Just like Wei Zhi, he hesitated about the tragic situation of "a letter hit Chaoyang Road, 8,000 in the evening", but he protested resolutely. Furthermore, he made Emperor Taizong understand the truth that "advice is most unpleasant to the ear" and helped him become a wise king praised by later generations in history. Just like Newton, the first reaction to the apple with a broken head was not to smash it angrily, but to think of the doubts that had fallen apart in the past. Furthermore, he put forward the law of universal gravitation and became the founder of physics.
Further, no matter what thoughts or mentality, everything that goes forward is completely different from the convergence that goes forward. No matter from inadvertently inserting a willow tree, or from racking your brains to being suddenly enlightened, further, you will always feel a different taste and appreciate a different realm.
Going further is sometimes a responsibility. Give up foreign excellent work and return to the backward motherland to further devote themselves to the development of the motherland; Forget the chain reaction and reputation brought by the meager support of the judiciary, and further, issue a roar of doubt to the authority; Full of passion and social responsibility, go further and bring beauty into a society with moral deficiency from ourselves.
Taking responsibility may be praised, or it may pay a heavy price, but further, it is not only yourself who have a clear conscience, but also those who are carried away by public opinion. Farther is sometimes a hope.
Knowing that well-meaning help was misunderstood, he still extended a helping hand to the old man who fell to the ground; Knowing that some people regard begging as a profession, they will still send greetings to beggars squatting in downtown corners; Knowing that countless people gave their lives to save the drowning man, they still jumped into the water and comforted the panicked drowning man with warm eyes. Although negative public opinion is full of ears, good things don't go out, and the social image of bad things spreading thousands of miles is broken, it will further give hope to those who are desperate for society and inject positive blood into negative people.
Further development is sometimes a kind of growth. Dare not punish elders when they do something wrong, and dare not admit their mistakes; Be panicked by the sudden situation, further, learn to be calm; Rack one's brains on the lessons that have lost confidence, and further, I raise my pen and my thoughts fly.
Every step requires great courage, overcoming fear and having confidence in yourself. Growth is a process, which may be difficult, but further, it will benefit you a lot and make you more determined and confident about the future.
Sometimes it is difficult to go further, but many times it is actually very simple. Take this step, strengthen your mind, strengthen your mentality, and go further, and you will be farther away from your goal.
I don't know what I am writing. How do you do this every time you write a composition? No center, no theme, no prominence, how to change it? 》。
2. Competition makes me write more about how much competition there is on the road of life. You won't know what strength is until you have experienced competition.
I just entered the junior high school gate and am a top student. There are 25 students in that class, and of course the pressure is not small, because there are a large number of learning elites in this class. In the first month, I tried and tried again. Because the content is relatively simple, I sat on the top ten throne. At that time, I was very happy I reported good news to my parents as soon as school was over, and my parents smiled with relief. In the second month, the content deepened step by step, which was undoubtedly a great pressure for me with poor foundation. I also studied hard, but after this Chinese exam, my self-confidence was hit. I really wanted to give up at that time, because the result of my efforts was still not ideal, but I survived. I understand that hard work may not have the best result, but you must work hard. Next, I study hard and hope to do better in the next Chinese exam. The next month, there were two science exams, two math exams and two English exams. I faced them bravely. Although I tried my best and didn't get the best results, I still face it positively and optimistically. I was defeated again and again in the study contest. I stood up again and again and entered junior high school, which was much more bumpy. In the second month, although my ranking dropped by 9 places, I didn't give up, and I tried to be in the top ten next time.
Competition makes me afraid of failure and find strength. Strength makes me go forward in the competition, and I am no longer afraid of the crisis ahead. If I fail and fall, I will always stand up, move on and face it optimistically. I learned a lot from the competition, but also some pressure, which gave me profound knowledge, modesty and perseverance.
Competition can be terrible, don't be afraid, go ahead bravely, and some pressure will turn into motivation to meet more challenges. Competition makes me stronger!
3. Ask for help-let's make a further composition on * * * and prosperity. This is a very realistic society, most people are walking in a hurry, paying little attention to their own side, let alone giving some help.
It seems that everything around me has nothing to do with me. Some people are even a little cold-blooded. Even if there is something about human life around them, he just takes a curious look and walks away without looking back, as if it were just an irrelevant landscape.
I remember that on the eve of the revolution a hundred years ago, it was common to help some strangers, give some poor people a bag of ocean and provide some places for travelers in trouble. But what about now? Do someone a little favor and everyone may be famous everywhere.
