Write Leo? Characteristics of Tolstoy's beard and hair.

General features of facial contour: hairy and bushy beard (repeated description)

Metaphor and exaggeration are both used:

Vegetation is more than empty land-metaphor "hairy face";

Wrinkled like bark-a metaphor for a dark face;

Intertwined-metaphor eyebrows;

Bubble-a metaphor for curly hair;

As dense as a tropical forest-bearded;

Rolling white waves-beard.

Function: colorful descriptions make people have beautiful reverie. (comparison chart)

2) What is the main content of the second paragraph? What's your impression of Tuo Weng? What are the characteristics of writing?

A lot of comparisons: the whole face looks like a shoddy hut; Forehead is like a tree; The skin is as rough as the outer wall of a hut.

"Impression: maladjusted, rough, mediocre and even vulgar.

3) What is the point of the third paragraph? The author carefully depicts the facial features of a happy face, so is Tuo Weng beautiful? )

Five senses-focus on facial expressions and show Tuo Weng's ugly appearance without hesitation.

4) Paragraph 4 highlights Tolstoy's "plain-looking, a member of the Russian general public". Where did the author write it?

Dress, occupation, social role-intended to show that Tolstoy belongs to the Russian general public.

Key words: He shares the same fate with all the Russian people-to reveal this, that is, to reveal Tolstoy's life pursuit and mental journey.

5) Analysis in the fifth paragraph: Writing Tolstoy's looks disappointed visitors.

Intensive reading of paragraphs 6-9: (all about Tolstoy's unusual eyes)

1) Paragraph 6: Write Tolstoy's sharp eyes.

What rhetoric is used? Find out the relevant sentences (magic exaggeration and renju metaphor)

He wrote Tolstoy's profound and accurate insight.

2) Paragraph 7: Tolstoy's eyes contain rich feelings. (The eyes are the windows of the soul, and Tolstoy's rich inner world is fully expressed through the eyes. )

Besides a lot of metaphors and exaggerations, what other rhetoric are used?

(Write Tolstoy's eyes in succession with two sets of parallelism sentences to express various feelings. )

What is the role of quoting Gorky as a conclusion?

Exaggerated, crisp and powerful use is thought-provoking, which well shows Tolstoy's observation, sharpness and richness, and writes Tolstoy's all-round observation that can take a panoramic view of everything. His works reflect all aspects of social life, and there is a comparative note in the article: even the smallest thing can be seen clearly with this lens ... These eyes will not let go of even the smallest details, and it will also reveal the vast universe.

3) Paragraph 8: Write about the power of Tolstoy's eyes. (Key sentence analysis)

Thinking: Are sharpness and strength repetitive?

Why not describe other features of the eyes?

A, "The other parts of Tolstoy's face-beard, eyebrows, hair-are only used to wrap and protect the shells of this pair of shiny jewels." -hold back first.

Protect exquisite jewelry with vulgar appearance, protect exquisite jewelry with vulgar appearance, and protect exquisite jewelry with vulgar appearance. (eyes)

B, "It's magic, it's magnetic to jewelry, it can absorb the substances in the world, and then radiate accurate radio waves to our times ..."

The description of Tolstoy's eyes is no longer limited to portrait description, but implicitly reveals that Tolstoy, as a great realistic artist, gave an accurate, in-depth and comprehensive description of his times and became the spokesman of the times. Because his literary creation not only comes from the observation and study of social life and the world, but also accurately shows it with his artistic giant pen, showing the responsibilities and requirements of the times.

C, "When these cold light daggers turned to aim at their master, it was terrible, because the blade was ruthless and hit the key, hitting him right in the heart."

This sentence shows that Tolstoy, as a "sober realistic writer", criticized reality profoundly and accurately. As the representative of the peak of Russian realism in the19th century, Tolstoy's brush strokes point to almost all aspects of society, especially the autocratic czar, the hypocrisy of law, the decay of nobles and the poverty of peasants, which are deeply exposed. This is especially manifested in his masterpiece Resurrection in his later years. His works caused panic in the czar's government. He tried to imprison or exile him, but he stopped because of his popularity and public opinion.

4) Paragraph 9: Praise Tolstoy's sharp eyes and reveal the misfortunes in his life. (Understand the meaning of "happiness" in combination with Exercise 4 after class)

Introduce the change of Tolstoy's world outlook and his experience in his later years.

