Writing instruction:

1 You can only write one thing, whether it happens at home or at school.

It must be meaningful, not boring.

According to the six elements of the narrative, describe the process of this matter and clarify the significance of this matter with a simple discussion period.

Example: a meaningful thing-cleaning.

(Author: Qian Shan Bibi)

This afternoon, after finishing my homework, I was idle. At this time, my mother said that she would go upstairs to clean up. As soon as I heard this, I suddenly had a whim and thought: Why not help my mother do some work!

So I said to my mother, "Mom, shall I clean with you?" Mother said, "well, I can give you some exercise." I'll clean the floor, and you clean the TV cabinet, writing desk and so on! "

At this time, I can't wait and say to my mother, "Mom, let's go up quickly!" " "So, my mother and I came to the children's building. I picked up the rag and soaked it, and then I started to work.

I came to the living room first, cleaned the TV cabinet, and immediately felt dissatisfied with the dust, as if the enemy had occupied a piece of land. At this time, I launched an "attack" on them, killing all the "soldiers" and regaining the "territory".

Then, I "swept" the "enemy" on the tea table. In a short time, these "enemy troops" were defeated by me.

After a while, the rag became dirty. I went to the swimming pool, washed the dishcloth and went on working.

After about half an hour, I cleaned all the windows, lamps and tables. At this point, they are as good as new. Put your hands on it. There's no dust at all.

I hurried to find my mother and reported my "record" to her.

Today, I finally did something meaningful for my family. I am indescribable happy.

Meaningful things

On Sunday morning, the sun is shining and there are several white clouds floating in the sky. Grandpa Sun smiled and seemed to be waving to the children.

On this day, my mother has to do a lot of housework. As soon as I looked, I saw my mother cleaning the table, and sweat flowed on her forehead like pearls. Seeing that my mother was so tired, I went over and said, "Let me help you!" " "Mom agreed.

I went to the pool to imitate my mother. First pour some water into the basin, put some washing powder, and put the clothes in for a while. Grab the clothes and rub them with your hands. As soon as I saw it, I wiped off a lot of dirty water. After washing, I looked for stains. Suddenly, I saw that there were still many stains on the collar, so I put on soap and wiped it hard.

Finally, wash it repeatedly with clear water until there is no sewage, then wring it out and hang it on the hanger shed.

I'm glad to see my own clothes.

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[How to write something meaningful]

Exercise requirements: check the meaning of the question, choose a personal experience and write a story in detail.

Practice instruction:

1. What questions should I pay attention to when examining the meaning of the question?

The basic requirement of propositional composition is to closely follow the meaning of the topic. If the composition is divorced from the requirements of the topic, there will be a phenomenon of "irrelevant text", which is very inappropriate.

In order to achieve the writing purpose closely related to the meaning of the topic, we must first examine the meaning of the topic. "Examining questions" means carefully observing and thinking about problems. To examine the meaning of the question, we must first try to figure out the meaning of each word in the question and make clear the objects and requirements in the exercise. For example, in the essay topic of this training, "thing" is "thing", so remember one thing. "Requirements" must be experienced personally, and hearsay is not enough, let alone fiction. Scope is one thing, not two or three things. At the same time pay attention to the genre of the composition. From the proposition, we can roughly know whether it is "writing people" or "taking notes", "things" or "painting scenery", "discussing" or "explaining" ...

In addition, we should also pay attention to the key words in the topic, which are often the center of the article and need to be emphasized by the author. For example, the "prefix" in this exercise proposition should be "personally experienced", which is the key to whether this article can be written vividly.

2. How to correctly understand "fiction and reality"?

Writing a composition should be true. This "truth" mainly refers to true thoughts and feelings, that is, it is one thing not to tell lies, not to confuse people, and not to write a composition, but to think about something else.

