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Composition of medical records
In daily life or work and study, everyone is familiar with composition. Composition is a transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from a compressed and concise language that one can understand to a developed and standardized grammatical structure that others can understand. What kind of composition can be called an excellent composition? The following are my medical notes, welcome to share.

1 on that day, the earth felt dizzy, its center of gravity was unstable and it had no strength at all. He hurried to the Star Hospital.

As soon as the earth arrived at the door, it felt very dizzy and suddenly fainted on the ground. An eagle-eyed nurse saw him and shouted, "Ah! Isn't that the earth? How did he fall to the ground! " A group of nurses rushed over and took him to the emergency room. The attending doctor carefully examined the earth's body, locked his brow more and more tightly, and sighed: "Alas! It's not that I don't want to cure, it's true ... hey! " There is no way, the attending doctor has to write a lot of letters and send them to famous doctors on various planets by flying pigeons at the speed of interstellar light.

As the chief of the universe who specializes in incurable diseases, of course I received this letter:

Dear Dr. Wang,

Hello! Now there is a very urgent matter, please come and help: the earth is ill, very ill, and there are phenomena such as water shortage and resource depletion on the earth, and the form is not optimistic. Please come as soon as you receive the letter.

Jixing hospital

After reading this letter, I was very anxious and came to the star hospital. When I saw Mother Earth dying, I felt a twinge of heartache, thinking: It must be human beings on the earth who polluted the environment and cut down trees indiscriminately, which made the earth look like this.

Other doctors also talked about it, and some said, "It must be a bad thing done by human beings!" Some said: "The earth has made the best contribution to mankind, but human beings do not cherish it, but wantonly destroy it. It is really heartless!" "

Everyone has discussed it for a long time, and they all think that the disease of the earth is formed for a long time, and it will not be cured for a while, and they don't know what to do. I think that the better the bell is, the better the person who tied it, so I wrote a letter to mankind.

Dear human:

Hello! Do you know how much damage it has done to Mother Earth by cutting down trees and wasting water resources? Please don't do this again. You must remember that protecting and caring for the earth means protecting your own life.

Dr. Wang

The letter has been sent out, and now I only hope that human beings can get rid of those bad habits and make Mother Earth in danger get better soon.

Not long ago, my mother and I went to Qingdao Affiliated Hospital to see a doctor. This trip can be described as a "tragedy." Let me tell you slowly.

traffic jam

After five o'clock in the morning, we arrived in Jiaozhou. Because my father has to go to work, I will accompany my mother and my sister will drive us to Qingdao. Just after getting off the expressway, Qingdao showed its magnificent features without reservation: towering skyscrapers, villas near the sea and bustling city streets. Of course, there are also traffic jams. It took us more than two hours to be so close to the hospital! The journey to learn from the west is long! Traffic jams are dragons, all over the road, except cars. Some people think it's too crowded, so they park there and walk to work. It doesn't matter where the police are, they can only look at Chehai and sigh! If you look down from above, it must be spectacular!

see a doctor

Finally went to the hospital to write a composition, hum! The scenery in the hospital is really unique, and there are people everywhere, just like what is said in the sketch is a sea of people. There are all kinds of people in the sea: nurses, doctors, patients and people who take care of patients ... I can't help admiring the spectacular scene, but the hospital is not a good place after all: the noisy crowd and strange smell make me dizzy. However, I still accompanied my mother through the crowd, registering, queuing, waiting, and seeing a doctor from department to department ... The examination results showed that my mother's illness was benign and she could recover only with a minor operation. Rest assured! I like a bird out of the cage, rushed out of the hospital door, just feel the outside world is so beautiful! Enjoy the fresh air. Swear never to go to the hospital again.

realize

Illness is the devil. Students should never get sick. It tastes bad to be sick! For the sake of family and ourselves, we should constantly strengthen physical exercise, eat reasonably, pay attention to hygiene and be a healthy person!

I am the doctor "Moon", and I recently saw that the earth is very different from before: the delicate skin has become rough before; Its voice was so clear before; Now my voice is hoarse; Once so young and beautiful, now she seems to be terminally ill.