Perhaps, there are still some good people in this society, good people, but only a small part of society! Charity has been a good practice since ancient times. Some ancient people even took it as a hobby and gave it generously to the poor. However, nowadays, few people say that charity is also a hobby, and most people just regard it as a way to raise awareness for business. What makes us downplay this traditional virtue? I remember when I was a child, I often heard my parents tell me that only relatives in this world are sincere to themselves, others can't be so good to themselves, and even brothers and sisters may not be so good to themselves.
However, these were not established in some previous dynasties, at least most brothers were sincere. I remember there was a rumor on the Internet recently that an old lady fell down, and a kind passerby went to help her up, but she was slandered by the old lady, saying that the passerby who helped her hit him and asked him to pay for it.
This also makes those well-intentioned people who put down their hearts to help others feel chilling. Because of this, the world is full of doubts. Some people want to know whether it is worth helping, while others want to know whether this kind of help has any purpose.
It is precisely because of these complicated ideas that we find it troublesome to help others, and some people are afraid to accept such help. I think that if we don't weigh the advantages and disadvantages of helping and accepting, those superior people don't consider the return of human feelings, but just do a convenient thing with their own ability.
And the people who are helped have no psychological burden. Perhaps, charity will spread widely around the world. And this country that has not yet reached the level of wealth will become more ideal because of charity.
4. Write a composition of about 700 words with the topic of "Step Forward", stop at the crossroads and find the way forward. I am confused and eager to ask myself: which way is right and which is my own? Left? Right?
More than a thousand years ago, the same crossroads and the same questions were blown away by the wind for a thousand years. Iraqis have disappeared, the voice of Iraqis is still there, people are still there, and there are still people in this life. Today people don't see Gu Yue, but this month they took photos of the ancients. Today, only people now are ancient people. ...
When I feel that time flies at the intersection, time quietly beckons to me and rushes towards Zhu Ziqing's "hurry". The ancients chose that road, and I looked for it on the ground. Branches and leaves are dancing, where are the footprints of our predecessors? Over time, it will leave its own mark, and at the same time it will disappear the human footprint. I stepped forward! But ... I took back my left foot just now. No, only one chance. Every attempt can be hell. I don't want to fail. Why should I move forward? why ...
There are sunshine, trees and flowers here. ...
Wait a minute, there-in front of me, the sunshine there is brighter, the trees there are denser, and the flowers there are more beautiful than here. This is just the beginning, but I face heaven: I hear the singing of angels, how beautiful and loud!
I go forward with the hope of happiness, even if the road ahead is hard, even if my heart is broken, even if my bones are broken, I go forward and get closer and closer to my goal. ...
5. Ask about the courage to ask questions and further topics. Dare to try.
In the hot sun, a group of hungry crocodiles were trapped in a pond that was about to run out of water. Faced with this situation, only a small crocodile got up and left the pond. It tries to find a new oasis of existence. There is less and less water in the pond, and the strongest crocodile begins to devour its own kind. It seems that the surviving crocodiles can't escape the fate of being swallowed, but no crocodile left. The pond seems to have completely dried up, and the only big crocodile died of hunger and thirst. However, what about the brave little crocodile? After many days of trekking, fortunately, it didn't give up halfway, but found an oasis with rich aquatic plants on the arid land.
This is the general content of a short article I read. After reading it, I got a lot of inspiration Imagine that if the little crocodile didn't dare to try and find another way of life, it would not escape the bad luck of losing its life in the pond; And other crocodiles, if they are not satisfied with the status quo and dare to try, how can they die in a dry pond! This shows how important it is to be brave in trying!
Throughout the ages, all successful people have the spirit to try. Edison, the inventor of electric lamp, made more than 8000 attempts to find a suitable material as filament. At the beginning of the experiment, he found 1600 kinds of heat-resistant materials and repeated the experiment for nearly 2000 times. As a result, he found that only platinum was more suitable, but platinum was better than Huang Jingui, which means the experiment failed. Faced with such failure, most people will definitely choose to give up. But he didn't. Instead, he continued to try to find the ideal filament material from plants and tried more than 6,000 kinds of plants. Through constant attempts, Edison finally achieved great success and brought "light" to mankind. This "bright" light is not so much the light of electricity as the light of the spirit of courage to try. In fact, as long as we think about it carefully, we will be surprised to find that among the more than 1000 achievements he has made, there is no one that is not the result of constant attempts. "You get what you try" tells the secret of his success. There are Nobel who developed detonators, lomonosov who discovered the law of thunder and lightning, and the Wright brothers who flew into the sky for the first time ... What amazing achievements did they make that were not the result of hard work? Writing here, I am thinking: while worshiping great men, should we worship the spirit of striving to achieve great men?
