Don't go in there. Second, reading more and reading widely is the premise to improve the writing level. To write a good article, you must read more books. "Reading is like a million volumes, and writing is like a god." "I am familiar with three Tang poems, I can't write poems and I can't sing." Mr. Lu Xun also advocates reading more books. "You must pick many flowers like bees, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be limited and boring. " We emphasize that we should not only read more, but also read selectively, and even more, understand the structural skills and language characteristics of the articles we read, and master the composition from them, so as to be more profound and diverse. Third, choosing materials skillfully and carefully is an accelerator to improve the writing level. The requirement of material selection is novelty. The so-called novelty means that the batch should choose something that ordinary people have never touched, or turn a blind eye to it with profound meaning. Once the author writes in a book, it will make people think deeply about exciting materials. The angle of material selection should be small, we should see the big picture from the small place and write the materials in everyone's eyes instead of what everyone wrote. To this end, we must compare, analyze and synthesize various materials in our minds, remove the rough and extract the fine, and transform and process them. Only in this way can the materials be novel. And this kind of positive thinking and repeated deliberation is very helpful to improve the level of composition. Fourth, practicing writing often is the key to improve the writing level. Want to enter the door of composition, make continuous progress, and more importantly, practice more. As the saying goes, "it is better to write one than to read ten articles." This tells the truth that writing practice produces true knowledge. After learning an article, we understand the structural methods and writing characteristics of the article, so we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice and make it our writing ability. In fact, we can all practice writing after learning the first text. However, fragment practice is a good way to practice writing, which takes a short time and achieves the purpose of practicing writing. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing. Keep a diary every day to lay a solid foundation for future writing. Fifth, diligent revision and repeated revision are the catalysts to improve the writing level. Revision is an essential step in composition and an effective measure to improve the quality of composition. The predecessors said well, "the article is never tired of changing." "The article has changed." Cao Xueqin wrote a dream of red mansions, read it for ten years, added and deleted it five times, and Tolstoy's War and Peace was revised seven times. Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is not a pity to read it at least twice after deciding and try to delete unnecessary words, sentences and paragraphs." It can be seen that article revision generally refers to the process from the first draft to the final draft. When repairing, we should do five things: whether the text is fluent, whether the theme is clear, whether the structure is compact and whether the language is beautiful. In short, "the article has changed." Generally speaking, the article is always getting better and better, so we should work hard on "revision".
2. How to write the composition I found? Please enter your answer.
People say, "cats and dogs are at odds." But I once found that cats and dogs also have feelings.
Once, I went to my grandmother's house to play. Grandma keeps a cat and a dog at home. I was free when grandma asked me to feed them both. I put the food in front of them and thought, "People say that cats and dogs have always been at odds and will definitely beat you to death." There will be a lot of fun now. " However, to my surprise, instead of fighting for food, they gave in to each other. You see, Sister Cat ate for a while, then walked aside and opened her mouth and said, "Brother Dog, eat!" " "(The dog) barked twice (just) (began) to eat. The dog ate for a while and then said, "Eat, Sister Cat!" " "I put another fish, and the cat ate half of it and gave it to the dog brother. After eating, they squatted on the ground to bask in the sun. You see, it's like a pair of good friends. (Things are uncertain. Even if they are sworn enemies from birth, they will become good friends after a long time. )
I found that cats and dogs can also be good friends! I overthrew the prejudice that cats and dogs are not in harmony and proved that my findings are correct. It seems that something is uncertain. Even if they are sworn enemies from birth, they will become good friends after a long time.
Isn't my discovery interesting?
On a sunny Sunday, I sat at home and painted.
Suddenly, there was a buzzing sound in my ears. What a nuisance! I ignored it. I'm still drawing. However, the "buzzing" sound continues. After a while, I found my feet itchy. Look down, alas! My foot was bitten by a mosquito with a red envelope! I was very angry, so I decided to kill this smelly mosquito that bit me. I looked everywhere for the trace of this smelly mosquito. After a long time, I haven't found it yet. I was about to give up when I suddenly found a black spot on the wall and went to have a look.