"Truth" is not all "true stories". For example, "composition with pictures" and "conditional composition" are all prescribed by others. If you write according to the given "picture" or "condition", it will definitely not be true. However, the thoughts and feelings you express in these compositions should also be true, that is, write your true understanding and feelings. In this way, although the materials provided by "pictures" and "conditions" are not true, your understanding of the materials provided and your feelings reflected are still true. On the other hand, even if the "thing" you wrote is really a "real thing" that happened in your life, it can't be regarded as "real" if your understanding and attitude towards it is not true.

Therefore, as long as the true feelings are expressed in the composition, it meets the requirements of "truthfulness". As for some composition topics, it is obvious that people must be real, so they cannot be fictional. For example, the training proposition of this exercise has stipulated that "one thing you have experienced personally" must be "experienced personally".

3. How to make the material selection "meaningful"?

It is not easy to choose the material for "recalling a personal experience". Because for everyone, there are many things to experience. Whether to write one casually, of course not, it is important to choose "meaningful" things to write. In order to be meaningful, some students often start from the concept of "theme first" and then make up a story, either picking up a wallet on the road or giving up their seats in the car. Such a composition violates the requirement of "personal experience" and will not have true feelings. Therefore, it is very important to correctly understand "meaningful". First of all, meaningful things are not just doing good deeds, but reflecting the harmony of neighbors, the new scenery of streets, the health of the whole people, and making money harmoniously ... all of which may be meaningful. The key is whether students can have a meaningful vision.

In fact, it is meaningful to do anything, whether it is success or failure. If it is written, readers will feel energetic after reading it. So, how to write "meaning"? Here are two methods by way of example:

The first is the lyric method. Expressing the meaning of things in a lyrical way is the key place to remember things. For example, there is an exercise entitled "Mom and Dad Stop Noisy", the main content of which is to describe a quarrel between the parents of the little author. What's the point if you just write out the whole process of the quarrel, and when the quarrel is over and the article is finished? And the little author wrote at the end: "Mom and Dad, stop your fierce quarrel!" " Do you know how much trauma this will cause to our young hearts? "You see, the little author's sincere and urgent advice to mom and dad's quarrel makes people feel how serious the bad influence of parents' quarrel is on the next generation. This shows the meaning of the matter. After reading this meaning, you will also have * * * sound.

The second is the discussion method. It is in the process of taking notes that the meaning of things is explored through discussion. Because meaning is contained in things, it can be revealed through discussion, otherwise, it will not be easy to reveal. For example, there is an exercise called "Shopping on Holidays", which describes the process of shopping with my father. From the time I went to the vegetable market to the time I got home, I bought food and wrote something about it. How can we attract people? Just say something like this at last: "I spent more than 12 yuan on shopping today, but my father worked hard all day to get 10 yuan." How difficult it is to get the money. I think I must cherish the fruits of this labor. " This is the meaning of writing in a positive way. With these remarks, the significance of buying food is obvious and readers will be deeply educated.

The teacher asked me to write a 600-word composition "I had an accident" to help! One thing that happened to me.

It snowed heavily all night. The next morning, the sun came out and the ground was white, reflecting dazzling light.

On the way to school, I saw potholes on the ground after the snow, and pedestrians and vehicles were scattered and moving slowly. Cyclists are more careful, hunching their shoulders, clamping their arms and keeping their eyes on the front.

Just before the intersection, a group of people are pushing a tricycle full of Chinese cabbage. The tricycle was deeply stuck in the snow, and everyone shouted "one, two, three!" " "When I walked back, I was cheering for them. Suddenly, a middle-aged man riding a bicycle in front of me fell heavily to the ground, and the thick soup hanging in the thermos flask spilled on another young man's leather jacket, which was stained with oil. Passers-by slowly stopped to watch the excitement, and everyone thought that there would be another "war of words". Unexpectedly, the young man didn't care to wipe the oil stains on his body, but quickly bent down and helped the middle-aged man up. The middle-aged man apologized to the young man: "I'm really sorry, I was in a hurry to deliver meals to patients in the hospital." Today, the road was slippery and I was careless ... Comrade, your leather jacket ... "People turned to the young man again. He took out a handkerchief from his pocket, wiped his leather jacket and said with a smile, "Don't mind such a trivial matter. The soup you sent to the patient must be delicious. My leather jacket is really delicious, it tastes delicious! " Both of them laughed, and so did the others.