We need this spirit not only in science, but also in our study and life. In our study and life, we should try to raise our hands to speak, try to question textbooks, try to discuss with classmates, try to understand and care about others ... In constant attempts, our wisdom will grow; In constant attempts, our ability will be improved; In constant attempts, our humanity will be sublimated. Keep trying, and we will climb one wisdom peak after another.
Friends, have the courage to try! It is the mother of almost all achievements.
6. Take that famous saying one step further: Read thousands of books and take the 400-word Wan Li Road. "
Yes, this sentence made me understand that reading can improve my writing level and change my learning attitude. I remember when I was in the second grade of primary school, my grades couldn't go up anyway, especially when I looked at pictures and wrote poorly. I've been complaining about how my mother gave birth to my stupid head. Sometimes the teacher asks me to look at pictures and talk about topics, and I blush and can't answer. No one plays with me after class. I hate having a stupid head.
I remember once, when my birthday arrived, the teacher took out a present for me, which was a book. The teacher also wrote a famous saying on the package, which called "Read thousands of books and Walk Wan Li Road". At first, I didn't know what this meant. Later, I finally understood, so I used the time after class to recite ancient poems. I read them aloud, and finally I can recite them. "Ding-ding, it's time for class." After the teacher came in, I began to ask who could recite ancient poems. I raised my hand high, which surprised my teachers and classmates. The teacher asked me to recite them. I finished it loudly and emotionally. The teacher encouraged me. "
Read thousands of books and take Wan Li Road ". This is a universal truth, but it can give us meaningful enlightenment.
7. In the new year's composition, the 500-word Winter Girl has arrived, and 20 13 is smiling and waving to us! In the coming year, we have had laughter and sunshine, but these will become memories! Everything presented to us will be brand new! The new year brings me a lot of hope: I hope the world is full of peace without war. The poor can live in spacious, bright and comfortable rooms, and their children can receive a good education and live a happy life! I hope everyone can travel in the boundless space by space shuttle and see the magic and beauty of space; I hope there will be rivers on Mars, full of life force, so that people can live on Mars! I hope to build a strong levee, so that floods will no longer flood, people will no longer be attacked by floods and tsunamis, and people in disaster areas will have a peaceful home! I hope robots can replace coal miners in underground mining, so that coal miners will no longer be hurt by gas explosion and their children will no longer endure the pain of losing their loved ones! In the city of hope, I am surrounded by trees and flowers, and there are many solar cars on the street, so that the air will not be polluted by car exhaust. An air purification device can be installed on the chimney of the factory, so that we can see blue sky and white clouds every day! The new year is a brand-new starting point, everyone will have an expectation, and my tomorrow will be more exciting. Therefore, in my vision for a bright future, I also expressed my new expectation: I will make greater progress in the new year. In the new year, I am determined to be a silent giant and a master of action! Because I know: success is not achieved by dreams, but by your own actions! Of course, in the new year, in order to make new achievements in learning, we must make unremitting efforts, "a hard work and a harvest"! Learning is not only an interest, but also a responsibility, which I should do and must do well. At the same time, learning is bound to have a burden. Without suffering, there will be no progress and promotion. I will turn my joy and sadness into the driving force and motivation for progress, and constantly overcome difficulties and make progress. Success will bring us joy, but there must be hard sweat behind success! I am about to enter junior high school, so I should cherish my time. Time flies, the sun and the moon fly. I want to enrich myself in precious time and turn my ideal into an irresistible power! In the new year, let's dust off our hearts, get ready and make great strides towards our goals! With expectations and dreams, we will enter a new year. We can't change our looks, but we can show our smiles. You can't control others, but you can control yourself; You can't predict tomorrow, but you can make use of today; You can't win everything, but you can do your best in anything! Desire+action+persistence, the new year will be sunny! May New Year's wishes come true.
8. The topic is how to write my flying in an 800-word composition.
Every time I see birds flying freely in the blue sky, I think: if only I could fly in the blue sky like a bird!
I want to fly.