One day, when I was working, I only heard groans coming from the corridor. "Ouch, ouch ..." I ran out and saw the earth, clutching my stomach painfully. I rushed over and helped it into the studio.

The earth said with tears, "Moon! Do you know that?/You know what? Do you know that?/You know what? These days, I always have a pain, a stomachache and my ears have been buzzing ... My skin is swollen here and there, and it's black and blue ... "

"oh! I see! It seems that you are still very ill! " I sigh.

"Dr Moon, please tell me what's wrong with me. The composition makes me miserable! " The earth held my hand nervously.

"Your disease ... is a" terminal disease ".You are terminally ill, and there is nothing I can do. But you still have a glimmer of hope. Your career is caused by human beings. Only when human beings correct the disadvantages caused to you before will your illness get better. " I shook my head first, and then I spoke seriously.

"oh! I see, thank you, Dr. Moon. " The earth thanked Dr. Moon, turned and walked out of the infirmary, saying, "Man! Wake up from the fog, or the earth where you live, me! Almost unstoppable! " The earth groaned again, and then dragged her heavy body home. Yeah! Our earth is both lovely and fragile. Protect the earth from now on: know how to cherish resources, save water resources and mineral resources, because these things are only used once and can never be owned.

The one-day trip to see a doctor is really a long story, which makes me shudder in retrospect.

I suddenly felt a cramp in my stomach in the morning, and my mother decided to take me to see a doctor without saying anything. I struggled to get dressed and was helped to the side of the road by my mother like an old man. Who knows that there are unexpected events in the sky? Just now, the cloudless blue sky in Wan Li suddenly dropped raindrops the size of beans, scratching, and raindrops kept falling like short beads. Oh, my God, what's wrong with you? It is bound to rain at this time.

The bus couldn't wait any longer, and my mother began to attract rough cars. But the rough cars in this city have disappeared, as if they had evaporated in an instant. In the past, when we crossed the road after school, we were dazzled by the rough cars coming and going, but today ... damn it! It is raining harder and harder, and I am shivering with cold. Finally, a rough car came in the distance, and my mother waved at once, so we tried our best to get on the bus. Looking at the stormy weather outside the window, my mother frowned.

The car arrived at its destination. Mother took my hand and walked to the hospital. When I went up the stairs, my mind was in a daze and I was about to fall into hell. One tripped. My mother heard the noise, helped me up, and then said angrily, "It's really annoying. The confused driver dragged us to this hospital. We are going to the Children's Hospital! " "I heard the sound of thunder and almost fainted. So, I staggered forward with my legs tied like a shot put. ...

It never rains but it pours. My mother accidentally slipped while soliciting customers in the rain. I rushed over. "Now, we are both going to see a doctor!" "Mom tease yourself. I tried to squeeze out a smile. ...

After yesterday's trip to see a doctor, I really realized how happy I am to have a healthy body!

One day, Mother Earth suddenly felt weak and her smooth skin began to turn yellow. So, Mother Earth came to Planet Q and found the experienced Dr. V.

In the space clinic, Dr. V on planet Q is very famous, so planet Q is world-famous. I saw that Dr. V took out the receiver, listened to Mother Earth's heart, lungs and important organs in her body, and said to Mother Earth, "Mother Earth, you are weak. If you don't treat it, your life will be in danger."

"Then cure it quickly!" Mother Earth said anxiously. Dr. V took Mother Earth to the blood drawing room. Nurse b quickly took out cotton and needles. Take out the blood of Mother Earth and look, "Ah! No, Mother Earth's blood is all black. "

Mother Earth asked Dr. V, "Doctor, how did my illness come about?"

The doctor replied, "This disease is caused by your child."

"Impossible, I love my children so much, how can they hurt me?"

"How is that possible? You see, they will do anything for money and jewels! Now every household buys a car, and every time it starts, the tail gas behind the car keeps flowing. Some factories also discharge sewage into streams and rivers. You know, that's your blood. In order to sell money, humans cut down trees, plant flowers and pick them indiscriminately. "

"What should I do?" Mother earth asked.