I looked at the gradually dispersed crowd, and I felt an indescribable feeling in my heart. Looking back at the tricycle trapped in the snow, with everyone's help, it has rushed out of the predicament.

I walked to school. Breathing the fresh air after the snow and taking a look at the blue sky make me feel indescribable comfortable. Give points ~

In the recent war, the teacher asked me to write a composition to help me feel the "Libyan war"

Lively birds like the sky without smoke; Dancing butterflies are like colorful flowers; Cheerful fish like clear water. It's all because this is their home. I like a peaceful world, because it is the home of mankind.

Lively birds like the sky without smoke; Dancing butterflies are like colorful flowers; Cheerful fish like clear water. It's all because this is their home. I like a peaceful world, because it is the home of mankind.

Libya is a country in North Africa. Located on the south bank of the Mediterranean Sea, adjacent to Egypt, Sudan, Algeria and Tunisia. Except for coastal areas and southern mountainous areas, most of them are deserts. Libya's strategic position is extremely important, and it is the eighth largest oil exporter in the world, which is also one of the reasons for the outbreak of the Libyan war. Secondly, it is because of the autocratic rule of President Gaddafi and the influence of the recent wave of protests sweeping the Middle East. Gaddafi's 40 years of leadership over Libya has not made this country a people's country. On the contrary, Libya is one of the countries with the most serious corruption problems in the world. As a country with 2% of the world's crude oil output, the oil wealth created by Libya did not benefit its 6 million population, causing serious civil strife in the country. So that the United States, Britain, France, Germany and other countries have found reasons to send troops. Are they really going to protect civilians? I think this problem really deserves our deep thought.

The background of the incident is war-torn Libya. Gaddafi, the "crazy ruler", did not hesitate to hire child soldiers aged 9 to 15 to compete with the rebels. He is one of the child soldiers. He has been ravaged for four days, and his rags when he was arrested did not arouse the sympathy of the rebels. But we must admit that what the rebels hate is not him, but his cold-blooded master who would rather sacrifice the peace of the country for his own benefit. The head pointed by the Belgian Gehril assault rifle is about 2 feet long, which is reminiscent of such a fragile life. During his detention, his head was wrapped and his wrists were handcuffed. This "looking like a teenager" soldier claimed to have been tricked into working in Libya, but as soon as he got there, someone gave him a gun and told him to go to the battlefield to kill the enemy. The rifle pointed at his head did not leave because of his confession. It was not until a reporter at the scene protested and stopped it that the rebels slowly put down their rifles. I believe that at the age of 12, he should live a carefree life and go to school happily with his schoolbag on his back every day. Instead of living in the army now, I don't even know where the body will be blown up in the next second. What inspired me was not the abomination of dictatorship or the tragic fate of child soldiers. What it brings me is the destruction of human nature and the sadness and stupidity of human beings.

Shouldn't all this cause us to ponder?

How I wish there were no wars and smoke in Libya. The dove of peace flies into the blue sky again, and the happy teenagers go to school together-all this is beautiful.

Please give it to your friend. The teacher asked us to write a composition about what happened in class. I can't write Chess ~ Help me write down what I can't help, and I have mixed feelings ~ ~

The topic of the composition happened right beside me. That summer, I went to my aunt's house to play. At that time, I had not yet gone to school. My aunt lives in a small mountain village with beautiful scenery. I have never been to the countryside, so everything is novel.

