This is because appearance description is an important part of character description and plays an important role in revealing the character characteristics of characters. Appearance description includes static appearance description and dynamic appearance description.
How to write the appearance of the characters in detail? 1. Static appearance description: Just like describing a painting or a photo, it describes the appearance of the whole character, including appearance (facial appearance), figure (height and figure), clothing (clothing), age and gender. When describing the static appearance, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) We should grasp the unique appearance characteristics of the characters and describe them in detail.
Different age, gender, personality, occupation, living environment and living conditions will definitely make the characters look different. Although the description of static appearance includes many aspects, it does not mean to cover everything. We must grasp the distinctive features of the characters' own appearance and describe them in detail, so as to write who looks like who (that is, we can find the corresponding person smoothly according to the text).
Only in this way can we leave a deep and vivid impression on readers. Specific methods: ① Pay attention to the five senses and make a specific description.
In this respect, we should pay special attention to "drawing eyes-writing hearts". Mr. Lu Xun, a great writer, once said: "To draw a person's characteristics with great economy, it is best to draw his eyes."
I think this is completely correct. If you draw all the hair, even if it is realistic, it is meaningless. For example, Mr. Mu's eyes are double eyelids, and his black eyes are round and big.
At first glance, it's nothing special, but if you look closely, Mr. Mu's eyes can still talk! This description of the appearance is only two sentences, which writes out the understanding characteristics of Teacher Mu. (2) Pay attention to the characteristics of clothing and describe it in detail.
Different customs, hobbies and temperament often lead to different characters' costumes. Therefore, grasping the characteristics of clothing and describing it in detail is another important way to draw a person's characteristics economically.
He is in the kitchen, with a round purple face, a small felt hat and a bright silver collar. This shows that his father loved him very much and was afraid of his death, so he made a wish in front of the Buddha and trapped him with a circle. A few words not only describe the appearance of the characters, but also show the local conditions and customs of Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province at that time, and at the same time write his father's love for the land.
Grasping the unique appearance characteristics of the characters and describing them truly and selectively can make the characters in the pen lifelike and achieve the effect of seeing their true colors; It can effectively avoid the appearance of "thousands of faces" (all "high nose, big eyes, double eyelids, a smile and a dimple"). (2) to describe in order.
Appearance description should also have a certain order. Before you write, you should also think about what order to write, and then write one by one. For example, we are going to write about a person's appearance from two aspects: appearance and clothing. If we insert the description of clothes into the description of looks, it will confuse readers.
Such a chaotic appearance description can't leave a deep impression on readers. What shall we do (1) in the order from the whole to the part.
That is, first describe the whole picture of the character, and then describe the local "close-up" of the character. You can write the figure of the character first, whether it is tall and burly or thin and thin, and then selectively describe the head, body, limbs and so on; To write a character's face, you can first write the face as a whole, and then selectively describe the forehead, eyes, cheeks, nose, mouth, chin and other parts.
In the snowstorm, a veteran sat motionless on the ice cliff like a statue. He was covered with snowflakes and looked very calm and natural.
He was wearing a shabby single coat, and pieces of cloth stuck to him like dead leaves. (Monument) This kind of appearance description first describes the whole picture of the old soldier "like a statue", and then describes his expression and dress in a clear and vivid order.
(2) According to the order from the part to the whole. That is, first describe the obvious characteristics of some parts, and then write the whole picture of the characters.
The long prison life made my brother look pale and haggard. He has a big head and a small body, so his friends love him very much and call him "radish head".
("My brother's radish head") This kind of appearance description first describes his face, head and body, and then describes his whole picture like a "radish head", which is orderly, concise and vivid. (3) In the order of different aspects.
That is, it is selectively described from different aspects such as appearance, figure, clothing and age. There are a pair of sparkling eyes on a bronzed face and a white beard floating on a pointed chin.
He is tall and has broad shoulders. His voice is as loud as Hong Zhong's, shining on the land. (Grandpa Buffalo) This appearance description is described in detail in the order of "appearance → figure → voice → walking posture", and the vivid characters are vividly depicted on the paper.
Second, dynamic appearance description: it depicts the expression of characters in a specific situation. People's emotions of joy, anger, sadness and joy, as well as lively, dull, impatient and quiet personality, will be revealed on God's expression.
