My mother
My mother is an ordinary middle-aged woman (what do you want to express? Is the mother an ordinary person or a middle-aged woman? If you want to express your mother's ordinary, "middle-aged women" is redundant. Is it more appropriate to change it to "woman"? ), (the statement ends here, the time is appropriate) is only in her early forties (the subject is insufficient), and her face becomes haggard, because (because) it is more appropriate, and excessive fatigue makes (there is no need to use this word) aging wrinkles (wrinkles regardless of youth and aging) cover her cheeks prematurely, but she never complains (why do you complain? Complaining about wrinkles). A pair of diamond-like black eyes (have you seen black diamonds) are embedded under thick black eyebrows (inappropriate adjectives). Do you want to describe its color or brightness? ), high nose (unable to connect the front language). Originally black and bright hair, under the erosion of years (improper adjective), also ("originally … improper adjective"). My mother's hands are almost identical to mine (since "almost" is used, how can it be "identical"? Is it the same or different? ), slender fingers and wide nails. But my mother's hands are rougher and older than mine. From her slender fingertips, I saw my mother's rich years and her hard life.
Mother never left the word "toil" (improper expression). I get up before dawn every day and start preparing breakfast in the kitchen. My father and I finished eating, one went to school and the other went to work. My mother ate a few mouthfuls in a hurry and hurried to work. After a day's work, I hurried home, busy preparing dinner, washing dishes and mopping the floor after dinner ... My mother was responsible for all the housework at home. Sometimes I feel that my mother is really tired and wants to help (will you think of helping after seeing "really tired"? ), but my mother always says, "Go do your homework, I can do these things." I don't know when I'm busy, but my mother puts down her endless housework and has a good rest.
Mothers, like all parents, are also nagging. Although I am busy every day, I always say over and over again, "When I get to junior high school, I have to work harder, otherwise I can't keep up with the pace." "Sometimes I have to take some time out to read books, such as those of the Ming Dynasty." ""There are many subjects now, and we have to keep up with each subject, unlike the previous two subjects, Chinese and mathematics. "Repeated nagging makes my ears cocoon. Although sometimes I feel that my mother is a little annoyed, I know that my mother is also good for me.
My mother is also very simple. She never wears jewelry such as pearl necklace ("pearl necklace" has been marked as jewelry, and later "jewelry" can be replaced by "jewelry"), and clothes are not like many aunts who go shopping all day to buy brand-name clothes and shoes (will clothes go shopping? She always said that clothes don't need to be so expensive, just to save face (the "problem" can be removed), and what necklace and brand-name clothes to wear are too extravagant (luxury goods are used well). But does face have anything to do with luxury? Why not "not worth the loss")!
Mother's personality is also very easy-going. She never quarrels with anyone. She is always patient. It is said that more is better than less, so her mother has been silent ("nagging in front" and now "always silent"? To show when you are always silent). Mom is also a special advantage (oral English). She said that if others are sincere to you, you should also be sincere to others, so as to get along well. I always remember this sentence, so I have many close friends. After all, this credit is my mother's (this is my mother's credit).
This is my mother. In my mind, my mother is simple and noble, ordinary and beautiful.
The whole article has a clear conception and artistic conception. It's just that some words and basic grammar are not applied properly. But it's hard for you.