What should I call them? Children of migrant workers? Farmers' children? Or the second generation of migrant workers? No, I don't want to call them by these cold names. I want to call them with their simple baby names, hold their hands and approach their lives ... they grew up in the green mountains and green waters of their hometown, and their pure souls held their heads high in the fields. In the wind of Shan Ye, they are running and dreaming.
The wind blew into the city from the fields. For their livelihood and future, they followed their parents to the city and took root at the end of the city. So I got used to the eyes of green mountains and green waters, and came into contact with tall buildings and traffic for the first time.
They don't know how to cross the six-lane road, and their little hands can't tell the floors of the office building. Prosperous modern civilization has never brought them any happiness, but this time, it has left a deep imprint on their hearts.
They took up their schoolbags and carefully integrated into city life. But in the strange eyes of "city people", I understood the difference between hukou and temporary residence permit for the first time.
Are the treasures in parents' hearts! But prematurely assumed the burden that does not belong to this era. When they come home from school, they cook a simple dinner, and their parents are still working at the construction site or the food market; Wake up in the middle of the night, the starry sky in the city is not as bright as my tearful hometown; Make a wish quietly, hoping that their children's primary school of migrant workers will not close down tomorrow because they can't pay the electricity bill ... but I saw their growth in their growing bodies.
I remember a reporter asked a child from a migrant children's school if he would go back to his hometown after graduation. The little girl said without hesitation: Of course, he must go back! At that moment, I almost cried for their growth. I remember their childish declaration on the Spring Festival Evening that year: "Our school is small, but its grades are not bad", "We don't compare with children in the city" and "Beijing's 2008 is also our 2008!" They gradually matured, bid farewell to yesterday's shyness and began to welcome a new day.
Although, they are still worried about small tuition fees; Although, the school still can't afford to pay the utilities; Although, there are still many imperfect systems ... although there are many "although", only one "but" is enough. Many eyes have turned to them, and they are thriving. The sun rises from the horizon, illuminating the end of the city and their lives.
They will eventually become us. Marking teacher's comments: Full-mark composition has five advantages. First, the composition truly depicts the living conditions of migrant workers' children, from the unnatural and unsuitable experience from rural areas to cities to the gradual maturity of their mentality, which makes people feel like a real group; Secondly, the composition is written smoothly, which shows that the candidates have accumulated a certain amount of reading, but they have not shown off, properly expressed their emotions and horizons, and the words and themes are well coordinated; Third, on the whole, the composition expresses the author's sympathy, concern and expectation for his peers, and also reflects the requirements of the composition topic. Fourth, the description of this article is very delicate. "Little finger can't count how many floors there are in an office building"; Finally, the article focuses on the changes of migrant workers' children. "They will eventually become us." Candidates did not complain blindly, but wrote changes and hopes.
In 2008, the college entrance examination in Zhejiang Province scored a perfect composition "Feeling the Country". At first, it was thought that the country was a fairyland of fairy tales. It has faded away the glitz of the city and washed away the complexity of the world.
It may be Al on Van Gogh's canvas, the blue sky as clear as a mirror, and the gorgeous sea of flowers as oil painting. Golden sunflowers, nourished by sunshine, have grown seeds of hope. It may be an idyll in Tao Qian's poems, which tells the story of a fairy couple in the fog. The oblique sunshine is light and leisurely. It's just a village in poetry. When we really walk into the village and feel the village with our heart, we will find that our village is experiencing pain.
There is also sunshine, which is not warm but viciously roasting the earth. Looking from a distance, the swaying figure on the earth is tired of its heart in the morning and evening, in spring and autumn.
He grew up in this land, and his sweat nourished this land; He learned to be strong in this land, and his steps strengthened this land; He was born in the loess and returned to the loess, which has been endless for generations. When the storm came, his heart trembled like a swaying crop in the field, and tears crossed the cheeks of the ravine, drowning his heart and his breath layer by layer like water drowning the field.
When the drought came, the crops shook like his thin body. He can't see hope and gain, and his confused eyes are dry and empty. They are sometimes happy, but this happiness seems so humble.
Their greatest happiness is a bumper harvest. Full particles are like gems, and the corners of the eyes smile like crescent moons. What they want most is good weather, and they just want to live an ordinary life.