Therefore, dynamic appearance description can reveal the gender characteristics of characters better than static description. When describing the dynamic appearance of characters, it is best to combine it with the static appearance description, and with the description of characters' words and actions.
This writing is not only concrete, but also effective. Ironman zheng big eyes, "oh? ? Cough! " He shouted to the driver, "Turn around and go back!" These two sentences ("Remembering ironman") combine the description method ("Eyes Wide") with the description language, and truly and concretely show the scene that ironman was extremely surprised and eager to apologize to his aunt after learning the truth.
When writing character notes, we often describe the language of the characters. Because language is the "gateway" of the soul, language description is an important means to directly express the mental outlook of the characters and make them "live".
This requires us to master the specific methods of writing characters' language. How to write the characters' language well and concretely? The following passage will give us many hints: I cried and cried and heard someone come in. Looking back, it was my stepfather, so I turned my head to one side.
He sat next to me with his head in his hands.
2.500-word character description composition can't forget "Spice Girl"
There is a "spice girl" in our class, surnamed Zhang. She is of medium height, and her dark face is embedded with Ming Che's big eyes. Wearing "Nike" sportswear, a pair of invincible hot wheels at the foot, and a short hair blown like a haystack by the wind. I thought she was a boy if I didn't look carefully!
The hot girls in our class are not to be taunted, although they are girls. If you piss her off, no one can guarantee the consequences. Move out of the Jianghu, or sneak home. When you are heavy, you are out of breath. Who will be unlucky enough to encounter a "volcanic eruption"? It's not that the egg hits the stone-it's overreaching! I saw a hot girl named Zhang Avalanche. That guy finally gained a foothold, and we Zhang Daxia kicked a shadowless foot in Foshan and caught our opponent off guard. In order to save his life, the poor man had to use thirty-six tricks-walking is the best!
In fact, don't look at a hot girl like us, so overbearing and dominating the Jianghu. She has troubles, too. She told me that she didn't want to be the boss in the Jianghu anymore. She wants to turn into a lady. However, who can imagine a hot girl becoming a lady? I thought: She must be joking with me!
The next day, the spice girl really changed into a lady's dress, and even my super friend who is tired of being together every day almost didn't recognize it. She is wearing a pink dress, a pair of white leather shoes, and even her schoolbag is not as cool as before. She looks like a good girl.
But as the saying goes: things are only three. Our hot girl's image as a good girl didn't last three days. She said to me, "It's too hard to be a lady. I'd better be my Jianghu leader again! " As she spoke, she fiddled with her haystack fashion hairstyle. Alas, she is a leopard cannot change her spots.
On the other hand, the spice girl is still very kind, but sometimes she likes to be brave and refuses to give up! However, kindness is a good thing, but you'd better change your hot temper. Make as many friends as possible. Students only live in harmony, not fight. Only by uniting with your classmates will everyone like you more and your popularity will rise!
3. Write a 450-word composition describing the characters, which requires that the language expression and actions are grinning. He often leans his head back, and these two pieces of black have become the most prominent features on his face. His head is angular and his eyes are looking at the sky. I seldom see him smile. He is famous and well-known, so he can easily become the object of comics. He often wears a gray robe. His nose, eyes and mouth seem to be too concentrated in a small area of his face, and two jade chopsticks hang down from his upper lip. He is tall with a mouth like a gourd ladle, but his shoulders are always high. We nicknamed him "Xu Minghu". I often draw cartoons for him. Because he is fierce, he is lifelike. He has a small silver frame and sometimes forgets to suck it. He seems to be mourning for someone, and his nose is a little red. He looks very strange, walking with a straight face, flat, and taking eight steps. The head is very sharp, like distiller's grains, with two oval black blocks in the middle. When I look at the robe, it looks greasy, bare and bright, and the rest of my life is dying. I drew an outline, but my face is square. I have to breathe hard when I say a word or two, which is a bit like the hag in the painting of Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio. Liang Shiqiu is one of my Chinese teachers.
Although he is very strict. He wears a pair of glasses made of black crystal and sucks from time to time. He often hides two buckets of water and snot in his nostrils. I didn't catch the robe when it was in a neat stage. If I smile, it will look more fierce, but after all, it is our teacher surnamed Xu.