Yo-so that smelly mosquito is resting on the wall! I slowly approached the wall and saw that the mosquito did not move, so I patted the mosquito. Mosquitoes are motionless, and the only son is covered in blood, which is really a lot! Just as I was looking at my "trophy" proudly, suddenly, I had a question in my heart: Why do mosquitoes suck blood? I thought about it for a long time, but I still couldn't figure it out, so I had to take out my precious book "100,000 Why". I read the catalogue carefully and finally found the answer to this question.
The original answer is very simple-in fact, mosquitoes generally only eat leaf juice and tree juice, but some female mosquitoes have "babies" in their bellies and need to suck blood to supplement their nutrition. Just like people, people need nutrients to supplement their nutrition when they have children in their bellies. Then, the answer to this question is the truth!
There is a proverb that says well, "If you want to see the truth, pay attention everywhere." As long as we observe and find problems in life, new knowledge will be born. Therefore, I advise you to observe life and find problems, then your life will be more interesting.
I remember when I was six years old, I saw many small black creatures swimming freely in the water with a tiny tail behind me, so I caught a dozen of them and put them in a water bottle, ready to take them home to my mother.
I jumped up and down with a water bottle and said excitedly to my mother, "Mom, I caught an unknown black object." "What unknown objects! Isn't it just a dozen tadpoles If you want to raise it at home, raise it! " Hearing this, I danced and put the bottle in the middle of the table and watched intently.
After a few days, I found that tadpoles have two front feet under their heads, which can move forward quickly in the water. Sometimes two or three tadpoles are running in the competition! That's funny! However, a few days later, two hind legs also grew in front of the tadpole's tail. When it got up, it gave a hard push on its hind legs and a wave of its front feet, which was surprisingly fast. It jumped from here to there before it could react. After about 20 days, the tadpole's tail disappeared and its body gradually became huge. It slowly changed from black to brown, and it was still a little frog at random! As the days passed, the little frog grew bigger and bigger, and finally became a big frog. My thick thighs and agile jumping ability made me dumbfounded when I was young. .
I found that it took me forty days to evolve from a small tadpole to a big frog. At that time, I couldn't believe it. I could find that I could evolve from tadpole to frog through my own observation! Thank you for your adoption!
3. How to write the composition I found? I found the beauty in life, which is a beautiful word in people's hearts.
There is beauty everywhere in life, external beauty and internal beauty. That time, I really realized the meaning of "beauty" and left a deep impression on me ... I remember it was a spring day, and I went to the park to play.
The scenery in the park is beautiful. The water in the stream is crystal clear, and fish swim around in the water. The willows by the river have sprouted new buds, and the grass has emerged from the soil, stretched itself, and may not wake up ... there are vibrant scenes everywhere! Suddenly, my eyes were attracted by a person.
I saw her of medium height, chubby, with a ponytail, small eyes and a big mouth, about seven or eight years old. She skates like me, but she skates very slowly.
At this time, an old woman who looks over 70 years old is chasing her grandson. Her grandson is very naughty and runs around among the skating crowd. His grandmother is in hot pursuit. Suddenly, a boy who is good at skating slipped by. I quickly closed my eyes, because the old woman was right in front of the boy, and I thought: There will be a tragedy soon.
But after a while, I opened my eyes, but nothing happened to my grandmother. It was the ugly girl who was injured. I asked the person next to me what was going on. It turned out that the girl didn't want to see the old woman get hurt, so she rushed to her side and her arm was bleeding.
I hurried to help my little sister get up, but my little sister hurried to the old lady and asked, "Are you all right?" "I'm fine, thanks." "You're welcome. This is what I should do. Teachers often say that we should respect the old and love the young. "
Say that finish, and went away. I never saw her again. Although she is ugly, her heart is beautiful, just like the scenery in the park.
