The site of Heishui Kingdom in front of us has been thinned by the wind of time, dried up with tears and blown into ruins. Through the broken wall surrounded by rubble, I seem to see the sadness hidden in its heart.
For thousands of years, this abandoned city, which faded out of people's sight and was silent in the arms of Mother Earth, curled up its scarred body, watched the river revel in the arms of Heihe River, listened to the screams of the breeze, was eroded by sandstorms and honed by time. Every grain of sand and every broken tile here clearly tells me that its silence has been drowned in the long river of history by years.
Its desolation is that it has been polished by time and lost its original appearance and proper demeanor. The wind rolled up the dust on the ground again, and the khaki sand trembled with the wind and whispered together.
There is a unique taste in that tone that travels through time and space. I sniffed the smell and stepped into the ancient city of Heishui country thousands of years ago.
The blue-gray rubble at the foot seems to have a breath of Qin and Han dynasties, and the dead trees and rotten wood seem to be still immersed in the prosperous palace of the past. Everything here seems to be trapped in the deepest part of history.
In front of me, a piece of gravel, a rotten tile, a rotten wood and a grain of sand are all covered with the scars of years, emitting an ancient smell, which also dilutes my melancholy and is full of doubts and incomprehension ... There are many legends about the reason why Heishui Kingdom disappeared. One saying is that countless battles have destroyed an oasis. According to legend, at the end of the Yuan Dynasty and the beginning of the Ming Dynasty, the Ming Dynasty general Sheng Feng led an army to besiege the Yuan army guarding the Black Water City in the Hexi Corridor, and dammed the weak water river at the edge of the city, which caused the wells in the city to dry up and forced the defenders to abandon the city and break through. The officers and men either died in battle or surrendered to the Ming army.
However, damming led to weak water diversion to the north, which led to the drying up of the ancient Juyan Sea. Due to the natural conditions of scarce precipitation and large evaporation, oases disappeared due to lack of water, deserts spread and residents were forced to move out.
Another version is that Han Shilong, a general of Sui Dynasty, was stationed in this city. One evening, an old man with a white beard came to the ancient city, empty-handed, but peddled "dates" and "pears" along the street, clamoring to cross the road, and then suddenly disappeared. People are confused. Han Shilong was surprised when they reported to General Han. He thought it over and over again, only to know that it was a fairy's advice and he needed to "leave early."
So he decided decisively to lead the soldiers and civilians to abandon the city overnight. Sure enough, a strong wind blew in the middle of the night, destroying the city and pulling out houses. Overnight, the city was buried by wind and sand. We can't verify the authenticity of the legend, but it has deepened the sense of history.
I think, no matter what kind of legend, in the long history of China, in the history of ethnic disputes such as Qiang, Turkic, Yueshi, Tangut and Xiongnu in Hexi Corridor, all civilizations are vulnerable to the war in the era of cold weapons. The ideal city, together with its splendid buildings, may be uprooted in just a few days.
Therefore, only one empty name can be left on the historical map, just like the Blackwater Country we see today. The mysterious disappearance of black water has left the world with an eternal mystery that cannot be uncovered.
Legend has it that once upon a time, there was a shepherd herding sheep near Heishui country. His sheepdog went to Blackwater and had nowhere to go every day. The shepherd felt very strange and wanted to find out. One day, he quietly followed the sheepdog to the broken wall, only to see the sheepdog get into a water hole. He tried to follow it slowly.
The shepherd peeped forward trembling. Suddenly, golden light appeared in front of his eyes, and the shepherd was shocked. The cave is like a palace, and every door is full of gold and silver. He walked ecstatically until he reached ninth gate, the last door. He saw a golden moon on China's desk, and the shepherd looked around the cave. He can't take so much gold and silver, he just wants to take it home.
He repeatedly wiped his hands on the skirt of sheepskin coat, for fear that his unclean hands would defile the noble golden moon. But when he approached the table slowly, his hand just touched the golden moon, and suddenly the room was dark, and he couldn't find the exit.
Helpless, he had to let go of the golden moon, and the light instantly returned to the room. After the shepherd came out of the hole, he dreamed that he had found the golden moon.
When he came here again the next day, the wind buried everything, but in front of him were rock dunes and abandoned cities. Legendary stories give people unlimited imagination.
How many secrets are hidden in this mysterious city? This is the answer that people have not been able to explore so far. Legend is a legend after all, but it proves that Blackwater was once prosperous and luxurious.
Another gust of wind blew and rolled up the dust on the ground. Suddenly, the city was in chaos. Suddenly, I saw magnificent palaces, pavilions carved with beams and painted buildings, solemn pagodas and unique courtyards.
