Proposal for Caring for the Yangtze River Dear people of the whole country:
Yangtze River-the world-famous Oriental Dragon, a great symbol of the Chinese nation!
The Yangtze River, our mother river, has nurtured many Chinese children with its sweet milk for millions of years!
The Yangtze River has nurtured Chinese civilization for thousands of years. However, with the rapid development of human material civilization, our home, the earth, is suffering great damage. The Yangtze River, the mother river, was also deeply hurt. Nature has also given us merciless punishment, and we have also paid a heavy price. People in the Yangtze River basin in particular will never forget the snowstorms and floods of 1985 and 1998, which have sounded the alarm for us: it is urgent to protect the ecological environment of the Yangtze River!
The Yangtze River originates from the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau, and its main source, Tuotuo, comes from Jianggendi Glacier, where thousands of trickles gather under the snowy mountains and blue sky and flow eastward. As the source of the Yangtze River, Tuotuo is more than 4600 meters above sea level, with snow-capped mountains and polar regions, which is fascinating. The source ecological environment plays a vital role in maintaining the ecological balance of the whole Yangtze River system, and its ecological status and effects have an important impact on the whole country. However, in recent years, soil erosion, land desertification and grassland degradation in the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau are very serious. Therefore, the source of the Yangtze River has become the most serious area of soil erosion in the whole basin. On June 5th, 1999, the State Environmental Protection Administration and other departments set up the Yangtze River Source Environmental Protection Monument and wrote the words "Yangtze River Source" for the Yangtze River Source Environmental Protection Monument. Nowadays, more and more people realize the importance and urgency of protecting the ecological environment of the source of the Yangtze River and the Yangtze River basin. This is the unshirkable responsibility of the people in the whole Yangtze River basin.
"Drink the same river, * * * protect the mother river". I propose to the people all over the country: "care about environmental protection, start from now, support environmental protection, and start from me." Protecting the Yangtze River means protecting our homeland on which we live and develop. Let the tide of economic development enter the green river, make our due contribution to the harmonious coexistence between man and nature, let the clear water and blue sky exist forever, and let the rivers, lakes and seas exist forever.
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"Travels on the Yangtze River" leaves fall like a waterfall, while I watch the long river roll forward. The Yangtze River in July is in the flood season. The original clear green river turned into muddy khaki, and the dead branches and rotten leaves washed down from the mountains floated on the water. According to the tour guide, the water level has risen by about ten meters these days!
I sat quietly on the platform at the bow. The water beat against the hull, and then "poured pearls of all sizes into a plate of jade", forming a beautiful splash, and several leaves stopped spinning. The wind, through my ears, suddenly hit me head-on, and I felt my whole face was going to be torn off. The mountains here are very strange. They are all made of rocks, and the vegetation is rooted in the rocks. What a tenacious and even incredible vitality! The green hills on both sides of the strait, either abrupt and rugged, or long and soft, are figuratively compared to various things. You see, the outline of that mountain peak looks like a girl's sleeping face, so gentle and quiet from her forehead to her chin. She also has a name-"Sleeping Beauty". On the left, a smooth stone peak towering into the sky. From this aspect, it looks like the great leader Chairman Mao sitting up, holding his head slightly, serious and grand; From there, it looks like an animal drinking water, very calm. On a flat stone wall, bright greens are mixed and arranged to form a "net" pattern, which is called "tight encirclement". How many houses are hidden in such a deep mountain! They are far apart and basically have no contact. The radio said that when the Three Gorges Dam was completed, a considerable number of residents moved to the city, and a few people stayed in the mountains. I envy this "isolated" life!
I sat quietly on the platform of the bow, listening to the wind and watching the scenery, as if I had integrated into such infinite beauty. ...
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This summer vacation, my mother took me to the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River. Because I was very excited at night and couldn't sleep, I naturally woke up with a panda eye in the morning, and I was so sleepy that I woke up when the kawakaze blew. After breakfast, pack your bags and get ready to get off the boat. Destination: Baidicheng, known as "Baidicheng".
The history of Baidicheng is much longer than that poem by Li Bai. It was built during the reign of Wang Mang at the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty, but in the Three Kingdoms period, it has become a battleground for military strategists. Apart from Li Bai's well-known poem, the most famous one in Baidicheng is the story of Liu Bei's entrust an orphan, which is why I first saw the entrust an orphan hall when I stepped into the gate of Baidicheng. The main hall, the clay sculpture and the affectionate tour guide attracted almost all my attention, and I almost ignored the small pond beside the Tuogu Temple. According to legend, it is in this pond that a white dragon rises, so Gongsun Shu calls himself Bai Di, and the city he built is also called Bai Di City, which is the source of Betty City.