I found that I am good at observing how to cultivate students' observation ability. I often hear some middle school students say, "I'm afraid of writing, and I have a headache when I start writing." I always feel that there is nothing to write. "
Some simply said, "I really don't know what to write and where to start." Some students handed in their compositions, but when they read them carefully, they just perfunctory a few words at the beginning and then ended hastily.
The content is vague and general, and I don't know what to say. In view of these situations, I often encourage students to write with a pen and write when they can speak.
If you want to have something to say, you should pay attention to the people and things around you and avoid making things up behind closed doors. Due to the lack of observation and analysis of things around me, I feel that I have nothing to say and can't write.
What is observation? The so-called observation is to see with your eyes. We should "observe from a distance" and "observe from a distance", pay attention to everything, always pay attention to it, and form a habit.
Mo Bosang, a French writer who is known as the king of short stories in the world, once worshipped Flaubert, a famous writer at that time. One day, he sat in his room and told Flaubert his own story.
Flaubert said, "I advise you not to be busy writing these empty things." You ride a bike outside every day and record everything you see on the road accurately and carefully. " So Mo Bosang realized that Flaubert had taught him the basic skills of observing life with his eyes, knowing life and practicing observation.
From then on, he spent a year or so, went out to observe every day, and finally wrote the novel "Point to Heart" and became a world-famous novelist. Later, when summing up his own creative experience, Mo Bosang said, "Observe what you want to express for a long time, so as to find the features that others have not found and written.
In everything, there are undiscovered things ... "Mr. Lu Xun once said:" We should pay attention to all kinds of things, read more books, and write without seeing anything. "This is a summary of Lu Xun's long-term creative experience.
It can be seen that if you want to write a good article, you must pay attention to observing things and improve your observation ability. But how can we attract students' attention to the things around them? Here I want to talk about two points: to stimulate students' interest in observation. Psychologists believe that there is no learning without motivation, and motivation is the premise of learning.
For composition teaching, teachers should be good at stimulating students' writing desire, mobilizing students' writing enthusiasm and changing passivity into initiative. High school students have a strong ability to distinguish right from wrong, and they often have a strong desire to express themselves.
Teachers should firmly grasp this desire and guide them to write excellent articles. The syllabus has clear provisions on the composition teaching of all grades, which requires a planned and step-by-step implementation in the classroom.
Classroom composition, specifically, students are constrained by various aspects, which often appears passive, but it is essential. To this end, I have always adopted a "two-pronged" approach in composition teaching: on the one hand, I arrange necessary compositions in class, on the other hand, I arrange a certain amount of extracurricular writing exercises.
Last year, for example, I took over two classes in Grade One. In addition to the two-week big composition, I require each student to write at least one short article every week, make random checks every other week and make comments. Writing a composition is to give students full freedom: freedom of material selection, freedom of proposition, freedom of style and freedom of words.
Only write about the people or things you are most familiar with, interested in and impressed by. It can be discussed, lyrical, narrative and arbitrary.
It is not an exaggeration to spread thousands of words; It's not too few to drop dozens of words: long words, short words, write as much as you want, and stop at will. This unconsciously cultivates students' interest and ability to observe things.
The content they wrote was relatively simple at first, and gradually, their observation horizons were constantly expanding, and they were far away from the trivial things around them, writing about society and writing about life. The content is getting richer and richer: class life and turmoil, family joys and sorrows, social experiences, etc., really big to the universe, small to the self.
A student often observes the campus carefully, from scenery to people, from people to things, and writes one, two or three articles on campus life in succession ... In the composition, I see the students' writing desire and get the students' observation interest caused by their creative enthusiasm. Not only is there something to write, but it is also more real and closer to life.
Over the past year or so, remarkable results have been achieved. Many students talked about the experience of writing a composition and agreed that the requirement of writing a composition prompted them to observe and think.
Some said, "I have to keep my eyes open every day and look for it all my life." Some said, "Because of the need to write a composition, I have been observing and listening at home, in the car and at school ..." Students in both classes have completed the task of writing three compositions a week, and because of their interest in things around them, many people consciously write more and develop the habit of keeping a diary.