"With such sharp eyes, people who can see the truth can control the whole world and its intellectual wealth at will." Such a person can be the master and master of the whole world and its intellectual wealth.

"People who can see the truth clearly" are often suffering, which is what we often call the suffering of the wise. If Tolstoy is both a wise man and a benevolent man, his pain will be doubled. Tolstoy is such a person. He saw through tyranny, ugliness, hypocrisy and suffering, and also saw the causes of all kinds of evils in the world, and tried his best to change it all his life. But the truth always backfires, and this is the greatest pain. In his later years, Tolstoy refused aristocratic life, resolutely gave up his property and even had conflicts with his wife and family. Finally, he resolutely ran away from home and died on the road.

The first part (1-5) depicts Tolstoy's appearance.

Paragraph 1 focuses on the characteristics of Tolstoy's beard and hair.

The second paragraph mainly describes Tolstoy's facial contour and structure.

In the third paragraph, Tolstoy's five senses are further described, with emphasis on his facial expressions.

In the fourth paragraph, Tolstoy is plain-looking and a member of the Russian general public.

The fifth paragraph mainly writes that Tolstoy's appearance will disappoint visitors.

The second part (paragraphs 6-9) describes Tolstoy's unusual eyes.

Paragraph 6, write Tolstoy's sharp eyes.

In the seventh paragraph, Tolstoy's eyes contain rich feelings.

Paragraph 8: Write about the power of Tolstoy's eyes.

The ninth paragraph praises Tolstoy's sharp eyes and reveals the misfortunes in his life.

The first part (1 ~ 5) describes Tolstoy's appearance characteristics.

Paragraph 1 focuses on the characteristics of Tolstoy's beard and hair. "He is born with a hairy face, with more vegetation than open space, and a thick moustache makes it difficult to see his inner world clearly." The article has no background rendering, such as sketch directly into portrait description. This sentence outlines Tolstoy's face and highlights his overall characteristics-furry and bushy beard. These two characteristics are described as follows: a long beard covers the cheeks and covers the face; Eyebrows are about one finger wide and erect; Gray curly hair piled up on my forehead like foam. After describing them separately, I ended with one sentence: "No matter from any angle, you can see the thick hair and beard like a tropical forest." After summing up, the characteristics are highlighted again: Tolstoy's beard is "like rolling white waves." This passage caught Tolstoy's facial features with thick hair and beard and described it repeatedly, but it didn't give people the feeling of repetition. On the contrary, it made readers have a deep and unusual impression on Tuoweng's five senses at once. This is the artistic effect produced by the author's colorful description, which comes from exaggeration and metaphor: there is hair on his face, which is described as "more vegetation than clearing"; The dark face is "wrinkled like bark"; Eyebrows are about a finger wide, "like tangled roots"; Gray curly hair, piled on the forehead like foam; Full of hair and beard, as dense as a tropical forest; Beards are like rolling white waves. There are not only metaphors in these sentences, but also exaggerations in metaphors. The combination of metaphor and exaggeration not only makes the "picture" vivid, but also makes people have beautiful reverie.

The second paragraph mainly describes Tolstoy's facial contour and structure. At the beginning, the author begins with "People try to remove the hair that covers their faces with their own imagination, trim their beards crazily, and take Tolstoy's portrait of shaving off his beard when he was young as a reference, hoping to conjure up a smooth face by magic", as if to lift Tuoweng's beard and let readers further stare at his facial "modeling". Like the last paragraph, the author of this paragraph still uses many metaphors to describe Tuoweng's five senses: the whole face is like a shoddy hut made by a rural carpenter; The forehead above the small eyes is a tree wood that has been randomly split with a knife; The skin is as rough as the outer wall of a hut made of branches, and so on. In a word, Tuo Weng's face "gives people an unbalanced, rough, mediocre and even vulgar feeling".

In the third paragraph, Tolstoy's five senses are further described, with emphasis on his facial expressions. The author wrote: "This pair of workers' melancholy faces are shrouded in melancholy, dull and depressed." "His face has no luster at all." "It is not a temple to spread wisdom, but a prison to imprison ideas. "The author grasps Tuoweng's five senses and depicts them carefully, showing Tuoweng's ugly face.