Suddenly, I was crowded in the bustling crowd, shuttling through the dazzling array of shops, lamenting the jewels and jade articles in the western regions and admiring the silk in the Central Plains. I bargained with foreigners wearing fur coats and felt boots, I guided the businessmen with camels and blond hair and blue eyes, and I passed the powerful messenger of the Central Plains ... "Hey, come and see, this is a rare antique." I woke up from my dream, and my eyes were still in ruins.
I leaned down and put two gray tiles together, stroking the clear texture on them. I feel that the time is long, the history is heavy, and the footsteps are gradually drifting away. I picked up two tiles on the ground, and the buttons on the edges of the tiles were round and smooth. I gently put them together and closed the button to form a seamless rectangular tile.
Suddenly, I heard a shout, accompanied by a tinkling knock, as if someone was tamping the city wall and laying tiles on the beam. I got up and looked around. Except my peers, there are only sand piles blown by the wind and rubble warmed by the sun. The sound just now was blown away by the wind.
Together with my illusion ... the wind has gone, and I understand that this is the wind of time, the spring breeze from the distant old country. In the backlit vision, its gentle footsteps left countless dynamic warmth for me and those who explored its secrets.
Out of the city, the wind smoothed the wrinkles of time with the palm of your hand. The vegetation on both sides of the Heihe River is gradually turning green, and the spring breeze is sowing the land and cultivating hope.
2. Composition: Heishuiguo Site 500 words Heishuiguo Site
Heishuiguo site is located at the northwest of Zhangye 12.5km, with a length of 15km from north to south and 10km from east to west. It is an ancient cultural site in the Neolithic Age and a national key cultural relic protection unit. There are tombs of the Han Dynasty in the site, covering an area of about 4 square kilometers. This excavation is of great significance to the study of the historical and cultural value of Heishuiguo site.
According to legend, before the Western Han Dynasty, the Huns moved here and made Xinjiang the capital of Xiaoyue country. Because the locals
Xiongnu is called "Black Hungary", so it is called "Black Water Country". According to Du Fu's Book of Diseases in the World, Tongdian is the ancient city of Zhangye in Han Dynasty. "Ganzhou County Records" said: Its land was Gongbi Post in the Tang Dynasty, Xicheng Post in the Yuan Dynasty, Xiaoshahe Post in the Ming Dynasty, and the locals called it "Old Ganzhou" or "Blackwater Country". "disturbing the new history" contains: "Han Shilong of Sui Dynasty was stationed in Heishui country here, with four ancient bases, which were covered by sandstorms the night after he left."
Heihe River, called "weak water" in ancient times, originated from Qilian Mountain and is the largest river in Hexi Corridor. It got its name from the black sand that rolled in during the flood. Heihe River is rich in water and has been the main water source for farmland irrigation in Hexi since ancient times.
Heishui country is named after Heihe, and it also rises and falls because of Heihe. Heishuiguo site was a big lake a long time ago, and then it gradually dried up, forming a huge Sichuan land. The Huns moved here and the capital was built here. Du Tongdian is quoted as the ancient city of Zhangye County in the book "National Heritage on Earth". "Gansu Fuzhi" said that "its land was public in the Tang Dynasty". Originally Xicheng Yi ". Locals call it "Old Ganzhou" or "Blackwater Country". Heishuiguo site is north-south long15km. East-west width 10 km. For thousands of years, Heishui country has undergone several changes and has long been annihilated, leaving only ruins and new walls. Mysterious legends give people endless reverie.
3. How to write a composition video 1? Improve the ability to understand and express things. Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous educator in China, pointed out: "Writing anything depends on knowledge and experience. What kind of knowledge and experience can make you write something. On the other hand, if you don't have the ability to express understanding, you can't write a good composition. "
Second, take the cognitive structure as the core of the composition, including learning knowledge, observing accumulation, memory storage, training thinking, enriching imagination, cultivating emotion and exercising will; From talking about writing, scrutinizing and revising, reading more books and writing more.
Third, set up a big composition concept and combine listening, speaking, reading and writing organically.
First, we should pay attention to the examination of questions; The second is to make clear the purpose of writing and be innovative; Third, the selection of materials should be based on evidence; Fourth, we should pay attention to writing skills and arrange the structure of the article; Fifth, we should pay attention to the segmentation of the article and list the subheadings and composition outlines in advance; Sixth, we should pay attention to the writing and usage of the article; Seventh, we should use language skillfully and use thought to schedule language. Learn five ways to conceive: praise people with things, express their feelings directly, reason with things, touch the scene and express their feelings with things.
Fourth, the composition goal is broken down year by year:
First-grade words, second-grade sentences, third-grade fragments, fourth-grade chapters, fifth-grade synthesis, and sixth-grade improvement.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) carries out five trainings.