I want to fly in the vast sky and see the blue sea and graceful coconut trees in Hainan. Go to Taklimakan to see the vast sand sea and listen to the camel bells in the depths of the sand sea. When I arrived at the Great Wall by plane, I could see the majestic figure of the Great Wall. It stretches on the top of the mountains, across the north and south of the Yellow River, like a black dragon, lying across the land of China. It embodies the strong perseverance and high wisdom of the ancient people in China, and is the pride of the Chinese nation! When I arrived in Yuan Ye by plane, I saw endless wheat fields, and the breeze blew and set off waves of wheat. Vilen is golden. Hard-working farmers worked hard in the wheat waves. If it is sowing season, my plane can also sow for farmers! I planted seeds one by one, as if it were raining. Sowing the seeds also sowed the hope of farmers' harvest!
I want to fly, I want to fly higher.
I want to fly a spaceship into space and visit unknown planets. Make friends with shining stars, and make friends with rotating satellites. I want to take the seeds of the earth there and let them take root on other planets. ...
I want to fly to the moon, to find the legendary Guanghan Palace, to find the goddess Chang 'e and the beautiful osmanthus tree, and to bring them greetings from the earth. ...
I want to fly, I want to fly higher, I want to fly farther. I want to be like a sponge, absorb more knowledge, make myself strong, enrich myself and put wings on my dreams! Please believe me, my dream will come true in the near future!
Fantasy flying
2008- A Day China People Can't Forget. This year, Beijing, the capital of China people, will host the 28th Global Olympic Games. Let's fly with the colorful flags fluttering in our hearts!
This year is the first time that China has hosted the Olympic Games. Over the years, the people of China have worked hard to learn how to develop their country and practiced it many times, so as to make the motherland stronger and let people all over the world know that today's China is no longer a backward country that achieved nothing in the past, but a country that is developing strongly. Now, China can host the 2008 Olympic Games, which is the pride of China people! We want to show ourselves to people all over the world and tell them that China is the best!
"Water Cube" is an Olympic swimming pool, which is very spectacular. I remember seeing his face when I was playing in Beijing. Although it has not yet been built, it has not affected its beauty. From a distance, its blue coat that day was very special, like a near-re-embodiment beauty, full of charm. The whole building of "Water Cube" consists of more than 3,000 air pillows of different sizes and shapes, covering an area of 654.38+10,000 square meters, ranking first in the world. In addition to the ground, the exterior adopts membrane structure. The successfully installed air cushion will be inflated into "bubbles" through the inflation pipe installed on the steel frame in advance, and the whole inflation process will be intelligently monitored by the computer, and the "bubbles" will be kept in the best state according to the air pressure, lighting and other conditions at that time. This kind of film material similar to "bubble bag" has self-cleaning function, which makes the film surface basically dust-free. Even if there is dust, natural precipitation is enough to make it clean as new. In addition, the membrane material has good compression resistance, so that people can "play trampoline" on it, and "it will not be crushed if a car is put on it normally". Once the adventitia breaks, according to the emergency plan, the damaged adventitia can be repaired or replaced within 8 hours. The glittering and translucent coat of "Water Cube" is also dotted with numerous white bright spots, called plating spots, which can change the direction of light and have the effect of heat insulation and astigmatism. Do you think the Water Cube is amazing?
Let's talk about the "Bird's Nest" first. This is an all-steel Olympic hall with many assets. For this reason, there was a hot speculation, which led to the price increase of steel bars nationwide. Moreover, it boldly exposed its structure to everyone, which is a miracle in the world.
Many people who have seen the design model of the "Bird's Nest" describe it as a warm bird's nest made of a stadium with a capacity of 65,438+10,000 people and a branch-like steel net! The "nest" used to nurture and take care of life places human hopes for the future. It is said that director Zhang Yimou has reconstructed the Bird's Nest under construction in order to plan the lighting ceremony!
How wonderful it is for us to build our country in this way! My heart is flying! Fantasy flying
I hope you can comment on my composition, so that I can make progress on the road of writing. This should not be a successful composition, and there are even some logical problems. Don't say wrong words, typing will inevitably be wrong. )
For example, "In summer, big trees are flourishing and their trunks are straight, just like towering trees." The last metaphor is inappropriate. "When the wind blows, the trees flutter with the wind and are uneven, giving people a feeling of elegance." Trees can't move, so it's more appropriate to write leaves. "Deeply influenced by it." Is there such a word? Haven't you finished writing the sentence "Accompanied by the wonderful dance in the air"?