At the same time, in the classroom composition teaching, I also consciously stimulate students' interest in observation. For example, I arranged an essay "Remembering one of the most familiar classmates in this class", asking everyone to take a classmate in the class as the description object, grasp its appearance characteristics to describe and portray it, and see who observes it carefully and writes like it.
Moreover, most students can grasp the characteristics of the characters written in the residence. For another example, after I finished making cloisonne, I arranged an essay on "Making * * Cuisine" to arouse students' interest in observation.
As a result, students' interest was mobilized and their creative enthusiasm was stimulated, and they wrote one practical excellent work after another. In short, in order for students to write good articles, we must first practice the basic skills of observation.
The method of guiding students to observe not only stimulates students' interest in observation, but also guides students how to observe and how to observe. I once told a story to my students: a jeweler in ancient Persia was good at doing business. When he sells gold and silver jewelry, he often stares at customers and his business is very prosperous.
Others wanted to explore the mystery, but he kept his mouth shut until his death. He taught this trick to his only son: "Stare at each other's eyes, no, to be precise, stare at each other's pupils, which will not lie." If the sparkle of a diamond ring expands the pupil of the other person, you can boldly increase the original price by 30% or more; If a necklace can't make the other person's pupil wide open, you can change it immediately ... In short, stare at the other person's pupil! " Of course, the business class taught by this jeweler is not what we want.
5. Write a composition "I found it", or write what you found. Can be written in life and study. In fact, I found a break and got together with several classmates to discuss "what is earthworm food?" On this topic, all the students replied in unison: "The food of earthworms is of course soil!" " "I feel a little strange: there is no basis for this. Just because earthworms live in the soil, do they blindly talk about eating the soil? In order to get more accurate and well-founded answers, I studied the methods taught by Teacher Zhu and made a small experiment by myself. First of all, I found a box with a cover, in which three kinds of soil were put: loess, black soil and soil with more decaying substances. Every piece of soil is as thick as possible, the same length and width, and the same distance. Then, I dug ten earthworms from the garden. Then, I casually threw ten earthworms into the box, covered it, and waited by the box. After waiting for 1 or 2 minutes, I couldn't wait to open the lid. But the scene in front of me disappointed me. Ten earthworms were curled up and motionless. I have to cover it again. In order to invent a thing or verify a conclusion, scientists often have to go through countless failures and countless long waits, and I have only waited for such a little time, and I am impatient. I can't help but feel ashamed and my face is hot at the thought of this. I stood up, patted my sore leg with my hand and continued to wait patiently. Ten minutes passed, and I opened the lid carefully. As a result, I found that there is. It turns out that earthworm's food is rotten material in the soil! However, in order to verify the accuracy of this experiment, I did the same experiment again, only this time when I released earthworms, I consciously buried them in the soil with more decaying substances. I waited for about twenty minutes. After opening the lid, I found that ten earthworms were all crowded in the soil with more decaying substances and lived comfortably. Seeing this scene, I couldn't help raising my arms and shouting, "I found the answer!" I found the answer! "However, to be on the safe side, I went through the book again, and I wanted to find the correct answer from the book. Finally, I learned the correct explanation in an encyclopedia of animals: "earthworm's food is rotting plants in the soil." "At this moment, it suddenly occurred to me that in autumn, I found that earthworms have the habit of dragging fallen leaves back to their holes. The reason is the same. Through this experiment, I not only found earthworms. At the same time, I also understand a truth: you can't blindly listen to what others say, so the answer you get is one-sided or even wrong. It is necessary to judge, observe and analyze carefully before drawing a conclusion. This is like comparing the experience and achievements of predecessors or others to a giant, and we stand on the shoulders of giants to see the world. But even this would not be enough If you want to win the crown of the giant's head, you need to work harder to climb up.
