1. People think that fresh water is inexhaustible (hint: rain, river water, well water ...)
In fact, fresh water is very scarce (hint: population growth, industrial water use, pollution ...)
3. What should we do
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At present, many people take it for granted that fresh water will never run out, because we can find fresh water not only from rain, but also from rivers, lakes and wells. Therefore, we don't need to worry about the global shortage of fresh water.
In fact, the situation has become so serious that everyone should be aware of it and take immediate action. With the rapid growth of the world population year by year, water resources are being consumed at an alarming rate. More importantly, with the development of science and technology, modern industry needs more water than before. Thirdly, pollution is also a worrying problem-because of industrial waste, the water in rivers and wells becomes undrinkable.
We should take urgent measures to protect fresh water resources. The government should improve the utilization rate of water by recycling water and purifying seawater. On the other hand, people should form the habit of cherishing every drop of water. Last but not least, pollution must be effectively controlled if we want to improve the quality of life.
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The greatest feature of this model essay is the combination of criticism and method. The first paragraph points out some people's wrong ideas. The second paragraph refutes from three aspects; The third paragraph points out our approach.
Fan Wen first pointed out that some people think that fresh water is inexhaustible, and then refuted it in the second paragraph. First of all, water resources are being consumed at an alarming rate. Secondly, modern industry needs more water resources. In addition, due to industrial pollution, some water is no longer suitable for drinking. The third paragraph expounds the correct way, that is, the government improves the utilization rate of water resources, everyone forms the habit of saving water and effectively controls water pollution.
In the first sentence of the first paragraph, taking for granted means "taking for granted" and being used up means "used up" Efficiency, recovery and purification in the first point of the third paragraph refer to "efficiency", "recovery" and "purification" respectively.
Predictive composition (2)
Why are there so many rural laborers in big cities?
1. In recent years, more and more migrant workers have flooded into big cities.
2. The causes of this social phenomenon
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Over the years, the number of rural laborers pouring into big cities has steadily increased. Many men work in construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants or as nannies for city residents. In my opinion, there are three reasons to explain this social phenomenon.
First of all, the limited land can no longer produce enough crops for the growing rural population. Second, there are more opportunities in big cities-rural laborers dream of making money through hard work. Last but not least, many of them want to live in big cities permanently, because they envy the lifestyle there and want their children to receive a good education.
I firmly believe that if we try our best to create a healthy social atmosphere, migrant workers will make greater contributions to our country.
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This topic is about a social phenomenon. The first sentence of the first paragraph introduces a phenomenon, the second sentence illustrates it with examples, and the third sentence is a turning point, which causes the second paragraph to explain the reasons; The third paragraph is a concise conclusion, and the object clause is nested with the adverbial clause.
Fan Wen first points out the phenomenon of a large number of migrant workers pouring into big cities, and leads to three reasons explained in the second paragraph. First of all, the limited land in rural areas can't meet the increasing population consumption. Secondly, there are more job opportunities in big cities. Finally, migrant workers yearn for life in big cities and want to live in big cities forever. The last paragraph concludes that if a healthy social environment is created, migrant workers can make greater contributions to the country.
The construction site in the second sentence of the first paragraph means "construction site", and the nanny is "a person who helps people look after their children" The rural areas in the first point of the second paragraph refer to "rural areas"; In the third point, permanence and envy refer to "permanence" and "envy" respectively, and education refers to "receiving education".
Predictive composition (3)
silence is gold
1. On many occasions, silence is golden.
2. But there are exceptions.
3. Conclusion
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When we talk about the famous proverb "Silence is golden", we should not simply label it right or wrong, but discuss it deeply.
This proverb is especially true in several situations. First of all, if we promise not to reveal the secret, we should remain silent forever. Secondly, we should avoid talking about facts or statistics that we are not sure about. Thirdly, whenever we express our ideas, simplicity is the soul of wisdom, and talking too much will always lead to mistakes and mistakes.
However, there are some exceptions. If we find mistakes in other people's speech or writing, we should not hesitate to point them out. We should always help friends or acquaintances who seek advice.
In short, we can draw the conclusion that "silence is golden" in most cases, but in some cases, speaking is the right choice.
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The characteristic of this paper is that it does not completely affirm or completely deny the proverbs mentioned, but analyzes them from both positive and negative aspects, that is, the second paragraph points out their correctness and the third paragraph talks about exceptions; The last paragraph is a summary and echo of the full text.