However, I still want to affirm the author's writing style. It can be seen that the author has a large vocabulary and a detailed description. But the style of writing is not very smooth, and the author seems to deliberately want to describe beauty. I want to say that the connotation of the article is more important than whether the writing is beautiful or not. I wrote it casually. Is this prose? If there is, I won't say more. If not, the structure is unclear and the subject is not prominent, which is the fatal wound of this paper.
Finally, I wish you drift away on the road of writing.
10. Write a composition in comparison [thinking analysis]
Let's talk about the contrast in Lu Xun's Kong Yiji first.
[Problem solving process]
Contrast, as an artistic technique commonly used by Lu Xun, can also be seen everywhere in Kong Yiji. Now let's talk briefly about the artistic effect of each group contrast in the novel:
1. Comparison between "short clothes gang" and "wearing long clothes"
A. the "short coat gang" is standing outside the cabinet drinking.
B. "The man in the gown" wandered into the house next to the shop, ordered wine and vegetables, and "sat and drank slowly".
Xianheng Hotel is the epitome of the dark old society at that time, with distinctive characteristics of the times. The novel introduces two kinds of drinkers: one is the "short coat gang"-the working "poor workers"; The other is the "long gown wearer"-a leisurely and rich exploiter. In the sentence, "short" and "long", "outside" and "inside", "standing" and "sitting" are in sharp contrast, paving the way for Kong Yiji's appearance. The contrast between the two reveals the disparity between the rich and the poor and the difference in the social status of customers.
2. Contrast of internal contradictions:
Kong Yiji was the only one standing drinking and wearing a gown. "Standing and drinking" shows that Confucius has been living in poverty, and his economic status and social status are the same as those of the "short coat gang"; "Wearing a gown" shows that he puts on airs, envies those who are leisurely and rich ideologically, despises the working people and is unwilling to associate with the "short clothes gang". The contrast between the way he drinks and the clothes he wears reflects the contradiction between his economic status and ideology, thus revealing Kong Yiji's special social status.
3. Comparison between "beating" and "being beaten":
A. Ding defeated Kong Yiji.
B. Kong Yiji's leg is broken.
This comparison reveals how the imperial examination system divided scholars into two opposite poles: some climbed the imperial examination ladder, such as Ding, and beat Kong Yiji at will, becoming arrogant "cannibals"; More people fell down, such as Kong Yiji, who was poor and became the object of being beaten and eaten. This fact profoundly exposed the evil of the imperial examination system.
4. The contrast between "laughter" and "fate":
A. Kong Yiji's face is black and thin, and it is no longer like it; Wearing a shabby jacket and crossing his legs ... his eyes seemed to beg the shopkeeper not to mention it again.
B. At this time, several people have gathered around, and they all laughed with the shopkeeper.
The novel describes in detail the tragic scene of Kong Yiji's leg being broken by Ding during his last appearance. Kong Yiji died in the laughter of drinkers and shopkeepers, and "laughter" runs through the whole novel. This burst of laughter was in sharp contrast with Kong Yiji's unfortunate fate, which profoundly exposed the darkness and cruelty of feudal society and criticized the numbness of the masses.
5. Comparison between "clap" and "touch":
A. Without answering, he said to the cabinet, "Heat two bowls of wine and ask for a plate of fennel beans." I will pay a lot of money.
B.he took four pence out of his tattered pocket and put it in my hand. He found his hands covered with mud. ...
The word "Pai" shows that Kong Yiji wants to show his generosity to the "short coat gang" who only spends a lot of money, writes his proud expression, and also shows his pedantic character; The word "touch" shows that Kong Yiji is slow to move, and the "four pence" is well hidden, which shows that this money is hard to come by, and Kong Yiji is further down and out. The contrast between the first "row" and the second "touch" reflects the deteriorating economic status of Kong Yiji.
6. Contrast between "disdain" and "decadence":
A. Someone asked, "Kong Yiji, can you really read?" Kong Yiji looked at the person who asked him and showed disdain.
B. They went on to say, "Why can't you even get half a scholar?" Kong Yiji immediately a face of depression, face was full of gray.
Kong Yiji is proud to be a scholar. He always pretends to be a scholar in front of everyone and disdains the jacket gang. Even when others made fun of him, he repeatedly showed pretentious and narcissistic arrogance. Only when people ask, "Why can't you get half a scholar?" Does he feel very painful, because he is bent on learning from middle school, but he never gets what he wants, which has become his greatest pain and humiliation. This is enough to show that feudal culture and imperial examination system have seriously poisoned the lower intellectuals.