There is another place that should not be forgotten under the city of Patty. If you touch 10 RMB, you can see the magnificent background behind it-Kuimen. Entering Kuimen, the real Three Gorges will arrive. But now that the water level in the Three Gorges has risen, the imposing landscape on the RMB is completely out of sight. As the water level rises, the river widens, and the mountain suddenly loses its sense of steepness. The legendary Three Gorges danger has lost its color from the beginning. After that, we looked at the scenic spots on both sides of the boat.
The cruise ship went upstream with silent ears and green eyes. On that day, the mountains and water were so harmonious, and we, on the contrary, were unexpected guests, disturbing the tranquility of this landscape. Standing on the deck, looking up at the sky and mountains, looking down at the small waves left by the cruise ship on the river, breathing the fresh air blown by the river wind, listening to the gentle sound of water flow, the irritability brought by the heat in early summer is swept away, and instead, I hope I can integrate into this scene. Not to mention the peaks of different shapes, magical legends, monkeys climbing on cliffs and mysterious hanging coffins, which are like small surprises scattered throughout the trip. Close your eyes and think about how exciting it is to sit in that artistic boat and enjoy the scenery of the Three Gorges, or to pick up fossils on the beach barefoot, or to float down all the way from the upstream in a boat.
The cruise ship stopped at Wushan Port for a day, and I don't think we want to miss the Wushan Goddess Peak, which is only 10 minutes away from Wushan County. Early the next morning, we sailed into Goddess Creek in a small boat.
On the boat, the guide has already spoken. In my opinion, all kinds of peaks and beautiful legends are nothing more than paving the way for the coming goddess peak. When the tour guide told us that she would come in a few minutes, everyone forgot to look at other scenery and waited for her quietly. The boat slowly turned a corner and bypassed a mountain peak, and she finally appeared. Goddess peak is named after a stone that looks like a fairy on the top of the mountain. Looking from a distance, the stone was quietly hidden behind a prominent big stone, facing the Yangtze River and watching day and night.
It seems that the visit to the Three Gorges Dam can only be described as a hurry. When I got on the bus to Yichang, the trip to the Three Gorges was over. I've never been on a boat for so long before, and this experience is quite new. The performance of the Three Gorges is really worth seeing. But this trip has filled me with more regrets. Whenever a tour guide introduces us to a scenic spot, he often adds a sentence at the back: Now everyone can't see it, because with the rise of the water level in the Three Gorges reservoir area, it has been submerged forever. At the same time, the water level rises, and some of the charm that the Three Gorges originally possessed no longer exists. The cruise ship has just passed quietly. Where will the Three Gorges, once in danger of the Yangtze River, go?
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Yangtze River, my mother Yangtze River, the name is familiar to everyone. In fact, this galloping dragon is the mother river of my hometown.
My hometown is Lidu, although unknown, but it is also a relatively large pier and ferry. Lidu is on the edge of the Yangtze River, and on the other side is the famous Fuling City. There is a big factory producing agricultural chemical fertilizer in front of the city, which emits a lot of smog every day. It rains all the year round, but the water in the Yangtze River is relatively calm. Lido is located in the middle reaches of the Yangtze River, with good vegetation, many animals and good ecological resources.
In the morning, there is a thin mist on the river, and the Yangtze River looks as mysterious as a veil. There are only a few fishing boats drifting on the wide river, and the fishermen on board cast nets from time to time to salvage their livelihood. The river is unusually calm, with only occasional waves. The river is so quiet that even fishermen can hear the net flapping on the water when they cast their nets. ......
At noon, the Yangtze River seems to have changed and the fog has dissipated. The sun shines on the river through the clouds, and the river shines like gold. Because the sun was high, the fish hid in the deep water, and the fishermen called it a day early. After the ship landed, they ran to the market with the fish. At noon, the Yangtze River is very lively. All kinds of ships run on the river, including cargo ships, motorboats, passenger ships, container ships and so on. The river waves from time to time, beating the rocks on the shore, and the waves seem to want to jump to the shore.
Dark clouds often appear at night. In a short time, raindrops the size of stones fell from the sky and slapped on the river. At this time, the river is gray, and a layer of blue fog will rise on the river, which looks so ethereal. ......