Fan Wen first put forward the proverb "Silence is golden" to discuss. The second paragraph expounds its correctness from three aspects, that is, swearing to keep a secret, keeping silent about uncertain things, and expressing one's ideas as concisely as possible. The third paragraph points out the exception. When pointing out mistakes for others or giving advice to friends, don't insist that "silence is golden". Summarize the last paragraph and echo the second and third paragraphs.
The label ... just like ... the first paragraph means "consider" ... as ... ",and when exploring ... it means" explore deeply ". The first point in the second paragraph is that making a promise is "promise", revealing a secret is "revealing a secret" and keeping silent is "keeping silent"; Brevity is the soul of wit. The third point is also a proverb, which means "Your words are concise". The acquisition in the second point of the third paragraph refers to "acquaintances"
Predictive composition (4)
application letter
1. Express your desire for this job.
2. Try to show your skills and experience.
This letter should include your contact information.
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January 20 10
Dear gentlemen,
I am writing this letter to show my interest in the position of assistant manager you advertised in yesterday's China Journal. As shown in the attached resume, my major and experience are very similar to those required by your.
I have always been a top student in my major, biochemistry. Because of my efforts, I took part in several other courses in my spare time, and they were all excellent. I am sure that courses such as British and American literature and culture, business management and statistics will give me an advantage in the fierce competition in the job market. Another point I want to draw your attention to is that I have been actively participating in various campus activities. In this process, teamwork spirit has been enhanced, and my interpersonal skills have also been improved.
I hope to meet you at your earliest convenience to discuss the possibility of cooperation with your company. Or, if you are too busy these days, you can call me at 64543575 for more information. Thank you for your consideration.
Best wishes.
You are sincere,
Jenny green
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This article is a very successful application letter. The first paragraph shows my desire for the position of assistant manager, including how I learned about this position, and then shows that my qualifications meet the requirements, which leads to the next paragraph. The second paragraph is divided into five sentences, indicating that I am a top student in this major, and pointing out that I have done equally well in other courses, laying a solid foundation for future work; The last two sentences show that I participated in various school activities and cultivated various abilities. The first sentence of the third paragraph shows that I really hope to get an interview as soon as possible; The second sentence says, if the other party is too busy, you can call; The last sentence is a polite expression of thanks to the other party.
Keen means "eager" in the first paragraph, and parallel is a verb here, which means "comparable to …". The specialized field in the first sentence of the second paragraph refers to the "professional field"; Excel in the second sentence is an intransitive verb, which means "outstanding, extraordinary and superior to others"; Edge in the third sentence means "advantage"; A variable of in the fourth sentence is equal to variable, which means "diversity"; Team spirit in the fifth sentence refers to "team spirit" and interpersonal skills refer to "interpersonal skills".
1. The above picture shows the total number of Internet users in China in July 2006, July 2002 and June 2003. Please describe its changes.
2. Please explain the reasons for these changes;
What difficulties or problems do you think users have in using the Internet at present?
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From the chart, we can clearly see that the number of Internet users in China increased from 26.5 million in July 2006 to 45.8 million in July 2002, and then to 59,654.38 million in 2003 1 month.
In my opinion, the reasons for the increase in Internet users are as follows. First of all, the Internet can help us accomplish many tasks, including work and entertainment-searching information has become more convenient than ever, and safe online business is no longer a dream. Besides, surfing the Internet is becoming cheaper and cheaper-more and more people can afford it.
The negative impact of the Internet is also obvious. First of all, sitting in front of the computer for too long is harmful to our health, especially our eyes. Secondly, more and more people are addicted to playing video games or chatting online, which are time-consuming.
In a word, I should say that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The key is whether we can make good use of it to improve our work and study.
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The first paragraph describes the changing trend of the total number of Internet users in China from 200/KLOC-0 to 2003. The second paragraph gives reasons from two aspects: first, the internet is convenient and fast, which has played a huge role; Secondly, the cost is reduced. The third paragraph points out two difficulties and problems: first, spending too much time online is harmful to health; Secondly, some people play games and chat online, which are all bad habits. Summary of the fourth paragraph: the first sentence points out that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages; The second sentence says that the key is to make good use of the Internet.
In the first sentence of the second paragraph, In my mind means "in my opinion, in my opinion"; In the third paragraph, harmful means "harmful", addictive means "addictive" and time-consuming means "wasting time"; The big opening in the first sentence of the last paragraph means "more important than …".