It often rained in those days, and the river was full of water. It will clear up when I leave. I heard frogs singing happily in the river. I am so excited that my brothers will take me to catch frogs. My brothers readily agreed. We rolled up our trouser legs and went downstream. My brother soon touched a few small fish. I also forgot the depth of the river and ran around fumbling. The river was so fast that my slippers fell off when I slipped. I quickly called my brother to help me find slippers, but everyone stopped catching fish and came to help me find them. It took me a long time to find them. I had to wear slippers on one foot and curl up on the other, skipping to my grandparents' house. The people behind me were so happy that I couldn't help it. I was tired of dancing for a while, and my brother came over and asked me to step on his foot to walk with him. We are like acrobats. In this way, we laughed all the way back to our grandparents' house.

I often think of this and that happy day, and I will never forget it.

Please give it to your friend. The teacher wants us to write a composition about an incident that happened in class. Can I write "playing chess"? Yes, as long as the location is fixed in the class.

What is the title of an essay that happened on a rainy day? After a hard day, the sun slowly walked home. The sky slowly darkened, and at this moment, naughty rain appeared. The falling rain seems to be enchanted, and it will go east for a while; Go west for a while. Be on cloud nine Flowers and trees all show their unique charm in the rain. I came back from my uncle's house, and the rain just became an obstacle for me to go home. It was raining harder and harder, so I had to take shelter under the eaves of a family. It's getting dark, the wind is getting stronger and stronger, and the cold wind is howling. For me in thin clothes, it is only worse. Looking at the sky outside, I can't help but frown and start to worry. He squatted in the corner with his shoulders in his hands, trembling, and his hands became tighter and tighter, as if to put the whole body together. . I don't know how long it took, but the wind and rain gradually subsided. I sighed and prepared to rush out. Although I will get wet, it's better than squatting in the corner. I made up my mind. As soon as I bit my silver teeth, I rushed outside in one breath. My face is a little sore after being baptized by wind and rain, and my shoes are covered with mud. My shoes are getting heavier and heavier, and the speed is gradually slowing down. But God played a joke on me again: it began to rain heavily again. The crackling raindrops hit my head and ran down my face. "Bad luck! This time, a drowned rat will be in a mess! " I can't help cursing. I ran and ran, but I met someone head on. I looked up and it was my mother. I saw my mother holding an umbrella in one hand and looking anxious. Several raindrops as big as beans ran down from her black hair with a little silver thread. As soon as my mother saw me, she said anxiously, "Son, how did you get soaked like this?" Go home and change, or you will get sick. " After that, my mother quickly took off her coat and put it on me, wearing only a long skirt. At this time, the cold wind blew from my mother, and I couldn't help shivering.

For many years, I thought that a warm hug, a warm word and a happy companion were maternal love. Today, however, I finally understand that love is selfless, silent and intangible, and money can't buy it. It is higher than the mountain, deeper than the sea, kinder than the father's love and deeper than the teacher's love. It, maternal love deserves to be the most sincere love in the world!

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Something happened at school.

2006-8-1514: 05: 27 Xiaoshan Wu composition network Chen Shanghai Jianping experimental school class 4

"Eraser!"

"alas! I really can't help you! " I handed an eraser. "Can you stop asking me to borrow an eraser?"

"no!"

Hey! Still so loyal!

Hey, what bad luck to meet such a person as a deskmate! Borrow an eraser from me every day, even a "pistachio" like me will be annoyed by him. Does he forget to bring an eraser every day?

One day, I accidentally saw the eraser in his pencil box, which was as big as a slap. I thought to myself: "Today is the national liberation, and finally I don't need to borrow his eraser!" " Yeah! "With this in mind, I began to write my homework with confidence.

"Eraser!"

As usual, the hand that crossed his "territory" stretched out again. I habitually pushed the rubber over. Suddenly, I remembered the palm-sized eraser I saw today. So, I took the eraser back.