As far as I can remember, the Yangtze River is not always overcast and occasionally smiles. On sunny days, the velocity of the Yangtze River is not as fast as that on rainy days. Standing on the rocks by the Yangtze River, blowing a breeze, can not help but make people feel a little comfortable. I looked at the river, and it was very calm. Several people washed gauze and laid cloth by the river, and others moved big stones by the river. In retrospect, my grandfather and I used to swim in the river. When we were tired, we climbed ashore and sat on a stone to rest. Once, I went ashore and moved a big stone, and walked out with great swagger.
Now go to Lidu to see a brand-new Yangtze River. From watching river boats cross the river day by day to watching the Yangtze River Bridge built day by day; From watching small fishing boats drifting in the river to watching the huge waves splashed by big cargo ships. All these things often appear in my memory, so clearly. It has raised people on both sides of the strait for a long time. The happy time I spent on it, unforgettable, joyful and sad, is so clear. Give me a feeling of being kind forever. Let me say the Yangtze River loudly, my mother!
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People along the Yangtze River say that "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world". But I think the scenery of the Yangtze River is also good. My family lives near the Yangtze River. I grew up drinking the Yangtze River water, so I know the Yangtze River very well.
The Yangtze River can be long, with no head in the east and no tail in the west, like a long dragon crawling on the land of the motherland. The scenery of the Yangtze River is very beautiful. The turbulent river flows from west to east day and night. Ships, large and small, only whistle on the river. The green trees and red flowers on both sides of the strait, or the green hills and white clouds, really make people feel beautiful. If you are in Jiangyin section of the Yangtze River in my hometown, you will see many tall buildings rising from the ground, factories dotted with high-grade highways criss-crossing, and a scene of prosperity.
The Yangtze River is rich in products. There is also the most famous Three Seasons of the Yangtze River. They are saury, shad and puffer fish. "Sanxian" is fresh and delicious, and everyone loves it. There are many fish and shrimp in the Yangtze River, and it is said that there are millions of species of light. Early in the morning, as soon as the sun rose from the horizon, the fishermen set sail in their fishing boats. In the evening, the setting sun shines on the river, "half the river is rustling and half the river is red." Everything is so beautiful. The fishermen came back with whistles, and they could see that they were full of food. You see, baskets of fresh fish were carried to the dock and soon became a "fish mountain".
With the deepening of reform and opening up, there are more and more factories on both sides of the Yangtze River, because there are abundant water resources here, which are really inexhaustible. And backed by the Yangtze River, the transportation is convenient. The Yangtze River has also contributed a lot to the economic development of my hometown.
The Yangtze River sometimes loses its temper. It has a bad temper, it will burst its banks, flood farmland and wash down houses, but this is its punishment for human beings to destroy nature at will.
Yangtze River You are our mother river, I love you!
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I like the beautiful Three Gorges of the Yangtze River. "You come from the snow-capped mountains, and spring tides are your charm ..." I have heard my father sing this song since I was a child. My father said that he especially liked the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River because he worked in Yichang for two years to build the Three Gorges Dam when he was young! I also listened to the song of the Yangtze River sung by my father, which ignited my yearning for the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River. My desire grows stronger every day. Finally, in this summer vacation, my father realized my wish and took me to the beautiful Three Gorges of the Yangtze River.
The afternoon after we arrived in Yichang, we boarded a cruise ship bound for the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River. I don't know if I didn't see it, but I was shocked when I saw it. The ship was decorated like a five-star hotel. Even the room is like a hotel room, exactly the same. There is a separate bathroom, a TV, two beds, two sofas and a coffee table. Without my favorite computer, I just can't get online. Really annoying!
Unconsciously, the cruise ship has sailed to the Xiling Yangtze River Bridge, which has the reputation of "the third span of the Yangtze River". Xiling Bridge has a total span of more than 400 meters, but there are no piers. It is the first cable-stayed bridge built with the most advanced modern technology, and each bridge head is 185 meters high. I had just returned to the cabin from the deck, and a short time later, I heard the announcement on the radio that I would pass the five-level lock of the Three Gorges Dam. The lock of the Three Gorges Dam is a must-see, and it will be a great sight after impoundment! Dad and I came to the deck again. Wow! The decks of all the ships passing through the gate were crowded with people. But I never understood how the ship was hoisted, so I asked my father for advice and finally understood the principle of the lock. At this time, the gate behind the ship closed and began to store water. In just over ten minutes, the water level rose by nearly 20 meters. When the ship was lifted to the specified height, the gate opened, and the ship in the first lock slowly entered the next lock ... After more than two hours, we finally passed the fifth lock. After the ship rises about 80 meters, bid farewell to Xiling Gorge and set out upstream. I reluctantly left Xiling Gorge, because I only saw the original Three Gorges family yesterday!