Faced with such a picture, will such a country let us down? In fact, the countryside is more real because of this cruel beauty. Feel the countryside, don't always be a leisurely tourist. While appreciating its tranquility and purity, we should pay more attention to its pain and give it more understanding and sympathy.
Feel the countryside, feel the pulse of farming civilization, feel the most vigorous cry of China, feel the massiness of that land, and feel the blood and sweat of that land; Feel the most simple persistence and perseverance of farmers in China, and feel the pain and helplessness experienced by farmers in China. When we looked at them with disdain, did it ever occur to us that they brought us hope for life with sweat and blood?
With the most humble attitude, we can see that China has become an eternal farmer in history, and let us feel the countryside with our heart! A letter to mankind: Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. First of all, let me introduce myself. I'm Mark Mouse, a member of the hole mouse family. On the orders of the patriarch, I thank the people who have been fighting for a long time to catch snakes, assassinate owls, chase weasels and abuse cats.
2. Narrative with scenery description will succeed if it persists.
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Life is like a number "2". Only when the "curve" is completed can we embark on the bright road. Before you succeed, you must stick to it and stick to your beliefs, so that you can succeed.
Last summer vacation, my parents and I came to the Baili Gorge, which is called "the Gorge of Hundred Valleys".
Bailixia, with four seasons like spring and deep forests and lush foliage. It is divided into three parts: scorpion ditch, first sight of the sky and thousand steps ladder. Scorpion ditch is a winding hillside, which looks like a ribbon wrapped around the valley of Bailixia from a height. Sightseeing sky is a path between two mountains, the width of which is only one person's position. Hundred Steps Ladder, the grand finale of Bailixia, is also known as the "ladder of courage", with a total length of 2304, attracting many people.
My parents and I decided to climb up. At first, I laughed and danced all the way. I'm tired soon. I can hardly climb. When I was halfway through, I couldn't stand it any longer. I sat down and said to my mother with a sad face, "Oh, I'm exhausted. Let's go down! " Mother said, "It's halfway up the mountain, halfway up the mountain. When you get up, you won't be so tired. " "Yes, people's will is often in an instant. Try harder and you will definitely arrive. " Dad also stopped to talk to me. My heart is shaking, but I still won't move. Mom said, "Now this road is like the road of life. People who are backward are losers, and those who continue to persist will taste the joy of success. " After listening to my parents' words, I moved my legs like lead, and there were only two words in my mind: "Persistence." With the help of my parents, I finally reached the top of the mountain and finally felt the feeling that "all other mountains are dwarfed in the sky". . I made it.
Success and failure are often in an instant. What makes you succeed or fail is persistence. Stick to it and you will taste the joy of success. If you give up, you will always be a loser. Because as long as you persist, you will succeed.
3. A narrative should contain a description of the scenery, not less than 600 words. Today, we are going to climb Wu Zhifeng.
At the foot of Wuzhishan, five closely connected peaks rise into the sky, lush, and look like an open dark green palm from a distance, hence the name Wuzhishan.
There are five wonders in Wuzhishan: strange stones, strange seams, strange caves, strange trees and strange vines. As we walked through the winding path, we saw the arm-like Gu Teng wrapped around the towering old trees beside the road. The vines are bare and tightly attached to the huge trunk, lying on the steep rock wall, and you can't see how long it is. It is said that it is over 1000 years old! Some grotesque and varied boulders are dotted in the lush forest.
Unconsciously, we came to the five fingers seam-grinding abdomen seam. This is a long and narrow gap. The darker it is, the only one can pass sideways. I looked up, ah! There is only a thin blue line left in the sky. The stone walls on both sides are slippery and wet. After walking for about ten minutes, my eyes suddenly opened. We have passed the belly grinding seam, and it really rubbed my stomach just now!
Through the sky, all kinds of birds are singing one after another along the way, and the peaks are undulating in the distance, and clouds cover the fog. Suddenly I heard a powerful Hakka folk song, and I quickly ran with it. It turned out that a white-haired and ruddy grandfather was singing folk songs leisurely. After singing, Grandpa told me that he wrote all the lyrics that described the beautiful scenery of Wu Zhifeng on the stone tablet. He is almost eighty years old and has lived in the mountains for decades. The water here is very sweet, and the mountains are beautiful and particularly moist. Now he can carry 100 kilograms of burden up the mountain! After that, he played and sang. That song was really nice!