I'll prescribe some medicine for you these days. This is a gas. So ... Mother Earth spilled gas on the earth. People immediately understood the importance of protecting the environment.

Since then, the earth has become beautiful again, and Mother Earth has become beautiful again. Smooth skin, bright eyes and neat hands and feet.

On this day, a patient came to the cosmic hospital-Earth.

The earth first came to dermatology. Dr. Jupiter sighed and said, "Earth, the forest on your body is decreasing day by day because of excessive deforestation. There are not many trees left now, and many former oases have now become deserts. " Dr. Mercury next to you also said, "The river that was once crystal clear on your body is now turbid, and there are a lot of greasy splashes and a lot of white garbage floating on the surface. Fish and shrimp also died under the pollution of toxic wastewater discharged from factories. " The earth is worried. "If I continue like this, will I be completely destroyed?" Uranus then said to the earth, "the ozone layer on your body has been destroyed by people, and sometimes it rains acid rain." The earth was completely in a hurry, and hurriedly asked for a remedy. These doctors said in unison, "protect and govern."

The earth came to the internal medicine department with a heavy heart. After examining the earth's body, Dr. Venus said, "There are not many minerals in your body. Due to a large number of human excavations, there is now a shortage. "

"What should I do?" The earth asked anxiously.

"No mining!"

The earth is even more worried when it sees that it is really sick. At this time, Dean Sun came to the earth and said, "Don't worry, although the environment has been destroyed by human beings now, as long as human beings care for and protect the environment from now on, your illness can still be cured." You can also return to your previous health. "

"I hope that human beings can protect the environment, care for the environment and treat their living space well."

Because the weather was cold and hot, I caught a cold immediately because I was in poor health. I kept coughing in the morning and evening, and my mother decided to take me to the hospital.

As soon as I entered the hospital, a pungent smell of medicine came to my face. I took three steps back and shook my head at my mother, but my "cruel" mother dragged me into the hospital. "Lin Yinjiao!" Cried the doctor. I was so scared that my legs were weak that I didn't listen to me. I finally moved to the doctor. The doctor listened to me left and right, and "tortured" me for a long time. Then he asked my mother, "How long has this child been coughing?" "A week." I can hear you. Mom is a little nervous, too. "I suggest you take her for an X-ray." "What?" My mother and I blurted it out at the same time. "It's not that bad, is it?" Mom asked anxiously, and her brow wrinkled into the word "Sichuan". "I still suggest you take her to take an X-ray. I have been coughing for a week, but I still haven't recovered. I'm afraid she has pneumonia, so I'd better take an X-ray. "

My mother has been silent since the doctor suggested taking an X-ray. Along the way, she held my hand tightly for fear of losing me. After taking the X-ray, I found my mother wandering at the door. "It takes 30 minutes to get the report. Let's sit over there and wait! " Mother tried to make her tone cheerful, but she couldn't hide her worries. My mother hugged me tightly and waited for a long time. "Lin Yinjiao!" Not only did the nurse's voice break the silence, but the mother's heartbeat was also obviously accelerated, and the heartbeat with a bang was particularly clear.

My mother has a report in her hand and urges me to see a doctor. "how about it? Is she all right? " Mother asked eagerly. "There is nothing wrong with this child, just bronchitis, not pneumonia." "oh! Thank you bodhisattva. I said nothing, which really scared me half to death. " Mom smiled happily, and I was relieved.

This is my medical record, which can be described in four words: a false alarm. Do you think so?

Recently, rhinitis has been committed again. Take a big bag of paper towels to school every day for backup. Besides, I've lost my voice recently. It's really a wave of unrest. I really doubt whether they "made an appointment" to annoy me!

Because of this, my mother specially asked for leave on Saturday to take me to see a doctor.

We went to the hospital after five o'clock, and my mother and I thought we were the first to come. You can go up, there are already people waiting in line!

The first class lasts more than two hours, and registration begins.

I'm on the 23rd. These days, I plan to run as soon as I get to school. It's itchy not to run errands today.

"Please go to Dr. 1 1 on the 23rd ..." As soon as I heard someone calling my name on the radio, my mother and I hurried to see Dr. Li Zhiyuan.