4. A 450-word composition describing the characters. My two sisters came back, wearing a black trench coat and stepping on a pair of black shoes, which further set off her slender figure.
The long black shawl hair used to be dyed into the popular yellow today, showing the breath of urban women. When I stood in front of her, I felt more like an ugly duckling. Second sister also came here travel-stained. Before she reached the door, her two-year-old nephew Yangzi threw herself into her grandmother's arms and stared at the stranger.
"Xiaoji is much older," sighed her sister. Second sister smiled mischievously.
Second sister is old in the snow and has some black spots on her face. She was very fat before she got married, so she implemented many weight loss plans. For example, she drank a big bowl of soup before dinner and stood for an hour after dinner. Finally, she ate a lot of apples and tomatoes, but it was useless. After getting married, she became thinner. Today she wore a pink coat and an unclean white sweater, but it was too thin. Friends and relatives around the elder sister to be caring and attentive.
Everyone sighed with envy: "Your family is really good and has produced such a good college student." Then mother will lift up her overflowing face and smile proudly.
In fact, my sister is only a secondary school student, and she just got a superior job by virtue of her talent! Because of my sister's sense of superiority, this poor family has a proud capital. Big sister is like a red flower, and smiles more like a flower under the envy of everyone. People are used to admiring enchanting flowers and ignoring the green leaves under the red flowers.
Just like the second sister who stood silently in the corner, she paid a flower-like youth for this family. Who can read it? I still clearly remember that my family contracted a hill-like apple forest that year.
There are large tracts of flue-cured tobacco, red pepper, crisp white radish, cucumber and cauliflower flying all over the sky.
The scenery is beautiful, but it is hard for my second sister, who was only five years old that year. She dug her friends of the same age in the field for the Dragon Boat Festival prematurely, while my second sister stood under the apple tree and let her tears fall. The same youth, the same simplicity and innocence, but her youth is destined to be in dirt and dust. After a long time, his body will blend into the soil and his face will have the color of the sun. How can it be perfect? Mom said, "When the Apple Wheel Contract expires, I will buy my second sister a dream bike for her." .
After a few years, the elder sister found a job and the apple circle expired. Second sister also got a bicycle, just an old bicycle that kept clicking! Most people my second sister's age have gone out to explore the world.
Second sister also had a crush, but looking at her elderly parents and the dark land, she hesitated and chose to stay. The days passed like this, bloom. Thanks. NPC is old, it's time to get married, married and left, and her parents gave her enough dowry.
They felt a clear conscience. Second sister is like a flower in bud. Just as she was about to blossom, she suddenly got into a bug. Although she has blossomed, she doesn't have enough luster.
Second sister likes to wear skirts, but she never wears them. She has a snow-white skirt with concord and faint orchids on it, which is deeply pressed under her box. She said, "She may never have a chance to wear it again, because it is the lost youth." .
Now the elder sister lives a comfortable life in the bustling city, and the second sister lives on the meager income earned by her brother-in-law. Neighbors always say when they see me, "When you grow up, you should be like your sister, but don't.
"There is nothing wrong with bloom, but who can really read the figure standing quietly in the sunset in that field?
5. Write a composition of about 450 words to describe a person. It was a midsummer night. I went downstairs for a walk and met my former good friend Wu Wenbin. We haven't seen each other for a long time, and we had a good chat as soon as we met. Chatting, he suddenly asked me; "Mao Mao, how many push-ups can you do?" I shook my head and said, "I don't know." Before I finished, he got up on the ground and said, "I can do more than 20 things." You must do more than me. " Soon after he finished speaking, he stood up and said, "One * * * has made 25, so try it." I have no choice but to bite the bullet and do it. You know, I'm not good at sports because I'm too fat. I was on the ground, and I didn't do five things, so I lost. Wu Wenbin saw it and said, "I didn't expect you to make five. I think you are great. " ! "Hearing this, I blush to the neck. If there are cracks in the ground, I'd like to go in, but it's impossible.