6. How to write the composition "I found it" 1 I found the wonderful use of tea. One day, when I was peeling an apple, I accidentally cut my finger and blood suddenly poured out.
I paused and saw a cup of tea on the coffee table, so I put my finger in it willy-nilly. Unexpectedly, the bleeding stopped in a short time, and the wound seemed to be less painful.
I thought it was psychological and didn't take it seriously. Then once, I fell on the balcony.
The skin of the palm was scraped. I held the psychology of giving it a try and dipped my palm in tea again.
Strangely, the bleeding stopped again! I told my classmates about it, and they also began to use tea to treat small bleeding wounds. They also told me that the stronger the tea, the better the effect.
We were all curious about this effect of tea and asked the teacher. The teacher instructed us to find information.
It turns out that tea contains a lot of aminophylline, which can temporarily anesthetize nerve endings, so that local pain nerves in the human body can sleep for a short time and feel no pain. Alkali can also sterilize, prevent wound infection, dissolve surface or subcutaneous deposits, make the injured muscles of the wound fully contact, maintain muscle growth and accelerate wound healing.
If the temperature of tea is low, it will also shrink the capillaries of the wound, which will seal the wound and stop bleeding. Don't underestimate a small cup of tea, it also has such wonderful use! I found a way to recite memories. Oh, my God! Unexpectedly, unexpectedly, I was so clever that I discovered such a big secret.
Ha ha ha ~ ~ ~ ~ I can't help crying, I really found the big secret! ! Don't go away, you keep reading.
In the fifth grade, my father asked me to recite 5 poems, 20 idioms and a famous article every week.
I am one of the best slackers in my class, and I don't want to recite! But when I saw dad's eyes ~ ~ ~ Oh, shit! I'm still doomed. I study very hard every day. How can I find time to recite things? On Sunday, my father will test me.
What are we doing? What are we doing? I'm like an ant on hot bricks-I'm in a hurry. Later, in the process of memorizing, I gradually discovered a big secret.
Dad made me carry so many things, I'm exhausted! ! I won't do it! I thought: this must be a smart move. So I wrote down the method and effect of reciting every week.
After the comparison, the secret showed its tail. Comparatively speaking, there is a method that saves time and does not fade after a period of time, and the effect is also good.
The method is: read what you have recited three times on Monday and recite it. Watch it twice on Tuesday.
Don't recite it on Wednesday, don't recite it on Thursday, watch it on Friday, skim it on Saturday and watch it on Sunday. On Sunday night, it will naturally make noise! In order to verify this method, I tried it again and the result was very good.
I tried other methods: for example, reciting every day, but it was a waste of time and the effect was not good. For example, recite it every other day and always forget it.
The experiment proved that the method I found was effective and didn't waste my time. With this discovery, I am no longer afraid of my father asking me to move things.
Now, my father has lightened my burden. I am very happy.
However, I still can't forget this little discovery. Every time I think that this discovery is discovered by my own practice, I am very happy.
How blue it is! The clouds are so white! Tomorrow, I will publish a book and tell the world what I found. Ha ha ha ~ ~ ~ ~.
7. How did I find a way to write 500 words? I found a way to remove the broken line.
At noon today, I looked through my previous books and found some information. After opening the books, I found that many books were wrinkled and very ugly. This book is not only wrinkled at the corners, but also has broken lines on some pages. After I checked the information, I smoothed out the wrinkles bit by bit by hand, but some places still left broken lines.
Mother came into my room with a glass of water in her hand. Her foot slipped and the water and cup in her hand almost fell to the ground. Unfortunately, some water spilled on the open book and wetted the pages. Mother showed a guilty look: "I'm sorry." I frowned and said, "Forget it." As he spoke, he wiped the water drops from the book with his hand. Suddenly, I was pleasantly surprised to find that when I rubbed the broken line with my hand, the broken line became shallow. I was surprised to stare big eyes and press the shallow fold line. The fold line disappeared and the page became brand-new.
