Some people say that writing an article is like beading. Without a clue to connect all the elements, the article will be fragmented or chaotic. This is especially true when writing travel notes. There must be a reasonable clue running through it This clue can also be said to be the order of writing.
In travel notes, the most commonly used writing order may be whereabouts, that is, in the order of visits. For example, a travel note about a visit to a zoo can be described one by one in the order of visits. In addition, there are some clues about the organization and direction of the landscape. We suggest that beginners must use certain clues to organize articles when writing travel notes, so as to form a coherent writing habit from the beginning.
2. The theme in the travel notes.
The subject refers to the person or group that did it. Since it is a tour, there must be a theme of the tour. In the writing of travel notes, if there are no characters, it is almost the same as expository writing or landscape prose. There are many different ways to point out the theme in travel notes. For example, at the beginning of a travel note, the author wrote: "Today, students in our class visited Peking University under the leadership of Teacher Li". In addition, the theme of travel notes can also appear naturally in the writing process or be pointed out at the end of the article.
3. Scenery in Travel Notes
Scenery description is also an important part of travel notes. Man is the subject and scenery is the object. The description of scenery in travel notes should be selective and focused according to the needs of writing. The description of scenery in travel notes is best consistent with the theme of the article. For example, a classmate wrote an article about visiting the Great Wall, focusing on the ancient and spectacular scenery of the Great Wall and the surrounding clean and tidy scenic environment, and closely combining the scenery description with the themes of cultural relics protection and environmental protection.
4. Places in Travel Notes
When writing travel notes, you must pay attention to the places you want to go, such as aquarium, prairie, science and technology museum, etc.
Remember to give priority to your trip.
Although travel notes are a record of the tourism process, they are not comprehensive records. I once saw a travel note written by a college student, starting with getting up in the morning, then writing about how to eat breakfast, how to go out by car, what I saw on the road, what happened ... one after another, and how to go home at last. A travel book has written tens of thousands of words, but nothing can move people. This is not a travel note, but a running account.
Dali is located in the low-latitude plateau, with the world-famous Diancang Mountain and Zhuerhai Lake, forming a unique plateau local climate, with warm winter and cool summer, fresh air, flowers and flowers, and snow and moon all year round. The annual average temperature here is 15. 1℃, the highest in Leng Yue (1), and the hottest in July.
In Dali, the temperature is 126 days. The frost period in Dali is extremely short, and the frost-free period is as long as 229 days, which provides a suitable environment for the growth of various flowers and plants. Flowers are in full bloom all year round, fragrant and charming. Shimonoseki is known as the "windy city", with an average annual wind speed of 4. 1 m/s and good ventilation conditions, which can purify the environment and earn air. Therefore,
A long history and splendid culture have left a wealth of cultural relics and historic sites. Between Yu 'er and Yincang, the natural scenery is beautiful, Cangshan is like a screen, Erhai is like a mirror, and butterfly spring is deep and secluded, with four wonders (Xiaguanfeng, Shangguanhua, Cangshan Snow and Erhai Moon).
Dali is the main settlement of the Bai people, where ancient and rich Bai customs are preserved. When you are in go to dali, you can learn about the living customs of the Bai people, taste unique Bai flavor foods, buy satisfactory Bai folk handicrafts, and participate in the traditional Dali Bai March Street Festival celebrations.
The ancient city of Dali attracts self-help tourists from abroad, forming a famous "foreigner street" on the road of protecting the country in the city. Intoxicated by the simple folk customs and long history and culture of the Bai people, they will even stay in Dali for a long time.
-Cangshan Erhai Scenic Spot in Dali, Yunnan Province
Cangshan Erhai Lake, located in Dali Bai Autonomous Prefecture, Yunnan Province, is a place that ancient and modern tourists yearn for. Yang Sheng 'an, a famous scholar in Ming Dynasty, described it as "the mountains and seas are blue and half moon" and "looking at the sky, I felt refreshed and flew over".
At the foot of Cangshan Mountain and the shore of Erhai Lake, there is also a well-known tourist attraction-butterfly spring, butterfly spring, whose fame is related to Xu Xiake's description in his travel notes. He wrote: "In spring, there are big trees that bloom in early April like butterflies, and their wings are no different from those of raw butterflies. There are tens of millions of real butterflies hanging from the trees to the surface of the spring with their feet hooked, colorful. The number of butterflies decreased a few years ago. According to the investigation of relevant parties, the main reason is that the local climate turned to dryness, which led to butterfly migration, and a large number of pesticides were used in rural areas, which accidentally injured many butterfly larvae. However, in recent two or three years, with the gradual restoration of ecological balance and people's conscious protection measures for butterflies, the number of butterflies collected every year is increasing day by day.
