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Wuxi senior high school entrance examination full mark composition
In 2009, Wuxi, Jiangsu, got full marks in the senior high school entrance examination. Title: Literature is a lamp.

Full score composition 1:

Literature is a lamp.

Literature, in my cognition, is the art of describing and shaping social life or expressing people's thoughts and feelings with the help of language. As long as it's art, I always think it's mysterious. Books and words are my most exposed literature.

When I was very young, I heard my brother always say, "Read and read, there is a golden house in the book, read and read, and there is a female Yan Ruyu in the book." At that time, my understanding as a child was that there were a lot of money and beautiful women in the book, so I always felt that there must be a lot of interesting things in the book. My brothers and sisters at home are much older than me, so I don't have to do the housework I can, and my parents don't have too many constraints on me, so I read my brothers and sisters' books after finishing the homework assigned by my teacher.

I have read several versions of Romance of the Three Kingdoms, The Water Margin, Song Wu and A Dream of Red Mansions since I graduated from primary school, but I like Shan Hai Jing magazine and Fable Story best, and there is a fable that I remember deeply, called Fool Moves Mountain. It is said that there was an old man who lived in the north of China in ancient times, and his name was Beishan Gong Yu. There are two mountains in the south of his home, one is called Taihang Mountain, and the other is called Wu Wang. Yugong made up his mind to lead his sons to dig up the two mountains with hoes. An old man named Hequ Zhicuo said with a smile, it's silly of you to do so. You guys can't dig up these two mountains at all. Yu Gong replied: I have my son after my death. My son died and I have a grandson. My children and grandchildren are endless. Although these two mountains are very high, they will not increase any more. If you dig less, you get less. Why not dig unevenly? Gong Yu refuted the wrong view of Zhisou, and was firm, digging mountains every day. This touched God, so he sent two immortals down to earth and moved the two mountains.

This story, through the success of Gong Yu's moving mountains, reflects the great spirit and amazing perseverance of the ancient working people in China to transform nature. I didn't realize until I saw more. I must make up my mind and make unremitting efforts to overcome difficulties.

In fact, the process of reading is like listening to a story in the dark, the process of enlightenment is like striking a match, and the realized "Tao" and "reason" are like lights lit in the dark; The more lights there are, the brighter our way forward will be.

Wuxi senior high school entrance examination perfect score composition: "I want to rely on you most" 2009-07-03 1 1:22 Birds want to fly high without relying on big birds; When the fruit is ripe, it wants to leave the branches and no longer rely on the big trees; And I, no matter where I am, whether I grow up or not, always want to rely on you, my dear mother. You often say that when I grow up, I must stand on my own feet. I must not be a "neet" or a "moonlight family" and rely on my parents all my life. Every time I hear this, I always hold my head up disdainfully, curl my mouth and say proudly, "I'm not bad for you!" " "But the in the mind is always a uncomfortable, is the feeling of heart. You know, what I want to rely on most is you, not money and material things, but your eyes, your manners and your words. When I was a child, you took me to kindergarten by bike. You loved to teach me to recite Tang poems. At that time, I learned to "think about a quiet night". I still remember you carrying me out of the car. After listening to my poem, your gentle and satisfied eyes fell on me and wrapped me up like a net. I can't understand the appreciation and encouragement in my eyes, but I feel as if I have got my favorite candy, and I will be happy and excited all day, full of motivation. In elementary school, you picked up chopsticks and hit me for the first time. Since childhood, only this time, I still remember: "Go out and get two bottles of boiling water, and mom will make you tea!" " "I flew to take boiled water to make milk tea, but my mother made a cup of bad green tea. I am full of grievances and anger, all vented on the water that I have just been called to. "Hua" suddenly spilled into the sewer. You held a chopstick tightly, took my hand and hit me at once, resulting in a red mark. "Calling you smelly and calling you willful is to teach you a lesson!" A beating, a crying, finally restrained my anger. In junior high school, I ran for class cadre. I have been used to being a monitor since I was a child, but I was not elected. Coupled with the catalysis of some words, I was so strong that I came home in tears the next day after military training. If you know me, you guessed the reason and said to me angrily, "No, it is not great!" " If you have the ability, you can win it back with your grades. "To wake the dreamer in one sentence, the monitor needs excellent grades, and I got this position by virtue of my strength after winning the first place in three consecutive exams. I'm afraid I can't live without you, mom. Your eyes give me courage and motivation; Your actions have taught me cleverness and convergence; Your words have brought me vigilance and direction. No matter where the birds fly, no matter whether the fruit falls or not, under the blue sky and white clouds, I want to rely on you most in my life, mom.

Full score composition 1

Under the guidance of Li Bai,

Wuxi examinee

It turns out that I have been wearing the same black all the time, blocking myself in an ivory tower, losing my family, my friendship and my studies. Since reading Li Bai, I found myself wandering on the left side of happiness.

"Who can't afford to miss home?"

In winter, the wind is biting, and I don't wear a down jacket. Like me, there are many bravados, but when I was shivering, my parents brought clothes like timely rain and asked for help. Seeing this, I am particularly envious, and my nose hurts: my parents will not be so kind to me, and they will definitely blame me for wearing too little. I cringed and lived in a corner of the classroom, recalling the warmth of my family and finding myself like Li Bai. I don't know how long it took. Maybe I was hallucinating. I saw my mother smiling at me outside the window with her clothes, but the water vapor in her mouth was so clearly visible. At this point, it is clear that there is liquid spilling from the corner of the eye, sweet. Thank Li Bai.

"Peach Blossom Lake is deep in thousands of feet, not as good as Wang Lun."

I envy Li Bai very much. With my bosom friend Rainbow Lun, no matter how beautiful the scenery is, I can only feel sorry for myself and lament the scenery. She and I have become strangers. I don't remember why we quarreled at that time. It's just a small matter, but we are stubborn and can't let go of the so-called dignity. As for today, I don't know how to express it. I don't want this friendship to disappear. I will write it in my composition. I hope the teacher can help me solve it. But the teacher actually saw it in person, but my face was hot: it's over, she wants to know! The teacher still read with emotion: "I remember when I was young, you loved to talk and I loved to laugh ... Later, I didn't know how many flowers were lost in my dream ... Peach Blossom Pond was deeper than thousands of feet, not as good as Wang Lun." Especially the last sentence, he read it so loudly, I think my doubts are beyond redemption. When I secretly looked up at her, she smiled at me like an electric shock. I froze for a while, and then I felt that the future was bright. Thanks to Li Bai!

One day, I will ride the long wind, break through the huge waves, raise my muddy sails and sail in the deep sea.

I feel that my qualifications are not low, but I lack perseverance and courage in my studies! I was very depressed when I failed in the exam again. I'm studying Li Bai's Hard to Walk, and I'm moved by his spirit of not being afraid of ice and snow! His career is bumpy and his life is frustrated, but he still has the courage to go forward. If I can ride the wind and waves, there will be a new atmosphere. From then on, I worked hard, dared to drill and worked hard, and really achieved good results. Thanks to Li Bai!

Under the guidance of Li Bai, I walked on the left side of happiness, and the door to success is not far away!

[Comment] Under the guidance of Li Bai, this article aims at "I walk on the left side of happiness", which can be described as "receiving" clearly and firmly. By combining three fragments and borrowing three poems of Li Bai, I combined my understanding of poetry with my personal life, and explained my understanding of family, friendship and life pursuit, which can be described as "freedom".

The article can be opened and closed freely, and the recurring theme of "Thanks to Li Bai" has played an excellent role in strengthening the theme expression.