When I got home, I lay in bed, tossing and turning, unable to sleep. I thought to myself, he can do 25, why can't I? Am I dumber than him? No, it's impossible! I am by no means more stupid than him, but I practice less than him. Yes, I must work hard to surpass him. So from that day on, I made up my mind to do five push-ups every day. In a day or two, with the increase of days, gradually, gradually, I can do more than 30 at a time. After a period of hard exercise, I can already do more than 40.
A year passed quickly, and on a midsummer night, I saw Wu Wenbin again in the same place. I offered to compete in push-ups. He said yes everywhere. He did it first, or he did 25. After that, he looked at me triumphantly and said to me as if he were laughing, can you do so much? Now it's my turn. I think of that night a year ago and the price I paid for my efforts. I can't help feeling refreshed. Suddenly, an unknown force broke out and made 50 in one breath. When I finished, I found that Wu Wenbin was tired. It was a long time before he came to his senses and stupidly asked me, "How can you be so great?" I smiled and replied, "Thank you. If you didn't touch my strong heart, how could I train so hard and surpass you? " "Oh, I see ..." He said with a wry smile.
This is something I want to tell you.
In fact, I am also very competitive in other aspects, which is why I always win.
This is me, a strong person.
6. Let me talk about the violence of girls. 300 words refer to the violence of girls on campus. I think everyone will be familiar with it. A few days ago, some netizens uploaded a video called "Qingyuan junior high school girls stripped off and kicked their classmates * * *". In the video, the girl who beat them stripped off her clothes and beat her, and then even kicked the girl's * * with her feet and spat on her face. Let's wait and see.
It can be said that our educators and our parents should also reflect on whether we have created a stage for children to release their hearts; Our film and television network culture workers should reflect on why they always create some patterns of violent culture for children. The violence and vulgarization of film and television network culture is to gain attention with the help of ugly gimmicks. Money is earned, but children don't learn well.
Put yourself in others' shoes. You're the victim. How scared you should be. A careful analysis of every incident of school violence reveals that every abuser has serious psychological problems. According to the relevant data, among the teenagers below 17, at least 30 million people in China suffer from various emotional disorders and behavioral problems. This also highlights the lag and urgency of mental health education for primary and secondary school students in China.
I think violent people should be dealt with most seriously, and they should pay for the violence. They should not be held accountable just because they are minors, which will only make violent incidents happen again and again. This is irresponsible behavior, and relevant laws and regulations should be promulgated as soon as possible.
7. A 500-word composition on character description, my friend.
When I was in the fourth grade in Guangdong, I had a picky little friend.
Her clever and keen eyes are embedded in the melon face, and there is a small cherry mouth under her small and exquisite nose, which is very lively and lovely. A tall ponytail with a unique bow.
She is from Sichuan and likes to eat Chili. Her other hobby is finding fault. She is a health worker in her class. Should she have her nails cut or her hair cut? She should wear a hairpin that doesn't match her color and skin color. Someone said, "You are too generous!" But she didn't manage it properly, so she became recognized as the "king of nitpicking" in her class.
She is not only in my class, but also my deskmate and neighbor. So I picked countless thorns. In a Chinese class, the teacher gave out monthly examination papers. Wow! I got 100, which made me ecstatic. Just after class, "picky king" took my test paper and saw her scanning line by line. Then her keen little eyes stared at a place and said to the teacher, "You have misjudged this question." The teacher looked at the test paper and said, "You're right, it's the teacher's negligence." My test paper suddenly became 99 points.
Our family moved to Shanghai soon. At the end of the term, after the exam, I set off with my family that afternoon.
One day soon after I arrived in Shanghai, I received a courier from Guangdong. When I opened the eye-catching three characters at the bottom of the homepage, the name of "picky king" first came to my eye. I thought to myself, how can this "king of nitpicking" catch up with Shanghai? Let's look at this letter first. I read it carefully: "Po, congratulations!" " You got a double percentage at the end of the term. The teacher and everyone miss you very much. I picked the most faults for you before. Please don't hate me ... "
After reading the letter, looking at the test paper and certificate, I couldn't help crying, thinking: I really should thank the "picky king". If she hadn't helped me correct so many mistakes at ordinary times, it would be difficult to have good grades today.
Now, I often think of this good partner. With such friends, I will make faster progress.