Wuzhishan is full of beautiful and strange scenery, and I can't finish talking about it. I hope you have a chance to see it, too.
4. Narrative with Scenery Description —— Appreciation of the composition Lotus in the Wind in junior high school
After autumn, the weather is getting cooler. Today, the weather is particularly cool. The breeze reverberates gently in the air, making people feel comfortable when blowing on their faces. Taking advantage of the cool weather and the gap before the start of school, my parents and I decided to take advantage of the cool wind to see the lotus, which came out of the West Lake in June.
Bus No.809 passed through the tunnel at high speed, and soon we were safely sent to the West Lake. Standing by the lake, looking into the lake from afar, all kinds of lotus flowers are so beautiful that people can't help but want to see them. I came to the lake with a brisk pace, trying to get close to the lotus. Only heard a faint fragrance, refreshing, refreshing.
White, pink, blossoming, clusters of lotus are supported by green calyx, and bright petals are more beautiful.
Lotus has different shapes, like a beautiful girl. Next to it is a lotus flower with unfolded petals, which grows on the green lotus leaf. From a distance, it looks like a girl in a long pink dress dancing gracefully on the green carpet. In the distance are clusters of budding flowers and bones, which look like a shy girl sitting on the grass, shyly covering her cheeks with her hands; Next to it, the lotus flower is like a small drum inlaid with precious stones. Lotus girls are singing and dancing on this green stage. Accompanied by a small drum, they are holding a small concert.
Lotus leaf is big, round and green, like a green jade plate; It's like putting a big umbrella in the water, one after another. No wonder Yang Wanli, a poet in the Song Dynasty, praised the lotus in "Seeing Lin Zifang at Dawn in Jingci Temple": "Lotus leaves are infinitely green in the sky, and lotus flowers are of different colors." Under the sunshine, the clear lake water and lotus flowers complement each other, forming a beautiful "lotus picture", which is very beautiful.
How beautiful that lotus is! Everything in nature is really full of vitality!
5. Narrative composition with landscape description and 600 words to set off the spirit, my friend.
Friends are indispensable in one's life. Friends have enriched my life and lit up my heart like a bright lamp. My friends help me when I am in trouble, and my friends encourage me when I am frustrated. She and I help each other and make progress together. Although I can't say that she changed everything for me, in the process of getting along with her, I got rid of many shortcomings and changed.
The first time I met her was in the second half of the fourth grade. She is plain, not so charming. She has a pair of small eyes under her eyebrows, but she is charming and her nose is not high. She introduced herself generously and then sat next to the teacher. After class, her seat was crowded with people. Everyone asked her what her name was and where she came from. She replied, "I live in Li Yanchang now." I whispered, "I live there now, too." Suddenly, she turned to me and said, "Do you live there, too? Can you go with me in the future? To tell the truth, the road at the cement yard is terrible. I hope you can go with me. " I stood there, stunned by her generosity and initiative. "What's the matter? Don't want to? " She looked at me with those little eyes. I came to my senses and said, "No, I'd love to!" " "From now on, we will go to school together. In this process, I learned that her name is Liu Rui, and she used to go to school in Altay, and her grades are still among the best! She naturally told me about her living environment there. I also listened with interest. She told me many things, for example, she and her teacher. Things between classmates, these things let me know that she is a broad-minded girl, always tolerant of others. It is because of her generosity and tolerance that we get closer. She can always tolerate everything about me, even if I say something ugly, she will endure it again. Finally, one day, I couldn't help asking her, "Are you never angry?" She still said with a smile: "Everything should be open-minded and tolerant of others. In fact, it is also a good way to cherish friendship, and it is also good for yourself, right? "After listening to her words, I also learned to be patient and take a step back.
She is also very talented in painting, and she can draw some things vividly at ordinary times, which makes me admire her very much. She told me, "You can do it well with your heart." I learned to do everything with my heart.
She taught me a lot, but most of them were small truths in life, but they changed me a lot.
