Both "yang" and "suppression" are artistic means of emphasis. The ancients made an article emphasizing "gaining power" and also talked about the truth that we should first raise, first suppress and then raise. In the Warring States Policy, there is a story of Feng. At the beginning of the article, Wen Feng has neither hobbies nor abilities, but also loves to make trouble and complain. It was a complete failure, and the author relegated him to the lowest place. Then he turned to write about how he managed the "three caves" for Meng Changjun, and wrote about his extraordinary talent. The "suppression" at the beginning is to set off the "Yang" at the back. If you pay attention, such examples are not uncommon in excellent works at all times and in all countries.
Using this method, the author should pay attention to the contrast before and after suppression in the process of conception and writing, and most of them use the form of opposition to form contrast. In addition, the two should not be equated, but should focus on the latter. Restraint acts as a buffer. The mastery of the proportion and weight here can only be carefully understood and pondered through my constant writing practice.
Gorgeous clothes need jewelry to show nobility; Excellent articles need rhetorical embellishment to shine. The flexible use of parallelism is like adding pearls and jade to a composition.
First, give examples. Using parallelism to enumerate multiple factual arguments in argumentative essays can make the arguments magnificent and impeccable; Refutation is overwhelming. For example, the exercise "Desire is greater than the living" says: "Who hasn't died in life since ancient times? Is Wen Tianxiang's choice, Tan Sitong's choice is "I cross the knife to laugh at heaven, I want to stay in Kunlun Mountain", Zhu Ziqing's choice is "I would rather starve to death than eat American relief powder". I looked at my predecessors and found that the choices were so rich. " The author uses parallelism and enumerates examples to shock readers' minds and make the article brilliant. Another example is in practice: "envy of others will lead to bad consequences." Pang Juan, the general of Wei, was jealous of Sun Bin's talent and flogged Sun Bin, but was finally defeated by Ma Ling and forced to commit suicide in an ambush in Sun Bin. Shanxi merchants in Chu were jealous of Qu Yuan's talent and defected to Wang Huai, which led to Qu Yuan's exile and the final demise of Chu. In the Three Kingdoms period, Cao Pi was jealous of Cao Zhi's cleverness and wanted to kill his brothers and sisters, which eventually led to the ridicule of the Seven-step Poetry ... "The facts are listed in parallel and summarized concisely, making the argument thousands of miles away, and the momentum is like a rainbow.
Second, express feelings in parallel. For example, "Open your arms and embrace fraternity": "Life is love. Affection, friendship and love make life full of emotion and beauty. The thread in the hand of a kind-hearted mother makes clothes for her wayward child's body, which is the love of the family; However, although China holds our friendship, heaven is still our neighbor "is the concern of friendship;" Why * * * cut candles at the west window, but talk about the late rain' is a love miss. "The author uses three verses to form a parallelism, and makes an accurate interpretation of affection, friendship and love, full of affection and refined language. Another example is in the practice of praising father's love: "in life, with my father, I have a broad world;" "With my father, my life is brilliant; With my father, I am more stable and energetic on the road of life. " Expressing feelings in parallel, sincere and touching, stirring and warm.