On the third day, I walked out of the hut and saw the peaks around the canyon covered with green trees. Goddess peak is the most spectacular of the twelve peaks in Wushan. You can see the different faces of the goddess from different sides. At this moment, I remembered Mao Zedong's poem that my father told me: "The goddess wants peace, and this life is different." Our ship crossed Wuxia and arrived at Qutang Gorge. The tour guide introduced us to Kuimen, the first gate of the Yangtze River. There are many poems inscribed by famous people on the stone cliff in Kuimen. I can see them clearly with a telescope. Then we passed Bai Di and Fengdu Ghost Town successively. It's really like saying goodbye to Bai Di, Jiangling, thousands of miles away. Apes on both sides of the strait can't stop crying, and the canoe has passed Chung Shan Man!
On the fifth morning, when we opened our eyes, we arrived at the beautiful mountain city-Chongqing. On the dock, I think all the tall buildings here are built on the hillside. How strange! I turned to bid farewell to the Yangtze River and started my trip to the mountain city.
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At night by the Yangtze River, I had a dream that I could stand alone on the deck, blowing soft wind and listening to the majestic sound of the Yangtze River. Tonight, I finally have a chance.
At dusk, I came to the "Nanjing International Yacht Club" on the bank of the Yangtze River. You see, it turned out to be a luxury cruise ship. I crossed the trestle and boarded the Xuan ladder, and came to the deck to enjoy the rare scenery. At the foot of the endless river flows eastward, and the muddy river keeps beating against the embankment, making a "pa … pa …" sound; The majestic Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge in the distance lies like a giant dragon on the Yangtze River. Grandfather Sun in the horizon seems to be drunk and his face is red. Suddenly, he seemed to feel a little tired and hid behind Xia Yun's sister. Suddenly, Sister Xia Yun was dressed in gray and white, and in a blink of an eye, she was inlaid with all kinds of jewels and became sparkling and full of vitality.
As night falls, the sky looks like a thick layer of oil paint. The stars in the sky blinked and gathered around the moon sister, clamoring for the moon sister to tell stories ... Every household in the high-rise building on the shore turned on the lights, and a colorful and endless "light river" appeared in the street!
This beautiful scene will remain in my memory forever, forever. ...
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I took a lot of photos during my one-day trip to the Yangtze River since I was a child, and one of them is still fresh in my memory.
It was a day of summer vacation. I went to the Yangtze River with my sister, aunt and mother.
When we came to the Yangtze River, "Huh?" I was immediately attracted by the beautiful scene in front of me: the Yangtze River gushed and splashed beautiful waves from time to time, as if welcoming us! There are several sailboats sailing against the wind on the water. Looking at them, I couldn't help shouting, "Wow, the Yangtze River is really magnificent!" " "
After seeing the scenery, my aunt suggested, "Why don't we catch shrimp!" We replied with one voice: "Good! You show us first! " Aunt readily agreed, only to see her take off her shoes and go to the dam, then gently roll up her sleeves, bend down, put her hand into the water and concentrate on fishing. Hey, what luck! A little crab was caught by my aunt! My sister and I can't wait to see it. We learned the way of aunt and fished in the water. Hey, my hands are itchy. What happened? Oh, it's a shrimp teasing me! I am quick-witted and quick-witted, but when I pinch it, the shrimp becomes my captive, and my sister is not to be outdone. After a while, she also caught a shrimp. We jumped three feet high with excitement, and my sister and I became more and more crazy! Had a water fight! We both put our feet on the water, and then beat the water hard, and the waves splashed. We both hid behind our mother at once, and then we laughed. My mother saw it and turned to us and said, "Stop being naughty! Very dangerous, you know? "
How time flies! It's time for lunch I quickly took my mother's hand and begged, "mom, mom, please take a picture of me and my sister as a souvenir!" " "My mother readily agreed. The two of us sat on the dam, laughing more brightly than flowers, and only heard a click, and my mother took this happy scene.
I can't forget this photo!
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