Parting is always painful. I bid you farewell with tears in my eyes, my dear friend. At this moment, I just want to say to you: "thank you, this is my inner confession, really!" Although we are far apart, our hearts will always be connected because you are my best friend. "
6. Narratives describing natural scenery appreciate the beauty of nature.
In the early morning, the gauze-like fog gradually dispersed. With the first ray of sunshine in the morning, we drove to Sanqingzhai Natural Scenic Area, which is known as "the suspected dinosaur turned over this mountain".
I stared at the scenery outside the window all the way. The trees on the roadside are arranged neatly, like an army being inspected, showing the temperament of a soldier, while the outline of the distant mountain is still hazy, leaving only a vague silhouette in the fog. Seeing this scene reminds me of the mountains in ink painting, and the hazy beauty is vividly described by the painter.
After a muddy but muddy journey, we came to the foot of the mountain. On this muddy roadside, the water from the reservoir slowly flows out, and the crystal clear water keeps pace with each other, flowing happily, like that cheerful music. With this comfort and tranquility, we began to climb the mountain, but the gurgling sound of running water still lingered in our ears for a long time. ...
Stepping on the thorny mountain road, we have no intention of watching the scenery on both sides, but only concentrate on walking. On the winding and rugged road, there are stones of different shapes and naturally growing plants under our feet, and there is no obvious road at all. At this time, the person who walked in front has walked out of a narrow road deeply and shallowly. Then I thought of what Mr. Lu Xun wrote in Hometown. "In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road. "
After climbing a certain distance, a continuous mountain came into view, and the mountains were shrouded in fog, which seemed mysterious and beautiful. Another nap, and the scenery in my eyes changed a lot. Looking at the mountain again, the fog has gradually receded, and a mountain shaped like the word "mountain" is clearly and truly presented in front of us. At this time, we feel closer to nature and have to admire the ingenuity of nature. Everything is natural, and everything is the true beauty presented by nature.
Let the mood wander in nature, there is no noise of the city here; Without the clutter of the city; Not in a hurry; There are no tall buildings with obstacles. In nature, there is no artificial falsehood of women; People in nature have no traces of carving, and there is no pressure of utilitarian reputation.
Being in the deep mountains, the world is so vast! Breathing the air with the fragrance of the earth, listening to the songs of birds, feeling the warmth of the sun and the wind, let myself blend in with nature, enjoy the tranquility and leisure, and embrace the blue sky and white clouds with my thoughts. I feel the joy of returning to nature with my heart.
In the embrace of the mountains, sweat heartily, breathe the breath of nature heartily, put every landscape of nature into your eyes, print it into your mind, and enjoy the beauty of nature heartily!
Close your eyes, take a deep breath and bid farewell to this short and beautiful time. ...
On Friday afternoon, the sun was shining and the spring breeze was blowing. Teacher Li led us to a vivid "botany class" in the central square. There are so many plants in the central square!
Cherry blossoms are in full bloom. It is the national flower of Japan. It is pink. A gust of wind blew, and it also gave off a faint fragrance. There is still a little nectar on the stamens. Cherry blossoms bloom first and then grow leaves, so they all droop. I counted them. * * * There are more than 20 petals, which are really beautiful! Red-leaf plum has grown tall, and it hasn't blossomed yet. When flowering fails, the leaves turn red, like a red sea, which is very spectacular. Ophiopogon japonicus has grown, and it is of great use. Its roots can be used as medicine to treat diseases. Looks like leek, planted in the south. A red peach blossom has also blossomed. It also blooms first and then grows leaves. It is full of flowers, like a string of Sugar-Coated Berry, which is very beautiful. There is Metasequoia glyptostroboides in the central square, which looks beautiful, with straight trunk and triangular crown, guarding our beautiful motherland like brave soldiers. White begonia flowers are also eye-catching. It has four petals, and the trunk begins to branch at about one meter, which is really different. The humble ivy quietly blooms purple flowers on the ground. It has five petals, very cute, like a "child" under a big tree.