Probably because I didn't put the rubber into his hand, Qin got a little impatient and turned his head. Seeing my serious face, he narrowed his nose and looked sad, begging me like a Buddha: "Oh, please, Chen Renhui, please, Chen Renhui ..."

I was amused by him, but I remembered the big eraser and said, "Are you trying to fool me?" ? Bring an eraser! "Qin Zheng Fei cheekily asked," what eraser? "I saw him playing dumb and turned up the hole in his desk without saying anything.

"For what?"

"Find your eraser!"

I see it is like a "mountain of books" with pencils everywhere. Ah! Eraser! I solemnly took out my eraser, waved it in front of his eyes and said, "What is this?" He scratched his head. "Did you find this eraser? ! "Like seeing a baby, he grabbed the eraser from my hand and rubbed it hard. ...

Alas! I can't help it!

How to write "Ding, Ding" in the composition assigned by the teacher, the ringing bell rang. I sat in my position, staring at the newly bought composition book "Composition for Primary School Students", and I really couldn't put it down.

My good friend Cao Mingyu came to chat with me. She asked me, "Li Jiajun, why haven't you practiced volleyball these days?" I sighed and said, "I caught a cold these days and my resistance was poor, so I didn't practice." I can't stand the cold. " Cao Mingyu nodded. At this time, Zhao Jianfeng came over and said with a smile: "Alas, it is wishful thinking for a fat man like Li Jiajun to practice volleyball well!" I stood up and said angrily, "This is none of your business. Don't interrupt! " "You don't think so. You look like a general who came home in triumph and left. What are you talking about? I was so angry that I stood up again and wanted to say the reason, but I couldn't say it when I got to my mouth. Because I know it doesn't work for people like you.

I thought to myself: Zhao Jianfeng, why do you always humiliate others like this? Everyone has self-esteem. Why hurt others' self-esteem? If a person loses self-esteem, he will lose confidence and confidence. I am really fat, like a big fat penguin, but are you the only "skinny monkey" who can practice volleyball well? Isn't there a famous saying, "Nothing is difficult for a willing mind"? It means that as long as you have perseverance, perseverance and are not afraid of difficulties, nothing is difficult in the world. Why don't you trust others?

"Ding, ding", the bell rang again. I'm still thinking, thinking, I listened to this class so-so, and I was absent-minded

Write an event that happened on May Day. I am looking forward to it. I finally look forward to the May Day holiday. On the first day of the long holiday, my mother took my brother and me skating.

We entered the underground skating rink through a small door on the south side of the north wing commercial street. I saw the bright lights inside, and many people enjoyed skating. I was dazzled by the variety of colorful lights. I put on my skates and walked into the skating rink carefully. Watching others skate skillfully, and constantly making some thrilling moves. I'm a little overwhelmed. I don't remember skating at all. I learned to skate a little, but that was a long time ago. I just moved my feet like others, holding the railing and sliding forward slowly, for fear that wrestling would attract ridicule from others.

Just then, my brother's "shout" quickly surpassed me. I thought: How can I beat my brother? So, I let go of my hands and feet and gradually accelerated. However, when the speed was fast, my center of gravity was unstable, and with a bang, I fell down. My leg hurts when I fall. I got up in pain and suddenly felt my knees burning. I lifted my trouser legs, but fortunately I didn't scratch my skin.

I bent down slightly, held the railing, accelerated again, and recalled the movements that the coach had taught me before. I seem to have suddenly mastered some skills and can skate faster without a pole. I am determined to catch up with my brother, but every time I speed up to the limit and get close to my brother, my brother can easily speed up and overtake me, leaving me far behind.

I reached the top speed again. Suddenly a person came towards me at high speed, and the taxiing route was also east-west. Seeing that I was about to hit it, I stepped aside and hugged the railing tightly with my hands. That man actually walked past me and a man who caught up with me, which scared me into a cold sweat.

Unconsciously, 1 hour passed like running water. My brother and I reluctantly left the skating rink. I am very happy on this May Day!