Put the medical records there, and now, we are free again.

I calculated that it took me two hours to register in the morning and one hour to see a doctor ... together, I have been waiting for nearly five hours today.

It's my turn I'll put my nose in the past for the doctor to check, and then I'll check my mouth after I check my nose.

I really don't know if I don't check

As for how to scare, I will explain it in the doctor's words.

"Don't worry, there is something wrong with your nose. How can you scream so well? Your vocal cords are broken. Fortunately, the vocal cords are only broken a little. If it is thicker, you can have surgery. "

When I heard about the operation, I almost fainted! But I'm curious, how did he know I was good at screaming?

The doctor added: "by the way, you have to stop talking for a month!" " "

What? It's harder for me not to talk for a month than it is for heaven!

Doctor, why don't you say it together, so that my fragile heart will be hit hard again!

Hey, Zhang, how can you scream so well! You can participate next month!

The cold wind blows hard, and I stand at the gate of the hospital. Although I feel extremely uncomfortable, I feel a kind of happiness and pride that I have never felt before.

It was a winter afternoon, and after a week of wind and rain, I finally caught a cold. The white napkins beside the bed are about to pile up into a hill. My mother immediately decided to let me go to the hospital. She looked at me with difficulty as if she were deciding something. For a long time, she looked at me with big worried eyes and said, "You have grown up, and the hospital is just outside an intersection. Go by yourself, be sure to register first ... "

I had to wander outside, and the dark clouds were gloomy, one after another, as if it were going to rain. A cold wind blew, which made me tingle all over: What? I want to go to the hospital alone without my family. What should I do? I walked slowly, my eyes involuntarily fixed on the direction of home. I hope my mother's figure can appear in my sight, but my hopes are always in vain. My writing heart seems to be firmly grasped. I seem to have become a driftwood in the ocean, and I can only drift with the tide ... I feel so helpless, and the whole world is very quiet. Only the cold wind blows my face white and the dark clouds cover my heart. I know my mother will be soft-hearted as long as I go back, but I ...

Suddenly, I seemed to see my mother's figure. She held out her hand and said to me, "I believe you can do it." You will grow up, believe in yourself! " Yes, I can! I walked home, turned and ran forward. I don't care about the noise outside, I don't care about fear, I just believe I can!

Sunlight penetrates through layers of dark clouds and spreads warmth in people's hearts. Looking at the hospital gate, I smiled, laughing so happily, because I succeeded, because I grew up!

Growing up in hardships, yes, as long as we don't give up, stick to it and believe in ourselves, we can break through ourselves and win the brightest smile.

There is a hospital in the vast universe. One day, an unexpected guest walked into the hospital. He is a handsome guy in the universe, our mother-the earth.

No sooner had he approached the hospital gate than Mars and the Mercury brothers saw him. Mars immediately said to the earth, "Brother Earth, aren't you a handsome guy in our universe?"? How did you become like this? " "Yes!" Mercury pays immediately. "What are you doing in the hospital? Are you sick? " Hearing these questions, the earth sadly replied, "It was those humans who made me like this."

When the earth enters the hospital, he goes to the hematology department first, and Dr. Moon receives him. The doctor of Yuezi told him that his blood was turbid and not as clear and transparent as before. Then he went to the dermatology department, and Jupiter greeted him with a loud voice. Dr. Jupiter asked him, "How did you do it?" In the face of Dr. Jupiter's incomprehension, the earth once again replied sadly: "It was those people who planted land everywhere that made me and Cai Hai like this." "hey!" Doctor Jupiter sighed helplessly.

Dean Uranus talked to the earth as soon as he knew. Dean Uranus said to the earth, "You are already like this. If you don't take action, your body will be overwhelmed. Let's act quickly! " "Hearing this, the earth said firmly," No! They are all my children! I can't hurt them! "After hearing this, Dean Uranus was deeply moved and said to the earth," But your health is also very important. We can only warn you like human beings. "Okay, but you can't hurt them." "

Dean Uranus thus issued an alarm to mankind.