Composition title: My braces diary (1)

Key words: Diary for the third grade of primary school, 300 words

Word count: 300 words composition

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This article is suitable for: The third grade of primary school

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This composition is a 300-word composition about the third grade of primary school. The title is: "My Braces Diary (Part 1)" )》, everyone is welcome to contribute. Braces are undoubtedly a nightmare for ignorant little girls like us (actually 13 years old)!

Think about it, how uncomfortable it is to have something on your teeth!

Moreover, in my mind, correcting teeth means using pliers to straighten uneven teeth, so that kind of dental hospital is full of people crying, and those doctors are green-faced and long-tusked. Very scary!

I tremble all over just thinking about it. But last year, my parents spent money and decided to fix my teeth. I cried for my father and my mother, begging my grandparents, but the sad thing is that they also stood with my parents and left me alone. I wanted to cry without tears! Comments from famous teachers: This article by the young author is a series. In the first episode of the story, the article tells an interesting story about the young author wearing braces. In this episode, the author talks about the reason why he wears braces because his parents want his teeth to be straightened, and the elders in the family also agree, so wearing braces is inevitable. The language of the article is very humorous and can arouse readers' interest in reading, but the content is a bit short, and it is not divided into paragraphs and has no sense of hierarchy. "Looking very scary" was changed to "looking very scary".

(Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Wang Yunlian) 2010-1-23 17:49:00