In the fourth paragraph, Tolstoy is plain-looking and a member of the Russian general public. The author writes the commonness of Tolstoy's appearance from various angles. From the aspect of wearing, "there is nothing inappropriate for him to wear this coat, that coat, this hat or that hat." From a professional point of view, it is possible to preside over the ministerial meeting on the stage, or it is possible to fool around with a group of drunkards; Maybe a baker or an archbishop. Actually, Tolstoy is no different from ordinary people in real life. The author further wrote: when he was a student, he belonged to a mixture of his peers; When he became an officer, he was no different from his comrades; Living in the country is also similar to the role of a squire; Sitting in a carriage, who is the coachman will make people guess wrong; Talking to farmers is like being a farmer. The author shows Tolstoy's ordinary side from many angles, aiming to show that Tolstoy belongs to the Russian general public and "he shares the same fate with all Russian people". Revealing this means revealing Tolstoy's life pursuit and mental journey (see Resources for details).

The fifth paragraph mainly writes that Tolstoy's appearance will disappoint visitors. The author vividly describes the great contrast between Tolstoy in the eyes of visitors and Tolstoy in his own eyes. At the same time, through the description of the interview scene, the author once again gave us a comprehensive understanding of Tolstoy's physical characteristics, words and deeds, and hospitality, thus deepening our understanding of Tolstoy's image. This period is also a transitional period, naturally transitioning to Tolstoy's description.

The second part (paragraphs 6-9) describes Tolstoy's unusual eyes.

Paragraph 6, write Tolstoy's sharp eyes. In this passage, the author once again wrote Tolstoy's profound and accurate insight with magical exaggeration and Julian's wonderful metaphor. "Under the bushy eyebrows, a pair of gray eyes are shining like panthers." "This one looks like a shiny steel knife, steady and accurate, and hits the key." "It penetrates camouflage armor like a bullet and cuts a piece of glass like a diamond knife."

In the seventh paragraph, Tolstoy's eyes contain rich feelings. As the saying goes, the eyes are the windows of the soul, and Tolstoy's rich inner world is fully expressed through the eyes. "Changes in mood have caused changes in eyes." "Although the mouth is closed and there is no change, those eyes are full of smiles." In this passage, the author not only uses a lot of metaphors, but sometimes exaggerates them. He also uses two sets of parallelism sentences to describe what Tolstoy said: "The most emotional eyes on a person's face can best express all kinds of feelings": "Anger makes it cold, unhappiness makes it frozen, friendship makes it gentle, and passion makes it blazing." "Under the influence of beautiful and moving music, they can cry like village women. When they are spiritually satisfied, they can shine ","They can become cold and sharp, and they can uncover hidden secrets like scalpels and X-rays ". Finally, Gorky's words are quoted as the conclusion, which is concise and powerful, implicit and meaningful, and intriguing, which well shows Tolstoy's observation, sharpness and richness.

Paragraph 8: Write about the power of Tolstoy's eyes. "Fortunately, with such a pair of eyes, Tolstoy's face showed a glimmer of brilliance. ..... The other parts of Tolstoy's face-beard, eyebrows and hair-are just used to package and protect the shells of this pair of shiny jewels. "At this point, we suddenly put down Tolstoy's vulgar appearance, which turned out to be used to protect exquisite jewelry-this is the artistic effect of wanting to promote first and then suppress. The author goes on to write: "This is the magic and magnetism of jewelry, which can suck in the material in the world, and then radiate radio waves with accurate frequency to our times ..." Here, the author's description of Tolstoy's eyes is no longer limited to portrait description, but implicitly reveals that Tolstoy, as a great realistic artist, gave an accurate, in-depth and comprehensive description of his time and became the spokesman of the times. "Even the smallest thing can be seen clearly with the help of this pair of lenses, just like a falcon falling from the sky and pouncing on a timid mouse, even the most trivial details. ..... When this pair of cold light daggers turned to aim at its owner, it was terrible, because the sharp blade mercilessly hit the key and hit its heart. " This passage is about the breadth and depth of Tolstoy's observation of society, life and times, as well as the depth and breadth of his criticism.

Tolstoy is a master of literature. He has created first-class works in world literature. He galloped in the Russian literary world for nearly 60 years and created a large number of literary works with a wide range of themes and diverse genres. The complete works compiled behind him amount to 90 volumes. In this vast literature, there are three novels, War and Peace, anna karenine and Resurrection, which represent his artistic peak and mark his practice of "the most vivid realism". When we read his related works, we can understand why the author made such an evaluation of Tolstoy's vision.

The ninth paragraph praises Tolstoy's sharp eyes and reveals the misfortunes in his life.