but the liar said, "If you want to see it, you need to pay gold coins!" " The emperor didn't refuse, but trusted him. He pays a box of gold coins every day. Day after day passed, and finally one day, the clothes were ready.

The liar helped the emperor take off his clothes and put on his own, but the clothes felt cold. A minister said, "Your Highness, your body is naked." The emperor immediately realized that he was naked and decided that he was a liar. While fooling clothes, the emperor immediately asked him to return the treasure to himself and dragged the liar to be beheaded. In this way, the liar's head was cut off and bright red blood flowed out.

This story tells us that we can't cheat money by cheating, which is called: getting something for nothing.