I removed the other broken lines in the same way. As I expected, I moistened the broken lines with water a little and then smoothed them out. I can really get rid of the disconnection. After a while, the books were all dry, and the old and wrinkled books became the same again.
Through this accidental attempt, I found a way to remove the disconnection. There is learning everywhere in life. As long as you observe and try with your heart, you can learn a lot.
8. How to write my discovery composition? My discovery "Ah-I found a secret!" Listen, you must want to know what secret I found. Don't worry, let me tell you slowly.
After dinner that day, I washed my hands in the bathroom. Suddenly, I glanced at the mop in the corner. What I saw surprised me very much-there was a ball at the junction of the stick and the mop cloth.
I quickly dried my hands, squatted down beside the mop and observed carefully, and gently plucked the ball with my hand. Ah, there is a thin stem under that ball.
I looked at it carefully. "ah!" I can't help screaming. The so-called "ball" is a small mushroom, and there is a small mushroom on the mop! I can't believe my eyes. I took a closer look.
That's really a small mushroom, shorter than my little finger. It may be because the thin stem can't bear the pressure of the mushroom head and has been covered by bending.
If you don't dial it by hand, it is hard to find that it is a mushroom. Like a furry ball lying on a mop. So cute! After confirmation, I hurried out to publicize to the whole family: "important news, important news, mushrooms grow on the mop at home!" " "Just say that finish, my parents looked at me with strange eyes.
I told them everything I saw just now and dragged them to the bathroom to see the "magic" mop with mushrooms. Mom and dad didn't just talk after reading it.
Mom said, "Oh, nothing. It has increased several times. You just don't know. " Suddenly, my father asked me, "Tingting, do you know why mushrooms grow on mops?" Now you have me.
I'll check east and west right away. Finally, I found it in "100,000 Why" and replied: "It may be because mushrooms are grown by a microorganism, which will grow into mushrooms under appropriate conditions.
Mop, often wet, placed in a dark corner, the bottom of the stick will rot, which is in line with the growth conditions of microorganisms, so mushrooms will grow at the junction of the stick and the cloth! This is the same reason that mushrooms grow on the grass after rain. "With these words, I breathed a long sigh of relief and looked at my father with expectant eyes.
Q: "Am I right?" Dad nodded approvingly at me and said, "Yes!" Also increased a lot of knowledge. I am so happy, because I found the secret of mushrooms growing on the mop and understood the truth.
In fact, science is around you and me. As long as you carefully observe and think positively, you will certainly find many interesting things and taste the joy and happiness of discovery.
9. "I find that learning is everywhere in my life.
One day after dinner, I leaned back on the sofa and watched cartoons. My father came over and patted me on the shoulder: "Dear son, help my father wash the ashtray." I got up and looked, wow, what a dirty ashtray, and there were some soaked cigarette butts floating on the water. Picking up the ashtray, a choking smell of smoke stung my nostrils. "Dad, why do you always pour water into the ashtray and make it so dirty?" Dad smiled shyly at me. I angrily took the ashtray to the balcony and poured the water from the ashtray into the chrysanthemum basin.
The next day, I happened to find that the little black aphid on the chrysanthemum was missing. A closer look shows that all the aphids are dead, and the small body is lying in the flowerpot. How did this happen? Is it because I fell down? ...
To prove this idea, as soon as I got home in the afternoon, I put down my schoolbag and took the initiative to help my father clean the ashtray. Like yesterday, I poured the water from the ashtray on a flower with aphids, and then I watched the reaction of aphids intently. At first, the aphid didn't do anything. After a while, they got a little fidgety and started crawling around on the flower branches. A few hours later, I found that some aphids died on the branches and leaves, and some died in flowerpots. It turns out that the water soaked from cigarette butts is actually a "good medicine" for treating aphids. I danced with joy for this.
Now if the flowers at home have aphids, I will soak some cigarette butts and spray them with water to ensure that the medicine will not die. This unexpected discovery made me understand that there is knowledge everywhere in life. As long as you observe with your heart, knowledge is around you.