According to the principle that cognition is the core of composition, around the core of developing students' psychological mechanism, five trainings have been carried out in a down-to-earth manner:
(1) word training. Learn to master many words. Master the golden key to using words: contact with things you are familiar with; Contact your own life reality; Contact your knowledge of language and writing. Use the method of "ten quotations" to combine word learning with oral training. The "Top Ten Quotations" are: 1, analyzing glyphs; 2. Use teaching AIDS; 3. Look at the pictures and learn words; 4. Word formation and expansion; 5. Choose words to fill in the blanks; 6. collocation of words; 7. Adjust the word order; 8. Words used to move the scene; 9. Word classification; 10, conjunctions into sentences. Enrich the content of oral training, so that I can accumulate a large number of words that I can speak and use, and lay a solid foundation for writing.
(2) Sentence training. As long as it is a sentence, it includes two aspects: one is about people, things, things and scenery, and the other is about purpose. However, some teachers do not use pictures and things to seriously teach students the methods of observation, understanding, analysis and expression when instructing students to say a sentence. They just take out a picture or something for students to say and write a sentence. Students don't know why to say and write a sentence, how to say and write a sentence, and what sentence patterns to say and write, which leads to a single, dull and lifeless composition tone. Students can be taught to speak and write a sentence with four complete elements, four sentence patterns and nine sentence patterns, according to pictures, things, dialogues and exercises. Students will use different sentence patterns and sentence patterns to express different thoughts, feelings, attitudes and purposes in their compositions.
(3) Paragraph training. Combination of eight segments: the development of things is a sequential segment, time is a sequential segment, and spatial transformation is a sequential segment, a general and substructure segment, a causal segment, a turning segment, a progressive segment, and a parallel segment. In order to understand the law of occurrence and development of objective things. No matter what kind of paragraph, it describes the development of things and people's understanding of things, that is, the content and the center of the paragraph. Like a sentence, it is also a description of people, things, things and scenery, and it also expresses a meaning. Just to make a sentence clearer and deeper.
(4) Text training. A chapter consists of paragraphs. Through the knowledge and methods of examining topics, making ideas, selecting materials, planning articles, defining methods and terms, through the four expression methods of narration, description, lyricism and discussion, the methods of beginning and end of articles, transition and echo, and the knowledge and methods of various article genres. Learn to write narrative and practical articles with clear center, complete meaning and appropriate details.
(5), life on-site training. Use on-site training to better understand writing from the content. Through various composition teaching activities such as "centering", "selecting materials", "composition consultation meeting", "Xiao Zhuge grade examination meeting" and "wonderful word competition meeting", we can learn composition knowledge and writing methods vividly and concretely from the activities. In addition, you can also carry out various activities inside and outside the school, such as skipping rope, tug-of-war, kicking shuttlecock, ball games, endorsement competitions, etc., and learn how to write competition compositions; Carry out voluntary labor inside and outside the school and learn how to write labor scenes; Hold poetry recitals and lectures to learn how to write conference scenes and experiences; Learn how to write travel notes and travel notes by visiting and browsing places of interest. Learn to observe methods and pay attention to things around you. "Pay attention to everything and you will learn. The cultivation of human feelings is the article." Through on-site life composition, I further realized that life is fertile ground for composition. So as to learn something, express the true feelings, cultivate the sentiments of truth, goodness and beauty, and cultivate a good style of writing.
Implement "mutual evaluation and mutual reform" to cultivate students' thinking independence and creativity. After students write their compositions, organize group comments. Learn the advantages of other people's compositions first, and then point out the shortcomings in their own compositions with critical eyes and suggestions for improvement. Rewrite on this basis, so that students can learn something from each article they write.
Write down your truth.
"Write your honest words" is what the old educator Mr. Ye Shengtao said. It aims to create a colorful "independent" composition world. The so-called "autonomy" means that students are free to think and write without being restricted by rules and regulations. "Independent" composition means "speaking from the heart", acting spontaneously, showing self-style, and embodying distinctive personality.
4. How do primary school students write a good composition video encyclopedia (Chinese composition) to establish a big composition concept and organically combine listening, speaking, reading and writing.
First, we should pay attention to the examination of questions; The second is to make clear the purpose of writing and be innovative; Third, the selection of materials should be based on evidence; Fourth, we should pay attention to writing skills and arrange the structure of the article; Fifth, we should pay attention to the segmentation of the article and list the subheadings and composition outlines in advance; Sixth, we should pay attention to the writing and usage of the article; Seventh, we should use language skillfully and use thought to schedule language. Learn five ways to conceive: praise people with things, express their feelings directly, reason with things, touch the scene and express their feelings with things.
Fourth, the composition goal is broken down year by year:
First-grade words, second-grade sentences, third-grade fragments, fourth-grade chapters, fifth-grade synthesis, and sixth-grade improvement.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) carries out five trainings.