There are also very precious tree species in the square, such as Cinnamomum camphora, which is a tree species in the south, very rare and tenacious. There is also Ligustrum lucidum, which is a modeling tree and cloud-shaped. It is made of steel wire and takes five or six years to form. This is for beauty, for more people to appreciate. There is also a very precious flower, the golden bell flower, with small white flowers. From a distance, it looks like a pile of snow in front that hasn't melted. It is as white as snow, and it is the only golden bell flower in our city. We must take good care of it so that it can grow.
There are many plants in the square, including thorny roses, beige flowers and fragrant osmanthus trees, peaches waving to everyone, gorgeous bauhinia, stout paulownia trees and small and lovely fermented grass. Really colorful, countless, let me open my eyes!
The narrative of 8.600-word composition includes scenery description and narration. Because of streams, rivers and seas can be far-reaching; Because of the blue sky, the sun is brighter; It is because there are people who are willing to work behind the scenes that the performers on the stage are gorgeous.
At the end of the year,1February is filled with a happy atmosphere, and the smiling faces of pedestrians can be seen everywhere on the streets decorated with lights. The new year's class meeting in the class will be held soon, and I am secretly looking forward to it, hoping to become a member of the host.
Being the host of the New Year's class meeting is something I have been waiting for for a long time. Beautiful clothes, beautiful pronunciation and the eyes of the audience ... I have presided over several flag-raising ceremonies, so I must be selected.
Imagine yourself presiding in front of the stage, filled with joy.
However, the news came that I was the author of the manuscript. "Where is the host?" I asked almost anxiously, but didn't hear my name.
My heart seems to sink into the cold sea. I seem to see others become the focus of attention on the stage, but I can only watch quietly and silently.
Between my thoughts, my eyes caught a glimpse of a cheongsam, which was my costume when I performed in the art festival, and my thoughts could not help but go back to the past. Waiting backstage before singing on stage that day. I didn't expect the backstage to be so lively. Prop group, punching group, makeup group ... everyone is busy. Although it is behind the scenes, everyone's face is full of smiles, as if proudly saying, "Although I am just a behind-the-scenes worker, I am equally happy and proud to contribute to the performance silently."
Thought of here, I can't help but breathe a sigh of relief. I sat at my desk and began to think quietly. Isn't it just as proud to write a wonderful manuscript?
Being behind the scenes and being willing to be a foil is a kind of mind, a kind of tolerance and a kind of spirit. Perhaps, when I sit under the stage and watch the host read the manuscript, I will be happy that I am a behind-the-scenes worker.
Thought of here, my heart is full of joy.
9. Appreciation of Narrative Junior High School Composition with Scenery Description Since the lotus in the wind entered autumn, the weather has gradually cooled down. Today's weather is particularly cool, and the breeze echoes gently in the air, making people feel very comfortable when blowing on my face.
Taking advantage of the cool weather and the gap before the start of school, my parents and I decided to take advantage of the cool wind to see the lotus, which came out of the West Lake in June. Bus No.809 passed through the tunnel at high speed, and soon we were safely sent to the West Lake.
Standing by the lake, looking into the lake from afar, all kinds of lotus flowers are so beautiful that people can't help but want to see them. I came to the lake with a brisk pace, trying to get close to the lotus. Only heard a faint fragrance, refreshing, refreshing.
White, pink, blossoming, clusters of lotus are supported by green calyx, and bright petals are more beautiful. Lotus has different shapes, like a beautiful girl.
Next to it is a lotus flower with unfolded petals, which grows on the green lotus leaf. From a distance, it looks like a girl in a long pink dress dancing gracefully on the green carpet. In the distance are clusters of budding flowers and bones, which look like a shy girl sitting on the grass, shyly covering her cheeks with her hands; Next to it, the lotus flower is like a small drum inlaid with precious stones. Lotus girls are singing and dancing on this green stage. Accompanied by a small drum, they are holding a small concert. Lotus leaf is big, round and green, like a green jade plate; It's like putting a big umbrella in the water, one after another.
No wonder Yang Wanli, a poet in the Song Dynasty, praised the lotus in "Seeing Lin Zifang at Dawn in Jingci Temple": "Lotus leaves are infinitely green in the sky, and lotus flowers are of different colors." Under the sunshine, the clear lake water and lotus flowers complement each other, forming a beautiful "lotus picture", which is very beautiful.
How beautiful that lotus is! Everything in nature is really full of vitality.