—— Foreigner Street Scenic Spot in Dali, Yunnan Province
In the ancient city, Dali foreigner street was originally named "protecting the country road", which means that in the early years of the Republic of China, the people of Yunnan opposed Yuan Shikai's claim to be emperor and rose up to defend the country. Huguo Road runs east-west, with a length of 1 000m and a width of 7m. Paved with bluestone slabs, it starts from Yunnan-Tibet Highway in the west and makes love to Fuxing Street.
Later, in order to meet the needs of open tourism, Dali ancient city was designated as the main attraction of open tourism, and Camellia Hotel was designated as a foreign-related hotel. Camellia Hotel is located in the west section of Huguo Road in the ancient city. As a result, Huguo Road has become a distribution center for foreign tourists in Dali. Chinese and western flavor shops, jewelry stores, antique shops, tie-dye shops and galleries have sprung up in all walks of life, and shops on both sides are everywhere, making them famous as "Dali foreigners" at home and abroad.
Today, the name of Huguo Road in Dali ancient city has long been called "Foreigner Street" on some foreign drawings. It can be seen that the foreigner street in Dali has become a world-famous place for foreign friends and a warm home for them to live in Dali.
-Three Pagodas of Chongsheng Temple in Dali, Yunnan
The three pagodas of Chongsheng Temple are symbols of Dali and ancient Yunnan history and culture, and are one of the oldest and most magnificent buildings in southern China.
-tourist attractions in Dali ancient city, Yunnan province
Dali Ancient City (now Dali City), referred to as Yucheng for short, is one of the first batch of 24 famous historical and cultural cities in China approved by the State Council in February 1982 and one of the 44 key scenic spots in China. Located in the east of Nanzhao Dali Capital Ruins, it was built in Hongwu 15 in Ming Dynasty (A.D. 1382) and has been built repeatedly in past dynasties.
If Dali, the state capital, gives people the feeling of being bustling and noisy, then Dali is simple and quiet. There is a clear Ding Dong stream flowing in the city, and flowers and trees are planted in every household, and flowers and fruits are in full bloom. The garden teahouse hidden deep in the street is a good place for tourists to rest. After the reform and opening up, private French-style snack bars are also the favorite places for foreign guests. Traditional marble handicrafts are placed on both sides of the street for them to watch and buy.
-butterfly spring Tourist Scenic Spot, Dali, Yunnan.
Butterfly spring is at the foot of Yunnong Peak in Cangshan, 40km north of Dali. Due to long-term landscape erosion, there are few trees on the hillside. But when you walk slowly uphill for about half a mile, you will see a dazzling shadow. Walking through the antique stone workshop, a marble stone tablet about 3 meters high stands in front of you. The tablet is prismatic, and on the right side there are three Chinese characters "butterfly spring" written by Guo Moruo. Guo Laoyong's poems are engraved on the left. On the back of the tablet is a diary of Xu Xiake's visit to Dali butterfly spring. Walking along the tree-lined path for about thirty or forty meters, I saw many ancient trees, a clear spring embedded in them, bluestone at the bottom, and a spring water Ming Che. People often throw metal coins into the pool and watch them spin slowly. The top of the tree blocks the sun, the silver light at the bottom of the pool flashes and the spring water is clear.
There is a marble wall around the spring pool, and a tall old tree spans the spring. This tree is called "butterfly tree" because its flowers look like butterflies. Whenever summer comes, the "butterfly tree" blooms, and the butterflies between xanthium come here in droves to gather and dance, which is very lively. The strangest thing is that thousands of colorful butterflies cross each other and hang upside down on the butterfly tree in spring, forming countless colorful butterfly strings hanging vertically to the water.
-Xizhou Bai Folk House Scenic Spot in Dali, Yunnan.
Xizhou, located 16 km north of Dali ancient city, is a famous town in western Yunnan and Dali. Xizhou folk house represents the style of Dali Bai folk house.
The enclosed courtyard with "three squares and one wall" and "four in five patios" is a typical pattern, with a single courtyard and many courtyards. The plane is square and the shape is two-story double-eaved herringbone roof. The landlord sits in three or five rooms facing south, with civil masonry structure, wooden frame combined with tenon and mortise, and one courtyard or several courtyards are connected as a whole. The external walls are mostly painted in white (lime) and gray (fine mud).