According to the principle that cognition is the core of composition, around the core of developing students' psychological mechanism, five trainings have been carried out in a down-to-earth manner:
(1) word training. Learn to master many words. Master the golden key to using words: contact with things you are familiar with; Contact your own life reality; Contact your knowledge of language and writing. Use the method of "ten quotations" to combine word learning with oral training. The "Top Ten Quotations" are: 1, analyzing glyphs; 2. Use teaching AIDS; 3. Look at the pictures and learn words; 4. Word formation and expansion; 5. Choose words to fill in the blanks; 6. collocation of words; 7. Adjust the word order; 8. Words used to move the scene; 9. Word classification; 10, conjunctions into sentences. Enrich the content of oral training, so that I can accumulate a large number of words that I can speak and use, and lay a solid foundation for writing.
5.7.(60 points) 23. Read the following article and write as required. Fan wenlue.
Writing Guidance This is a composition proposition with dialectical thinking, which belongs to the material composition of famous sayings and epigrams. The purpose of this topic is to explore how candidates choose their own life path, close to students' life and full of rich flavor of the times.
The key to writing this article is to grasp the relationship between materials and the connotation of Tao. First, understand the relationship between the two materials.
This material contains two diametrically opposed views. One is to tell people to choose the difficult road, and the other is to tell people to choose the familiar road.
Although the difficult road is full of dangers, it has scenery to see; Although the familiar road is economical and risk-free, it is very dull. Secondly, understand the profound connotation of Tao.
On the surface, "road" is the road we take in our daily life. If candidates write from this angle, although they are relevant, their thinking is not deep enough and they lack ideological depth, so it is difficult to get high marks.
From a deep understanding, "road" should be the road of life, that is, what kind of life to choose is more exciting. If we think from this level, the article will be more profound and thoughtful.
When writing, you can explain your own views on one of them, and you can also analyze the advantages and disadvantages of the two views by comparison. The choice of style can be argumentative or narrative.
6. How to write a composition video for primary school students is an introductory composition? Reading pictures and speaking in grade one and writing in grade two are the basis of reading pictures and writing. Picture-reading writing has been running through the composition training in primary schools, and it is an effective means to cultivate the ability of observation, imagination, thinking and expression.
Looking at the picture is observation. Observation should be orderly, accurate and meticulous, grasp the key points and reasonably imagine, so as to accurately understand the main content and center of the picture. Composition is expression, which requires observation to be written in an orderly, focused and concrete way around the center of the picture. A common form of graduation entrance examination for primary school students over the years. Therefore, it is very important to learn to read and write.
Picture composition requirements: express around the center of the picture, and write clearly the picture content accurately and hierarchically. Generally, observation is made in the order from the whole to the part and then back to the whole. For example, when looking at a scene map, we should distinguish the primary and secondary scenes, determine the key points, and pay attention to the level of description. Look at the picture and write a composition, that is, look at the picture before writing. When writing a composition with pictures, you should pay attention to the following two points:
1. Observe the picture. Before writing, students should first carefully observe the pictures on the picture and see clearly what happened on the picture, when and where it happened, who were there, what scenic spots and what things were there. People are the main objects of our observation, so we should pay special attention to observing people's clothes, appearance, age, identity, expression and movements, and name the main characters.
2. Reasonable imagination. The scenery on the screen is static. We should make people alive through imagination, let them speak and act on their own, and reflect the psychological activities of the characters, that is, make the content of the picture become the active focus plane. However, this kind of imagination must be reasonable and serve the center of the article. The main characters and plots must be consistent with the content of the picture, and another set is not allowed.
7. Watch a video and write a composition. Today, the school organized us to go to the "Film and Television Hundred Flowers Garden" to watch movies.
The name of this movie is Yin, and the plot in the movie is very touching. This film tells the touching story of Yin, an ordinary teacher.
Yin usually likes children, so in many occupations, she chose to be an ordinary teacher. She works hard, diligently and conscientiously.
Not only educate every child's cultural knowledge, but also educate every child the truth of being a man. She also told each child's parents how to educate their children and teach them not to fight with their children when they make mistakes, mainly to communicate with them more.
Many children have made progress under her guidance. Teacher Yin is conscientious and devoted to education.
With her efforts, she has trained a batch of outstanding talents. However, in an accident, the children lost this great teacher Yin forever.
This day is a sad day for every child. I remember that day the school organized students to go to the movies. Just as the students were crossing the road in high spirits, an unexpected thing happened suddenly. I saw a car flying towards the students not far away, and the students were scared out of their wits by this sudden thing. At this moment, Teacher Yin rushed to protect the students with her own body. I was moved to tears when I saw this. But which teacher didn't give her everything like her? Which teacher doesn't shed blood and sweat for his class? Although everyone can't say that they lost their lives for the sake of students, each of them is dedicating everything in obscurity, burning themselves like red candles to illuminate others! Teacher Cao in our class is such a good teacher who silently pays everything for us.